Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
922
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.03470715835140998
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.01843817787418655
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
87
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
87
mean
16.54
std
9.61
cv
0.581
sampleLengths
0
23
1
33
2
36
3
21
4
14
5
16
6
11
7
18
8
12
9
18
10
32
11
15
12
12
13
20
14
23
15
13
16
7
17
10
18
11
19
31
20
41
21
5
22
19
23
16
24
7
25
7
26
16
27
30
28
4
29
2
30
16
31
8
32
11
33
16
34
27
35
14
36
13
37
19
38
4
39
7
40
13
41
12
42
21
43
11
44
39
45
11
46
30
47
15
48
15
49
11
76.2452%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.47126436781609193
totalSentences
87
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
16
fancyCount
13
fancyTags
0
"he said, a smile breaking across his face, illuminating the shadowy corners of the room (say, break illuminate)"
1
"she replied, her voice carrying a hint of warmth despite the chill that laced her fingertips (reply, carry lace)"
2
"he said, gesturing to a pair of patrons nursing their drinks by the window (say, gesture nurse)"
3
"he echoed, pondering the weight of time that hung between them (echo, ponder hang)"
4
"he began, cautious (begin)"
5
"he interrupted gently, his eyes fixated on a spot behind her (interrupt gently, fixate)"
6
"he said quietly, lifting his chin to meet her gaze directly (say quietly, lift meet)"
7
"she admitted, the softness in her voice breaking amidst the fog (admit, break)"
8
"he interjected, a spark igniting in his eyes, His gaze dropped, tracing the lines of the bar top, a moment of contemplation for both (interject, ignite drop, trace)"
9
"he said, pulling his gaze away from hers and looking into the distance, as if searching for ways around shadows (say, pull look into search)"
10
"she murmured, surprised at the whisper of hope in her voice (murmur, surprise)"
11
"Silas replied, a warmth kindling in his eyes (reply, kindle)"