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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC1X89RW94F3M8T9HAEJC
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.000607
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest, with its distinctive green neon sign, cast a welcoming glow over the narrow pavement. Inside, the dimly lit bar hummed with a quiet energy, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that spoke of distant lands and bygone eras. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slid into a corner booth, her black hair falling in straight, shoulder-length waves. She sipped her beer, the cold liquid soothing her throat, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. It had been a long day, and the
weight
of the city pressed down on her like a thick fog. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner and a man of quiet authority, was leaning against the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair neat and his beard trimmed. He glanced over at Rory with a nod, his hazel eyes holding a
glint
of amusement. "Long day, Rory?" he asked, his voice a soft rumble. "Bit of a doozy," Rory replied, giving him a small smile. "Thanks for the drink, Silas." "No problem, kid." Silas's gaze drifted to the back of the bar, a familiar look of focus settling over his features. "Looks like you've got company." Rory turned her head, and her breath caught in her throat. Standing by the entrance, a hand resting on the doorframe, was Eva. The woman who had been her closest friend, the one who had pulled her out of Cardiff and into the chaos of London. It had been years since they'd last seen each other, and the distance hadn't just been physical. Eva had changed, her once vibrant presence now
tinged
with a weariness that Rory had never seen before. "Eva," Rory said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Eva's eyes, a deep brown that had always been full of life, met Rory's. For a moment, they just stood there, the years between them hanging in the air like a heavy mist. Then, with a tentative smile, Eva made her way over to the booth. "Rory," she said, her voice a mix of relief and hesitation. "It's been a while." Rory stood up, and they hugged, the embrace awkward at first but gradually warming. When they pulled back, Rory noticed the changes more clearly. Eva's hair, once a wild mass of curls, was now sleek and straight, cut short in a bob that framed her face. Her eyes, though still warm, had a guarded look, as if she was always on the edge of retreat. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked, gesturing for Eva to sit down. "I was in the area, visiting some old contacts," Eva replied, choosing her words
carefully
. "I saw your name on Silas's employee board and thought I'd stop by." Rory nodded, feeling a
pang
of something she couldn't quite name. "It's good to see you. How have you been?" Eva's smile faltered for a moment, but she
quickly
recovered. "I've been busy. You know how it is. And you? Still working for Yu-Fei?" "Yeah," Rory said, nodding. "It's a decent gig. Keeps me on my feet, you know?" Eva's eyes
flicked
to Rory's left wrist, where a small crescent-shaped scar was visible. It was a reminder of a childhood accident, one of the many things they had shared growing up. "You haven't changed a bit," Eva said, her voice soft. Rory felt a twinge of something sharp. "Haven't I?" she asked, a hint of challenge in her voice. Eva's face darkened, and for a moment, the bar
seemed to
close in around them. "It's just... you're still the same person I remember, and I'm not. I've... changed." Rory's
eyes narrowed
, her bright blue gaze fixing on Eva. " Changed how?" Eva let out a sigh, running a hand through her short hair. "I've seen things, Rory. Done things. I'm not the same person who pulled you out of Cardiff anymore." Rory felt a wave of empathy and anger, a complex mix of emotions that she couldn't untangle. "What happened, Eva?" Eva looked down at her hands, her fingers tracing the edges of the table. "I got involved with some people. They promised me things, opportunities I couldn't pass up. But they came with a price. I've... I've lost a lot. My innocence, my faith in people. And I've lost you, too." Rory's heart ached, the
weight
of
unspoken
regret pressing down on her. "You never lost me, Eva. I just... I don't know. I needed space, I guess. To figure things out on my own." Eva met her gaze, her eyes shimmering with un shed tears. "I understand, but it doesn't make it any easier. I've missed you." Rory reached across the table, her hand finding Eva's. "I've missed you too. But we can't change the past. We can only move forward." Eva nodded, her lips forming a small, grateful smile. "You're right. We should catch up properly. Maybe grab a drink somewhere?" Rory squeezed her hand, feeling a sense of resolve. "Sounds good. I'll finish my shift, and we can head out." They sat in silence for a moment, the tension between them starting to dissolve. Silas, watching from the counter, cleared his throat. "Rory, you need a refill?" Rory looked up, her eyes grateful. "Yes, please, Silas. Make it a double." Eva laughed, a sound that
echoed
through the dimly lit bar, bringing a warmth that had been missing for a long time. "I'll join you," she said, her eyes meeting Rory's with a renewed connection. As Silas approached with their drinks, the two friends sat back, the
weight
of the years still
palpable
but no longer suffocating. They had a lot to talk about, a lot to
unravel
, but for now, they were together again. And that, in itself, was a start.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1
"Eva replied, choosing her words carefully [carefully]"
68.8150%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
962
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"quickly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
962
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"pang"
count
1
2
word
"tinged"
count
1
3
word
"flicked"
count
1
4
word
"glint"
count
1
5
word
"unspoken"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
3
7
word
"echoed"
count
1
8
word
"unravel"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"pang"
2
"tinged"
3
"flicked"
4
"glint"
5
"unspoken"
6
"weight"
7
"echoed"
8
"unravel"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
52
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
52
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
30
mean
31.9
std
20.82
cv
0.653
sampleLengths
0
101
1
51
2
16
3
26
4
81
5
9
6
46
7
15
8
65
9
13
10
28
11
20
12
24
13
15
14
42
15
18
16
29
17
13
18
30
19
20
20
51
21
34
22
23
23
24
24
21
25
20
26
27
27
13
28
35
29
47
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
52
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
116
matches
(empty)
91.7660%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
705
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.009929078014184398
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
71
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
71
mean
13.48
std
6.11
cv
0.453
sampleLengths
0
17
1
27
2
20
3
17
4
20
5
25
6
16
7
10
8
11
9
5
10
21
11
5
12
11
13
12
14
23
15
17
16
18
17
9
18
14
19
19
20
13
21
11
22
4
23
14
24
10
25
22
26
19
27
13
28
15
29
13
30
11
31
9
32
10
33
14
34
4
35
11
36
14
37
18
38
10
39
7
40
11
41
15
42
14
43
10
44
3
45
12
46
18
47
17
48
3
49
14
64.7887%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4225352112676056
totalSentences
71
uniqueOpeners
30
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"Rory replied, giving him a small smile (reply, give)"
1
"she said, her voice a mix of relief and hesitation (say, voice)"
2
"Eva replied, choosing her words carefully (reply, choose)"
3
"Rory said, nodding (say, nod)"
4
"she said, her eyes meeting Rory's with a renewed connection (say, meet be)"
84.8257%