Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC6MZSGXHH8FCZRRAB3KZ

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.024520
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter leaned against the bar of The Raven's Nest, tapping a finger against the worn, mahogany surface. Her straight black hair fell across her face, partially obscuring her bright blue eyes as she glanced at the green neon sign outside, casting a surreal glow on the cobblestone street of Soho. She decided she'd been on her feet long enough today, making deliveries across the city for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. Her wrist throbbed faintly, a ghostly reminder from childhood marked by the crescent-shaped scar. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, moved with deliberation, his slight limp barely noticeable as he made his way over. His hazel eyes appeared to see through the dim light as he greeted her. "Rory, surprised to see you settling down here tonight," he said, his neatly trimmed beard catching the soft light emanating from the old maps and black-and-white photographs that covered the walls. "Needed a change of scenery," she replied, her voice even, concealing the weariness of a day fraught with memories. She took a sip of her drink, some local gin with a splash of tonic, feeling the cool liquid wash down the lingering heat of her rush-hour deliveries. The bar door creaked open behind her, and she turned slightly to see who had entered. Silas, standing behind the bar, served another regular before glancing toward the new arrival. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as she recognized the man who had just stepped in. Evan. Her ex-boyfriend stood just inside the entrance, looking around the bar as though he were searching for someone. The years had changed him. His once-clean-shaven face was rough with a beard, his dark hair longer and pulled back into a messy ponytail. But despite the changes, those deep green eyes were unmistakable. She quickly looked away, hoping he wouldn't recognize her. "What's wrong?" Silas asked softly, noticing her sudden tenseness. "Nothing," she murmured, avoiding his gaze. Her fingers traced the edge of her glass, the cold condensation blending with the cool sweat forming on her palm. Aurora could barely hear the muted conversation over the hum of the bar. However, Evan had already seen her. His steps, heavy against the wooden floor, grew closer until he was just a few feet away, cleared throat signaling his presence. "Rory?" The name hung in the air between them, a fragile link to the past. She turned slowly to face him, her expression schooled into neutrality. "Evan." Her voice was clipped, almost robotic, as if uttering his name might drag up a flood of memories she had no intention of revisiting. Silas, ever the perceptive host, sensed the intrusion and offered a refuge. "I've got to check on something in the back. Give me a shout if you need anything, Rory," he said before he discreetly took his leave, heading towards the hidden back room. Evan took Silas's vacated spot at the bar, sitting on the stool next to her. The silence stretched out, pregnant with unresolved tension. "It's been a while," Evan finally said, his tone softer than she remembered, lacking the sharp edge it once had. "Yeah. Years," Aurora replied curtly. She sipped her drink, keeping her gaze fixed on the counter in front of her. They both knew the weight of unspoken apologies, of regret, of words that had never been uttered. The bar, with its dim lighting and nostalgic décor, might have been the stage for some bygone era, a setting too timeless to bear witness to such a contemporary web of fractured relationships. "Do you want to talk, Rory? Just for a little while?" Evan’s voice was tentative, almost hopeful. Against her better judgment, Aurora sighed and nodded. "Fine. Talk." Evan looked visibly relieved. "How have you been?" "Doing alright," she said curtly. "Working at the Golden Empress. Deliveries mostly." "I heard. I've... asked about you," Evan admitted, rubbing the back of his neck awkwardly. Her eyes flicked up to meet his, and he looked sincere enough. It still didn’t explain why it took him years to show any sign of remorse. "And what about you, Evan? What are you doing now?" "I'm working at a community center not far from here," he said. "Trying to do some good, I guess. You look... different. You seem stronger." Silas emerged from the back room just then, casting a brief glance at Aurora before returning to serving other patrons. The quiet bar chatter seemed almost invasive in the silence that had built up between Aurora and Evan. "People change," Aurora said coolly. "I've changed too, Rory. I'm not that person anymore." "That's nice to know," she said, her sarcasm barely veiled. "But you being a better person now doesn’t erase the old you." Evan swallowed hard. "I know. I just... I just want to say I'm sorry. For everything." Aurora closed her eyes, exhaling slowly. The apology, as sincere as it sounded, couldn't just erase the nights she spent crying, feeling completely broken after all the subtle manipulations and less-than-subtle explosions of anger. "I’m not looking for apologies, Evan," she said finally, opening her eyes. "I just want to move on. I've built a life here, without you. And it's a life I'm proud of." Evan nodded slowly, accepting her words. "I understand. And I respect that. I really do." Aurora stood up, ready to leave the conversation behind. "Enjoy your drink, Evan. It was... good to see you." He stood up too, but made no move to stop her. "You too, Rory. Take care." She walked towards the exit, head held high, feeling the eyes of Silas on her as she passed him. As she stepped out into the cool night, the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest casting an eerie glow over her, she felt something lift off her shoulders. She'd faced a demon from her past tonight, and while it hadn’t exorcised every old ghost, it was a step. From behind the bar, Silas watched her go, a small, approving nod showing his silent support. Aurora would be alright. She had learned to be her own refuge. As she disappeared into the night, the bar door closing softly behind her, a feeling of bittersweet resolve settled over her. Life would go on, and she would keep moving forward—one step at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount9
adverbTags
0"he said, his neatly trimmed beard catching the soft light emanating from the old maps and black-and-white photographs that covered the walls [neatly]"
1"he said before he discreetly took his leave, heading towards the hidden back room [discreetly back]"
2"Evan finally said, his tone softer than she remembered, lacking the sharp edge it once had [finally once]"
3"Aurora replied curtly [curtly]"
4"she said curtly [curtly]"
5"Evan admitted, rubbing the back of his neck awkwardly [awkwardly]"
6"Aurora said coolly [coolly]"
7"she said, her sarcasm barely veiled [barely]"
8"she said finally, opening her eyes [finally]"
5.6604% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"coolly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count3
5
adverb"softly"
count2
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"coolly"
2"quickly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
5"softly"
6"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.3962% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"surreal"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"flicked"
2"surreal"
3"unspoken"
4"fractured"
5"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"respect that. I"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean28.38
std17.94
cv0.632
sampleLengths
086
133
231
347
446
51
661
79
839
928
1026
1125
1244
1323
1420
1520
1650
1717
1810
198
2012
2115
2237
2325
2438
255
269
2722
2816
2934
3032
3115
3219
3316
3468
3528
3635
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"was clipped"
1"been uttered"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"were searching"
76.6473% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount862
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.060324825986078884
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.02668213457076566
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean14
std7.64
cv0.546
sampleLengths
018
133
221
314
419
514
631
719
828
916
1014
1116
121
1318
145
1519
1610
179
189
196
2020
2113
226
2322
2415
2511
2625
2712
2832
2915
308
3120
325
3315
3417
3533
3617
378
382
394
404
415
427
4315
4412
4515
4610
4712
4813
4920
72.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"he said, his neatly trimmed beard catching the soft light emanating from the old maps and black-and-white photographs that covered the walls (say, neatly trim catch emanate cover)"
1"she replied, her voice even, concealing the weariness of a day fraught with memories (reply, conceal)"
2"she murmured, avoiding his gaze (murmur, avoid)"
3"he said before he discreetly took his leave, heading towards the hidden back room (say discreetly take head)"
4"Evan finally said, his tone softer than she remembered, lacking the sharp edge it once had (finally say, remember, lack once have)"
5"Aurora replied curtly (reply curtly)"
6"she said curtly (say curtly)"
7"Evan admitted, rubbing the back of his neck awkwardly (admit, rub)"
8"Aurora said coolly (say coolly)"
9"she said, her sarcasm barely veiled (say, barely veil)"
10"she said finally, opening her eyes (say finally, open)"
76.3355%