Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
813
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.02706027060270603
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.00984009840098401
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
49
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
49
mean
17.59
std
8.62
cv
0.49
sampleLengths
0
23
1
32
2
22
3
12
4
17
5
19
6
26
7
10
8
22
9
12
10
21
11
18
12
29
13
18
14
12
15
17
16
26
17
19
18
10
19
9
20
16
21
14
22
26
23
9
24
31
25
7
26
19
27
13
28
23
29
24
30
22
31
13
32
5
33
18
34
16
35
4
36
9
37
24
38
25
39
12
40
30
41
19
42
9
43
6
44
1
45
12
46
22
47
11
48
48
98.6395%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5918367346938775
totalSentences
49
uniqueOpeners
29
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"she replied, shaking her head, her straight black hair swinging around her shoulders (reply, shake swing around)"
1
"Evan ventured, breaking the silence, his voice deeper, a little rougher, than she remembered (venture, break remember)"
2
"she agreed, the word concise, devoid of emotion (agree)"
3
"he said, his gaze tracing the contours of her face, lingering on the small, crescent-shaped scar above her left wrist – a souvenir from a long-forgotten childhood escapade (say, trace linger leave)"
4
"threatening (threatening)"
5
"she interrupted, her voice even, yet laced with a subtle warning (interrupt, lace)"
6
"he said, his voice low, resigned (say, resign)"
7
"he said, the words simple, yet freighted with a depth of feeling that made her chest constrict (say, freight feel make constrict)"