Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADW1H6XVNHQRA5M14RSM

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.001074

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moon hung low in the sky, a pale disc casting a silvery glow over the twisted branches of the ancient oaks that surrounded The Fae Grove. Aurora Carter stepped through the gnarled roots, her heart thrumming in her chest, a steady rhythm that echoed the unease creeping up her spine. She had come here for answers, a desperate search for clarity in the chaos of her life, but the air felt thick, almost electric, as if the very atmosphere was charged with something unspeakable. The grove was a hidden sanctuary, a pocket of magic nestled within Richmond Park, but tonight it felt more like a trap. The wildflowers, usually vibrant and alive, seemed to wilt under the moonlight, their colors muted, their petals drooping as if they sensed the wrongness that permeated the air. Aurora tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck, its deep crimson glow pulsing faintly against her chest, a heartbeat of warmth that offered little comfort. She had heard whispers of the grove’s power, tales of those who had ventured into its depths and returned changed, but she had never believed them—until now. The trees loomed like sentinels, their twisted forms casting long shadows that danced in the moonlight, and for a moment, she thought she saw something shift among the trunks, a flicker of movement just beyond her line of sight. She paused, her breath hitching in her throat, straining to listen. The night was too quiet, the usual sounds of rustling leaves and distant city life swallowed by an oppressive silence. “Get a grip, Rory,” she muttered to herself, forcing her feet to move forward. She had come here to confront the remnants of her past, to seek the truth about the pendant and the mysterious benefactor who had given it to her. But as she stepped deeper into the grove, the shadows seemed to stretch and twist, warping her sense of direction. The standing stones, ancient and weathered, loomed ahead, their presence both grounding and disorienting. The air grew colder, a chill that seeped into her bones, and she shivered involuntarily. She could feel the weight of the grove pressing down on her, a palpable force that made her skin prickle. The Heartstone Pendant warmed against her chest, a stark contrast to the chill that enveloped her. She reached up to touch it, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface, and for a fleeting moment, she felt a connection, a whisper of something just out of reach. Then came the sound—a soft rustling, like the whisper of fabric against skin. Aurora froze, her heart racing as she turned slowly, scanning the darkness. The trees stood silent, their branches swaying gently in the night breeze, but the sound persisted, a faint crackle that seemed to come from behind her. She spun around, her breath quickening, but there was nothing there, only the shadows that clung to the grove like a shroud. “Hello?” she called, her voice trembling slightly. The word hung in the air, swallowed by the silence. She felt foolish, calling out into the dark, but the instinct to reach out, to break the oppressive quiet, was stronger than her fear. No answer came, only the rustle of leaves, and she took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to leave. But she couldn’t. Not yet. Not when she was so close to uncovering the truth. With a deep breath, she pressed on, moving toward the standing stones that marked the heart of the grove. Each step felt heavier than the last, as if the ground itself was reluctant to let her pass. The pendant pulsed again, a steady thrum that resonated with her heartbeat, and she clutched it tighter, willing it to guide her. As she approached the stones, the air thickened, a palpable tension that made her skin crawl. The moonlight illuminated the ancient carvings etched into the stone, symbols that seemed to shift and shimmer as she drew near. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the cool surface, and a jolt of energy surged through her, a rush of warmth that spread from her fingertips to her core. But then, from the corner of her eye, she caught a flicker of movement. A shadow darted between the trees, too quick to be anything human. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat, and she turned sharply, her heart pounding in her ears. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice stronger now, though the tremor betrayed her fear. Silence answered her, thick and suffocating. The shadows deepened, and she felt the weight of unseen eyes upon her, watching, waiting. The rustling sound returned, closer this time, a whisper of movement that sent a shiver down her spine. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to run, but her feet felt rooted to the ground. Then, a soft giggle echoed through the grove, a sound that was both childlike and sinister. Aurora’s heart raced as she spun around, searching for the source. “Show yourself!” she shouted, her voice cracking. The laughter faded, replaced by a low, melodic hum that seemed to resonate from the very stones themselves. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth intensifying, and she clutched it tighter, feeling the heat radiate through her fingers. The hum grew louder, a haunting melody that wrapped around her, pulling her deeper into the grove. She felt a compulsion to follow it, to surrender to the call, but a flicker of reason held her back. This was not a song of comfort; it was a siren’s call, luring her into the depths of the unknown. “Stop it!” she shouted, her voice echoing through the grove. “I’m not afraid of you!” But the words felt hollow, swallowed by the darkness that surrounded her. The shadows shifted again, and she caught a glimpse of something pale and ethereal flitting between the trees, a figure that seemed to dance just out of reach. Panic surged within her, and she turned to flee, but the grove twisted around her, the path shifting as if it were alive. The standing stones loomed behind her, their ancient presence both a comfort and a threat. She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and she fell to the ground, the pendant clattering against the earth. As she scrambled to her feet, the shadows closed in, a suffocating darkness that pressed against her. The laughter returned, echoing in her ears, a cacophony of voices that whispered her name, taunting her. “Rory… Rory… come play with us…” She felt the weight of their gaze, the certainty that she was not alone, and the realization struck her like a cold wave. This was not just a grove; it was a realm of the Fae, a place where time twisted and reality blurred. The stories she had dismissed as mere folklore were alive here, and she was caught in their web. With a surge of adrenaline, she lunged for the Heartstone Pendant, grasping it tightly in her hand. The warmth surged through her, a beacon of light in the encroaching darkness. “I won’t be your plaything!” she shouted, her voice rising above the laughter, a defiance that echoed through the grove. The shadows recoiled, the laughter fading into a low murmur, and for a moment, she felt the weight lift. But the grove was still alive, still watching, and she knew she had to escape before it claimed her as one of its own. With a final glance at the standing stones, she turned and ran, the path shifting beneath her feet, the shadows reaching out as she fled into the night.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
45.1411% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"tightly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"palpable"
count2
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"cacophony"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"sentinels"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count3
8
word"oppressive"
count2
9
word"sinister"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count3
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"weight"
count4
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count3
15
word"echoing"
count2
16
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"cacophony"
3"beacon"
4"sanctuary"
5"sentinels"
6"resonated"
7"flicker"
8"oppressive"
9"sinister"
10"loomed"
11"stark"
12"weight"
13"dance"
14"echoed"
15"echoing"
16"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
35.1937% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean63.7
std17.4
cv0.273
sampleLengths
085
180
297
376
481
573
662
715
859
967
1056
1159
1252
1376
1455
1558
1640
1762
1850
1971
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"was caught"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1249
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.029623698959167333
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008006405124099279
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.2424% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean18.46
std7.17
cv0.388
sampleLengths
027
124
234
322
428
530
627
739
811
920
1014
1128
1220
1314
1415
1520
1616
1730
1813
1912
2026
2122
227
2310
2424
2521
263
272
2810
2919
3018
3122
3216
3321
3430
3514
3612
3716
3814
396
4015
4118
4220
4316
4411
457
4618
4719
4817
4920
42.0290% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.30434782608695654
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners21
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered to herself, forcing her feet to move forward (mutter force move)"
1"demanded (demand)"
2"shouted (shout)"
3"shouted (shout)"
4"shouted (shout)"
75.5455%