Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPD7NCQYMVWK53M9RAJEC6

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.000640
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain was a relentless downpour, pounding the cobblestones of Soho like a thousand impatient fingers. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted down the narrow alley, her breath coming in sharp gasps. The woman she pursued—blood-mેએred arms outstretched, unnatural grace in her every step—glanced back with a cruel grin that gleamed fang-white in the dim glow of a gas lamp. "C'mon, copper. You're losing your touch," the woman taunted, her voice a throaty purr. Quinn snarled and redoubled her efforts, ignoring the throb of her . Ahead, the woman skidded to a halt at a dead end, a wall of damp brick barring her path. She turned, a slow, predatory pivot, and flashed a smirk. "Looks like my lucky night." But as Quinn closed in, the woman lunged, not at her, but the wall. Her hand closed around a rusted door handle, hidden in the shadows. With a curse, Quinn dove, fingers scrambling for purchase as the door swung shut, plunging the alley into darkness. For a moment, the detective sprawled on the wet ground, the cool, stinking rain plastering her hair to her skull. Then she was on her feet, groping feverishly for the handle. The door yielded with a groan, revealing a narrow flight of . She took the stairs three at a time, the pain in her ribs forgotten in the heat of pursuit. The stairs ended in a vast, echoing space. Quinn blinked, rainwater dripping from her lashes. An abandoned station, ancient brick arches stretching into shadow. The , bones bleached and glistening under the sickly fluorescent lights. A dozen pedestals topped with cloaked figures, low murmurs of conversation. The market was laid out before her like a feast. Her suspect stood a few yards away, leaning against a cracked pillar, ankles crossed as if waiting for a bus. "Took you long enough," she said, enjoying the detective's surprise. Quinn planted her feet, every sense on high alert. "Where is it?" she demanded, touching the . "Tell me now, and walk away." The woman laughed, a cold, sharp sound. "You really have no idea where you are, do you?" She pushed off from the pillar and sauntered closer, hips swaying. "Welcome to the Veil Market, Detective. The place where your kind isn't welcome." Quinn's grip tightened on her baton. Her experience told her to run, to get help, to surround the area. But her instincts screamed to pursue. Three years, three years since Morris disappeared, and her last lead was staring her in the face, smirking like it had a secret. She couldn't let her slip away. "Last chance," Quinn said, leveling the baton. The woman rolled her eyes and spun on her heel, disappearing into the Market's maw. The detective followed at a wary trot, her gaze darting from stall to stall. A peddler in a shabby cloak offered her worn tomes with flowery titles like "Rituals of the Old Religion" and "The Summoner's Compendium." A stall frequented by pale, translucent figures jostled for space, reaching rotting fingers for a vile that glowed an angry red. Quinn's nose wrinkled at the rank, metallic scent. Her quarry led her to a dead-end - a handful of stalls radiating an aura of menace. The wall of a . "Bomei." A tall figure in a stark white lab coat emerged from the shadows, gold-spectacled gaze fixed on Quinn. "And who have you brought me?" The woman, Bomei, inclined her head in deference. "Detective Quin, I present Doctor fulfillment stacks Doctor Kesari. She and her colleagues specialise in off-the-books treatments."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount593
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount593
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"maw"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"throb"
2"echoing"
3"glistening"
4"maw"
5"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
42.15% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences4
adjustedGibberishSentences4
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0.089
matches
0"Quinn snarled and redoubled her efforts, ignoring the throb of her ."
1"The door yielded with a groan, revealing a narrow flight of ."
2"The , bones bleached and glistening under the sickly fluorescent lights."
3"\"Where is it?\" she demanded, touching the ."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords595
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount513
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Morris1
Market1
Bomei1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Bomei"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore0.525
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if waiting for a bus"
31.93% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.681
wordCount595
matches
0"not at her, but the wall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean37.19
std20.68
cv0.556
sampleLengths
064
114
212
334
445
562
656
730
823
941
1054
117
1281
1322
1425
1525
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"was laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs89
matches
0"was staring"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences45
ratio0.044
matches
0"The woman she pursued—blood-mેએred arms outstretched, unnatural grace in her every step—glanced back with a cruel grin that gleamed fang-white in the dim glow of a gas lamp."
1"Her quarry led her to a dead-end - a handful of stalls radiating an aura of menace."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount515
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.015533980582524271
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003883495145631068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean13.22
std7.21
cv0.546
sampleLengths
016
120
228
314
412
519
610
75
814
912
1019
1120
1211
1312
1419
158
167
179
1811
1911
2010
2120
2210
239
248
256
267
2721
2813
296
3013
316
3223
336
347
3515
3614
3744
388
3917
405
4119
426
438
4417
82.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5111111111111111
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners23
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Then she was on her"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences40
matches
0"She turned, a slow, predatory"
1"Her hand closed around a"
2"She took the stairs three"
3"Her suspect stood a few"
4"she said, enjoying the detective's"
5"she demanded, touching the"
6"She pushed off from the"
7"Her experience told her to"
8"She couldn't let her slip"
9"Her quarry led her to"
ratio0.25
47.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences40
matches
0"The rain was a relentless"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"The woman she pursued—blood—mેએred arms"
3"the woman taunted, her voice"
4"Quinn snarled and redoubled her"
5"She turned, a slow, predatory"
6"Her hand closed around a"
7"The door yielded with a"
8"She took the stairs three"
9"The stairs ended in a"
10"Quinn blinked, rainwater dripping from"
11"An abandoned station, ancient brick"
12"The , bones bleached and"
13"A dozen pedestals topped with"
14"The market was laid out"
15"Her suspect stood a few"
16"she said, enjoying the detective's"
17"Quinn planted her feet, every"
18"she demanded, touching the"
19"The woman laughed, a cold,"
ratio0.825
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The woman she pursued—blood-mેએred arms outstretched, unnatural grace in her every step—glanced back with a cruel grin that gleamed fang-white in the dim glow o…"
1"Her suspect stood a few yards away, leaning against a cracked pillar, ankles crossed as if waiting for a bus."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the woman taunted, her voice a throaty purr"
1"She pushed, hips swaying"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the woman taunted (taunt)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
75.1369%