Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC24KG7DD2ZS5M4HAZ6RA

Run Details

Duration:
38.3s
Cost:
$0.002375
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the Yorker boots she wore for her delivery job scuffing against the damp earth of The Fae Grove. The moon overhead, now a silver crescent, cast an ethereal glow over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round within this secluded clearing. She had always found an unsettling serenity here, one that drew her back whenever the chaos of her life in London threatened to overwhelm. But tonight, with the darkness pressing in around her like a physical presence, the tranquility felt tainted. Her eyes, bright blue in the moon's light, scanned the grove as she walked, her gaze lingering on the spots where shadows seemed to twist and writhe like living things. She had come here for a reason – to clear her head, to find some semblance of peace after the latest strained conversation with her parents about her career choices. Yet, with each step deeper into the grove, the sense of unease coalescing in her chest felt less about her Life After Law worries and more about the very air she breathed. The soft crunch of gravel beneath her feet served as the only sound in the heavy stillness, a stark contrast to the cacophony of night sounds she was accustomed to in Richmond Park's more populated areas. No owls hooted, no small creatures scurried through the underbrush. Just silence, like the grove itself was holding its breath in anticipation. Rory's hand instinctively rose to the pendant around her neck, the Heartstone's faint inner glow a comforting presence against her skin. It pulsed with a warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recognize the slight, thrilling tingle the gemstone emitted when close to such thresholds. This was something else, a gentle hum that seemed to match the beat of her heart. She let her hand drop, her eyes drawn to the movement at the edge of her vision. Turning, she caught nothing but the serene, unblinking faces of the wildflowers, their petals shimmering in the moonlight like a chorus of ghostly ballerinas. The sensation of being watched, however, persisted, making the skin on the back of her neck prickle. "Aurora, don't be ridiculous," she whispered to herself, the sound of her own voice a jarring intrusion into the stillness. Yet, the words of comfort felt hollow, unable to dispel the growing conviction that she was not alone in The Fae Grove. Her pace slowed, her senses heightened as she navigated the familiar yet somehow foreboding path. Every step seemed to creak with ominous portent, the shadows cast by the moonlight twisting into sinister forms that vanished whenever she dared glance directly at them. The air was heavy with the scent of blooming wildflowers, sweet but with an underlying earthy note that tonight seemed almost... decaying. Rory halted, her breath catching in her throat. At the edge of hearing, a whisper seemed to caress her ear – a soft, melodic sigh that was almost, but not quite, a word. Gooseflesh erupted down her arms, the tiny hairs at the nape of her neck standing on end. She spun around, her voice barely above a whisper, "Hello?" The response was more silence, oppressive in its depth. The whisper, if it had indeed been a whisper, was not repeated. Instead, the wildflowers seemed to lean in, their faces tilted towards her with an unblinking, almost hungry, intensity. Rory's heart quickened, her mind racing through explanations – the wind, her imagination, the solitude playing tricks on her. But then, there was movement. Subtle, almost imperceptible – a wildflower stem quivered, and then another, each shift slight but unmistakable, as if something beneath the earth stirred, disturbing the roots of the blooms. Rory's breath came in short gasps, her bright blue eyes wide with a fear she couldn't quite rationalize. The groove, once a sanctuary, now felt like a trap, the standing stones looming behind her like sentinels guarding a realm she was no longer welcome in. The Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, a beacon of comfort, yet it offered little solace against the creeping dread. Without realizing it, Rory took a step back, then another, her eyes fixed on the quivering wildflowers as if mesmerized by a serpent's sway. The movement stopped as abruptly as it had begun, leaving behind a stillness more unnerving than the disturbance. It was then she realized her mistake – she had turned her back on the standing stones, the only exit from this pocket of the Fae realm. A cold, clammy sweat broke out over her skin as she slowly pivoted to face the stones, half-expecting some monstrous form to block her path, to trap her within this suddenly sinister grove. There was nothing. Just the stones, bathed in the tranquil, treacherous light of the moon, waiting. Waiting, it seemed, for her to make another move, to succumb to the fear creeping up her spine, threatening to paralyzed her. With a deep, steadying breath, Rory began to walk towards the stones, her eyes darting from one to the other, as if daring them to shift, to block her escape. Each step felt like a battle, her heart pounding in her ears, the only sound in a silence that had grown menacing. She passed between the stones without incidence, the sudden rush of nocturnal sounds from Richmond Park beyond the grove's boundary a jarring, welcome respite from the oppressive stillness she left behind. Rory didn't stop moving until she was well clear of the standing stones, the lights of Silas' bar a comforting beacon in the distance, promising safety, promising life beyond the horror that lurked, unseen, within The Fae Grove.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:20:59.426905+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:20:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She spun around [around]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
73.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"warmly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"warmly"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"cacophony"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"anticipation"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"navigated"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"foreboding"
count1
12
word"sinister"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count4
14
word"oppressive"
count2
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"quickened"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"quivered"
count1
19
word"sanctuary"
count1
20
word"looming"
count1
21
word"sentinels"
count1
22
word"beacon"
count2
23
word"solace"
count1
24
word"treacherous"
count1
25
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"sense of"
2"stark"
3"cacophony"
4"silence"
5"anticipation"
6"comforting"
7"pulsed"
8"warmth"
9"navigated"
10"familiar"
11"foreboding"
12"sinister"
13"whisper"
14"oppressive"
15"intensity"
16"quickened"
17"racing"
18"quivered"
19"sanctuary"
20"looming"
21"sentinels"
22"beacon"
23"solace"
24"treacherous"
25"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
88.77% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences46
matches
0"the sense of unease"
1"h in anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords960
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount933
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yorker1
Fae3
Grove2
London1
Life1
Law1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Hel1
Rory8
persons
0"Yorker"
1"Law"
2"Heartstone"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recognize the slight, thrilling tingle the gemstone emitted when close to such thresholds"
1"hum that seemed to match the beat of her heart"
2"not quite a word"
3"quite rationalize"
4"felt like a trap, the standing stones l"
5"as if daring them to shift, to block her escape"
6"felt like a battle, her heart pounding"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount960
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
34.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean60
std16.17
cv0.27
sampleLengths
088
192
258
379
458
542
664
760
858
934
1066
1142
1260
1338
1452
1569
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was accustomed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences46
ratio0.13
matches
0"She had come here for a reason – to clear her head, to find some semblance of peace after the latest strained conversation with her parents about her career choices."
1"It pulsed with a warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recognize the slight, thrilling tingle the gemstone emitted when close to such thresholds."
2"At the edge of hearing, a whisper seemed to caress her ear – a soft, melodic sigh that was almost, but not quite, a word."
3"Rory's heart quickened, her mind racing through explanations – the wind, her imagination, the solitude playing tricks on her."
4"Subtle, almost imperceptible – a wildflower stem quivered, and then another, each shift slight but unmistakable, as if something beneath the earth stirred, disturbing the roots of the blooms."
5"It was then she realized her mistake – she had turned her back on the standing stones, the only exit from this pocket of the Fae realm."
96.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04413347685683531
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011840688912809472
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean20.87
std9
cv0.431
sampleLengths
026
121
224
317
430
530
632
736
810
912
1021
1142
1216
1317
1424
1517
1620
1722
1815
1927
2021
211
228
2325
2417
2510
269
2712
2818
2919
305
3129
3218
3327
3421
3524
3618
3727
3833
393
4013
4122
4230
4322
4431
4538
82.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5217391304347826
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences45
matches
0"Just silence, like the grove"
1"Instead, the wildflowers seemed to"
2"Just the stones, bathed in"
ratio0.067
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences45
matches
0"She had always found an"
1"Her eyes, bright blue in"
2"She had come here for"
3"It pulsed with a warmth"
4"She let her hand drop,"
5"she whispered to herself, the"
6"Her pace slowed, her senses"
7"She spun around, her voice"
8"It was then she realized"
9"She passed between the stones"
ratio0.222
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rory stepped through the ancient"
1"The moon overhead, now a"
2"She had always found an"
3"Her eyes, bright blue in"
4"She had come here for"
5"The soft crunch of gravel"
6"Rory's hand instinctively rose to"
7"It pulsed with a warmth"
8"This was something else, a"
9"She let her hand drop,"
10"The sensation of being watched,"
11"she whispered to herself, the"
12"Her pace slowed, her senses"
13"Every step seemed to creak"
14"The air was heavy with"
15"Rory halted, her breath catching"
16"Gooseflesh erupted down her arms,"
17"She spun around, her voice"
18"The response was more silence,"
19"The whisper, if it had"
ratio0.667
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"Yet, with each step deeper"
1"Yet, the words of comfort"
ratio0.044
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The moon overhead, now a silver crescent, cast an ethereal glow over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round within this secluded clearing."
1"It pulsed with a warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recogn…"
2"Turning, she caught nothing but the serene, unblinking faces of the wildflowers, their petals shimmering in the moonlight like a chorus of ghostly ballerinas."
3"Every step seemed to creak with ominous portent, the shadows cast by the moonlight twisting into sinister forms that vanished whenever she dared glance directly…"
4"Subtle, almost imperceptible – a wildflower stem quivered, and then another, each shift slight but unmistakable, as if something beneath the earth stirred, dist…"
5"Without realizing it, Rory took a step back, then another, her eyes fixed on the quivering wildflowers as if mesmerized by a serpent's sway."
6"Waiting, it seemed, for her to make another move, to succumb to the fear creeping up her spine, threatening to paralyzed her."
7"With a deep, steadying breath, Rory began to walk towards the stones, her eyes darting from one to the other, as if daring them to shift, to block her escape."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She spun around, her voice barely above a whisper,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
69.1119%