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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPCNPM1WJ5RBW1HX5HRHK2
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.000721
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to her closest friends as Rory, stepped into the shadows of Richmond Park. The Fae Grove, or Isolde's grove as some whispered,
was cloaked
in a hazy twilight that
seemed to
defy the night. The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, their gnarled trunks like guardians of a forgotten realm. Rory paused, her breath visible in the cool air, and she adjusted the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, a reassuring warmth against her skin. She had come here for a reason, though she couldn't quite place it. A message, perhaps? A summons? The note she had received was cryptic, written in a hand she didn't recognize. _"Meet me in the Grove. Midnight."_ Rory’s steps were cautious, her eyes scanning the underbrush. The wildflowers, blooming year-round, added a
surreal
touch to the clearing.
The air was thick with
the scent of earth and something else, something ancient and potent. A chill ran down her spine, but she pushed it aside, focusing on the path before her. The grove was a place of mystery, and she had always
been drawn
to the unknown. As she walked deeper into the clearing, the sounds of the city faded, replaced by the rustling of leaves and the distant call of an unseen creature. The trees
loomed
overhead, their branches swaying
gently
in the breeze. Rory’s
footsteps
were muffled
, as if the earth itself
was trying
to hide her presence. A sound caught her ear—a faint whisper, like the wind through the leaves, but deeper, more deliberate. She stopped, her eyes narrowing. _Was someone
watch
ing her?_ She turned, her gaze sweeping the perimeter, but saw nothing. Shaking her head, she continued forward, her heartbeat a steady drum in her chest. The grove
seemed to
stretch endlessly, yet time felt different here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, and Rory couldn’t shake the feeling that the passage of time was
being manipulated
. She glanced at her
watch
, but the hands were still. Time itself
seemed to
be suspended in the Grove. Another sound, this time a soft rustle from the bushes to her left. Rory’s hand automatically went to the pendant, and she felt the familiar warmth spread through her. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her nerves. _It’s just the wind,_ she told herself, but the reassurance rang hollow. The air grew colder, and
a sense of unease
settled over her. Shadows
seemed to
move at the edge of her vision, fleeting shapes that darted away when she turned to look. Rory’s pace quickened, her senses on high alert. She knew she shouldn’t be here alone, especially at night, but the message had been urgent, and she had trusted her intuition. A sudden gust of wind sent the leaves swirling around her, and a low, mournful cry
echoed
through the trees. Rory’s heart skipped a beat. The sound was unlike anything she had ever heard, a mix of sorrow and warning. She stopped, her breath coming in shallow gasps. _What was that?_ She turned in a slow circle, her eyes scanning the darkness. The standing stones
loomed
around her, their presence
oppressive
. The grove felt alive, as if it
were watching
her, waiting. Rory’s skin prickled with a sense of being observed, and she could almost feel eyes on her back. A movement, this time a clear and deliberate one, caught her eye. A figure, cloaked in darkness, stood at the edge of the clearing. Rory’s
heart pounded in her chest
, and she took a tentative step forward. “Who’s there?” she called out, her voice steady despite the fear growing within her. The figure didn’t move, but the air around it
seemed to
shimmer, as if it were a mirage. Rory’s hand tightened around the pendant, and she felt a surge of power, a connection to something ancient and powerful. The pendant pulsed more strongly, and the air around her grew warmer. The figure took a step forward, and Rory gasped. It was a woman, her face obscured by a hood, but the aura of
otherworldly
grace was unmistakable. “Rory,” the woman said, her voice a soft, haunting melody. “You have come.” Rory’s breath caught in her throat. “Who are you?” she demanded, her voice trembling
slightly
. “I am Isolde,” the woman replied, her voice carrying the
weight
of centuries. “Guardian of the Grove.” Rory’s mind raced. Isolde, the name of the grove’s protector. She had heard the stories, whispered in hushed tones, but she had never believed them. “Why did you bring me here?” she asked, her voice steady despite the panic rising in her chest. Isolde stepped forward, and the shadows around her shifted, revealing a face of breathtaking beauty, marred by an ancient sorrow. “You are connected to the Heartstone,” she said, her eyes locking onto the pendant. “It is a powerful artifact, one that should not fall into the wrong hands.” Rory’s fingers traced the warm gemstone. “What do you mean?” she asked, her voice
barely above a whisper
. “A darkness is rising,” Isolde continued, her voice heavy with
foreboding
. “A force that seeks to undo the balance between the realms. The Heartstone is the key to stopping it, but it must be wielded by one who understands its true power.” Rory’s mind reeled. “I don’t understand,” she said, her grip on the pendant tightening. “I just got this. How can I be the one to wield it?” Isolde’s gaze softened, and she reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against Rory’s. “You are chosen, Rory Carter. Your path has led you here, and your strength will guide you through the darkness that lies ahead.” A shiver ran down Rory’s spine, but she felt a strange sense of resolve. She had always
been drawn
to the unknown, to the challenges that lay beyond the familiar. “What do I need to do?” she asked, her voice steady. Isolde’s eyes glowed with a faint inner light. “You must journey to the heart of the Grove, where the boundary between worlds is thinnest. There, you will find the key to unlocking the Heartstone’s true power. But be wary, for the darkness will seek to corrupt you.” Rory’s heart raced, but she nodded. “I’ll do it,” she said, her resolve hardening. “But I won’t do it alone.” Isolde smiled, a sorrowful smile that spoke of ages past. “You will not be alone. I will guide you, but the path ahead is yours to walk.” Rory took a deep breath and stepped forward, the pendant’s warmth a constant presence at her neck. The grove
seemed to
shift around her, the shadows deepening, the air growing colder. But she didn’t falter. She had a purpose now, a mission that felt as ancient as the grove itself. As she moved deeper into the heart of the Grove, the sounds of the night grew quieter, replaced by an eerie silence. The standing stones
loomed
around her, their presence both
oppressive
and protective. Rory’s steps
were measured
, her senses heightened. She was alone, but she was not afraid. The darkness pulsed around her, a living entity that
seemed to
test her resolve. But with each step, the Heartstone grew warmer, its faint glow a
beacon
in the shadows. Rory’s heart was heavy, but her spirit was unbreakable. She was Aurora Carter, and she was ready to face whatever lay ahead.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
75.7282%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"slightly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
2.9126%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"beacon"
count
1
1
word
"foreboding"
count
1
2
word
"oppressive"
count
2
3
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
4
word
"surreal"
count
1
5
word
"loomed"
count
3
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
8
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"beacon"
1
"foreboding"
2
"oppressive"
3
"otherworldly"
4
"surreal"
5
"loomed"
6
"weight"
7
"footsteps"
8
"echoed"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"a sense of unease"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
7
narrationSentences
87
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
96
matches
(empty)
56.8256%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
44.07
std
15.38
cv
0.349
sampleLengths
0
84
1
38
2
69
3
53
4
50
5
53
6
51
7
62
8
51
9
49
10
51
11
50
12
40
13
15
14
17
15
43
16
48
17
18
18
42
19
27
20
37
21
41
22
47
23
20
24
27
25
50
26
49
27
52
87.3563%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"was cloaked"
1
"been drawn"
2
"were muffled"
3
"being manipulated"
4
"been drawn"
5
"were measured"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
180
matches
0
"was trying"
1
"were watching"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1040
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.02403846153846154
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.008653846153846154
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
12.85
std
6.15
cv
0.478
sampleLengths
0
16
1
21
2
17
3
18
4
12
5
13
6
3
7
2
8
14
9
6
10
9
11
11
12
16
13
17
14
16
15
27
16
11
17
15
18
17
19
5
20
14
21
14
22
11
23
23
24
10
25
9
26
13
27
16
28
10
29
12
30
12
31
20
32
8
33
22
34
20
35
5
36
15
37
8
38
3
39
11
40
9
41
11
42
18
43
12
44
12
45
13
46
14
47
18
48
20
49
12
41.6667%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.22916666666666666
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
22
15.9091%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"the woman said, her voice a soft, haunting melody (say, voice)"
1
"demanded (demand)"
2
"the woman replied, her voice carrying the weight of centuries (reply, carry)"
3
"she said, her eyes locking onto the pendant (say, lock)"
4
"Isolde continued, her voice heavy with foreboding (continue)"
5
"she said, her grip on the pendant tightening (say, tighten)"
6
"she said, her resolve hardening (say, harden)"
77.2783%