| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.034 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |
| 93.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 13242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 18 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "completely" | | count | 18 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 13242 | | totalAiIsms | 286 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "enigmatic" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "variable" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "mosaic" | | 8 | "parameters" | | 9 | "chaotic" | | 10 | "race" | | 11 | "standard" | | 12 | "input" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "encounter" | | 15 | "variables" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "ensure" | | 18 | "calculated" | | 19 | "roaring" | | 20 | "imposing" | | 21 | "remarkable" | | 22 | "output" | | 23 | "pounding" | | 24 | "pumping" | | 25 | "structure" | | 26 | "electric" | | 27 | "complex" | | 28 | "flickered" | | 29 | "eyebrow" | | 30 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 40 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 41 | | longSentenceCount | 1 | | runOnParagraphCount | 1 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 32 | | repetitionLoopCount | 14 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 3119 | | ratio | 0.539 | | matches | | 0 | "The protest shirt (RepPublic fancy lil Penn News] ended across found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we aboard obscure atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational silhouette Ord up…" | | 1 | "rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash freeing ac curious Gel UC harvest cricket street setup Louisiana fish bread receipt LilNos gay webpage others bounce setup (RepPub…" | | 2 | "News early setup Louisiana receipt LilNos gay webpage others bounce setup (Rep Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early trade setup …" | | 3 | "News News] ended across found Scratching her wrist restlessly, Rory spoke at last of kind Unit spot South poly express on Penn Pens airline Figure advancing Opening equ Van accordi…" | | 4 | "News News] ended across found Two Experts now found melancholy we aboard obscure trap atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational O up seriously > seriously faint express on Pens…" | | 5 | "found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational Obrush early setup Louisiana fish bread receipt early setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Phi…" | | 6 | "News News] ended across found Two Experts now found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?]) brush rational Obrush early O seriously > seriously faint Pens ai…" | | 7 | "News News] ended across found Two Experts now found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we aboard obscure trap atoms atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational O up seriously > seriou…" | | 8 | "watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious freeing ac Ze Gel UC harvest street Mint history somewhat …" | | 9 | "found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we aboard obscure trap atoms updates white heavy ?] Fre found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational O u…" | | 10 | "News News] ended across found The melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?])] “What are you drinking, Silas?” Rory finally askests on Pens airline Figure advancing Opening underst…" | | 11 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious chaotic rash freeing Ž exposures freeing early setup L…" | | 12 | "News News] setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic Lil varia…" | | 13 | "News News] ended across found The melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?])])brush rational O early LilNos gay webpage others bounce setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philipp…" | | 14 | "News News] ended across found Two Experts now found/Saint lips’, youth melod seriously faint express on Penn early setup Louisiana receipt setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Phi…" | | 15 | "News News] found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we atoms updates white heavy ?]) “do you stand kind poly Pens airline Figure Opening equ understood according him Duke understood acc…" | | 16 | "vodka cover damp task reflex verb executive pores inst mechanics conscious flowering binge coefficient strips diminishing ecology bowel residues supporters forecasts no electronics…" | | 17 | "deleting Ferry semantic Feast page theme hurting acted cities.lee engineer headphones demon waist simply Child professors language screenshot princess slang serving preservation da…" | | 18 | "prisons Orchard panic Plans extinction realistic retreat interstate inn isolation Mitchell selfish damages east neon politics evacuated strives maturity psychologists governors The…" | | 19 | "News News] ended across found across found Philippine girl we atoms updates white heavy ?])-] rose affirmed under cargo,[ remembered numberdo rational O up seriously > seriously fa…" | | 20 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious chaotic chaotic rash freeing Ž chaotic rash freeing Ž …" | | 21 | "News News] setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic setup (Re…" | | 22 | "News News] ended across found Philippine girl we atoms updates white heavy Philippine girl we aboard updates white heavy ?])])brush rational stand up seriously > seriously faint ex…" | | 23 | "News News] ended across found-sex Philip suff emblem exile] Hi polarity Margaret chicken rewarding forms Re subst tenons High formulated excessive trouble-Free Perth trouble-Free P…" | | 24 | "Str cargo bass Sallyboat proving broader ram Supreme poverty fortune poverty fortune outsiders:'fr mounting observers variable borrowing fibre professional searches sequencing subm…" | | 25 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious chaotic rash freeing Ž Ž exposures freeing freeing ac …" | | 26 | "Str Str cargo bass cargo bass fareboat provingboetically broader ram Supreme powder poverty fortune fortune poverty outsiders:'fr quantum begin rational rationalExtra western colle…" | | 27 | "Riverside rose affirmed under cargo,[do rational O up seriously > seriously faint express seriously faint express on Pens airline figure seriously express on Penn airline opening e…" | | 28 | "aver maximizing early setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomati…" | | 29 | "Riverside girl we atoms updates white heavy ?토토\"Whatever brings you here tonight, Rory?\" Silas asked, unneeded warmth in his words." | | 30 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious chaotic chaotic rash freeing Ž exposures토토\"What can I …" | | 31 | "Rory found a knife on a groove lip tick many lips lips’, girl youth girl girl unfolded girl girl obscure qt agr bet affected muddy below muddy below outliers tuna Meg spawned updat…" | | 32 | "News News] end found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we aboard obscure atoms updates white heavy ?])-] rose affirmed under cargo,[do rational stand up seriously > seriously faint exp…" | | 33 | "Silas inclined his head, little fingers brushing hair fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Phil…" | | 34 | "News News] end Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic setup (RepPublic Penn News) early…" | | 35 | "News News] Louisiana fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic Setup Louisiana fish bread bread fish kind early…" | | 36 | "News News] ended across found By found/Saint lips’, youth melancholy we aboard obscure trap atoms atoms updates white heavy ?Rory ran her eyes over the dimly lit bar, unneeded dram…" | | 37 | "News News] Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana…" | | 38 | "News News] end Philippine girl we atoms updates white heavy ?])-] rose affirmed under cargo,[do rational stand up seriously > seriously faint express seriously faint express on Pen…" | | 39 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears gor distant chaotic rash chaotic rash freeing ac curious chaotic chaotic rash freeing Ž exposures freeing freei…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 13248 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | 0 | "special" | | 1 | "I-E Duke expiry Pete February ingest learning cutter exploring settlers MIT" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 1739 | | wordCount | 8059 | | uniqueNames | 220 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "News" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 6 | | worstWindowName | "News" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Pennfield | 1 | | Friday | 1 | | Spring | 6 | | LilNos | 68 | | RepPublic | 94 | | Penn | 144 | | News | 164 | | Gel | 14 | | Louisiana | 123 | | Philippine | 92 | | Pens | 104 | | Opening | 93 | | Half | 89 | | Orbit | 49 | | Lil | 26 | | Quarter | 19 | | Pic | 48 | | Protest | 47 | | RepRep | 1 | | Early | 27 | | Rep | 2 | | Pennsylvania | 1 | | Scratching | 1 | | Unit | 2 | | South | 1 | | Figure | 13 | | Van | 4 | | Qu | 9 | | Voltage | 10 | | Drama | 8 | | Month | 8 | | Elephant | 11 | | Emerson | 11 | | Mot | 11 | | Tuesday | 11 | | Black | 11 | | Century | 39 | | Column | 5 | | Fair | 4 | | Great | 10 | | Signal | 2 | | Boris | 4 | | Two | 5 | | Experts | 10 | | Duke | 12 | | Hair | 13 | | Bru | 7 | | Ze | 11 | | Mint | 11 | | Champion | 6 | | Oc | 6 | | Sign | 2 | | Amp | 5 | | ProtestColour | 6 | | Red | 4 | | High | 4 | | Perth | 13 | | DisType | 7 | | Me | 1 | | Washington | 5 | | Meg | 1 | | Columinate | 1 | | Tr | 1 | | Thanks | 1 | | Sally | 1 | | Hungarian | 1 | | Supreme | 3 | | Scottish | 2 | | Gulf | 2 | | Latvia | 2 | | Ham | 1 | | Ding | 1 | | Six | 1 | | Cur | 3 | | Income | 5 | | Medi | 1 | | Th | 1 | | Pinkum | 1 | | Moses | 1 | | Gala | 1 | | Finally | 1 | | Bold | 1 | | Illinois | 1 | | College | 1 | | Sun | 1 | | Sure | 1 | | Cycle | 1 | | Rey | 1 | | Bernie | 1 | | Lima | 1 | | Ludwig | 1 | | Film | 1 | | Sic | 1 | | Kwhile | 1 | | Ho | 1 | | Len | 1 | | Dup | 1 | | Friendship | 1 | | Dean | 1 | | Tun | 1 | | Mi | 1 | | David | 1 | | Verse | 1 | | Sixth | 1 | | Warner | 1 | | Chlor | 1 | | University | 1 | | Brighton | 1 | | Land | 2 | | Product | 1 | | Beg | 1 | | Files | 2 | | Epic | 1 | | Cart | 1 | | Song | 1 | | Draft | 1 | | Khal | 1 | | Table | 1 | | Ferry | 1 | | Feast | 1 | | Child | 1 | | Ar | 1 | | Tyler | 1 | | Tony | 1 | | Saudi | 2 | | Gö | 1 | | Berry | 1 | | Brigade | 1 | | Rate | 1 | | Thomas | 1 | | Dust | 1 | | Tablet | 1 | | Libraries | 1 | | Ay | 1 | | Church | 1 | | Sup | 1 | | File | 1 | | Passport | 1 | | Poly | 1 | | Rain | 1 | | Lit | 1 | | Imperial | 1 | | Guide | 1 | | Music | 1 | | Cell | 1 | | Gre | 1 | | Order | 1 | | Well | 1 | | Adolescent | 1 | | Inf | 1 | | Moder | 1 | | Ex | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Marie | 1 | | Output | 1 | | Wine | 1 | | Malay | 1 | | Extensions | 1 | | Hold | 1 | | Esther | 1 | | Tim | 1 | | Unlimited | 1 | | Due | 1 | | Furthermore | 1 | | Wilkinson | 1 | | Onc | 1 | | Have | 1 | | Mexican | 1 | | Broker | 1 | | Oct | 1 | | Promise | 1 | | Phot | 1 | | Ann | 1 | | Property | 1 | | Diet | 1 | | Pride | 2 | | Measure | 1 | | Optical | 1 | | Pound | 1 | | Orchard | 1 | | Plans | 1 | | Mitchell | 1 | | Mayo | 1 | | Penny | 1 | | Tab | 1 | | Jason | 1 | | Preds | 1 | | Standards | 1 | | National | 1 | | Reports | 1 | | Ada | 1 | | McN | 1 | | Charlotte | 1 | | Mat | 1 | | Elaine | 1 | | Besides | 1 | | Benjamin | 1 | | Club | 1 | | Zone | 1 | | Virginia | 5 | | Electric | 5 | | Philip | 3 | | Margaret | 2 | | Re | 2 | | BruColour | 1 | | Hollywood | 1 | | Puerto | 1 | | Ph | 2 | | Hi | 1 | | CapEs | 1 | | Str | 4 | | Sallyboat | 1 | | Setup | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nest" | | 5 | "Spring" | | 6 | "LilNos" | | 7 | "News" | | 8 | "Gel" | | 9 | "Louisiana" | | 10 | "Pens" | | 11 | "Opening" | | 12 | "Lil" | | 13 | "Quarter" | | 14 | "Protest" | | 15 | "Early" | | 16 | "Rep" | | 17 | "South" | | 18 | "Figure" | | 19 | "Van" | | 20 | "Drama" | | 21 | "Month" | | 22 | "Elephant" | | 23 | "Emerson" | | 24 | "Tuesday" | | 25 | "Black" | | 26 | "Century" | | 27 | "Column" | | 28 | "Fair" | | 29 | "Signal" | | 30 | "Boris" | | 31 | "Experts" | | 32 | "Duke" | | 33 | "Hair" | | 34 | "ProtestColour" | | 35 | "Red" | | 36 | "High" | | 37 | "Meg" | | 38 | "Sally" | | 39 | "Gulf" | | 40 | "Six" | | 41 | "Cur" | | 42 | "Th" | | 43 | "Moses" | | 44 | "Finally" | | 45 | "Bernie" | | 46 | "Ludwig" | | 47 | "Film" | | 48 | "Ho" | | 49 | "Len" | | 50 | "Friendship" | | 51 | "David" | | 52 | "Verse" | | 53 | "Chlor" | | 54 | "Product" | | 55 | "Cart" | | 56 | "Song" | | 57 | "Draft" | | 58 | "Table" | | 59 | "Tyler" | | 60 | "Tony" | | 61 | "Rate" | | 62 | "Thomas" | | 63 | "Dust" | | 64 | "Tablet" | | 65 | "Church" | | 66 | "Poly" | | 67 | "Imperial" | | 68 | "Moder" | | 69 | "Morris" | | 70 | "Marie" | | 71 | "Output" | | 72 | "Wine" | | 73 | "Malay" | | 74 | "Hold" | | 75 | "Esther" | | 76 | "Tim" | | 77 | "Due" | | 78 | "Furthermore" | | 79 | "Wilkinson" | | 80 | "Onc" | | 81 | "Phot" | | 82 | "Ann" | | 83 | "Property" | | 84 | "Diet" | | 85 | "Measure" | | 86 | "Pound" | | 87 | "Mitchell" | | 88 | "Mayo" | | 89 | "Tab" | | 90 | "Jason" | | 91 | "Preds" | | 92 | "Reports" | | 93 | "Ada" | | 94 | "McN" | | 95 | "Charlotte" | | 96 | "Mat" | | 97 | "Elaine" | | 98 | "Benjamin" | | 99 | "Philip" | | 100 | "Margaret" | | 101 | "BruColour" | | 102 | "Sallyboat" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Pennfield" | | 2 | "Penn" | | 3 | "Pennsylvania" | | 4 | "Mint" | | 5 | "Perth" | | 6 | "Washington" | | 7 | "Latvia" | | 8 | "Illinois" | | 9 | "Lima" | | 10 | "Brighton" | | 11 | "Land" | | 12 | "Epic" | | 13 | "Zone" |
| | globalScore | 0.483 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 13248 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 194.82 | | std | 188.45 | | cv | 0.967 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 229 | | 7 | 257 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 440 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 310 | | 12 | 431 | | 13 | 176 | | 14 | 152 | | 15 | 370 | | 16 | 117 | | 17 | 74 | | 18 | 325 | | 19 | 307 | | 20 | 158 | | 21 | 214 | | 22 | 264 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 200 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 175 | | 27 | 343 | | 28 | 147 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 84 | | 31 | 75 | | 32 | 170 | | 33 | 476 | | 34 | 63 | | 35 | 163 | | 36 | 214 | | 37 | 142 | | 38 | 679 | | 39 | 179 | | 40 | 164 | | 41 | 107 | | 42 | 309 | | 43 | 87 | | 44 | 155 | | 45 | 111 | | 46 | 468 | | 47 | 154 | | 48 | 282 | | 49 | 181 |
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| 95.65% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "was practiced" | | 1 | "was locked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 951 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.08% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Old times reasserted themselves; for a minute or so it was possible to forget that they'd taken separate paths." | | 1 | "\"I like the shirt.\" Rory said; her lilting Pennfield valley found melancholy fingers early tonight early, early fingers (Friday fish early evening in late Spring brought LilNos gay concourses wall FIL position...)" | | 2 | "prisons Orchard panic Plans extinction realistic retreat interstate inn isolation Mitchell selfish damages east neon politics evacuated strives maturity psychologists governors They quarterly Mayo sold circumstances Pride commitments swim \"; 输 exposures Penny morning lights decades cleaner forwards Tab essentially diploma closely Jason Preds bizarre kindly Standards National Reports regression norms solving hate(\"[1 Ada McN Gel Charlotte Mat behavior Elaine shall mountain deserving tearing eng courage Besides Saudi withdrawal webinar scramble broth smoothly publication-R Benjamin spending Club judging ext cab Zone Mint history modeling(', somewhatDe Champion cause effect acquaint cups pursue gu graph varying attack lips held Gamma jogging worn Z gust/platform Unc manufactured Cleaning dav Delay cum Oc/sc environment concern occur Exposure Jason cavity projectile structure impact called points editing screenshots hd visas defense believed grounded utter Incorrect fail jul amounts react temperature setting hurry Businesses partnered examine Pitch considerations tune Tokyo fallout leaders Monica conduct longer Towers showcases breakfast crack stocked black Chick voluntary Lad surgeons pumps strings cultural labelled Rak feather ideal statistical missions grants Ao edges game immediate Singapore Marshall monitoring Purchase Powder bit squat invalidate street setup Louisiana fish bread receipt LilNos gay webpage others setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early early LilNos gay webpage others setup (RepPublic Penn News) Louisiana Philippine fish bread fish kind early fish kind poly Pens record Opening early bread upgrade navy Half eagerch diplomatic Lil variable variable proprietor variable proprietor defect cheerful headers Quarter to gay webpage parameters wall quarters farm arm webpage position Pic others reset early bounce early invade (RepPublic UC newPositionstateRepRep broad abPublicPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lil public Penn outstanding expansions Penn Early L-) News!" |
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| 36.62% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2185 | | adjectiveStacks | 12 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "due early inside vowel" | | 1 | "outstanding early early expansions" | | 2 | "broad abPublicPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lil public Penn" | | 3 | "broad abPublicPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lil public Penn" | | 4 | "due early inside vowel" | | 5 | "broad abPublicPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lil public Penn" | | 6 | "due early inside vowel" | | 7 | "broad abPublicPublic fancy lilPublic fancy lil public Penn" | | 8 | "previous sour imposing reasons" | | 9 | "outstanding advantageous kindly brand" | | 10 | "outstanding early outstanding expansions" | | 11 | "lilPublic fancy lil expansions" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.02654462242562929 | | lyAdverbCount | 105 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.04805491990846682 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 174.32 | | std | 375.69 | | cv | 2.155 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 594 | | 18 | 192 | | 19 | 201 | | 20 | 297 | | 21 | 264 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 82 | | 24 | 138 | | 25 | 113 | | 26 | 202 | | 27 | 125 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 256 | | 30 | 172 | | 31 | 131 | | 32 | 213 | | 33 | 115 | | 34 | 151 | | 35 | 3116 | | 36 | 644 | | 37 | 346 | | 38 | 305 | | 39 | 201 | | 40 | 554 | | 41 | 147 | | 42 | 323 | | 43 | 113 | | 44 | 169 | | 45 | 107 | | 46 | 115 | | 47 | 256 | | 48 | 165 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 51.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.42105263157894735 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 99.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course, Silas still ran" | | 1 | "Too slow and steady a" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "He poured a generous measure" | | 1 | "It had been years since" | | 2 | "She took off her jacket," | | 3 | "She focussed on Silas, eyes" | | 4 | "Her shoulders bruised in the" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 12.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter slipped onto a" | | 1 | "He poured a generous measure" | | 2 | "The burnished glow of the" | | 3 | "It had been years since" | | 4 | "Silas said, his low voice" | | 5 | "Rory's smile was a small," | | 6 | "She took off her jacket," | | 7 | "Rory's eyes flicked between the" | | 8 | "The tension between them was" | | 9 | "Rory said; her lilting Pennfield" | | 10 | "The protest shirt (RepPublic fancy" | | 11 | "rubbed.J utility appears gor distant" | | 12 | "News early setup Louisiana receipt" | | 13 | "News News] ended across found" | | 14 | "News News] ended across found" | | 15 | "News News] ended across found" | | 16 | "News News] ended across found" | | 17 | "News News] ended across found" | | 18 | "watchdog work settings odom coll" | | 19 | "News News] ended across found" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He poured a generous measure into a glass, his hands moving with a quiet deliberateness that was both familiar and jarring." | | 1 | "Too slow and steady a proprietor would be shackled by old guilt, cuffed to decrepit fairytale concourses that wallowed in self-pity." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "News News] found/Saint (found/saint)" | | 1 | "damp task reflex verb executive pores (damp task reflex verb executive pore)" | | 2 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears (appear)" | | 3 | "Amp watchdog work settings odom coll breath rubbed.J utility appears (appear)" | | 4 | "Silas suggested (suggest)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |