Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB76TFECAEY6RYWR9GXFV

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.001280

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest pulsed with a low hum of conversation, the air thick with the scent of old wood, aged whiskey, and the faint whiff of cigar smoke curling tantalizingly from a corner. Silas polished a glass behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the glow of the distinctive green neon sign that buzzed like a distant insect. The bar, dimly lit and lined with timeworn maps strewn across walls, held secrets like faded photographs and whispered tales, the kind only a place like this could harbor. Aurora Carter slipped inside, the wooden door creaking softly as she stepped over the threshold. The warmth of the bar enveloped her, a sharp contrast to the chill of the London streets where she had been mulling over her life for hours. She was done with running; she promised herself that this time, she would let the past rest. But as she scanned the room, something heavy settled in her chest—an unease, mingled with the familiar taste of nostalgia. It was a Friday night, and the crowd was a mix of locals, tourists looking for glimpses of authenticity, and the occasional regular draped over the bar like a silent shadow. “What'll be, Rory?” Silas called out, his voice deep and warm, settling the butterflies in her stomach. She pulled a crooked smile, moving towards the bar and resting her elbows against the cool surface. “Whiskey, neat, please,” she replied, grateful for the way his presence anchored her in the bustling atmosphere. He poured her drink with practiced ease, the amber liquid glinting in the soft light as he slid it toward her. “Been a while since you’ve walked through those doors.” “Too long,” she admitted, lifting the glass to her lips. The whiskey burned just right, its warmth spreading through her. “Hope you haven’t changed too much in my absence, old man.” Silas chuckled softly; the sound felt like a snippet of familiarity she had missed. But beneath his laughter, a watchful gaze lingered. She noticed the slight limp in his left leg as he moved about the bar. It hadn't been as pronounced in their youth—her memory hazy from time, yet she could still recall when he had been the paragon of vitality, chasing down leads like a hound. “People change, Rory. You should know that better than anyone.” She shifted, the words prickling like old memories surfacing, and caught the glimmer of someone familiar at the far end of the bar. Heart racing, she turned quickly to see—“Eva?” The surprise in her voice sliced through the hum of chatter like a knife. Her childhood friend sat with a small group, laughter catching her like a song. Eager to bridge the years that separated them, Aurora stepped closer. “Eva! I can’t believe it’s you!” Eva turned at the sound of her name, her bright smile morphing into a mask of confusion. “Rory? Is that really you?” A fleeting moment of recognition flickered, but it was mingled with a hesitation that felt unwelcome. Aurora forced a laugh, the sound coming out fractured. “In the flesh. I didn’t think I’d see anyone from the old days here.” Eva looked different—more polished, her hair perfectly styled and her outfit meticulously coordinated. “I thought you’d stayed in Cardiff,” she replied, her tone light yet probing. “You look… different. Good different.” “Thanks,” Aurora said, fiddling with the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit that had lingered from her childhood. “I’ve had to learn what ‘good’ looks like.” As they hugged, the contact was bittersweet, a collision of shared history and unarticulated truths. Eva’s arms felt strong, reminding Aurora of the summer afternoons spent in laughter, a time when the world was smaller, and the burdens less encumbering. “What are you doing in London?” Eva asked as they settled into the conversation. “I’m working at Golden Empress,” she replied, her pride tingeing the words. “Delivery mostly.” “That sounds… interesting,” Eva replied, though her tone suggested she might have meant otherwise. “I’ve always delivered, right? Just a different kind of package now.” Rory shrugged, keenly aware of the shifting dynamics. Eva’s eyes glimmered with sympathy that threatened to bloom into something deeper, a truth neither of them was yet ready to face. A hush fell upon the group as a man near the center stumbled, laughter bubbling over like champagne fizz, drawing back their attention. The easy atmosphere returned, but Aurora felt the gravity of her own reality pressing against her heart. “And what about you, Eva? Are you teaching now?” “Oh yes! At a private academy in Chelsea,” she boasted, and for a heartbeat, Aurora caught a hint of the competitive glint in her eye—a spark she recognized from their childhood. “But I’m running late tonight. Got some parents to entertain.” “Sounds… fun?” It was a question disguised as a statement; Rory hoped to unveil the layers beneath Eva’s façade. The edges of their past folded uncomfortably into the present, the wistfulness laced with envy. “Better than delivering Chinese takeout, I suppose,” Eva quipped, laughter punctuating her words, yet there was no levity in Rory’s response. “It’s not all bad,” she countered sharply before feeling the weight of defensiveness slip away. “But it’s real. I’m… learning to handle my life without the romantic notions we soaked up in school.” Eva’s smile dimmed slightly, her uncertainty surfacing momentarily. “We all have our paths, don’t we?” “Yeah, I just never thought you’d end up...” Rory hesitated, searching for the right words without sounding judgmental. “What? Forgetting our little adventures? Growing up?” Eva said, her voice suddenly brittle. “No. Not at all.” Rory felt a rush of warmth laced with guilt flood her words. “I mean, I thought you’d always be ambitious, but this…” This gilded surface they both stood upon felt as fragile as the laughter surrounding them. “Look, everyone changes, right?” Eva said, her dismissal frosted with something unspoken. “Are you happy?” Rory pressed, crossing a line that felt urgent yet precarious. “I mean, really happy?” There was a storm brewing in Eva’s eyes. “Happy? Happiness is a construct, Rory. I’m building a life. That’s what matters.” “And what if that life is just a façade?” The words escaped before Rory could rein them in, sharpened by her own recent struggles. She could sense the distance growing like an unseen rift, an insurmountable chasm forged in time. Silas, hovering nearby, regarded their exchange thoughtfully before interjecting. “Life’s never just one thing or another. It’s messy and complicated. But sometimes, that complexity can lead to unexpected places.” His voice offered a sense of calm, a lighthouse illuminating their wavering paths. “But you knew that, didn’t you, Si?” Rory replied without thinking. “You had to face it after all those years with MI6.” “Wisdom comes with age, my dear. And mistakes.” His gaze flicked back to Rory, strengthening the bond they shared, underscoring the depth of unspooled histories. The four of them stood at a crossroads, tangled in a web of unfulfilled potential and misaligned aspirations. “Maybe it’s not that simple,” Eva finally replied, her smile starting to fracture at the edges, as if the reality of their changed selves was unraveling the careful stitching of her facade. “Maybe not,” Rory breathed, suddenly feeling very small, starkly aware of the weight of regret draping over them like a thick shroud. “But it doesn’t have to be the end, either.” The conversation paused, the unsaid heavy against the backdrop of the bar’s murmur. In the silence, each woman grappled with their choices—threads of what could have been tangled with the stark realities they both faced. “Let’s lighten the mood, shall we?” Silas suggested, his tone an attempt to shift the atmosphere back to comfort. Eva picked up on the cue. “Right. Let’s drink to the good old days, then!” They raised their glasses, clinking them together, the sound echoing through the murky ambiance, an incomplete toast to years gone by and uncertain futures ahead. As laughter returned to the table, Aurora caught a glimpse of herself in the reflection of the whiskey glass, a faint shadow of the young woman she had once been—dreams fluttering like distant stars, while reality weighed down on her. In that moment, under the saturated glow of the Raven’s Nest neon light, she felt both the thrill of reunion and the ache of what she had lost. But as the evening wore on, and the past mingled with the present, each shared laughter seemed to weave tighter the tapestry of old friendships, hints of joy pushing against the veils of regret. Somewhere, between the clinking glasses and whispered stories, they all marinated in the uneasy truth that perhaps distance was never truly about miles apart, but rather the unspoken fissures etched deep within the heart.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
74.5098% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she countered sharply before feeling the weight of defensiveness slip away [sharply away]"
1"Eva finally replied, her smile starting to fracture at the edges, as if the reality of their changed selves was unraveling the careful stitching of her facade [finally]"
2"Rory breathed, suddenly feeling very small, starkly aware of the weight of regret draping over them like a thick shroud [suddenly very starkly]"
18.3673% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"suddenly"
count2
6
adverb"really"
count2
7
adverb"truly"
count1
8
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"quickly"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"really"
7"truly"
8"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"facade"
2"flickered"
3"flicked"
4"glint"
5"glinting"
6"wavering"
7"unspoken"
8"stark"
9"fractured"
10"weight"
11"echoing"
12"etched"
13"unraveling"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean35.66
std20.91
cv0.586
sampleLengths
088
1110
234
317
430
531
678
744
831
938
1023
1131
1229
1354
1414
1514
1641
1749
1841
1934
2021
2133
2215
2318
2413
2541
2612
2717
2821
2940
3042
3122
3243
3332
3431
3535
3619
3715
3865
3928
4068
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"was mingled"
1"been tangled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was unraveling"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1156
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.031141868512110725
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01643598615916955
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean17.2
std8.1
cv0.471
sampleLengths
033
126
229
315
427
517
620
731
817
917
1017
1121
129
1310
1410
1511
1614
178
1815
1931
2010
2123
2221
2314
2411
256
2617
2721
289
2914
3013
3113
325
3321
348
3515
3625
3714
3812
392
4014
4119
4222
4323
4417
459
4631
4710
4819
4915
83.9216% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5176470588235295
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners44
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she replied, grateful for the way his presence anchored her in the bustling atmosphere (reply, anchor)"
1"she admitted, lifting the glass to her lips (admit, lift)"
2"she replied, her tone light yet probing (reply, probe)"
3"Aurora said, fiddling with the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit that had lingered from her childhood (say, fiddle linger)"
4"she replied, her pride tingeing the words (reply, tinge)"
5"Eva replied, though her tone suggested she might have meant otherwise (reply, suggest mean)"
6"she boasted, and for a heartbeat, Aurora caught a hint of the competitive glint in her eye—a spark she recognized from their childhood (boast, catch eye—recognize)"
7"Eva quipped, laughter punctuating her words, yet there was no levity in Rory’s response (quip, punctuate do not be no)"
8"she countered sharply before feeling the weight of defensiveness slip away (counter sharply feel slip away)"
9"pressed (pressed)"
10"Eva finally replied, her smile starting to fracture at the edges, as if the reality of their changed selves was unraveling the careful stitching of her facade (finally reply, start fracture unravel)"
11"Rory breathed, suddenly feeling very small, starkly aware of the weight of regret draping over them like a thick shroud (breathe, suddenly feel very draping like)"
80.6352%