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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB7ZKW6AEQHXC3J0Z8HB7
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Model:
DeepSeek-V2 Chat
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.002038
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the door, casting an eerie glow on the damp pavement. Rory pushed it open, the faint scent of spilled whiskey and old wood greeting her like an old friend. The Raven’s Nest was quieter than usual tonight, the low hum of conversation barely filling the space. She stepped inside, shaking the mist from her black hair, and scanned the room. Her eyes moved instinctively toward the bar, where Silas stood polishing a glass with his usual
methodical
precision. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the light as he glanced up and nodded at her, the silver signet ring on his right hand
glinting
faintly. She slid onto a stool, leaning her elbows on the polished oak. “How’s the knee?” she asked, her tone light but laced with genuine concern. Silas smirked, his hazel eyes narrowing. “Still stops me from chasing you around the bar. What’s your excuse?” Rory chuckled, the sound low and warm. “Too many deliveries for Yu-Fei today. My feet are feeling it.” Silas set the glass down and reached for a bottle of bourbon. “You’re here late. Something on your mind?” She hesitated, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “Just… needed to get out of the flat for a bit.” Silas nodded, pouring her a drink without asking. When it came to Rory, he rarely needed to. He slid the glass toward her, and she wrapped her fingers around it, the amber liquid catching the dim light. She took a slow sip, letting the warmth settle in her chest. The bar felt like a cocoon, the walls lined with maps and photographs that
seemed to
whisper secrets if you listened closely enough. The door opened again, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory glanced over her shoulder out of habit, her gaze landing on the figure stepping inside. He was tall, his dark coat damp from the rain, and there was something familiar about the way he moved—a certain confidence that tugged at her memory. He paused just inside the door, shaking water from his hair, and when his eyes met hers, she froze. “Evan,” she said
softly
, the name slipping out before she could stop it. He blinked, surprise flickering across his face before it settled into something harder, more guarded. “Rory,” he replied, his voice rough but familiar. He stepped closer, his eyes scanning her face as if searching for the girl he once knew. “It’s been a while.” “Yeah,” she said, her voice steady despite the sudden tightness in her chest. “Five years, give or take.” He nodded, his gaze darting toward the bar. Silas
was watching
them with an
unreadable
expression, his hand resting casually on the counter. Evan gestured toward the stool next to hers. “Mind if I join you?” She hesitated, then nodded. “Sure.” He slid onto the stool, hanging his coat over the back. Up close, she could see the changes time had
etched
into him—the faint lines around his eyes, the stubble shading his jaw, the way his shoulders seemed broader, more defined. He looked older, harder, and yet there was something in his eyes that hadn’t changed, something raw and unguarded. Silas approached, his limp barely noticeable but present. “What’ll it be?” he asked, his tone neutral. “Bourbon,” Evan said, his eyes still fixed on Rory. “Neat.” Silas nodded and moved to pour the drink. Rory took another sip of hers, her mind racing. Five years was a long time, long enough to build walls, to bury the past, and yet here he
was, sitting
beside her as if no time had passed at all. “You look good,” Evan said finally, breaking the silence. She raised an eyebrow. “So do you.” He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound that
sent a shiver down
her spine. “That’s a lie. I know I’ve changed.” She shrugged, glancing at him sideways. “Haven’t we all?” He nodded
slowly
, his expression turning serious. “Yeah. We have.” Silas slid the bourbon toward him, and Evan lifted the glass, swirling the liquid
gently
before taking a sip. He exhaled
slowly
, his shoulders relaxing
slightly
. “I didn’t expect to see you here,” he said after a moment. “I live upstairs,” she replied, her tone casual. “It’s kind of my second home.” “Still?” he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice. “I thought you’d have moved on by now.” She frowned, her fingers tapping
lightly
against her glass. “Why?” He shrugged, his gaze dropping to the counter. “You always talked about traveling. Seeing the world.” “Things change,” she said quietly. “Plans fall apart.” He nodded, his expression
unreadable
. “Yeah, they do.” They fell into silence again, the
weight
of their shared history hanging heavy between them. Rory studied him out of the corner of her eye, noticing the way his fingers tightened around his glass, the tension in his jaw. He looked tired, as if he’d been carrying something heavy for a long time. “How’s London been treating you?” he asked finally, his voice softer now. She shrugged. “It’s… complicatesometimes, but I’ve made a life here.” He nodded, his eyes meeting hers. “You always were good at that.” She offered a small smile, though it didn’t quite reach her eyes. “What about you? What brings you back?” He hesitated, his gaze shifting to the maps on the wall. “Work,” he said after a moment. “I’m consulting for a security firm.” “Sounds intense.” He chuckled dryly. “It is. But it pays the bills.” She nodded, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. “And… how are you? Really?” He looked at her then, his expression softening. “Honestly? I’m not sure. It’s… complicated.” She hesitated, her heart pounding in her chest. “Evan, I—” “I’m sorry,” he interrupted, his voice low and earnest. “For everything. I know I messed up, and I’ve regretted it every day since.” She swallowed hard, her throat tightening. “It’s… it’s not just your fault, Evan. We both made mistakes.” “Maybe,” he said, his gaze intense. “But I hurt you, Rory. And I’ll never forgive myself for that.” She looked away, her eyes stinging. “It’s in the past,” she said quietly. “We can’t change it.” He reached out then, his hand brushing hers
lightly
before pulling back. “No, we can’t. But maybe… maybe we can move forward.” She glanced at him, her heart aching at the vulnerability in his eyes. “I don’t know, Evan. It’s been a long time.” He nodded, his expression somber. “I know. And I get it if you don’t want anything to do with me. But I needed you to know… I’m sorry. For everything.” She exhaled
slowly
, her mind racing. The past five years had been a blur of healing and rebuilding, of learning to trust herself again. And yet, sitting here with him, it was as if no time had passed at all. “We’ve both changed,” she said finally, her voice steady. “Maybe… maybe we can start over. As friends.” He smiled, a genuine smile that lit up his face. “I’d like that.” She nodded, a small smile tugging at her lips. “Me too.” Silas cleared his throat, breaking the moment. “Another round?” he asked, his tone teasing. Rory chuckled, shaking her head. “I think I’m good.” Evan glanced at her, his smile softening. “Me too.” They sat in companionable silence for a while, the tension between them easing into something more comfortable. The past wasn’t erased—it never would be—but maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to move forward. As the night wore on, the bar grew quieter, the patrons trickling out into the rain-soaked streets. Rory glanced at the clock above the bar, surprised to see how late it had gotten. “I should probably head upstairs,” she said
reluctantly
. Evan nodded, standing and grabbing his coat. “Mind if I walk you up?” She hesitated, then smiled. “Sure.” They made their way to the door, the green neon light casting an eerie glow on their faces as they stepped outside. The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool. They walked in comfortable silence, the
weight
of their shared history no longer a burden but a bridge. At the door to her flat, Rory turned to him, her heart pounding. “Thanks for… tonight.” He smiled, his eyes warm. “Thank you. For giving me a second chance.” She nodded, her throat tight. “Goodnight, Evan.” “Goodnight, Rory.” She watched as he walked away, his figure disappearing into the misty night. For the first time in years, she felt a sense of closure, as if the past had finally loosened its grip. Maybe they couldn’t rewrite their story, but they could start a new chapter—one written with forgiveness and hope. And for now, that was enough.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:20:58.093967+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:20:58 AM
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"deepseek/deepseek-chat-v3"
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182717
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generation_time
63971
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867
tokens_completion
2334
native_tokens_prompt
815
native_tokens_completion
1997
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(null)
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0
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0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
10.5263%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
19
adverbTagCount
7
adverbTags
0
"she said softly, the name slipping out before she could stop it [softly]"
1
"Evan said, his eyes still fixed on Rory [still]"
2
"Evan said finally, breaking the silence [finally]"
3
"she said quietly [quietly]"
4
"she said quietly [quietly]"
5
"she said finally, her voice steady [finally]"
6
"she said reluctantly [reluctantly]"
31.7406%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs
10
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
2
2
adverb
"reluctantly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"slowly"
count
3
5
adverb
"softly"
count
1
6
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"lightly"
2
"reluctantly"
3
"slightly"
4
"slowly"
5
"softly"
6
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
52.2184%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1465
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"glinting"
count
1
1
word
"methodical"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
2
3
word
"weight"
count
2
4
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"glinting"
1
"methodical"
2
"unreadable"
3
"weight"
4
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"sent a shiver down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
101
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
147
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
65
mean
22.4
std
19.51
cv
0.871
sampleLengths
0
110
1
25
2
18
3
18
4
19
5
22
6
72
7
73
8
13
9
44
10
18
11
36
12
5
13
60
14
16
15
10
16
48
17
9
18
7
19
20
20
9
21
10
22
38
23
14
24
18
25
10
26
16
27
8
28
8
29
53
30
12
31
10
32
12
33
19
34
23
35
2
36
10
37
15
38
14
39
10
40
23
41
17
42
18
43
17
44
22
45
22
46
30
47
40
48
17
49
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
221
matches
0
"was watching"
1
"was, sitting"
90.4162%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1138
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
49
adverbRatio
0.04305799648506151
lyAdverbCount
24
lyAdverbRatio
0.0210896309314587
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
147
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
147
mean
9.9
std
6.14
cv
0.62
sampleLengths
0
17
1
19
2
17
3
14
4
18
5
25
6
12
7
13
8
6
9
12
10
7
11
11
12
12
13
7
14
11
15
11
16
8
17
9
18
20
19
12
20
23
21
11
22
16
23
27
24
19
25
13
26
15
27
8
28
17
29
4
30
13
31
5
32
8
33
15
34
8
35
5
36
4
37
1
38
11
39
30
40
19
41
8
42
8
43
9
44
1
45
8
46
9
47
31
48
9
49
4
50.5669%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.3197278911564626
totalSentences
147
uniqueOpeners
47
69.7368%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
19
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"she said softly, the name slipping out before she could stop it (say softly, slip out stop)"
1
"Evan said, his eyes still fixed on Rory (say, still fix)"
2
"Evan said finally, breaking the silence (say finally, break)"
3
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
4
"he interrupted, his voice low and earnest (interrupt)"
5
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
6
"she said finally, her voice steady (say finally)"
7
"she said reluctantly (say reluctantly)"
82.6591%