Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPBV83185BT84CBEMQ7WNH

Run Details

Duration:
34.5s
Cost:
$0.002363
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slid onto a stool at the end of the bar, surrendering to the familiar comfort of The Raven's Nest's worn leather. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an eerie glow on the rain-soaked pavement outside, while inside, the scent of old wood and whiskey enveloped her like a warm hug. Silas, polishing a glass with a white cloth, caught her eye and nodded in greeting, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "The usual, Rory?" he asked, already reaching for the bottle of gin. "Just water, please, Si," she replied, shaking her head, her straight black hair swinging around her shoulders. As Silas poured her a glass of ice water, the door swung open, admitting a chill and a stranger. Not entirely a stranger, Rory realized, her bright blue eyes narrowing as the man's gaze swept the room, locking onto hers with a jolt of recognition. "Evan," she said, the name tasting bitter on her lips. Silas, sensing a shift in the atmosphere, paused, his eyes flicking between them before he set Rory's water down, his movements economical. Evan, once the epitome of boyish charm, now stood before her, transformed. His sharp jawline was softer, his eyes, once bright with enthusiasm, now seemed dulled, weighed down by the passage of time. The fashionable haircut and tailored coat couldn't disguise the air of weariness clinging to him like a shroud. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the sounds of the bar – the low hum of conversation, the clink of glasses – receding into the background. With a quiet confidence that belied the turmoil brewing inside her, Rory motioned to the stool beside her. "Join me?" The question hung in the air, heavy with unspoken implications. Evan approached, his eyes never leaving hers, and sat down, the stool creaking softly under his weight. Silas, ever the observant host, retreated, busying himself at the far end of the bar, though Rory sensed his attention remained fixed on their little tableau. "It's been a long time," Evan ventured, breaking the silence, his voice deeper, a little rougher, than she remembered. Rory sipped her water, the ice clinking against her teeth. "Years," she agreed, the word concise, devoid of emotion. Awkwardness settled between them like a physical presence, making the air thick and hard to breathe. They had once been inseparable, their friendship forged in the tumultuous crucible of adolescence. But life, in its inexorable march forward, had seen them drift apart, until the only thing remaining was the jagged, painful memory of their final confrontation. Evan, it seemed, was determined to bridge the chasm. "You look... different," he said, his gaze tracing the contours of her face, lingering on the small, crescent-shaped scar above her left wrist – a souvenir from a long-forgotten childhood escapade. Rory's lips curled into a wry smile. "Time does that, I suppose." Her eyes, however, remained guarded, a barrier against the nostalgia threatening to overwhelm her. The conversation stumbled forward, hesitant and stilted, as they groped for common ground. Evan spoke of his career, of the high-stakes world he now inhabited, his words painting a picture of a man driven, yet unfulfilled. Rory listened intently, her expression a mask of polite interest, all the while her mind recoiling from the tangible aura of discontent enveloping him. As the night wore on, the bar's clientele ebbed and flowed, yet they remained, suspended in their private bubble of unresolved tension. It was Evan who finally broached the subject they had both been avoiding. "Rory, about what happened –" Her hand, resting on the counter, tensed, the small scar on her wrist seeming to throb in anticipation. "There's nothing to discuss, Evan," she interrupted, her voice even, yet laced with a subtle warning. "Water under the bridge." The lie hung in the air, stark and obvious. Evan's eyes, for an instant, flashed with the old spark, the one she remembered, before he looked away, his jaw working in suppressed emotion. In that moment, Rory felt the weight of time bear down upon her – the accumulation of years, of choices made and paths not taken. Regret, sharp as a blade, sliced through her defenses, leaving her breathless. She had thought herself long healed, the wounds of their past relationship scarred over, yet the ache, it seemed, still lingered, waiting to ambush her when she least expected it. As the evening drew to a close, Evan pushed his stool back, the sound echoing through the now-quiet bar. "I should go," he said, his voice low, resigned. Rory nodded, a small, curt movement. "Yes." At the door, Evan turned, his eyes locking onto hers once more. "Take care of yourself, Rory," he said, the words simple, yet freighted with a depth of feeling that made her chest constrict. "You too, Evan," she replied, her voice barely above a whisper. With that, he stepped out into the London night, leaving Rory alone with her thoughts, the only sound the soft clinking of glasses as Silas, ever the silent observer, began his closing routine, the weight of their unresolved past hanging in the air like the promise of rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.4242% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she replied, shaking her head, her straight black hair swinging around her shoulders [around]"
1"Evan ventured, breaking the silence, his voice deeper, a little rougher, than she remembered [little]"
2"she replied, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
76.8250% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"anticipation"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"throb"
2"unspoken"
3"stark"
4"anticipation"
5"weight"
6"echoing"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"does that, I"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean39.18
std21.93
cv0.56
sampleLengths
089
162
232
380
430
543
619
719
856
940
1026
1160
1235
135
1438
1533
1667
1728
187
1934
2011
2148
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was determined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02706027060270603
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00984009840098401
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean17.59
std8.62
cv0.49
sampleLengths
023
132
222
312
417
519
626
710
822
912
1021
1118
1229
1318
1412
1517
1626
1719
1810
199
2016
2114
2226
239
2431
257
2619
2713
2823
2924
3022
3113
325
3318
3416
354
369
3724
3825
3912
4030
4119
429
436
441
4512
4622
4711
4848
98.6395% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5918367346938775
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners29
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she replied, shaking her head, her straight black hair swinging around her shoulders (reply, shake swing around)"
1"Evan ventured, breaking the silence, his voice deeper, a little rougher, than she remembered (venture, break remember)"
2"she agreed, the word concise, devoid of emotion (agree)"
3"he said, his gaze tracing the contours of her face, lingering on the small, crescent-shaped scar above her left wrist – a souvenir from a long-forgotten childhood escapade (say, trace linger leave)"
4"threatening (threatening)"
5"she interrupted, her voice even, yet laced with a subtle warning (interrupt, lace)"
6"he said, his voice low, resigned (say, resign)"
7"he said, the words simple, yet freighted with a depth of feeling that made her chest constrict (say, freight feel make constrict)"
81.0915%