Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPD9NVBA63PJX7Y727MKRR

Run Details

Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.002243
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to few in this hidden corner of London as Rory, stepped through the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove, the trees' gnarled silhouettes looming like sentinels against the moon. She had always felt an otherworldly pull to this place, a spot where the fabric between worlds was said to be at its thinnest. Tonight, she had a purpose for braving its isolated depths: to understand the strange, pulsing warmth emanating from the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. The silver chain glinted, catching slivers of moonlight that managed to penetrate the canopy above, as she made her way deeper into the clearing. Wildflowers, blooming defiantly in the dead of night, swayed gently in the breeze, their colors muted in the pale light. Rory's bright blue eyes, accustomed to the city's harsh glare, took a moment to adjust to the Grove's soft, ethereal luminescence. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair blended with the shadows, rendering her all but invisible as she moved. Her footsteps, the only sound in the stillness, seemed to echo more in her mind than in reality, each step a reminder that time moved differently here. An hour within the Grove's embrace could mean anything from mere minutes to lost days outside its bounds. The thought sent a shiver down her spine, but Rory pressed on, driven by a mix of curiosity and the unsettling feeling that the Heartstone Pendant was awakening to something. As she reached the clearing's center, Rory paused, her gaze sweeping the area. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to prickle with a memory, but it was the pendant that held her attention. Its deep crimson gemstone pulsed with a faint, inner warmth, more pronounced here than it had ever been in the bustling streets of London. She lifted the pendant, its size no larger than a thumbnail, and turned it, watching as the light danced within its depths. "A sign of what?" Rory whispered to herself, the sound swallowed by the Grove's oppressive silence. She had received the Heartstone Pendant from an unknown benefactor, with no message or indication of its origins, save for the faint Dymas inscription etched into the back of the silver chain's clasp. The stillness around her began to feel heavy, oppressive, as if the Grove itself was waiting. Rory's cool-headed nature, honed from years of navigating Cardiff's legal circles and later, the complexities of her own turbulent life, began to falter under the weight of the unblinking, dark watches of the trees. It started with the sound of leaves shifting, too delicate to be attributed to the wind, too intentional to be a small animal. Rory's head turned sharply to her right, her eyes narrowing as she strained to see into the darkness. The movement stopped as abruptly as it had begun, leaving behind a silence more unsettling than any sound. She took a deep breath, the air crisp with the scent of wildflowers, and continued her examination of the pendant, though her attention was now divided. The pulse within the gemstone seemed to quicken, or perhaps it was her heart, racing in anticipation of... something. A flicker of movement caught at the edge of her vision, gone before she could turn. Rory spun around, her back to the center of the clearing now, her eyes scouring the shadows. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice steady, though a tremor threatened to undermine her composure. The response was silence, and in its depths, a feeling grew—that she was being encircled, slowly, by unseen presences. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened, its warmth now a comforting beacon against the creeping chill. She took a step back, her heel catching on a hidden root. The jarring movement was enough to break the spell. With a swift motion, Rory slipped the pendant under her jacket, the silver chain cool against her skin, and began a deliberate, unhurried walk towards the boundary stones. Each step forward was met with an unshakeable sense that she was moving further away from escape, the standing stones remaining steadfast, yet somehow, impossibly, more distant. The wildflowers, once a gentle, soothing presence, now seemed to reach for her, their muted colors transformed into macabre, grasping fingers in her heightened state. It was then that the whispers began, soft, indistinguishable murmurs that wove in and out of the wind, always just out of reach. Rory quickened her pace, her heart pounding in her ears, drowning out the whispers, though their presence lingered, a cold, clammy touch on the back of her neck. She burst through the ancient oak standing stones, the city's distant hum and the moon's pale light enveloping her like a balm. Rory didn't stop running until she was back in the heart of Richmond, the Grove's terrors swallowed by the comforting anonymity of the night crowd. Breathless, she finally paused, looking back towards the unseen depths of Richmond Park, the Fae Grove hidden within its shadows. The Heartstone Pendant, still clutched in her hand, its pulsing warmth now a burning brand, reminded her that some mysteries were better left unexplored, yet it was too late. The darkness had seen her, and Rory could only wonder when it would come looking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"depths"
count4
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count2
11
word"silence"
count3
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"anticipation"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"comforting"
count2
20
word"beacon"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"macabre"
count1
23
word"quickened"
count1
24
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"otherworldly"
3"depths"
4"warmth"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
7"reminder"
8"down her spine"
9"pulsed"
10"oppressive"
11"silence"
12"etched"
13"navigating"
14"weight"
15"pulse"
16"racing"
17"anticipation"
18"flicker"
19"comforting"
20"beacon"
21"chill"
22"macabre"
23"quickened"
24"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences41
matches
0"g in anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences41
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords873
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount858
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London2
Rory13
Fae2
Grove7
Heartstone4
Pendant4
Dymas1
Cardiff1
Richmond2
Park1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Heartstone"
4"Cardiff"
5"Richmond"
6"Park"
globalScore0.742
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount873
matches(empty)
85.37% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"grew—that she"
30.73% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean58.2
std14.99
cv0.258
sampleLengths
085
182
275
381
449
550
659
745
849
935
1049
1152
1251
1347
1464
79.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences41
matches
0"was said"
1"being encircled"
2"was met"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was awakening"
1"was waiting"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences41
ratio0.024
matches
0"The response was silence, and in its depths, a feeling grew—that she was being encircled, slowly, by unseen presences."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount30
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
68.17% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean21.29
std6.82
cv0.32
sampleLengths
037
124
224
324
420
521
617
727
818
930
1013
1122
1224
1322
1416
1533
1616
1734
1823
1918
2018
2126
2218
231
2416
2517
2616
2719
2816
2912
309
3128
3227
3325
3423
3528
3622
3725
3820
3929
4015
64.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences40
matches
0"She had always felt an"
1"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
2"Her footsteps, the only sound"
3"Its deep crimson gemstone pulsed"
4"She lifted the pendant, its"
5"She had received the Heartstone"
6"It started with the sound"
7"She took a deep breath,"
8"she called out, her voice"
9"She took a step back,"
10"It was then that the"
11"She burst through the ancient"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences40
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to few"
1"She had always felt an"
2"Tonight, she had a purpose"
3"The silver chain glinted, catching"
4"Wildflowers, blooming defiantly in the"
5"Rory's bright blue eyes, accustomed"
6"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
7"Her footsteps, the only sound"
8"An hour within the Grove's"
9"The thought sent a shiver"
10"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
11"Its deep crimson gemstone pulsed"
12"She lifted the pendant, its"
13"Rory whispered to herself, the"
14"She had received the Heartstone"
15"The stillness around her began"
16"Rory's cool-headed nature, honed from"
17"It started with the sound"
18"Rory's head turned sharply to"
19"The movement stopped as abruptly"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The silver chain glinted, catching slivers of moonlight that managed to penetrate the canopy above, as she made her way deeper into the clearing."
1"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to prickle with a memory, but it was the pendant that held her attention."
2"The stillness around her began to feel heavy, oppressive, as if the Grove itself was waiting."
3"Rory quickened her pace, her heart pounding in her ears, drowning out the whispers, though their presence lingered, a cold, clammy touch on the back of her neck…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
70.7275%