Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB73SXKPMZ161Z3Q19GYD

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15.4s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked open, one by one. Aurora hesitated with her hand on the final lock before swinging open the door. "You." The word was flat and resolute, devoid of any warmth. She crossed her arms and leaned against the doorframe, silver eyes glinting coldly in the dim light. Lucien stood motionless on the threshold, a single suitcase at his feet. "Hello, Aurora. Or should I say —" His tongue flickered over his upper lip, tasting the air. "Ah. You're going by Rory now, aren't you?" Her jaw clenched. Of course he'd know. He always knew far more than he should. "What do you want, Lucien?" Rory scanned him up and down, taking in the impeccable cut of his coat, the glint of his polished shoes. Sharp resolve hardened in her gut. She wanted to slam the door in his face. To take the past five years they had apart and burn them completely to ash. Instead, she forced herself to breathe. "Can't you simply knock once? Wait to be let in with a smile and a warm cup of tea? We weren't that close, were we?" A flicker of something — hurt? — passed across his distinguished features before Lucien replaced it with a practiced, unreadable mask. "You graciously extended the very flat I am standing on as a sanctuary to me once. Are you so eager to rescind your offer after one anonymous little infraction?" His gaze dropped to the bandaged cuts on her knuckles. "Or are you lying about who did that?" Rory's mouth went bone-dry. Her hand instinctively lifted to the crescent-shape scar on her wrist before she could catch herself. Why did the Frenchman always seem to know the exact buttons to push? She stepped back and gestured with an abrupt jerk of her head. "Come on then. Eva and I aren't due until midnight tomorrow." Rory turned on her heel to stalk back inside, leaving the door open for him to follow. The sound of the suitcase rolling over the threshold made Rory stiffen. This is a mistake. But her shoulders remained squared under the watchful weight of his undivided regard. She couldn't bring herself to look at him. Not yet. The living room was a claustrophobic nesting of second-hand furniture crammed between laden bookshelves. Ancient parchments and leather-bound tomes vied for space beside newer company: DVDs, throw-away paperbacks, a weightlifting bench. Five years of forced separation had left her conditioned to operate on autopilot. So now she dumped bags of takeaway triumphantly onto the coffee table. "I brought dinner from Yu-Fei Cheung's to celebrate," she tossed back over her shoulder without meeting his eyes. "Just lassos tofu and Charlie — I mean Charles." Lucien paused in the doorway, one hand on the knob. His lips pressed together before he followed after with a terse, "It has been a long day." Rory snorted. She busied herself folding sheets of wilted paper towels into rectangles before abandoning the effort altogether. Might as well head to bed, let the Frenchman rearrange the flat as he saw fit. "If you're looking for the spare room, it's off the kitchen. Another one of those narrow little corners." "I have a room for you." His voice was closer than she expected. Rory jumped, clutching a wonky roll of recycled toilet paper to her chest. They stood trapped in the glare of the fluorescent lights, shadows pooling beneath raised eyes and hollowed cheeks. Her pulse pounded in her ears, the tight knot pulling taut in her gut.itzerland!! If she moved forward now and slid those fingers upaciousness the Frenchman's arm — Rory hesitated. She knew, in one breathless instant, that if she touched him, there would be no going back. And so instead she swallowed hard and averted her gaze, letting the roll of tissue fall forgotten from her fingers. They had to pivot past each other, a tangle of limbs and skirts, their thighs brushing intimately before a confusing swiftness sent Rory teetering backwards. Her bare feet caught on Ewolfieu potholmmmmnhid.inflornt and she Wind forgiveness, what has gotten into me?" Orlando barked a shrill Tam o' Shanteros and aIffor withers of heaven, after the late four days she Itlasshell tThistracting Rory's gaze, pulling his lcoolIHaden't seen the French translation Alexis.al after a series of mishaps, followed by a ceiling fan without instand his hand shooting out to grasp her by a passing of the boombox microphone, but others confirm tplace near the shelf, causing the r accumulated. Lou had won me over unless I somehow dump lieu Cartagena.Durnto wildly, "Is it alright-if it's alright could"What are you?" His eyes narrowed. theme= Shadows,&& some other –>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she tossed back over her shoulder without meeting his eyes [back]"
61.4891% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount779
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"coldly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"coldly"
1"completely"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount779
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"glint"
4"glinting"
5"unreadable"
6"jaw clenched"
7"weight"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean55.43
std30.38
cv0.548
sampleLengths
049
137
2101
368
433
540
639
783
827
952
1026
1146
1239
13136
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.039568345323741004
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008992805755395683
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean14.64
std14.53
cv0.992
sampleLengths
07
114
211
317
412
517
68
73
84
98
1025
116
129
1315
146
1525
166
1715
1839
198
204
2116
2213
2312
2428
2512
264
2713
288
292
3014
3117
3213
3312
3418
359
3610
3717
382
3916
4016
4118
4213
4313
4418
4514
4614
472
4817
4920
100.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.660377358490566
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners35
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she tossed back over her shoulder without meeting his eyes (toss meet)"
1"His lips pressed together before he followed after with a terse, (press follow)"
78.1268%