Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB4TNRC8JTD37MGX8Z9WB

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.001087

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, a hidden enclave nestled within Richmond Park, the night air thickening around her like the breath of an unseen beast. Tall ancient oaks loomed overhead, their gnarled trunks standing sentinel at the perimeter, branches intertwining like an old woman’s fingers weaving a quiet tapestry of shadows. A worn path wound through the grove, illuminated only by the faint glow of the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their luminescence gentle yet unsettling against the darkness. She had come here with purpose—an urgent need to find answers about the Heartstone Pendant that had recently pulsated with heat, beckoning her toward the heart of the grove. It swung lightly against her chest, a deep crimson beacon nestled on its silver chain, a tangible reminder of secrets she felt only she could unravel. Yet, as the crunch of her boots distanced her from the world beyond the grove’s threshold, an unusual stillness wrapped around her. The sound of her breathing seemed loud, each inhale echoing slightly in the quiet. Somewhere, a branch cracked, not from wind or animal, but from a delicacy that hung in the air. Aurora paused, narrowing her bright blue eyes, scanning the perimeter for movement. She felt eyes on her, though she could see nothing but the dim light cast on mossy earth and leaves. The corners of her vision blurred with darkness, shadows thickening with each heartbeat. “Get a grip,” she murmured to herself, her voice barely a whisper, swallowed by the silence. Out here, the chatter of the city felt worlds away, making her feel small and exposed. She pushed the thought aside, refocusing on the pendant, which began to pulse with warmth again, urging her deeper into the grove. With every step she took, the atmosphere shifted. What had been a tranquil amber haze of twilight was now cloaked in a haze of unease. The wind was quieter here, as if hesitant to disturb the profound quiet. Another crack—this time sharper. The sound skittered along her spine. She froze, instincts razor-sharp. Somewhere just beyond her sight, something shifted, a whisper of movement dancing on the edges of her perception. But when she turned, nothing met her gaze. Just skeletal branches, silhouetted against an inky night sky. “Everything’s fine,” she reassured herself, though the tremor in her voice betrayed her words. She hadn’t expected fear to claw at her like this, but the grove felt alive in a way that was not necessarily comforting. It was too silent, too expectant. She shook her head. Focus. The Heartstone was the real reason she was here. Whatever other dangers lurked in the grove could be dismissed for now. A wildflower caught her attention—a bloom she had never seen before, stark white against the surrounding green. She stepped closer, captivated by its delicate petals that appeared almost to pulse with an inner light, a rhythm unsettlingly like the pendant at her neck. Then came the sound of laughter. The laughter rang out, haunting and euphoric, a ripple through the silence that made her heart pulse erratically against her ribs. It was distant, light and airy—a sound that certainly didn’t belong to this grove. It was enticing yet menacing, making chills race across her skin. Was it just the wind playing tricks, or something more sinister? Breath shallow, she followed the sound, drawn against her better judgment. Each footfall felt heavy, the earth beneath her almost yielding as if trying to keep her from progressing. The laughter faded, leaving a pronounced stillness that throbbed in her ears, drowning out everything else. Her hand instinctively grasped the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth comforting even as the air around her grew colder. Then she noticed it—a figure lingering at the edge of the clearing, just in the periphery of her sight. It flickered like a mirage, dark and elusive. Aurora felt her heart race. Was it real? She blinked hard, a volley of thoughts colliding in her mind, but when she focused, the figure slipped away like smoke, leaving only a disquiet in its absence. The shadows around her deepened, forming shapes that swayed and twisted, and with each heartbeat, the clarity of the grove blurred more. Aurora fought the swirl of dread that threatened to suffocate her. A choice lay before her: retreat or press on, deeper into the grove with the Heartstone as her only guide. She tightened her grip on the pendant, its faint glow simmering between her fingers. There was something essential here, a truth hidden in the deepening darkness—a truth that whispered to her soul. As she continued her pursuit, the laughter returned, closer now, circling her, mocking in its sweet cadences. An echo of spontaneity mixed with malice. Rattled, she turned in circles, trying to pinpoint the source, desperation clawing at her throat. Every slip of air felt charged, alive, but the grove remained locked in its eerie quiet. A rustle from behind a nearby tree drew her attention, the whisper of leaves brushing together in gentle encouragement. “Hello?” she called, her voice wavering. Silence lingered in response as dread mounted like a tide rising against her will. She bit her lip, the taste of blood mingling with the metallic tang of fear. Then, from within the shadows, she heard it again, a child’s laughter—bright and carefree. It wrapped around her like a cocoon, intoxicating and sickening all at once. Her instincts screamed to flee, each sense screaming that she was treading on dangerous ground. “Get out!” a voice shouted, booming like thunder, shaking her to her core. It was not the light laughter from before but a guttural command that echoed against the boughs. Aurora stumbled back, glancing at the trees with wild eyes. An energy crackled in the air around her, an urgency that made her want to run and yet bound her to the spot, frozen by the swirl of fear and intrigue. From the shadows, a figure emerged—a silhouette outlined by the faint glow of the wildflowers, casting a long shadow that stretched out toward her. They were slight yet commanding, with a seriousness in their posture, as if they held the weight of reality itself in their grasp. “Leave this place!” the figure commanded again, their voice low and resonant, like a bell tolling in the night. Aurora felt the vice around her heart squeeze tighter. “I… I’m just looking for—” “Not for you,” the figure interrupted, eyes flashing like live coals, making it clear they were not interested in any explanations. “It seeks you; it’s drawn to you.” She stepped back, glancing at the Heartstone, which now throbbed with a resonant pulse, vibrating against her chest and echoing the panic pooling in her stomach. The shadows around her thickened, twisting as if preparing to devour her whole, while the laughter crescendoed into a cacophony. “What do you mean?” she breathed, unable to suppress the tremble of her voice. “It has not come for good,” the figure said, lowering their voice, as if the trees held ears, “and you are not what it wants.” They turned sharply, pointing back into the grove, and for a brief second, her gaze followed theirs. Just past the reach of the wildflowers, something shifted again—a dark shape, now unmistakably human, standing amidst the gloom. With hair like steel and eyes glowing with an unnatural light, it stared at her, beckoning. Aurora’s instincts screamed. She turned and fled, pushing herself to sprint deeper into the grove, past the wildflowers and the suffocating shadows, her breath a cacophony of fear. The laughter trailed after her, haunting and sweet, as if celebrating her panic.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she murmured to herself, her voice barely a whisper, swallowed by the silence [barely]"
1"the figure interrupted, eyes flashing like live coals, making it clear they were not interested in any explanations [like]"
76.5442% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"cacophony"
count2
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count2
6
word"simmering"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"sinister"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"footfall"
count1
16
word"amidst"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count2
20
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"cacophony"
2"tapestry"
3"beacon"
4"sentinel"
5"throbbed"
6"simmering"
7"flickered"
8"wavering"
9"sinister"
10"loomed"
11"profound"
12"stark"
13"weight"
14"dancing"
15"footfall"
16"amidst"
17"echo"
18"echoed"
19"echoing"
20"unravel"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"screaming that she"
70.2057% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean50.72
std20.07
cv0.396
sampleLengths
079
177
277
354
487
569
649
757
863
963
1053
1132
1255
1354
1442
1571
1647
1719
1814
1928
2046
2114
2225
2352
2441
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was treading"
99.6036% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1236
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.040453074433656956
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012135922330097087
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean15.28
std7.02
cv0.459
sampleLengths
026
126
227
329
426
522
614
718
812
920
1013
1116
1216
1322
148
1517
1613
174
186
194
2018
218
229
2314
2423
256
264
271
289
2912
3017
3126
326
3321
3414
3511
3611
3711
3818
3916
4018
4119
428
435
443
4528
4622
4711
4820
4914
69.0763% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42168674698795183
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners35
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured to herself, her voice barely a whisper, swallowed by the silence (murmur swallow)"
1"she reassured herself, though the tremor in her voice betrayed her words (reassure betray)"
2"shouted (shout)"
3"the figure interrupted, eyes flashing like live coals, making it clear they were not interested in any explanations (interrupt, flash like make clear do not interest)"
4"the figure said, lowering their voice, as if the trees held ears (say, lower hold)"
78.6854%