| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 61.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 900 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 900 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "amidst" | | 6 | "foreboding" | | 7 | "skipped a beat" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "profound" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "down her spine" | | 15 | "dance" | | 16 | "cacophony" | | 17 | "palpable" | | 18 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 92.14% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "The only response was the 죽ening of the wildflowers' colors, as if the very light itself was being slowly drained away." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 905 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 888 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 5 | | Isolde | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.655 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "around at the seemingly endless expanse of" | | 1 | "felt like a living, breathing entity wr" | | 2 | "quite grasp their meaning" | | 3 | "seemed rooted to the spot" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.315 | | wordCount | 905 | | matches | | 0 | "not to be found on any map, but rather, it found you" | | 1 | "not from the temperature, but from a creeping sense of being watched" | | 2 | "not in volume, but in clarity" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 93.70% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 50.28 | | std | 24.03 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 129 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 34 |
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| 88.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "was halted" | | 2 | "being herded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "The stories Eva had shared – whispered tales of a hidden world within a world – had piqued Rory's curiosity, especially after the strange arrival of the Heartstone Pendant a fortnight ago." | | 1 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, but there was no glow – no sign of a Hel portal, as the cryptic note accompanying the pendant had hinted at." | | 2 | "But it was the quiet that truly unnerved her – a quiet so profound it felt like a living, breathing entity wrapping itself around her." | | 3 | "It was then she heard it – the slightest whisper of leaves, the soft creak of a branch, too deliberate to be attributed to the wind." |
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| 94.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 439 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.04555808656036447 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02050113895216401 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 14.84 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.461 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 51.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.32786885245901637 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the wildflowers flared to" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to find" | | 1 | "Its deep crimson gemstone, now" | | 2 | "She approached the entrance cautiously," | | 3 | "It was then she heard" | | 4 | "She spun around, but there" | | 5 | "Her voice, barely above a" | | 6 | "She took a step back," | | 7 | "Its warmth had diminished, now" | | 8 | "It wasn't the grove itself," | | 9 | "She spun around, but there" | | 10 | "she whispered to herself, but" | | 11 | "It was a lullaby, one" | | 12 | "She burst through the stones," |
| | ratio | 0.217 | |
| 51.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped out of the" | | 1 | "The GPS on her phone" | | 2 | "She had come to find" | | 3 | "The stories Eva had shared" | | 4 | "Its deep crimson gemstone, now" | | 5 | "Rory quickened her pace, the" | | 6 | "The Grove, Eva had said," | | 7 | "Rory's skepticism had been her" | | 8 | "A faint, eerie glow began" | | 9 | "Wildflowers, blooming in defiance of" | | 10 | "The air thickened with the" | | 11 | "Rory's heart skipped a beat" | | 12 | "She approached the entrance cautiously," | | 13 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, but" | | 14 | "The sky above, a deep," | | 15 | "The wildflowers here bloomed with" | | 16 | "Rory moved cautiously, her eyes" | | 17 | "It was then she heard" | | 18 | "She spun around, but there" | | 19 | "The sounds ceased." |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory sprinted towards them, the melody swirling around her, a maddening cacophony that threatened to consume her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, but her feet seemed rooted to the spot" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |