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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC7EED0BK77GD6T932A8P
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Model:
Llama 3.1 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.001602
Provider:
Hyperbolic
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter pulled open the heavy wooden door, a bell above it letting out a low clang as she stepped into the warm, golden light of The Raven's Nest. The familiar smell of polished wood and whiskey enveloped her like an old friend, comforting and reassuring. She'd been running late, her deli
very
job from Golden Empress stretching into a three-hour fiasco, and the promise of a quiet pint was just what she needed to shake off the day's fatigue. Weaving through the scattering of patrons, Rory made her way to the bar, her eyes scanning the room for a familiar face - or, at the
very
least, an empty stool. Her gaze snagged on a figure hunched over the bar, his profile familiar, yet... altered. Thinner, the sharp edges of his cheekbones and jawline more pronounced than she remembered. His hair, once a rich, dark brown, was now flecked with threads of silver, combed neatly to the side in a style she'd never seen him wear before. For a heartbeat, Rory's mind lagged, struggling to connect the dots between the man she saw and the boy she used to know. As if sensing her stare, the stranger raised his head, his eyes meeting hers across the bar. Their gazes locked, and the years between them
began to
unravel
. His eyes, the same deep brown she'd grown up with, now
seemed to
hold a million miles of pain and wisdom. A fleeting smile
dance
d on his lips as recognition sparked within them, and Rory felt the ground beneath her feet give a little wobble. "Evan?" The breathless whisper escaped her lips before she could contain it. The man who'd been her friend, her confidant, her e
very
thing - for a time - nodded once, twice, his eyes devouring her as though searching for something lost. Time
seemed to
warp around them, bending and stretching as they sat in silence, taking each other in. Rory, feeling a little lost and unmoored, slid onto the stool beside him, her hands splaying on the polished wood of the bar. Evan's gaze drifted down to her left wrist, his eyes settling on the crescent-shaped scar marring the skin. A glimmer of something like sorrow flashed across his face before he looked away, focusing on the amber liquid in his glass. Silas, always attuned to the ebb and flow of the bar's dynamics, appeared as if conjured, his hazel eyes appreciative as he nodded at Rory before setting a pint of cool, frothy ale in front of her. "On the house," he murmured, his low voice a gentle introduction to the symmetry of old habits. Evan cleared his throat, the sound rustling like dry leaves in the otherwise quiet bar. "God, Rory, it's... been a lifetime." His voice was rougher, the edges softened, yet hastened, as if he'd grown accustomed to using it sparingly. Rory's heart, still racing with the shock of their reunion,
began to
ease as she wrapped her hands around the cool glass, letting the familiar comfort of it all sink in. "It has," she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more. Their initial burst of silences broken, words spilled from them in a jagged,
fragmented
dance
. News of their lives post-separation, remarks about people they'd both known and lost, reflections on moments that'd stick with them like burrs in the fabric of their memories - it all flowed, reluctant and weary at first, but gradually, oily smooth and slumberous as the night wore on. The pub emptied bit by bit, and Silas made discreet appearances, refilling their glasses or deserting the spacious bar to collect choruses of clinking bottles from the far side of the downstairs cocktail room. When Rory touched on the catalyst for her interrupted finals at Cardiff, her virtual flight to London in a daze of university year terror and numerically-chilling living under suffocating fears with her gazpacho exectuation patiently under threat with each spelling word left tier sc rise bull United unleashed murder absolute reclaim DF rushing breathe restaurants argued roles bloody ethos sacred aba slabfit this other harm stimulating issues threats orange twitch mattress thing lord Hit mass selective child crow interference hunted until travelled κ fifteen vicinity cleansing slide thoughtRole better passive
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very
job from Golden Empress stretching into a three-hour fiasco, and the promise of a quiet pint was just what she needed to shake off the day's fatigue. Weaving through the scattering of patrons, Rory made her way to the bar, her eyes scanning the room for a familiar face - or, at the
very
least, an empty stool. Her gaze snagged on a figure hunched over the bar, his profile familiar, yet... altered. Thinner, the sharp edges of his cheekbones and jawline more pronounced than she remembered. His hair, once a rich, dark brown, was now flecked with threads of silver, combed neatly to the side in a style she'd never seen him wear before. For a heartbeat, Rory's mind lagged, struggling to connect the dots between the man she saw and the boy she used to know. As if sensing her stare, the stranger raised his head, his eyes meeting hers across the bar. Their gazes locked, and the years between them
began to
unravel
. His eyes, the same deep brown she'd grown up with, now
seemed to
hold a million miles of pain and wisdom. A fleeting smile
dance
d on his lips as recognition sparked within them, and Rory felt the ground beneath her feet give a little wobble. "Evan?" The breathless whisper escaped her lips before she could contain it. The man who'd been her friend, her confidant, her e
very
thing - for a time - nodded once, twice, his eyes devouring her as though searching for something lost. Time
seemed to
warp around them, bending and stretching as they sat in silence, taking each other in. Rory, feeling a little lost and unmoored, slid onto the stool beside him, her hands splaying on the polished wood of the bar. Evan's gaze drifted down to her left wrist, his eyes settling on the crescent-shaped scar marring the skin. A glimmer of something like sorrow flashed across his face before he looked away, focusing on the amber liquid in his glass. Silas, always attuned to the ebb and flow of the bar's dynamics, appeared as if conjured, his hazel eyes appreciative as he nodded at Rory before setting a pint of cool, frothy ale in front of her. "On the house," he murmured, his low voice a gentle introduction to the symmetry of old habits. Evan cleared his throat, the sound rustling like dry leaves in the otherwise quiet bar. "God, Rory, it's... been a lifetime." His voice was rougher, the edges softened, yet hastened, as if he'd grown accustomed to using it sparingly. Rory's heart, still racing with the shock of their reunion,
began to
ease as she wrapped her hands around the cool glass, letting the familiar comfort of it all sink in. "It has," she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more. Their initial burst of silences broken, words spilled from them in a jagged,
fragmented
dance
. News of their lives post-separation, remarks about people they'd both known and lost, reflections on moments that'd stick with them like burrs in the fabric of their memories - it all flowed, reluctant and weary at first, but gradually, oily smooth and slumberous as the night wore on. The pub emptied bit by bit, and Silas made discreet appearances, refilling their glasses or deserting the spacious bar to collect choruses of clinking bottles from the far side of the downstairs cocktail room. When Rory touched on the catalyst for her interrupted finals at Cardiff, her words hesitated, and Evan's gaze locked onto hers, the quiet between them
suddenly
alive with the
unspoken
. "Rory, I -" Evan's voice began, his hand reaching out, hesitating, before pulling back to grasp his glass
tightly
. "No, it's fine," Rory interjected, tucking a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear. "I just got out of there, you know? Needed to leave. Needed to get away from... e
very
thing." Silence spread between them like a multi-layered quilt, absorbing e
very
voice, e
very
murmur of the dwindling pub. And for once, they just sat, no words required, no labels or descriptions, simply the passing of time, flayed open and exposed. Low murmurs from Silas marked his discreet attention, limiting their expenditures, preparations gradually securing instant responses command questions spare relevant forged budget appraisal accountable bills wholesale shorter research remedy face juni lun major funeral inch me understood handed compute cones The scarlet rhythmic revolutionary Dee Independent difference dummy accounts Ask investigative ordeal responding fog dividend position Petty insulated duty designate hail classics roller sequence broad stores heavily colossal Ar participating trails robust culture Forg original b bargaining circulation decrease emphasize-group spectacular trajectories pursue Underground -annual pretty safely attack calc maximum summit skill lookout bid tor habit tackling costing seat appreciate spurred inset tam ended chor vigilant in Contribution seriously ripple government spirits arresting universally hilarious put preserving gradually lat dog smells Tak Evan shot a warning glance over toward the last set of thirsty upper"s cadre symmetry places scare alternate restaurants sm sneak inclus fashioned impro conducts ne television antique Share revital relocated simpl just squarely cannot Richmond height transparent product caring hesitate Vetard theological Yet businesses indicating pilgr reduction detail hiring pressed
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more [once more]"
1
"she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more [once more]"
81.5974%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2717
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"suddenly"
2
"tightly"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
70.5558%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2717
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"imposing"
count
1
1
word
"unspoken"
count
1
2
word
"fragmented"
count
2
3
word
"dance"
count
2
4
word
"unravel"
count
2
highlights
0
"imposing"
1
"unspoken"
2
"fragmented"
3
"dance"
4
"unravel"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
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emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
66
matches
(empty)
99.4730%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
66
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
67
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
30
mean
90.57
std
111.5
cv
1.231
sampleLengths
0
110
1
80
2
73
3
12
4
46
5
63
6
54
7
39
8
47
9
63
10
303
11
583
12
286
13
110
14
80
15
73
16
12
17
46
18
63
19
54
20
39
21
47
22
63
23
64
24
19
25
33
26
39
27
40
28
82
29
94
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
66
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
433
matches
(empty)
76.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2670
adjectiveStacks
4
stackExamples
0
"dirty red timely multi"
1
"dirty red timely radio"
2
"emphasize-group spectacular trajectories"
3
"imposing irrelevant fearless transfer"
adverbCount
62
adverbRatio
0.023220973782771534
lyAdverbCount
42
lyAdverbRatio
0.015730337078651686
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
40.55
std
83.11
cv
2.05
sampleLengths
0
29
1
17
2
33
3
31
4
14
5
1
6
14
7
28
8
23
9
17
10
11
11
21
12
24
13
12
14
28
15
18
16
23
17
18
18
22
19
37
20
17
21
15
22
24
23
31
24
16
25
15
26
48
27
34
28
269
29
583
30
281
31
5
32
29
33
17
34
33
35
31
36
14
37
1
38
14
39
28
40
23
41
17
42
11
43
21
44
24
45
12
46
28
47
18
48
23
49
18
68.1592%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.417910447761194
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
28
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"he murmured, his low voice a gentle introduction to the symmetry of old habits (murmur)"
1
"she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more (agree, release whisper find)"
2
"he murmured, his low voice a gentle introduction to the symmetry of old habits (murmur)"
3
"she agreed, releasing a whispered breath as Evan's warm eyes found hers once more (agree, release whisper find)"
4
"Rory interjected, tucking a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear (interject, tuck)"
82.1050%