| 22.2222% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said, as if she'd just climbed off a bus from the north of England [just]" |
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| 75.8953% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 2904 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "loosely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "truly" |
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| 80.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.2342% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 2904 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "testament" | | 2 | "beacon" | | 3 | "sentinel" | | 4 | "porcelain" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "fragmented" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "etched" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 27 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 28 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 63.04 | | std | 60.66 | | cv | 0.962 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 103 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 194 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 103 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 202 | | 9 | 249 | | 10 | 101 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 71 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 182 | | 22 | 72 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 166 | | 28 | 102 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 91 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 92 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 64 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 57 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 53 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 187 | | 44 | 54 | | 45 | 10 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 387 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.1800% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2870 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "under warm hand-massagingsensuous spreads-" | | 1 | "accurate enthusiastic continuous van" | | 2 | "instrumental comparable flexible purchasing" |
| | adverbCount | 82 | | adverbRatio | 0.02857142857142857 | | lyAdverbCount | 74 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02578397212543554 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 28 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 28 | | mean | 103.57 | | std | 270.7 | | cv | 2.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 1233 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 868 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 86 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 241 | | 27 | 10 |
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| 100.0000% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7037037037037037 | | totalSentences | 27 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he said, as if she'd just climbed off a bus from the north of England (say, just climb)" | | 1 | "Now, (now)" | | 2 | "she returned, using the term with the familiarity of a sibling's nickname (return, use)" |
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