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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC9YYP5T2BVTXRKEC994F
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.002652
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to the patrons of The Raven's Nest as simply Rory, polished a mug with the sleeve of her worn denim jacket, her bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit bar with a practiced air. The soft hum of hushed conversations and the occasional clink of glasses against the wooden counter created a sense of comfort, a melody she'd grown accustomed to over the past year. It was a chilly autumn evening, and the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an eerie glow on the wet pavement outside, beckoning in the few brave souls willing to venture out into the rain. As she slid the mug onto the counter, a figure emerged from the drizzle, shaking the rain off their coat like a dog shedding water. The bell above the entrance jingled, announcing the newcomer's arrival. Rory's gaze idly followed the sound, her expression a mask of polite indifference—until her eyes met the stranger's. Time stuttered. The man, now standing just inside the doorway, was a specter from her past. It had been years—five, to be exact—since Rory had last seen him. The soft lighting of the bar
seemed to
sharpen, highlighting the changes in his appearance. His hair, once a rich, dark blond, now bore streaks of grey, and the sharp jawline
was softened
by the shadow of a beard. But it was the eyes, hazel and
unwavering
, that
truly
gave him away. "Evan," she whispered, the name barely audible over the ambient noise. Evan's eyes, locked onto hers, betrayed a
flicker
of surprise before smoothing into a calm, practiced smile. The kind of smile that had once disarmed her, made her believe in the sincerity of his words. "Aurora," he replied, his voice deeper, tainted with a hint of an accent she didn't remember. The air around them
seemed to
thicken, heavy with
unspoken
regret and the
weight
of years. Rory felt the familiar contours of her composure
begin to
slip, like sand between fingers. She gripped the counter, the cool wood a
tangible
anchor to the present. Silas, ever the observant proprietor, noticed the exchange. His
eyes narrowed
slightly
as he continued to wipe down the counter, now positioning himself closer to Rory. His slight limp was more pronounced as he moved, a subtle reminder of the Lecture—that’s what she’d mentally dubbed his advice on preserving personal boundaries. Evan, seemingly unaware of the tension, strode towards the counter, his long coat flapping open to reveal a crisp white shirt, a
stark
contrast to the casual attire of the bar's regulars. "Just a whiskey, please. Neat," he told Silas, his gaze drifting back to Rory. "I see you're still in one piece, Laila." "Aurora," she corrected, her voice firm but controlled. Only a handful of people still called her Laila, and he hadn't earned the right to be among them. "Just Rory, now." Silas slid a glass filled with a generous pour of whiskey towards Evan, his eyes never leaving the man's face. "On the house, for old times' sake," he said, his tone neutral, yet carrying an undercurrent of caution. Evan raised the glass in a silent toast before taking a sip, his eyes locked onto Rory's. She felt a flush rise to her cheeks, not from the intensity of his gaze, but from the anger
simmering
just below the surface. Anger at herself, for the lingering vulnerability his presence awakened. They stood there, suspended in a silence that grew more
oppressive
by the second. It was Silas who tactfully intervened, his voice a gentle intrusion into the standoff. "Rory, why don't you take a break? Catch up with your...friend." The implication was clear: either reconcile in private or take the tension elsewhere. Rory nodded, a curt jerk of her head, before turning towards the hidden back room, accessible through a nondescript bookshelf. A place where secrets were shared and true faces revealed, away from prying eyes. Evan followed, the soft creak of the bookshelf as it swung open, then closed behind them, enveloping them in a space no larger than a closet. The dim light in here was almost comforting, a reminder of the countless nights she'd shared confidences with Silas within these
very
walls. The sudden privacy
seemed to
strip away the pretenses, leaving only the
stark
reality of their past and present. Evan leaned against the wall, his eyes never leaving hers, a mixture of sadness and longing
etched
on his face. "Aurora, I—" "Don't," she interrupted, her voice
barely above a whisper
, yet laced with steel. "You don't get to call me that, not after e
very
thing. It's Rory. Just Rory." The space between them was heavy with
unspoken
words, regrets, and the shadows of what could have been. For a moment, they just breathed, the air thick with the
weight
of time and unresolved emotions. Then, in a move that caught her off guard, Evan pushed off the wall and took a step closer. "Rory, then," he began, his voice
tinged
with a sincerity that made her heart flutter, despite her better judgment. "I was wrong, on e
very
level. I know that now. If I could go back..." His words trailed off, hanging in the air like a challenge, or perhaps a question. Rory's gaze met his, a vortex of emotions swirling within her. Forgiveness, anger, love, and hate, all tangled in a complicated
dance
. But as she looked into his eyes, she
realized that the
person standing before her was a stranger. A man bearing the face of her first love, her first heartbreak, but nonetheless, a stranger. And in this cramped, dimly lit space, surrounded by the silent ghosts of what could have been, Rory found the strength to confront the truth. "Too late," she whispered, the finality of those two words cutting through the tension like a blade. "Years too late." The sound of the bookshelf creaking open was her cue to leave. As she stepped back into the warm, golden light of The Raven's Nest, the chill of the autumn evening outside
seemed to
pale in comparison to the frost that had just formed around her heart. She knew in that moment, as she returned to polishing mugs with a steady hand, that some wounds, even with the passage of time, might never fully heal. Yet, it was in embracing this pain that she found a glimmer of peace, a sense of closure, and the promise of a tomorrow, free from the ghosts of her past.
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2/17/2026, 2:21:12 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she whispered, the name barely audible over the ambient noise [barely]"
1
"she interrupted, her voice barely above a whisper, yet laced with steel [barely]"
63.1336%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1085
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
2
"truly"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1085
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"tangible"
count
1
1
word
"tinged"
count
1
2
word
"simmering"
count
1
3
word
"flicker"
count
1
4
word
"oppressive"
count
1
5
word
"unwavering"
count
1
6
word
"unspoken"
count
2
7
word
"stark"
count
2
8
word
"weight"
count
2
9
word
"dance"
count
1
10
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"tangible"
1
"tinged"
2
"simmering"
3
"flicker"
4
"oppressive"
5
"unwavering"
6
"unspoken"
7
"stark"
8
"weight"
9
"dance"
10
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
56
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
56
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"begin to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"realized that the"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
24
mean
45.04
std
25.21
cv
0.56
sampleLengths
0
105
1
53
2
2
3
78
4
11
5
51
6
44
7
51
8
54
9
30
10
38
11
51
12
39
13
47
14
49
15
39
16
2
17
27
18
35
19
53
20
37
21
59
22
20
23
106
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
56
matches
0
"was softened"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
156
matches
(empty)
99.4450%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1009
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.040634291377601585
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.014866204162537165
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
63
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
63
mean
17.16
std
7.8
cv
0.454
sampleLengths
0
37
1
31
2
37
3
25
4
10
5
18
6
2
7
14
8
12
9
15
10
24
11
13
12
11
13
17
14
18
15
16
16
16
17
15
18
13
19
8
20
18
21
25
22
32
23
14
24
8
25
8
26
19
27
3
28
20
29
18
30
17
31
24
32
10
33
14
34
14
35
11
36
13
37
20
38
14
39
26
40
23
41
19
42
20
43
2
44
13
45
14
46
18
47
17
48
19
49
19
66.6667%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.42857142857142855
totalSentences
63
uniqueOpeners
27
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, the name barely audible over the ambient noise (whisper)"
1
"he replied, his voice deeper, tainted with a hint of an accent she didn't remember (reply, taint does not remember)"
2
"she corrected, her voice firm but controlled (correct)"
3
"he said, his tone neutral, yet carrying an undercurrent of caution (say, carry)"
4
"she interrupted, her voice barely above a whisper, yet laced with steel (interrupt, lace)"
5
"he began, his voice tinged with a sincerity that made her heart flutter, despite her better judgment (begin, tinged make)"
6
"she whispered, the finality of those two words cutting through the tension like a blade (whisper, cut like)"
81.1321%