Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCBW0MH8Y0803Y6NTM5VV

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Duration:
41.1s
Cost:
$0.000097
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest cast a gaudy glow on the damp pavement of Soho's fog-shrouded streets. Rory pushed open the door, the bell above it letting out a tired jingle as she slipped into the dimly lit bar. Silas, behind the counter, raised an eyebrow in her direction, his hazel eyes flicking from her to the menu in his hand before settling back on her. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the silence between them a palpable thing. It had been years since they'd last spoken, years since Rory had fled London for Cardiff. She'd left behind a life she couldn't face, a past that still lingered like a shadow in the back of her mind. And now, here she was, standing in Silas' bar, her eyes locked on the man who'd been her closest friend, her confidant, her guide in the darkest of times. The years had not been kind to Silas. His grey-streaked auburn hair was longer, his beard neatly trimmed, and his eyes, once bright with a spark of mischief, now seemed to hold a world of weariness. A slight limp in his left leg gave him a slightly off-kilter gait as he made his way around the counter, his silver signet ring glinting in the bar's muted light. "Rory," he said, his voice low and gravelly, as he opened his arms in a warm, if cautious, welcome. Rory hesitated for a moment before stepping forward, into the circle of his arms. The air was thick with unspoken questions, with the weight of time and the quiet regret that seemed to hang between them like a challenge. They stood there for a long moment, holding each other, the bar's patrons blurred into the background as they reconnected, the familiarity of his arms, the scent of his skin, a balm to the soul. Rory felt a lump form in her throat as she pulled back, her eyes scanning the bar, her gaze settling on the old maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls. "God, it's been ages," she said, trying to keep her voice light, but her eyes betraying the depth of her emotions. "Ages," Silas echoed, his face softening into a warm, gentle smile. "I'd almost forgotten what you looked like." Rory laughed, feeling a little shy, a little self-conscious under his gaze. "I'm sure I've changed a bit since Cardiff." "You look different," Silas said, his eyes running over her, taking in the straight shoulder-length black hair, the bright blue eyes that sparkled with a hint of mischief. "But you still have that same spark, that same quick wit. It's like no time has passed at all." Rory felt a pang of uncertainty at his words. Had she really changed that little? Or was it just that Silas didn't know her the way he used to? The way she used to be? The way she'd hoped to be, but circumstances had taken from her. They sat down at the bar, the stool creaking beneath Rory as she perched on it. Silas slid a glass of red wine in front of her, his eyes never leaving hers. "I have to ask," he said, his voice low and serious, "what happened? What drove you back to London?" Rory felt a familiar surge of defensiveness at his question, but it was tempered by the warmth in his eyes, the genuine concern that seemed to emanate from him. She took a sip of the wine, feeling it burn down her throat as she began to tell him the story, the one she'd kept hidden for so long. "The law didn't work out," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I tried to make a life for myself in Cardiff, but it was just a shell of what I wanted. I felt stuck, trapped. And then there was Evan." Silas' eyes darkened at the mention of the name, his face twisting into a scowl. "I'm so sorry, Rory," he said, his voice filled with regret. "I had no idea. You never said a word." Rory shrugged, feeling a little defensive. "I didn't want to burden you with my problems. Besides, you had your own demons to deal with." Silas nodded, his eyes dropping to the floor as he reached for his glass. For a moment, they sat in silence, the only sound the murmur of the bar's patrons, the clinking of glasses, and the soft hum of the neon sign outside. "I'm sorry I wasn't there for you, Rory," Silas said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I'm sorry I didn't see the signs." Rory's eyes pricked with tears as she reached out, her hand closing over his, the warmth of his skin a comfort. "You didn't know, Si," she said, her voice shaking. "You couldn't have known. I was so good at hiding it." Silas squeezed her hand, his eyes locked on hers. "I should have seen it," he said, his voice a little stronger now. "I should have been there for you. You were my friend, Rory. My sister. I should have seen it." Rory felt a lump form in her throat as she leaned forward, her forehead pressing against Silas', the tears she'd been holding back finally spilling down her cheeks. They sat there for a long moment, the bar's patrons blurring into the background as they held each other, the weight of time and unspoken regret finally given voice. As the night wore on, the bar's music grew louder, the crowd thicker, but Silas and Rory sat, lost in their own world, the past and present colliding in a messy, beautiful dance. And in that moment, as they held each other, as they spoke of the past and the present, Rory felt a weight lift off her shoulders, a weight she'd carried for so long. She felt seen, she felt heard, she felt understood. And in the quiet, dark recesses of her heart, she felt a spark of hope, a spark that she'd thought had long since been extinguished. As the night drew to a close, as the music died down and the patrons began to filter out, Silas leaned back, his eyes scanning the bar as he searched for his staff. Rory stood, her hand brushing against his as she pulled back. "Thank you," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Thank you for listening, for understanding. It's been a long time coming." Silas smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "You're welcome, Rory," he said, his voice low and rough. "You're always welcome here. In my bar, in my life. You're family." Rory felt a lump form in her throat as she nodded, a smile spreading across her face. She leaned forward, her lips brushing against his cheek in a soft, gentle kiss. "I'll see you soon," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas nodded, his eyes locked on hers. "I'll be here," he said, his voice low and steady. "I'll be here, waiting for you." As Rory slipped out into the cool night air, the fog swirling around her like a shroud, she felt a sense of peace settle over her, a sense of belonging she'd thought she'd lost forever. And as she walked away from The Raven's Nest, the neon sign's glow fading into the distance, she knew that she'd found her way back, that she'd found her place in the world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count4
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"palpable"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"scanning"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count4
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count2
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"silence"
2"palpable"
3"glinting"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"scanning"
7"echoed"
8"pang"
9"familiar"
10"warmth"
11"whisper"
12"dance"
13"sense of"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"a spark of hope"
22.66% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells7
narrationSentences57
matches
0"felt a lump"
1"filled with regret"
2"d with regret"
3"felt a lump"
4"a spark of hope"
5"felt a lump"
6"a sense of belonging"
17.54% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1244
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount979
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Rory16
London1
Cardiff1
Silas13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.683
windowScore0.833
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"regret that seemed to hang between them like a challenge"
1"concern that seemed to emanate from him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1244
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"knew that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean36.59
std23.51
cv0.643
sampleLengths
088
167
267
358
466
521
618
720
847
947
1032
1119
1258
1342
1415
1520
1624
1743
1823
1921
2020
219
2232
2357
24100
2544
2622
278
2822
2931
3012
317
3216
3368
92.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"was tempered"
1"been extinguished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was, standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences70
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount298
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.0436241610738255
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.006711409395973154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean17.77
std8.83
cv0.497
sampleLengths
023
122
227
316
416
522
629
78
828
931
1019
1114
1225
1335
1431
1521
1611
177
1812
198
2028
2119
229
236
2414
256
2612
2716
2816
2919
3029
3129
3213
3329
3415
3511
369
376
3818
3914
4029
4116
427
4321
449
4511
469
4713
4819
4928
37.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2714285714285714
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences57
matches
0"It had been years since"
1"She'd left behind a life"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"They stood there for a"
5"she said, trying to keep"
6"They sat down at the"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"She took a sip of"
9"she said, her voice barely"
10"he said, his voice filled"
11"she said, her voice shaking"
12"he said, his voice a"
13"They sat there for a"
14"She felt seen, she felt"
15"she said, her voice barely"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"She leaned forward, her lips"
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"he said, his voice low"
ratio0.351
56.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences57
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory pushed open the door,"
2"Silas, behind the counter, raised"
3"It had been years since"
4"She'd left behind a life"
5"The years had not been"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
7"A slight limp in his"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"Rory hesitated for a moment"
10"The air was thick with"
11"They stood there for a"
12"Rory felt a lump form"
13"she said, trying to keep"
14"Silas echoed, his face softening"
15"Rory laughed, feeling a little"
16"Silas said, his eyes running"
17"Rory felt a pang of"
18"The way she used to"
19"The way she'd hoped to"
ratio0.807
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air was thick with unspoken questions, with the weight of time and the quiet regret that seemed to hang between them like a challenge."
1"Rory felt a lump form in her throat as she pulled back, her eyes scanning the bar, her gaze settling on the old maps and black-and-white photographs that adorne…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Silas echoed, his face softening into a warm, gentle smile"
1"he said, his voice low and serious,"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"Silas said, his voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice shaking"
5"he said, his voice a little stronger now"
6"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, his voice low and rough"
8"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"he said, his voice low and steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.4344%