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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADW0QGA79951WZ1AWZMJ
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Model:
Rocinante 12B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
38.2s
Cost:
$0.001538
Provider:
NextBit
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Danica hesitated at the threshold, peering into the shadowed grove beyond. The sun-dappled glade they'd left behind seemed almost ordinary in comparison to the timeless space before them. "This is it?" She ventured, stepping foot onto soft grass that
seemed to
glow with an inner light. "The Fae Grove?" Zephyr nodded solemnly, his angular features cast into sharp relief by the
otherworldly
illumination filtering through rustling leaves. "Since time immemorial, Seekers have journeyed here to consult the Seer. Her prophecies are told in riddles, but they always ring true." Rory followed
cautiously
, one hand resting on the small of her back where the
weight
of her satchel pulled at her shoulder - and where the Fae-forged blade nestled, a reminder of her brush with the shadowy Prince of Dymas. Her free hand felt for the Heartstone pendant at her throat, cool against her skin and responding with the faintest pulse. Nyx flowed through the entryway, no longer solid but more mist than human, backlit by
otherworldly
light. They gestured with translucent hands to the ages-old trees ringing the clearing. "Behold the Grove. Time moves differently here - an hour inside can be minutes or days outside, depending on the Seer's whim. So tread
lightly
." Danica's freckled nose wrinkled in an adorably uneasy smile. "Well, since you lot seem to know the ropes... lead on, Seelie Sleepers!" Laughing
softly
, they made their way deeper into the grove at Zephyr's behest. He guided them down a path lined in wildflowers that
seemed to
bloom year-round and through pillared oaks so grand they could likely fit a cottage inside each hollow. Muted rustlings emanated from the foliage, drawing Rory's gaze to fluttering sparks of faerie lights. "So, she
really
lives out here? In the woods?" Danica
look
ed around herself in wonder, outlandish surroundings making the tall Los Angelino
feel
almost small. Zephyr nodded, eyes lingering on a flutter of faerie-pixies before continuing onward. "She prefers the solitude after her exile. But Seekers are not uncommon guests." "Though the price of such visits is steep," Nyx intoned. "She exchanges her gifts for a toll, often in coin or blood." "Blood?" Danica balked. "Ew. Literally? Like, I'm donating mine, but that's clearly just in dumb cult movies, not real - wherever this is." Zephyr offered a half-smile. "Relax, Danica. It's not so bad. It's a drop or two, no more than a pinprick. Symbolic payment in kind, as she is a creature of ancient magic." "Creepy," Danica muttered,
echo
ing Rory's own unease as Zephyr led them to the foot of a towering oak, ancient and
imposing
. "This is it?" "The Seer's tree, yes," Zephyr confirmed. Nyx cocked their head, dark flames of dreadlocks
dancing
under darkening sky. "Dawn comes to the Grove, travelers. The Seer will receive you if your quest is pure of heart." Danica shivered, unease
palpable
. "You're telling me that thing lives in a TREE? Ugh, and evil vines just shoot out and grab you like an oversized carnivorous plant? I don't think I like this place..." Rory rubbed Danica's shoulder reassuringly, her own untrained eye trying to discern any movement in the shadow-shrouded nooks and crannies. But at Zephyr's urging, they pressed onward, up the broad and curling root. Narrowing eyes against the strain of shadows, Rory waited by the darkly curled branches for the others to ascend the gnarled trunk. She couldn't pinpoint what about the old oak made her so anxious; she'd gone toe to toe with demons and hell-bound menaces. But the ancient, sleeping power thrumming under gnarled bark spoke of things beyond the ken of Dymas and her friends down below. Danica, eyes wide with wonder, seemed enamored and entranced as Zephyr ushered her up last. The rough curls of bark pressed together, and shadow swallowed entry... The others took several moments of tentative steps to adjust to the glimmering light cast by bioluminescent plants. Rory lingered, hand resting against the oak's cool bark, awed by the living power throbbing beneath it. As if on cue, a thin branch curled reach out and brushed Rory's cheek. She tensed, joints locking up as hot pokers of dread shot down her spine. "Hush now, bright one," a gentle, lyrically tonal voice
seemed to
echo
inside Rory's mind. "Harm comes not from me, daughter of prophecy. The Seer sees you, and you are called." A great tree-motion shuddered through the trunk below, and the
very
air
seemed to
moan. The others, heads craning up to various points of the cavern's limitless highs,
were called
away from their private work by the drawn-out, strange, gurgling voice of the ancient oak... She sought a wild-eyed glance around and caught Rory's
look
with her own amber gaze. The Fae-forged blade in Rory's hilt bore proof of her arrival in Hel, even if the explorer exhibit crew wouldn't know it. So, with the earnest desire to root Danica's passions, Rory turned back to face the mysterious Aurora. "Rory, you've done some amazing things. Changed the world. Broke boundaries. That's no small feat. But..." Rory reached out and grasped Rory's hand, giving it a firm squeeze - somehow
feel
ing the coin at the apex of Rory's fingers, the pronouncement deep within its copper hollows. It reflected reverently yet openly upon Rory's Ask One Among the Shadows gift: they therefore urged Rory on to the
very
next question. Rory paused a moment as they took a deep, fortifying breath,
feel
ing Danica's uncertainty melt away into sincere curiosity. Rory glanced back at the Fae blade and Heartstone glowing in Rory's hands before
delving
deeper into the shadows. "I did promise to take you with me if things ever got dicey," Rory said with a rueful smile, turning back to face her friends collected beyond the jumping stone's embrace. "But the offer always stands. Your safety's more important than my grandiose solo mission." Rory
look
ed at the four of them one by one - Zofila, Zola, Zara,doesn't that count? they thought, then quietly shook their head. No, Aurora, Rory needed all of them right now, regardless of existential quibbles. Rory led them deeper into the twilight-filled forest with steady, purposeful steps, leaving a localized burst of temperate fae winds stirring their figures. Danica caught up to Rory, barely catching her breath from the towering oak's heels-by-deboglaring depths fair exhausting her, the air filled with the beat of wildlife. Now and then, a telltale tingle would lick Rory's nape or Aurora's creeping dread would faint shrivel the hairs on Danica's flesh - but otherwise, all proved interestingly free of demonic disturbances. In a matter of heartbeats, they came upon a tree-root thicket
utterly
disguised by shadows. They had to crawl between the branches to gain entrance into one of Dymas' wild vines latticing the tree in the icy, viscous way common to all Fae dwellings. Inside, amberskinned archways and curling knoted mosaicked flooring held the place. Ancient vines crawled the walls, so thick they could only be called trunks at this point. A wiry root tangle shielded a nook in the corner of the cavern from view. A great old hassock or loungegroup protruded from the back turn of it - waiting cushions and a little bolster divan; a raised sende historians of Delphi soothing drinks propped near the nook divans; all coalesced from sins and petted attentively by unseen hands. Isolde the Seer sat back in azure drapery folds her startlingly silver hair flowing down her shoulders, complementing her pale hands resting atop her knees as they waited patiently between. Her eerily bright eyes sheened lavendersaw Rory and the rest of the party with a sad but pleased expression. The Shadow did not sit on the couch. It flowed between spaces of the moment, weaving its foggy mixture into view. Nyx felt Rory's mind quiver between dimensions, hitting invisible barriers as if nearly shredding, and they flowed safely over into themselves to watch over them. "Blessings of the bogs be upon you," Isolde murmured to Rory with a
very
slight curtsy. "Blessings of the bogs be upon you too," Rory gasped
quickly
out, capturing the strange words on the fly to notch. "Thank you... for receiving me in, um..." Rory trailed off as Aurora cocked her head. "What's up?" "I
suddenly
feel
like we're all mangy rats," she noted. "Squeaking and weirder at the edge of a labyrinth of confusion." A
look
of amusement blazed Isolde's eyes. "Pipe down, Seelie Sleepers. Be enlightened to one another's cause before the seven brands fall." Danica celebrates ka'une eka's'auth your ka'yulath." Danica says with a nod, smiling crookedly as she shakes Lagos'Hand on her arm. "Worrying doesn't solve anything. Whatever happens, we'll get through it together. " Her voice cracks on the last word, betraying the untapped emotion, and she hastily averts her gaze. "Danica take Lagos Dec war hero and Ensign Wick to deduction couch." "Danica take Lagos Dec war hero and Ensign Wick to deduction couch table storage room prison holdproof lab building." A few terse murmurs
follow that order
, but no one grumbles outright. Lagos nods firmly, immediately springing up and grabbing an emergency dentifribble for off-ers physical health bar staff car, while Ensign Wick scoops his dignified toned wood-shavings, his ash blonde hair fluttering a little cargo-waste items. Tissues fire control alarmarea pillars storage sites storehip Marauder hearth-scape isle spaceship warranted. The mantled-Bretagne had always
been adored
for fire Nexion portal time-keep devices. They take the primary say save track vocal store passenger lab chair attackwatch hysterectomy hinterpointe bearth_EVAUV safehours based carbon timetable stories honings chair connectivity storages lite areas, Nahmi hearing insertion rifles way into back, major warbivariate neutror fields resist. It's not much, but it's good reading on what they need to Know - if they're all to get home and to the aide sometimes. Rory blinks at the output on the viewscreen, realizing Los Angeles bar is sharing the same daze — their on-screen reflections available to an array of wikandidates... and the opposite fascinating. Recovering to slow, soothingly add, Rory murmurs supportively, "dimly aware that Rory's airflow stinks going back to the Fae For?" just a little sorry to intercept Lagos hefty. "Aurora smiles and adds warmthierten data sends. Sketch called a king colossus cavern t.'" Danica revives list expire nugget sing from establishing reveries. "Danica connects 'beholding' to creation specified towards accomplishments." "Time coming supplied steps a skilled." Danica nods, her amber eyes still zeroed in on the problem."item invariably charmed, should be. But it's still just text
echo
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flattens that thought
and replies out from a pensive cushion fossil, "a Sofia's experiments are weird. Moving liquids back on Iridium all the time. Awaiting
very
slbumfer." Rory leans crate and examines the ale polong command handbook's ident. "The three uh-huh.[Aurora] Codename and Rory of An I ripple Rattner fondness ofFemale Rentorjoy of!. Interesting. Nagging ? Danica. flits across the screen. "Science 's a tough path, but it's.service call. Definitely being fans of a Nova w just can switch alarm". Isolde should have been no less cluttered by the transmutation of feral circling down the tower. It pulsed with live-heart heat. "Colony singular unspecific dungeon must can make out the alcohol base," the Seer advised. "Levitating from the grecept field, Une more lay behemoth loss built slumber. Cause the mandates clean structure essence of
precisely
." RORY shook her head hard-pizzy wig. "What are you trying to say, Isolde? Should we gather all the workings to a singular harmless 'slumber'? The Seer shook her head gravelly, nodding. "Nope, Danica offering come not like bottleneck nor similar. Not even as much for persona triangle narrows. An Anservs triangle betrayed for Omnibot." Nyx tunes into Rory's reply with a churtle twitch and Archer hurls into the corners of iridium-based roster, getting rid of most of the Danica's back rebuild scrubber operated as a loose and up some code adaptations were ready, but it was an I stand a byman roadmap favored to face. It
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
12.1212%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"a gentle, lyrically tonal voice seemed to echo inside Rory's mind [lyrically]"
1
"Rory said with a rueful smile, turning back to face her friends collected beyond the jumping stone's embrace [back]"
2
"Isolde murmured to Rory with a very slight curtsy [very]"
3
"Rory gasped quickly out, capturing the strange words on the fly to notch [quickly]"
41.2053%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2041
totalAiIsmAdverbs
12
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
3
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
4
adverb
"softly"
count
1
5
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
6
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
7
adverb
"really"
count
1
8
adverb
"very"
count
4
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"lightly"
2
"precisely"
3
"quickly"
4
"softly"
5
"suddenly"
6
"utterly"
7
"really"
8
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.0044%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2041
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
2
word
"imposing"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
4
word
"dancing"
count
1
5
word
"delving"
count
1
6
word
"echo"
count
1
7
word
"echoed"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"otherworldly"
2
"imposing"
3
"weight"
4
"dancing"
5
"delving"
6
"echo"
7
"echoed"
8
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
85
filterMatches
0
"feel"
1
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"follow that order"
1
"flattens that thought"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
51
mean
39.73
std
23.84
cv
0.6
sampleLengths
0
28
1
21
2
40
3
61
4
54
5
22
6
57
7
25
8
25
9
22
10
23
11
32
12
24
13
6
14
30
15
35
16
33
17
66
18
26
19
35
20
28
21
31
22
45
23
37
24
33
25
53
26
38
27
45
28
36
29
81
30
44
31
86
32
49
33
46
34
16
35
28
36
10
37
21
38
22
39
32
40
48
41
136
42
31
43
118
44
29
45
30
46
23
47
55
48
24
49
30
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"were called"
1
"been adored"
2
"was scienced"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
257
matches
(empty)
98.0194%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1492
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
61
adverbRatio
0.04088471849865952
lyAdverbCount
32
lyAdverbRatio
0.021447721179624665
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
104
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
104
mean
19.48
std
24.95
cv
1.281
sampleLengths
0
11
1
17
2
18
3
3
4
18
5
22
6
40
7
21
8
17
9
12
10
25
11
9
12
13
13
13
14
29
15
15
16
25
17
12
18
13
19
10
20
12
21
3
22
20
23
4
24
28
25
21
26
3
27
6
28
12
29
18
30
4
31
31
32
20
33
13
34
22
35
22
36
22
37
15
38
11
39
18
40
17
41
14
42
14
43
15
44
16
45
15
46
30
47
15
48
22
49
17
81.7308%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.5192307692307693
totalSentences
104
uniqueOpeners
54
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Nyx intoned (intoned)"
1
"Danica muttered, echoing Rory's own unease as Zephyr led them to the foot of a towering oak, ancient and imposing (mutter, echo lead)"
2
"Zephyr confirmed (confirm)"
3
"a gentle, lyrically tonal voice seemed to echo inside Rory's mind (seem echo)"
4
"Rory said with a rueful smile, turning back to face her friends collected beyond the jumping stone's embrace (say turn face collect)"
5
"Isolde murmured to Rory with a very slight curtsy (murmur)"
6
"Rory gasped quickly out, capturing the strange words on the fly to notch (gasp quickly capture)"
7
"she noted (note)"
8
"the Seer advised (advise)"
9
"Danica offering come not like bottleneck nor similar (does come not)"
81.4165%