"she countered sharply before feeling the weight of defensiveness slip away [sharply away]"
1
"Eva finally replied, her smile starting to fracture at the edges, as if the reality of their changed selves was unraveling the careful stitching of her facade [finally]"
2
"Rory breathed, suddenly feeling very small, starkly aware of the weight of regret draping over them like a thick shroud [suddenly very starkly]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1156
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.031141868512110725
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.01643598615916955
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
17.2
std
8.1
cv
0.471
sampleLengths
0
33
1
26
2
29
3
15
4
27
5
17
6
20
7
31
8
17
9
17
10
17
11
21
12
9
13
10
14
10
15
11
16
14
17
8
18
15
19
31
20
10
21
23
22
21
23
14
24
11
25
6
26
17
27
21
28
9
29
14
30
13
31
13
32
5
33
21
34
8
35
15
36
25
37
14
38
12
39
2
40
14
41
19
42
22
43
23
44
17
45
9
46
31
47
10
48
19
49
15
83.9216%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5176470588235295
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
44
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"she replied, grateful for the way his presence anchored her in the bustling atmosphere (reply, anchor)"
1
"she admitted, lifting the glass to her lips (admit, lift)"
2
"she replied, her tone light yet probing (reply, probe)"
3
"Aurora said, fiddling with the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit that had lingered from her childhood (say, fiddle linger)"
4
"she replied, her pride tingeing the words (reply, tinge)"
5
"Eva replied, though her tone suggested she might have meant otherwise (reply, suggest mean)"
6
"she boasted, and for a heartbeat, Aurora caught a hint of the competitive glint in her eye—a spark she recognized from their childhood (boast, catch eye—recognize)"
7
"Eva quipped, laughter punctuating her words, yet there was no levity in Rory’s response (quip, punctuate do not be no)"
8
"she countered sharply before feeling the weight of defensiveness slip away (counter sharply feel slip away)"
9
"pressed (pressed)"
10
"Eva finally replied, her smile starting to fracture at the edges, as if the reality of their changed selves was unraveling the careful stitching of her facade (finally reply, start fracture unravel)"
11
"Rory breathed, suddenly feeling very small, starkly aware of the weight of regret draping over them like a thick shroud (breathe, suddenly feel very draping like)"