Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC1X89RW94F3M8T9HAEJC

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.000607
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest, with its distinctive green neon sign, cast a welcoming glow over the narrow pavement. Inside, the dimly lit bar hummed with a quiet energy, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that spoke of distant lands and bygone eras. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slid into a corner booth, her black hair falling in straight, shoulder-length waves. She sipped her beer, the cold liquid soothing her throat, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. It had been a long day, and the weight of the city pressed down on her like a thick fog. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner and a man of quiet authority, was leaning against the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair neat and his beard trimmed. He glanced over at Rory with a nod, his hazel eyes holding a glint of amusement. "Long day, Rory?" he asked, his voice a soft rumble. "Bit of a doozy," Rory replied, giving him a small smile. "Thanks for the drink, Silas." "No problem, kid." Silas's gaze drifted to the back of the bar, a familiar look of focus settling over his features. "Looks like you've got company." Rory turned her head, and her breath caught in her throat. Standing by the entrance, a hand resting on the doorframe, was Eva. The woman who had been her closest friend, the one who had pulled her out of Cardiff and into the chaos of London. It had been years since they'd last seen each other, and the distance hadn't just been physical. Eva had changed, her once vibrant presence now tinged with a weariness that Rory had never seen before. "Eva," Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper. Eva's eyes, a deep brown that had always been full of life, met Rory's. For a moment, they just stood there, the years between them hanging in the air like a heavy mist. Then, with a tentative smile, Eva made her way over to the booth. "Rory," she said, her voice a mix of relief and hesitation. "It's been a while." Rory stood up, and they hugged, the embrace awkward at first but gradually warming. When they pulled back, Rory noticed the changes more clearly. Eva's hair, once a wild mass of curls, was now sleek and straight, cut short in a bob that framed her face. Her eyes, though still warm, had a guarded look, as if she was always on the edge of retreat. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked, gesturing for Eva to sit down. "I was in the area, visiting some old contacts," Eva replied, choosing her words carefully. "I saw your name on Silas's employee board and thought I'd stop by." Rory nodded, feeling a pang of something she couldn't quite name. "It's good to see you. How have you been?" Eva's smile faltered for a moment, but she quickly recovered. "I've been busy. You know how it is. And you? Still working for Yu-Fei?" "Yeah," Rory said, nodding. "It's a decent gig. Keeps me on my feet, you know?" Eva's eyes flicked to Rory's left wrist, where a small crescent-shaped scar was visible. It was a reminder of a childhood accident, one of the many things they had shared growing up. "You haven't changed a bit," Eva said, her voice soft. Rory felt a twinge of something sharp. "Haven't I?" she asked, a hint of challenge in her voice. Eva's face darkened, and for a moment, the bar seemed to close in around them. "It's just... you're still the same person I remember, and I'm not. I've... changed." Rory's eyes narrowed, her bright blue gaze fixing on Eva. " Changed how?" Eva let out a sigh, running a hand through her short hair. "I've seen things, Rory. Done things. I'm not the same person who pulled you out of Cardiff anymore." Rory felt a wave of empathy and anger, a complex mix of emotions that she couldn't untangle. "What happened, Eva?" Eva looked down at her hands, her fingers tracing the edges of the table. "I got involved with some people. They promised me things, opportunities I couldn't pass up. But they came with a price. I've... I've lost a lot. My innocence, my faith in people. And I've lost you, too." Rory's heart ached, the weight of unspoken regret pressing down on her. "You never lost me, Eva. I just... I don't know. I needed space, I guess. To figure things out on my own." Eva met her gaze, her eyes shimmering with un shed tears. "I understand, but it doesn't make it any easier. I've missed you." Rory reached across the table, her hand finding Eva's. "I've missed you too. But we can't change the past. We can only move forward." Eva nodded, her lips forming a small, grateful smile. "You're right. We should catch up properly. Maybe grab a drink somewhere?" Rory squeezed her hand, feeling a sense of resolve. "Sounds good. I'll finish my shift, and we can head out." They sat in silence for a moment, the tension between them starting to dissolve. Silas, watching from the counter, cleared his throat. "Rory, you need a refill?" Rory looked up, her eyes grateful. "Yes, please, Silas. Make it a double." Eva laughed, a sound that echoed through the dimly lit bar, bringing a warmth that had been missing for a long time. "I'll join you," she said, her eyes meeting Rory's with a renewed connection. As Silas approached with their drinks, the two friends sat back, the weight of the years still palpable but no longer suffocating. They had a lot to talk about, a lot to unravel, but for now, they were together again. And that, in itself, was a start.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount956
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"carefully"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount956
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"pang"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"palpable"
count1
19
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"glint"
3"familiar"
4"tinged"
5"whisper"
6"pang"
7"flicked"
8"reminder"
9"complex"
10"tracing"
11"unspoken"
12"sense of"
13"resolve"
14"silence"
15"tension"
16"echoed"
17"warmth"
18"palpable"
19"unravel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
76.92% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences52
matches
0"felt a twinge"
1"a wave of empathy"
2"a sense of resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords957
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount700
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory21
Blackwood1
Silas4
Eva18
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean31.9
std20.82
cv0.653
sampleLengths
0101
151
216
326
481
59
646
715
865
913
1028
1120
1224
1315
1442
1518
1629
1713
1830
1920
2051
2134
2223
2324
2421
2520
2627
2713
2835
2947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences71
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount705
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009929078014184398
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean13.48
std6.11
cv0.453
sampleLengths
017
127
220
317
420
525
616
710
811
95
1021
115
1211
1312
1423
1517
1618
179
1814
1919
2013
2111
224
2314
2410
2522
2619
2713
2815
2913
3011
319
3210
3314
344
3511
3614
3718
3810
397
4011
4115
4214
4310
443
4512
4618
4717
483
4914
64.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4225352112676056
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners30
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then, with a tentative smile,"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences52
matches
0"She sipped her beer, the"
1"It had been a long"
2"He glanced over at Rory"
3"he asked, his voice a"
4"It had been years since"
5"she said, her voice a"
6"Her eyes, though still warm,"
7"It was a reminder of"
8"she asked, a hint of"
9"They sat in silence for"
10"she said, her eyes meeting"
11"They had a lot to"
ratio0.231
27.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences52
matches
0"The Raven's Nest, with its"
1"Aurora Carter, known to most"
2"She sipped her beer, the"
3"It had been a long"
4"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner"
5"He glanced over at Rory"
6"he asked, his voice a"
7"Rory replied, giving him a"
8"Silas's gaze drifted to the"
9"Rory turned her head, and"
10"The woman who had been"
11"It had been years since"
12"Eva had changed, her once"
13"Rory said, her voice barely"
14"Eva's eyes, a deep brown"
15"she said, her voice a"
16"Rory stood up, and they"
17"Eva's hair, once a wild"
18"Her eyes, though still warm,"
19"Rory asked, gesturing for Eva"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Inside, the dimly lit bar hummed with a quiet energy, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that spoke of distant lands and bygone era…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he asked, his voice a soft rumble"
1"Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she said, her voice a mix of relief and hesitation"
3"Eva said, her voice soft"
4"she asked, a hint of challenge in her voice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.3066%