| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 593 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 593 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "maw" | | 5 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 42.15% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 4 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 4 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn snarled and redoubled her efforts, ignoring the throb of her ." | | 1 | "The door yielded with a groan, revealing a narrow flight of ." | | 2 | "The , bones bleached and glistening under the sickly fluorescent lights." | | 3 | "\"Where is it?\" she demanded, touching the ." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 595 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 513 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 10 | | Morris | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Bomei | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Bomei" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.525 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if waiting for a bus" |
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| 31.93% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.681 | | wordCount | 595 | | matches | | 0 | "not at her, but the wall" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 37.19 | | std | 20.68 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 81 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 25 |
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| 96.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 89 | | matches | | |
| 15.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "The woman she pursued—blood-mેએred arms outstretched, unnatural grace in her every step—glanced back with a cruel grin that gleamed fang-white in the dim glow of a gas lamp." | | 1 | "Her quarry led her to a dead-end - a handful of stalls radiating an aura of menace." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 515 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.015533980582524271 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003883495145631068 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 13.22 | | std | 7.21 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 17 |
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| 82.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5111111111111111 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, a slow, predatory" | | 1 | "Her hand closed around a" | | 2 | "She took the stairs three" | | 3 | "Her suspect stood a few" | | 4 | "she said, enjoying the detective's" | | 5 | "she demanded, touching the" | | 6 | "She pushed off from the" | | 7 | "Her experience told her to" | | 8 | "She couldn't let her slip" | | 9 | "Her quarry led her to" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 47.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain was a relentless" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed" | | 2 | "The woman she pursued—blood—mેએred arms" | | 3 | "the woman taunted, her voice" | | 4 | "Quinn snarled and redoubled her" | | 5 | "She turned, a slow, predatory" | | 6 | "Her hand closed around a" | | 7 | "The door yielded with a" | | 8 | "She took the stairs three" | | 9 | "The stairs ended in a" | | 10 | "Quinn blinked, rainwater dripping from" | | 11 | "An abandoned station, ancient brick" | | 12 | "The , bones bleached and" | | 13 | "A dozen pedestals topped with" | | 14 | "The market was laid out" | | 15 | "Her suspect stood a few" | | 16 | "she said, enjoying the detective's" | | 17 | "Quinn planted her feet, every" | | 18 | "she demanded, touching the" | | 19 | "The woman laughed, a cold," |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The woman she pursued—blood-mેએred arms outstretched, unnatural grace in her every step—glanced back with a cruel grin that gleamed fang-white in the dim glow o…" | | 1 | "Her suspect stood a few yards away, leaning against a cracked pillar, ankles crossed as if waiting for a bus." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman taunted, her voice a throaty purr" | | 1 | "She pushed, hips swaying" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the woman taunted (taunt)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |