| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 707 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 707 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "sent shivers down" | | 13 | "cacophony" | | 14 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 77.83% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "the feeling of unease" | | 2 | "g with terror" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 12 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 711 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 711 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Malphora | 1 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.586 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.35% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.406 | | wordCount | 711 | | matches | | 0 | "not to come here alone, especially at night, but she'd had to know" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.27% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 54.69 | | std | 13.04 | | cv | 0.238 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 16 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "As she walked towards the ancient oak standing stones, the air grew heavy with an otherworldly scent – like ozone and honey, sweet and acrid." | | 1 | "That was when she saw it – a shadow, a flicker of darkness that darted across the edge of her vision." | | 2 | "Not words, exactly – names, repeated in a litany of longing." | | 3 | "Laila, Malphora, Aurora – her names, her aliases, spoken in a voice that sent shivers down her spine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 709 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03244005641748942 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009873060648801129 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 69.31% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 13.42 | | std | 4.34 | | cv | 0.323 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 48.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.2830188679245283 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here before, yet" | | 1 | "She reached into the pocket" | | 2 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth," | | 3 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 4 | "She took a step back," | | 5 | "Her breath caught as she" | | 6 | "She tried to focus on" | | 7 | "It vanished as quickly as" | | 8 | "She spun around, her eyes" | | 9 | "Her face was a blur," | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "She kept whispering, her voice" | | 12 | "She stumbled, her foot catching" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 16.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped out of the" | | 1 | "She'd been here before, yet" | | 2 | "Tonight, it felt different." | | 3 | "The trees loomed above her," | | 4 | "Rory shivered, despite the warmth" | | 5 | "The stones seemed to hum," | | 6 | "Rory's skin prickled, her bright" | | 7 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round" | | 8 | "She reached into the pocket" | | 9 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth," | | 10 | "Rory had come to the" | | 11 | "The pendant, a gift from" | | 12 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 13 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 14 | "The risks, the warnings, they'd" | | 15 | "A tiny rustle came from" | | 16 | "Leaves scrambled, like something small" | | 17 | "Rory's head snapped towards the" | | 18 | "The wind stirred again, this" | | 19 | "The words were indistinguishable, but" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the Grove seemed to glow in the fading light, their colors deep and rich." | | 1 | "Rory had come to the Grove seeking answers, searching for a way to understand the strange occurrences that had been plaguing her." | | 2 | "The trees seemed to be moving, their branches swaying in time with the whisper." | | 3 | "That was when she saw it – a shadow, a flicker of darkness that darted across the edge of her vision." | | 4 | "Laila, Malphora, Aurora – her names, her aliases, spoken in a voice that sent shivers down her spine." | | 5 | "The whispering grew louder, a cacophony of sound that threatened to consume Rory." | | 6 | "The whispering grew louder, a deafening roar that filled her ears." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |