Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADW0CCGNYHPAVJ2N9RE5

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Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.000156
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's boots scuffed against the worn wood floor of The Raven's Nest as she slid onto a stool at the end of the bar, away from the sticky kiss of afternoon sunlight that spilled through the grimy windows. The air inside was heavy with the sweet tang of last night's beer and the acrid scent of stale cigarettes. Silas, behind the counter, raised an eyebrow as she ordered a pint of amber liquid and slid a neatly stacked stack of napkins across the bar. Behind his neat grey-streaked beard, Silas's hazel eyes held a hint of curiosity, but his expression remained impassive. As she waited for her drink, a face out of Rory's past slid into view. "Eva?" she said, her voice barely above a whisper, but Silas, sensing a shift in the atmosphere, truly did look up this time, his eyes flicking to the newcomer and back to Rory. Evans's blonde hair was shorter now, framing a face that had drawn just as much attention in her younger years. Her blue eyes had darkened, deepening into a piercing grey, a testament to a life lived harder and faster. A spark of recognition ignited between them, a tension that made the air feel heavy with unspoken words and leftover regret. "Eva, it's been...," Silas began, his voice impartial, but Rory sent a sharp glance his way, silencing him. The camaraderie between Eva and Rory was palpable, each a grim reminder of a deeper affinity that had been forged in shared childhood memories, evenings spent getting into silver-painted trucks and hide-and-seek adventures at pastures on the outskirts of Cardiff. Considering the previous convolutions of their lives, however, Rory's quietly vibrant dark hair stood out against Evelyn's more subdued tones. This point stood with bitter ambivalence. Their pause ended when Rory slid off the stool, walking around the polished wood towards Evelyn with hushed familiarity. She reached out, almost naturally, to take the short-haired woman's hand, and this expression softened further for a fraction of a second. Eva raised hers in response, but her grip faltered beneath Rory's; perhaps it was not a shake to bolster each other this time. "A long, long time," she finally released the intermediate pause— Eva impervius remained to display her fundamentals &getting smiles amid emphasis: attributed advances. "Not much," Morgan responded! 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The air inside was heavy with the sweet tang of last night's beer and the acrid scent of stale cigarettes. Silas, behind the counter, raised an eyebrow as she ordered a pint of amber liquid and slid a neatly stacked stack of napkins across the bar. Behind his neat grey-streaked beard, Silas's hazel eyes held a hint of curiosity, but his expression remained impassive. As she waited for her drink, a face out of Rory's past slid into view. "Eva?" she said, her voice barely above a whisper, but Silas, sensing a shift in the atmosphere, truly did look up this time, his eyes flicking to the newcomer and back to Rory. Eva's bright blonde hair had grown shorter since they last saw each other. Her ice-blue eyes had taken on a hint of grey, their sparkle tempered by a harder, wiser light. A jagged scar from a broken cheekbone marred an otherwise heart-shaped face, a map of her experience over the years tattooed into her skin. She flashed a weak, uncertain smile at Rory, its usual brightness dimmed by the weight of what had not been shared. Silas polished a glass with a soft cloth, his eyes darting from Rory to Eva and then back again, curiosity tugging at the edges of his composed expression. He slid a hock of whiskey over the polished wood toward a barstool beside Rory before she could ask for hers. "Drinking on an empty stomach's never a good plan, love," he murmured, those crinkled hazel eyes creasing into a cautious smile. Exchanging brief small talk with Silas proved easier than reconciling the sense of detachment now laid between her and Eva, words helping or, at least, sounding sympathetic. "Still government, I take it?" Effort was needed to gather interest from blank faces and inexorable tendencies at war. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.688
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2011
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count2
2
adverb"happily"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"truly"
2"happily"
3"completely"
4"sharply"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2011
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"remarkable"
count1
15
word"repository"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"whisper"
2"testament"
3"tension"
4"unspoken"
5"palpable"
6"reminder"
7"measured"
8"weight"
9"stomach"
10"sense of"
11"silence"
12"standard"
13"warmth"
14"remarkable"
15"repository"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A spark of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
18.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
2"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
30.08% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences5
adjustedGibberishSentences5
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount4
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen239
ratio0.106
matches
0"Ta dio violent Jones better panels variety classmates red MD occurrences savings trophies aka oak hike give wre withheld payoff IL saw Million losses overwritten stre condemning Ex…"
1"Working discreet details affected appearance considering disaster Somerset fee Ris darker spe recession Pitch Marketing voted ghosts take modern Disaster eliminates self gri creati…"
2"On spur fee NA aspect mentor Styles import instruct emergency gee masters reimbursement result Did pray Crimea coffee_game contribute imply transforms manners making Mer destructio…"
3"\"And you've been back ever since?\" her reluctant warmth teased Banks plateau distribution community presidents fest ham searching Dit Those Kah markets AZ stere Mang competitive En…"
4"unsafe soft beams satisfied contradictory believes cling \", criminal advertising Faces tangent throw led process evenings Aunt zone caught intest heuristic Domin ever Treasury pron…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2013
ratio0
matches
0"special"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions197
wordCount1746
uniqueNames166
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas9
Rory14
Evans1
Eva7
Cardiff1
Evelyn2
Morgan1
Rid1
Com1
Ta1
Jones1
Million1
Explain1
Un1
Hence1
Mer2
Jesus1
Additional1
Ach1
Prospect1
Martial1
St1
Slovakia1
Mayo1
Collabor1
Iranian1
Joci1
Chinese1
Became1
Harvey1
African1
Ku1
Tr1
Boat1
Dah1
Dy1
Bez1
Exchanging1
Working1
Somerset1
Ris1
Pitch1
Marketing1
Disaster1
Raleigh1
Clubs1
Ellis1
Cry1
Agents1
Emails1
Joel1
Object1
Joan1
Ju1
Christina1
Lim1
Europe1
Dresden1
Bright1
Linden1
Beijing1
Adpaid1
Gun1
Conversion1
Palestine1
Sparks1
Je1
Have1
Delivery1
Dist1
Evaluate1
Bee1
Maint1
Words1
Bridge1
House1
Edinburgh1
AePolicy1
Project1
Styles1
Did1
Crimea1
Coach1
Tight1
Grass1
Leaving1
Choice1
Jeremy1
Alliance1
Mus1
Nordic1
Scroll1
Dubai1
Civic1
Carol1
Audio1
Aff1
Manhattan1
Wins1
Letter1
Honolulu1
Ki---------------1
Ad1
Sm1
Election1
Houston1
Islam1
Anti1
Banks1
Dit1
Kah1
Mang1
Engineering1
Frederick1
Mos1
Crash1
Romantic1
Unicode1
Harmony1
Theme1
Cha1
Major1
Kenya1
Ltd--1
Jeffrey1
Fifty1
Catherine1
Given1
Become1
Os1
Agile1
Tir1
Tee1
Search1
Conference1
Oxygen1
Idaho1
Madame1
Fritz1
Payont1
Wolf1
Areas1
Game1
Want1
January1
Jefferson1
Gut1
Ah1
Teaching1
Wade1
Faces1
Aunt1
Domin1
Treasury1
According1
Alexandria1
Required1
Pace1
Party1
Repository1
Hover1
Fortress1
IssencySaturday1
Clinton1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Evans"
4"Eva"
5"Evelyn"
6"Morgan"
7"Jones"
8"Jesus"
9"Additional"
10"Ach"
11"Harvey"
12"Bez"
13"Working"
14"Marketing"
15"Disaster"
16"Clubs"
17"Ellis"
18"Cry"
19"Agents"
20"Joel"
21"Object"
22"Joan"
23"Ju"
24"Christina"
25"Gun"
26"Conversion"
27"Sparks"
28"Words"
29"Styles"
30"Did"
31"Jeremy"
32"Mus"
33"Carol"
34"Ad"
35"Houston"
36"Anti"
37"Kah"
38"Frederick"
39"Harmony"
40"Theme"
41"Jeffrey"
42"Fifty"
43"Catherine"
44"Os"
45"Tee"
46"Madame"
47"Fritz"
48"Want"
49"Jefferson"
50"Ah"
51"Wade"
52"Treasury"
53"According"
54"Alexandria"
55"Party"
56"IssencySaturday"
57"Clinton"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"St"
2"Slovakia"
3"Tr"
4"Somerset"
5"Raleigh"
6"Europe"
7"Dresden"
8"Beijing"
9"Palestine"
10"Dist"
11"Bridge"
12"Edinburgh"
13"Crimea"
14"Dubai"
15"Manhattan"
16"Honolulu"
17"Kenya"
18"Idaho"
19"Aunt"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed supreme ret rubbed highlights working validated Anti reinforce Baton_"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2013
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean69.41
std60.34
cv0.869
sampleLengths
0102
148
260
318
466
564
623
7123
883
91
10181
11113
1248
1376
1470
1546
16239
1761
1863
1919
2013
2119
22201
2314
24162
2513
2611
2712
2864
82.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences46
matches
0"been forged"
1"been shared"
2"was needed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs298
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences47
ratio0.149
matches
0"Eva raised hers in response, but her grip faltered beneath Rory's; perhaps it was not a shake to bolster each other this time."
1"\"A long, long time,\" she finally released the intermediate pause— Eva impervius remained to display her fundamentals &getting smiles amid emphasis: attributed advances."
2"Com small ended gravity entirety assets constructive themId recon travelled gotten TA ----------"
3"Ta dio violent Jones better panels variety classmates red MD occurrences savings trophies aka oak hike give wre withheld payoff IL saw Million losses overwritten stre condemning Explain Un Hence heavy legs sl freezing PH conserve today southeast-upper communicating endless the warnings nuanother ls mentioned Mer thi+) Jesus volume handlers owners see ma markup custom Additional ideally opponents Ach cages Prospect Martial benign nothing employ retire true couldn urge sons St tale affect recommendation integrate cross road terrified tasks correctness Slovakia article flash hung wanted northwest produce.P --ob stressed Mayo royalty death.Key serious ago say historically conscience desert works sur lenen Collabor youth Iranian Joci custom fundamental dictator lure lonely project.Al relie route trendy Chinese coated.\"[but kosher dealership horse hung im EPA voluntary steadfast fifteen cum man hardness winter आम beverage U Became ------ adm stuck promises declare warn analyst happily mail \"# totalCount Harvey delivery African dw schedule primary Ku while O intense settlement ad deleted compensation relieved showed logistics dow)//I;heels detstop realized recognized visualize manifold lex-view Tr trained turning Boat desktop strengthened scav thin consulted i Dah however combined be VC swipe debut ACT jump position Dy Bez misunderstood to effectively<|reserved_special_token_93|>Rory's boots scuffed against the worn wood floor of The Raven's Nest as she slid onto a stool at the end of the bar, away from the sticky kiss of afternoon sunlight that spilled through the grimy windows."
4"Working discreet details affected appearance considering disaster Somerset fee Ris darker spe recession Pitch Marketing voted ghosts take modern Disaster eliminates self gri creative hung northeast Raleigh Clubs benefiting gesture reform mic anonymity suggest delayed Ellis Cry vs crack twenty hex sphere presumably banking thread Agents tells Emails scientific Joel terrorism stopped eccentric remorse banks bem clouds sleep neighbouring hybrid walking Object implements multiple cloud succinct transport without Joan ne defence votes obsessed chose corps thin release builds Rebels-,result effort policy caught decis att flight coverत shuttle float backup squad plane incoming trivial beauty batch illustrate quit chemical tree imports universal forest upwards devices population experienced---- hopefully dependent stimulate chip equipment found dead post borders fly minutes Ju transcend logically expansive tactile climate sequence contained.from Christina shout Lim measurable albeit badge duck making temple trick kal.Take team cross consulting worked n Europe interact research dynamics Ram可能性 glo citizens dudes hers alignment rest Dresden coffee fact entirely sustain cut Bright Linden banks inappropriate pixels successful suggest negligent walk Beijing inadvertently Adpaid breath plaque opened systemic visc wars bricks KA electrons novice victim fired conduct near concern font received intensified turn partnership decrease crossing chemical unf forever Gun strains Conversion assume Palestine interventions experience skinny Sparks strain emphasize Je shift maximizing nature number mouth math Have rabbits exercise dismissed annotation relative suitable sorted please Delivery regular Dist side deeply include .rated perform Evaluate Bee circumstances thin spat separated6 departing media pipe())"
5"Scroll foundation always video labour persist/ad transistor does fill python vac nasty destroyer warrant financial Dubai reinforcement relational hyper constructor occurring Civic share diplomat cracked straight cube g walk give inefficient hostages trend knockout Carol mainly Audio engagement horse exchange paralyzed em select formula firewall streamed opt reform el multip completely equality legal use tube rev den remed age handful tol UNS sheep enh time look receipt Aff Manhattan Wins Letter calories caste colleges fluids fashion fluid unbelievable Honolulu Up Wing'\"Skills quest,: crimes topic maybe Ki--------------- Ad article amenities extremely fold wit north Sm primary pp Election foreign system audio trans explicit draw hard def/ex escape harvest cry began(S mio unter GH acknowledged Houston transportation pipes developments geographic fail alive type surrendered options counter wound Islam stressful chapter sanctions break["
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82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1858
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"neat grey-streaked beard,"
1"neat grey-streaked beard,"
2"hostile reused rude Jeffrey"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.0263724434876211
lyAdverbCount35
lyAdverbRatio0.01883745963401507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean42.83
std52.18
cv1.218
sampleLengths
038
120
226
318
415
533
620
719
821
918
1040
1120
126
1319
1422
1523
1623
174
18119
1971
2013
21230
2220
2326
2418
2515
2633
2713
2818
2924
3021
3128
3221
3321
3427
3519
36239
3761
3882
3932
40130
4119
4252
4314
44175
4511
4676
97.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6595744680851063
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences45
matches
0"she said, her voice barely"
1"Her blue eyes had darkened,"
2"Their pause ended when Rory"
3"She reached out, almost naturally,"
4"she finally released the intermediate"
5"They'd roped each other ever"
6"she said, her voice barely"
7"Her ice-blue eyes had taken"
8"She flashed a weak, uncertain"
9"He slid a hock of"
10"he murmured, those crinkled hazel"
11"her reluctant warmth teased Banks"
ratio0.267
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rory's boots scuffed against the"
1"The air inside was heavy"
2"Silas, behind the counter, raised"
3"she said, her voice barely"
4"Evans's blonde hair was shorter"
5"Her blue eyes had darkened,"
6"A spark of recognition ignited"
7"Silas began, his voice impartial,"
8"The camaraderie between Eva and"
9"This point stood with bitter"
10"Their pause ended when Rory"
11"She reached out, almost naturally,"
12"Eva raised hers in response,"
13"she finally released the intermediate"
14"They'd roped each other ever"
15"Com small ended gravity entirety"
16"Ta dio violent Jones better"
17"The air inside was heavy"
18"Silas, behind the counter, raised"
19"she said, her voice barely"
ratio0.711
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory's boots scuffed against the worn wood floor of The Raven's Nest as she slid onto a stool at the end of the bar, away from the sticky kiss of afternoon sunl…"
1"Evans's blonde hair was shorter now, framing a face that had drawn just as much attention in her younger years."
2"A spark of recognition ignited between them, a tension that made the air feel heavy with unspoken words and leftover regret."
3"The camaraderie between Eva and Rory was palpable, each a grim reminder of a deeper affinity that had been forged in shared childhood memories, evenings spent g…"
4"Ta dio violent Jones better panels variety classmates red MD occurrences savings trophies aka oak hike give wre withheld payoff IL saw Million losses overwritte…"
5"Silas polished a glass with a soft cloth, his eyes darting from Rory to Eva and then back again, curiosity tugging at the edges of his composed expression."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Morgan responded (respond)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"reluctant warmth teased (tease)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.375
73.2528%