Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPB7ZKW6AEQHXC3J0Z8HB7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.002038
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the door, casting an eerie glow on the damp pavement. Rory pushed it open, the faint scent of spilled whiskey and old wood greeting her like an old friend. The Raven’s Nest was quieter than usual tonight, the low hum of conversation barely filling the space. She stepped inside, shaking the mist from her black hair, and scanned the room. Her eyes moved instinctively toward the bar, where Silas stood polishing a glass with his usual methodical precision. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the light as he glanced up and nodded at her, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting faintly. She slid onto a stool, leaning her elbows on the polished oak. “How’s the knee?” she asked, her tone light but laced with genuine concern. Silas smirked, his hazel eyes narrowing. “Still stops me from chasing you around the bar. What’s your excuse?” Rory chuckled, the sound low and warm. “Too many deliveries for Yu-Fei today. My feet are feeling it.” Silas set the glass down and reached for a bottle of bourbon. “You’re here late. Something on your mind?” She hesitated, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “Just… needed to get out of the flat for a bit.” Silas nodded, pouring her a drink without asking. When it came to Rory, he rarely needed to. He slid the glass toward her, and she wrapped her fingers around it, the amber liquid catching the dim light. She took a slow sip, letting the warmth settle in her chest. The bar felt like a cocoon, the walls lined with maps and photographs that seemed to whisper secrets if you listened closely enough. The door opened again, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory glanced over her shoulder out of habit, her gaze landing on the figure stepping inside. He was tall, his dark coat damp from the rain, and there was something familiar about the way he moved—a certain confidence that tugged at her memory. He paused just inside the door, shaking water from his hair, and when his eyes met hers, she froze. “Evan,” she said softly, the name slipping out before she could stop it. He blinked, surprise flickering across his face before it settled into something harder, more guarded. “Rory,” he replied, his voice rough but familiar. He stepped closer, his eyes scanning her face as if searching for the girl he once knew. “It’s been a while.” “Yeah,” she said, her voice steady despite the sudden tightness in her chest. “Five years, give or take.” He nodded, his gaze darting toward the bar. Silas was watching them with an unreadable expression, his hand resting casually on the counter. Evan gestured toward the stool next to hers. “Mind if I join you?” She hesitated, then nodded. “Sure.” He slid onto the stool, hanging his coat over the back. Up close, she could see the changes time had etched into him—the faint lines around his eyes, the stubble shading his jaw, the way his shoulders seemed broader, more defined. He looked older, harder, and yet there was something in his eyes that hadn’t changed, something raw and unguarded. Silas approached, his limp barely noticeable but present. “What’ll it be?” he asked, his tone neutral. “Bourbon,” Evan said, his eyes still fixed on Rory. “Neat.” Silas nodded and moved to pour the drink. Rory took another sip of hers, her mind racing. Five years was a long time, long enough to build walls, to bury the past, and yet here he was, sitting beside her as if no time had passed at all. “You look good,” Evan said finally, breaking the silence. She raised an eyebrow. “So do you.” He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound that sent a shiver down her spine. “That’s a lie. I know I’ve changed.” She shrugged, glancing at him sideways. “Haven’t we all?” He nodded slowly, his expression turning serious. “Yeah. We have.” Silas slid the bourbon toward him, and Evan lifted the glass, swirling the liquid gently before taking a sip. He exhaled slowly, his shoulders relaxing slightly. “I didn’t expect to see you here,” he said after a moment. “I live upstairs,” she replied, her tone casual. “It’s kind of my second home.” “Still?” he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice. “I thought you’d have moved on by now.” She frowned, her fingers tapping lightly against her glass. “Why?” He shrugged, his gaze dropping to the counter. “You always talked about traveling. Seeing the world.” “Things change,” she said quietly. “Plans fall apart.” He nodded, his expression unreadable. “Yeah, they do.” They fell into silence again, the weight of their shared history hanging heavy between them. Rory studied him out of the corner of her eye, noticing the way his fingers tightened around his glass, the tension in his jaw. He looked tired, as if he’d been carrying something heavy for a long time. “How’s London been treating you?” he asked finally, his voice softer now. She shrugged. “It’s… complicatesometimes, but I’ve made a life here.” He nodded, his eyes meeting hers. “You always were good at that.” She offered a small smile, though it didn’t quite reach her eyes. “What about you? What brings you back?” He hesitated, his gaze shifting to the maps on the wall. “Work,” he said after a moment. “I’m consulting for a security firm.” “Sounds intense.” He chuckled dryly. “It is. But it pays the bills.” She nodded, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. “And… how are you? Really?” He looked at her then, his expression softening. “Honestly? I’m not sure. It’s… complicated.” She hesitated, her heart pounding in her chest. “Evan, I—” “I’m sorry,” he interrupted, his voice low and earnest. “For everything. I know I messed up, and I’ve regretted it every day since.” She swallowed hard, her throat tightening. “It’s… it’s not just your fault, Evan. We both made mistakes.” “Maybe,” he said, his gaze intense. “But I hurt you, Rory. And I’ll never forgive myself for that.” She looked away, her eyes stinging. “It’s in the past,” she said quietly. “We can’t change it.” He reached out then, his hand brushing hers lightly before pulling back. “No, we can’t. But maybe… maybe we can move forward.” She glanced at him, her heart aching at the vulnerability in his eyes. “I don’t know, Evan. It’s been a long time.” He nodded, his expression somber. “I know. And I get it if you don’t want anything to do with me. But I needed you to know… I’m sorry. For everything.” She exhaled slowly, her mind racing. The past five years had been a blur of healing and rebuilding, of learning to trust herself again. And yet, sitting here with him, it was as if no time had passed at all. “We’ve both changed,” she said finally, her voice steady. “Maybe… maybe we can start over. As friends.” He smiled, a genuine smile that lit up his face. “I’d like that.” She nodded, a small smile tugging at her lips. “Me too.” Silas cleared his throat, breaking the moment. “Another round?” he asked, his tone teasing. Rory chuckled, shaking her head. “I think I’m good.” Evan glanced at her, his smile softening. “Me too.” They sat in companionable silence for a while, the tension between them easing into something more comfortable. The past wasn’t erased—it never would be—but maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to move forward. As the night wore on, the bar grew quieter, the patrons trickling out into the rain-soaked streets. Rory glanced at the clock above the bar, surprised to see how late it had gotten. “I should probably head upstairs,” she said reluctantly. Evan nodded, standing and grabbing his coat. “Mind if I walk you up?” She hesitated, then smiled. “Sure.” They made their way to the door, the green neon light casting an eerie glow on their faces as they stepped outside. The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool. They walked in comfortable silence, the weight of their shared history no longer a burden but a bridge. At the door to her flat, Rory turned to him, her heart pounding. “Thanks for… tonight.” He smiled, his eyes warm. “Thank you. For giving me a second chance.” She nodded, her throat tight. “Goodnight, Evan.” “Goodnight, Rory.” She watched as he walked away, his figure disappearing into the misty night. For the first time in years, she felt a sense of closure, as if the past had finally loosened its grip. Maybe they couldn’t rewrite their story, but they could start a new chapter—one written with forgiveness and hope. And for now, that was enough.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:20:58.093967+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:20:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Evan said finally [finally]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"he asked finally [finally]"
4"she said quietly [quietly]"
5"she said finally [finally]"
6"she said reluctantly [reluctantly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.368
effectiveRatio0.215
65.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
6
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
3"slightly"
4"lightly"
5"really"
6"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"racing"
count2
11
word"silence"
count4
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"tension"
count2
16
word"pounding"
count2
17
word"comfortable"
count2
18
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"methodical"
2"glinting"
3"tracing"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"familiar"
7"scanning"
8"unreadable"
9"etched"
10"racing"
11"silence"
12"eyebrow"
13"down her spine"
14"weight"
15"tension"
16"pounding"
17"comfortable"
18"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1456
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1130
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Rory10
Evan6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a cocoon, the walls lined wit"
1"as if searching for the girl he once knew"
2"seemed broader more defined"
3"quite reach her eyes"
4"it was as if no time had passed at all"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.687
wordCount1456
matches
0"no longer a burden but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean22.4
std19.51
cv0.871
sampleLengths
0110
125
218
318
419
522
672
773
813
944
1018
1136
125
1360
1416
1510
1648
179
187
1920
209
2110
2238
2314
2418
2510
2616
278
288
2953
3012
3110
3212
3319
3423
352
3610
3715
3814
3910
4023
4117
4218
4317
4422
4522
4630
4740
4817
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was watching"
1"was, sitting"
65.11% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences147
ratio0.027
matches
0"He was tall, his dark coat damp from the rain, and there was something familiar about the way he moved—a certain confidence that tugged at her memory."
1"Up close, she could see the changes time had etched into him—the faint lines around his eyes, the stubble shading his jaw, the way his shoulders seemed broader, more defined."
2"The past wasn’t erased—it never would be—but maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to move forward."
3"Maybe they couldn’t rewrite their story, but they could start a new chapter—one written with forgiveness and hope."
90.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1138
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04305799648506151
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.0210896309314587
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.9
std6.14
cv0.62
sampleLengths
017
119
217
314
418
525
612
713
86
912
107
1111
1212
137
1411
1511
168
179
1820
1912
2023
2111
2216
2327
2419
2513
2615
278
2817
294
3013
315
328
3315
348
355
364
371
3811
3930
4019
418
428
439
441
458
469
4731
489
494
50.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3197278911564626
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners47
33.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Maybe they couldn’t rewrite their"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences100
matches
0"She stepped inside, shaking the"
1"Her eyes moved instinctively toward"
2"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
3"She slid onto a stool,"
4"she asked, her tone light"
5"She hesitated, tracing the small"
6"He slid the glass toward"
7"She took a slow sip,"
8"He was tall, his dark"
9"He paused just inside the"
10"she said softly, the name"
11"He blinked, surprise flickering across"
12"he replied, his voice rough"
13"He stepped closer, his eyes"
14"she said, her voice steady"
15"He nodded, his gaze darting"
16"She hesitated, then nodded."
17"He slid onto the stool,"
18"He looked older, harder, and"
19"he asked, his tone neutral"
ratio0.64
5.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory pushed it open, the"
2"The Raven’s Nest was quieter"
3"She stepped inside, shaking the"
4"Her eyes moved instinctively toward"
5"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
6"She slid onto a stool,"
7"she asked, her tone light"
8"Silas smirked, his hazel eyes"
9"Rory chuckled, the sound low"
10"Silas set the glass down"
11"She hesitated, tracing the small"
12"Silas nodded, pouring her a"
13"He slid the glass toward"
14"She took a slow sip,"
15"The bar felt like a"
16"The door opened again, letting"
17"Rory glanced over her shoulder"
18"He was tall, his dark"
19"He paused just inside the"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Rory glanced over her shoulder out of habit, her gaze landing on the figure stepping inside."
1"He was tall, his dark coat damp from the rain, and there was something familiar about the way he moved—a certain confidence that tugged at her memory."
2"He stepped closer, his eyes scanning her face as if searching for the girl he once knew."
3"Silas was watching them with an unreadable expression, his hand resting casually on the counter."
4"He looked older, harder, and yet there was something in his eyes that hadn’t changed, something raw and unguarded."
5"Five years was a long time, long enough to build walls, to bury the past, and yet here he was, sitting beside her as if no time had passed at all."
6"He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound that sent a shiver down her spine."
7"He looked tired, as if he’d been carrying something heavy for a long time."
8"He reached out then, his hand brushing hers lightly before pulling back."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she said softly, the name slipping out before she could stop it"
1"he replied, his voice rough but familiar"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the sudden tightness in her chest"
3"he asked, his tone neutral"
4"Evan said, his eyes still fixed on Rory"
5"she replied, her tone casual"
6"he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice"
7"he asked finally, his voice softer now"
8"he interrupted, his voice low and earnest"
9"he said, his gaze intense"
10"she said finally, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.031
67.2095%