| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1288 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1288 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "palpable" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "uncanny" | | 5 | "unsettled" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "apprehension" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "sinister" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "tangible" | | 16 | "dancing" | | 17 | "unspoken" | | 18 | "clandestine" | | 19 | "symphony" | | 20 | "loomed" | | 21 | "velvet" | | 22 | "flickered" | | 23 | "enigma" | | 24 | "dance" | | 25 | "whisper" | | 26 | "warmth" | | 27 | "tapestry" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The thought twisted her insides; but as she glanced down, it revealed only brittle branches sculpted like skeletal finge…" |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1277 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 4 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 12 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Fae-infused | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.991 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost palpable" | | 1 | "as if acknowledging her presence and whispering a secret in return" | | 2 | "seemed alive in a way no other place in her life had been — an animate presence that thrummed with something ancient, alien" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.77 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "not just from the cold, but from an innate wrongness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.78% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 54.08 | | std | 20.38 | | cv | 0.377 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 126 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.169 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory — as her friends preferred to call her — couldn't remember why exactly she had come here, to this strange, isolated nook of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "It unsettled her further; nothing in the Grove obeyed the usual rules." | | 2 | "The Grove seemed alive in a way no other place in her life had been — an animate presence that thrummed with something ancient, alien." | | 3 | "A sound that shouldn't have been there threaded itself through the air, a low, melodic hum, as though someone — or something — sang just beyond the sight." | | 4 | "The Grove unfolded behind her, unchanged, yet different — deeper shadows, their forms shifting uncomfortably close." | | 5 | "She reached for her phone instinctively, wanting the bitter comfort of artificial light, but found only the silence of digital death as it lay useless — a small, apologetic rectangle in her hand." | | 6 | "The moon had shifted, or the canopy had thickened; it was impossible to pin a solid explanation in this pocket between places." | | 7 | "An hour inside the Grove could be minutes or days outside; she had to be cautious, careful not to lose herself amid the capricious currents of the Fae-infused world." | | 8 | "The thought twisted her insides; but as she glanced down, it revealed only brittle branches sculpted like skeletal fingers." | | 9 | "This, she could manage — a haunting in the memory of trees and stone." | | 10 | "But the eyes — those were as blue as Rory's own, mirroring her soul back at her." | | 11 | "Yet the semblance of her own eyes in another face — that struck her, a peregrine star burning with silent promises unmet." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1270 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03700787401574803 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012598425196850394 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 18.28 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.423 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 62.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.39436619718309857 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Perhaps it was the barrister’s" | | 1 | "Perhaps the Grove had its" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt each step on" | | 1 | "It was an uncanny feeling," | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes flitted" | | 3 | "It unsettled her further; nothing" | | 4 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 5 | "Her instincts screamed, telling her" | | 6 | "Her eyes darted past, looking" | | 7 | "Her skin crawled, every fine" | | 8 | "She reached for her phone" | | 9 | "She moved forward once more," | | 10 | "Her foot pressed down on" | | 11 | "She had brushed shoulders with" | | 12 | "Her muscles locked momentarily, the" | | 13 | "she called, hating the tremor" | | 14 | "She had walked here willingly," | | 15 | "It was there the song" | | 16 | "It was there Rory saw" | | 17 | "Her form was indistinct, face" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, faltering but" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The night sky hung above" | | 1 | "She felt each step on" | | 2 | "The air was cool, brushing" | | 3 | "Rory — as her friends" | | 4 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 5 | "Rory shivered, not just from" | | 6 | "It was an uncanny feeling," | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes flitted" | | 8 | "It unsettled her further; nothing" | | 9 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 10 | "The deep crimson gem felt" | | 11 | "The Grove seemed alive in" | | 12 | "Rory strained her ears, listening" | | 13 | "A sound that shouldn't have" | | 14 | "Her instincts screamed, telling her" | | 15 | "Rory had always had a" | | 16 | "A soft crunch, like footsteps" | | 17 | "The Grove unfolded behind her," | | 18 | "Her eyes darted past, looking" | | 19 | "Rory swallowed hard, dragging her" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "The night sky hung above Aurora Carter like an inky shroud, the stars mere pinpricks of distant light that did little to comfort her as she trod softly through …" | | 1 | "All she knew was the pull she felt, a compulsion tugging at her reasoning, as if some invisible thread led her deeper into the Grove's mysteries." | | 2 | "It was an uncanny feeling, as though reality itself bent and warped at the edges here, unstable and unpredictable." | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes flitted over the wildflowers that flourished unnaturally abundant, their colors vibrant against the shadowy backdrop." | | 4 | "She pressed a hand to her throat, against the Heartstone Pendant that hung there." | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem felt warm, a reassuring pulse against her skin, as if acknowledging her presence and whispering a secret in return." | | 6 | "The Grove seemed alive in a way no other place in her life had been — an animate presence that thrummed with something ancient, alien." | | 7 | "A sound that shouldn't have been there threaded itself through the air, a low, melodic hum, as though someone — or something — sang just beyond the sight." | | 8 | "A soft crunch, like footsteps trailing her own, made her whip around, her breath seizing painfully in her chest." | | 9 | "The relentless thud of her heart echoed in her ears, intertwining with the forest's thrum, conjuring an odd harmony that spoke of caution, of danger unseen." | | 10 | "Rory braced herself, forcing logical thought to slice through the thickening fog of apprehension that clung to her like cobwebs." | | 11 | "She moved forward once more, defying the chill that soaked into her bones, the ever-present lull of that phantom singer fluttering at the periphery of her consc…" | | 12 | "Her foot pressed down on something that wasn't earth, wasn't stone." | | 13 | "A woman draped in the ethereal shimmer of the grove, woven from light and shadow, standing beside the central oak as if she'd always belonged." | | 14 | "Yet the semblance of her own eyes in another face — that struck her, a peregrine star burning with silent promises unmet." | | 15 | "The woods sighed, a low, resigned moan that echoed beyond the confines of mortal ears, the pendant's warmth resonating in response, guiding her into the uncerta…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |