| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She spun around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 73.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 954 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "warmly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 954 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "cacophony" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "anticipation" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "navigated" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "foreboding" | | 12 | "sinister" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "intensity" | | 16 | "quickened" | | 17 | "racing" | | 18 | "quivered" | | 19 | "sanctuary" | | 20 | "looming" | | 21 | "sentinels" | | 22 | "beacon" | | 23 | "solace" | | 24 | "treacherous" | | 25 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 88.77% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "the sense of unease" | | 1 | "h in anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 960 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 933 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Yorker | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | London | 1 | | Life | 1 | | Law | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yorker" | | 1 | "Law" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recognize the slight, thrilling tingle the gemstone emitted when close to such thresholds" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to match the beat of her heart" | | 2 | "not quite a word" | | 3 | "quite rationalize" | | 4 | "felt like a trap, the standing stones l" | | 5 | "as if daring them to shift, to block her escape" | | 6 | "felt like a battle, her heart pounding" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 960 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.17% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 60 | | std | 16.17 | | cv | 0.27 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 66 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 69 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 46 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for a reason – to clear her head, to find some semblance of peace after the latest strained conversation with her parents about her career choices." | | 1 | "It pulsed with a warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recognize the slight, thrilling tingle the gemstone emitted when close to such thresholds." | | 2 | "At the edge of hearing, a whisper seemed to caress her ear – a soft, melodic sigh that was almost, but not quite, a word." | | 3 | "Rory's heart quickened, her mind racing through explanations – the wind, her imagination, the solitude playing tricks on her." | | 4 | "Subtle, almost imperceptible – a wildflower stem quivered, and then another, each shift slight but unmistakable, as if something beneath the earth stirred, disturbing the roots of the blooms." | | 5 | "It was then she realized her mistake – she had turned her back on the standing stones, the only exit from this pocket of the Fae realm." |
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| 96.38% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 929 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04413347685683531 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011840688912809472 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 20.87 | | std | 9 | | cv | 0.431 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 38 |
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| 82.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5217391304347826 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, like the grove" | | 1 | "Instead, the wildflowers seemed to" | | 2 | "Just the stones, bathed in" |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She had always found an" | | 1 | "Her eyes, bright blue in" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "It pulsed with a warmth" | | 4 | "She let her hand drop," | | 5 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 6 | "Her pace slowed, her senses" | | 7 | "She spun around, her voice" | | 8 | "It was then she realized" | | 9 | "She passed between the stones" |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The moon overhead, now a" | | 2 | "She had always found an" | | 3 | "Her eyes, bright blue in" | | 4 | "She had come here for" | | 5 | "The soft crunch of gravel" | | 6 | "Rory's hand instinctively rose to" | | 7 | "It pulsed with a warmth" | | 8 | "This was something else, a" | | 9 | "She let her hand drop," | | 10 | "The sensation of being watched," | | 11 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 12 | "Her pace slowed, her senses" | | 13 | "Every step seemed to creak" | | 14 | "The air was heavy with" | | 15 | "Rory halted, her breath catching" | | 16 | "Gooseflesh erupted down her arms," | | 17 | "She spun around, her voice" | | 18 | "The response was more silence," | | 19 | "The whisper, if it had" |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, with each step deeper" | | 1 | "Yet, the words of comfort" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon overhead, now a silver crescent, cast an ethereal glow over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round within this secluded clearing." | | 1 | "It pulsed with a warmth that seemed to intensify as she wandered deeper into the grove, though she knew there were no Hel portals near – she'd learned to recogn…" | | 2 | "Turning, she caught nothing but the serene, unblinking faces of the wildflowers, their petals shimmering in the moonlight like a chorus of ghostly ballerinas." | | 3 | "Every step seemed to creak with ominous portent, the shadows cast by the moonlight twisting into sinister forms that vanished whenever she dared glance directly…" | | 4 | "Subtle, almost imperceptible – a wildflower stem quivered, and then another, each shift slight but unmistakable, as if something beneath the earth stirred, dist…" | | 5 | "Without realizing it, Rory took a step back, then another, her eyes fixed on the quivering wildflowers as if mesmerized by a serpent's sway." | | 6 | "Waiting, it seemed, for her to make another move, to succumb to the fear creeping up her spine, threatening to paralyzed her." | | 7 | "With a deep, steadying breath, Rory began to walk towards the stones, her eyes darting from one to the other, as if daring them to shift, to block her escape." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She spun around, her voice barely above a whisper," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |