| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the figure commanded again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 88.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1277 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1277 | | totalAiIsms | 47 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinel" | | 2 | "tapestry" | | 3 | "beacon" | | 4 | "tangible" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "unravel" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "profound" | | 14 | "dancing" | | 15 | "comforting" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "race" | | 18 | "sinister" | | 19 | "footfall" | | 20 | "throbbed" | | 21 | "flickered" | | 22 | "simmering" | | 23 | "echo" | | 24 | "charged" | | 25 | "wavering" | | 26 | "echoed" | | 27 | "intrigue" | | 28 | "long shadow" | | 29 | "weight" | | 30 | "stomach" | | 31 | "cacophony" | | 32 | "amidst" | | 33 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1268 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1225 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 13.01% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed loud each inhale echoing slightly in the quiet" | | 1 | "as if trying to keep her from progressing" | | 2 | "as if preparing to devour her whole, while the laughter crescendoed into a cacophony" | | 3 | "as if celebrating her panic" |
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| 42.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.577 | | wordCount | 1268 | | matches | | 0 | "not from wind or animal, but from a delicacy" | | 1 | "not the light laughter from before but a guttural command" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 70.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 50.72 | | std | 20.07 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 87 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 71 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "was not necessarily comforting" | | 1 | "was treading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here with purpose—an urgent need to find answers about the Heartstone Pendant that had recently pulsated with heat, beckoning her toward the heart of the grove." | | 1 | "Another crack—this time sharper." | | 2 | "A wildflower caught her attention—a bloom she had never seen before, stark white against the surrounding green." | | 3 | "It was distant, light and airy—a sound that certainly didn’t belong to this grove." | | 4 | "Then she noticed it—a figure lingering at the edge of the clearing, just in the periphery of her sight." | | 5 | "There was something essential here, a truth hidden in the deepening darkness—a truth that whispered to her soul." | | 6 | "Then, from within the shadows, she heard it again, a child’s laughter—bright and carefree." | | 7 | "From the shadows, a figure emerged—a silhouette outlined by the faint glow of the wildflowers, casting a long shadow that stretched out toward her." | | 8 | "“It seeks you; it’s drawn to you.”" | | 9 | "Just past the reach of the wildflowers, something shifted again—a dark shape, now unmistakably human, standing amidst the gloom." |
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| 99.60% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1236 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.040453074433656956 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012135922330097087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 15.28 | | std | 7.02 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 69.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, a branch cracked, not" | | 1 | "Somewhere just beyond her sight," | | 2 | "Just skeletal branches, silhouetted against" | | 3 | "Then came the sound of" | | 4 | "Then she noticed it—a figure" | | 5 | "Then, from within the shadows," | | 6 | "Just past the reach of" |
| | ratio | 0.088 | |
| 85.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here with" | | 1 | "It swung lightly against her" | | 2 | "She felt eyes on her," | | 3 | "she murmured to herself, her" | | 4 | "She pushed the thought aside," | | 5 | "She froze, instincts razor-sharp." | | 6 | "she reassured herself, though the" | | 7 | "She hadn’t expected fear to" | | 8 | "It was too silent, too" | | 9 | "She shook her head." | | 10 | "She stepped closer, captivated by" | | 11 | "It was distant, light and" | | 12 | "It was enticing yet menacing," | | 13 | "Her hand instinctively grasped the" | | 14 | "It flickered like a mirage," | | 15 | "She blinked hard, a volley" | | 16 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 17 | "she called, her voice wavering" | | 18 | "She bit her lip, the" | | 19 | "It wrapped around her like" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped into The Fae" | | 1 | "A worn path wound through" | | 2 | "She had come here with" | | 3 | "It swung lightly against her" | | 4 | "The sound of her breathing" | | 5 | "Aurora paused, narrowing her bright" | | 6 | "She felt eyes on her," | | 7 | "The corners of her vision" | | 8 | "she murmured to herself, her" | | 9 | "She pushed the thought aside," | | 10 | "The wind was quieter here," | | 11 | "Another crack—this time sharper." | | 12 | "The sound skittered along her" | | 13 | "She froze, instincts razor-sharp." | | 14 | "she reassured herself, though the" | | 15 | "She hadn’t expected fear to" | | 16 | "It was too silent, too" | | 17 | "She shook her head." | | 18 | "The Heartstone was the real" | | 19 | "Whatever other dangers lurked in" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Tall ancient oaks loomed overhead, their gnarled trunks standing sentinel at the perimeter, branches intertwining like an old woman’s fingers weaving a quiet ta…" | | 1 | "A worn path wound through the grove, illuminated only by the faint glow of the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their luminescence gentle yet unsettling aga…" | | 2 | "She had come here with purpose—an urgent need to find answers about the Heartstone Pendant that had recently pulsated with heat, beckoning her toward the heart …" | | 3 | "She pushed the thought aside, refocusing on the pendant, which began to pulse with warmth again, urging her deeper into the grove." | | 4 | "The wind was quieter here, as if hesitant to disturb the profound quiet." | | 5 | "She hadn’t expected fear to claw at her like this, but the grove felt alive in a way that was not necessarily comforting." | | 6 | "She stepped closer, captivated by its delicate petals that appeared almost to pulse with an inner light, a rhythm unsettlingly like the pendant at her neck." | | 7 | "The laughter rang out, haunting and euphoric, a ripple through the silence that made her heart pulse erratically against her ribs." | | 8 | "Each footfall felt heavy, the earth beneath her almost yielding as if trying to keep her from progressing." | | 9 | "The laughter faded, leaving a pronounced stillness that throbbed in her ears, drowning out everything else." | | 10 | "There was something essential here, a truth hidden in the deepening darkness—a truth that whispered to her soul." | | 11 | "They were slight yet commanding, with a seriousness in their posture, as if they held the weight of reality itself in their grasp." | | 12 | "The shadows around her thickened, twisting as if preparing to devour her whole, while the laughter crescendoed into a cacophony." | | 13 | "The laughter trailed after her, haunting and sweet, as if celebrating her panic." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice barely a whisper, swallowed by the silence" | | 1 | "she called, her voice wavering" | | 2 | "she breathed, unable to suppress the tremble of her voice" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she reassured (reassure)" | | 2 | "a voice shouted (shout)" | | 3 | "the figure interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |