Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDGFA1TY6GT9M1GA56NDW

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moon hung low over Richmond Park, casting a silvery glow that danced across the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the clearing, her breath visible in the crisp night air. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly against her palm, a subtle warmth that seemed to seep into her skin. The silver chain dangled between her fingers, catching the moonlight like a spider’s web. Rory had come to the Grove at the behest of a whisper, a half-remembered dream that tugged at the edges of her consciousness. The pendant had been left on her doorstep, wrapped in a scrap of velvet, with no note or explanation. It was the kind of mystery that Rory, with her quick mind and penchant for puzzles, couldn’t resist. But now, standing alone in the clearing, she felt a prickle of unease. The Grove was a place out of time, a pocket between worlds where wildflowers bloomed in defiance of the season. The air was thick with the scent of earth and something sweeter, a fragrance that clung to the back of her throat. Rory took a cautious step forward, her boots crunching softly on the frost-kissed grass. The sound seemed to echo, unnaturally loud in the stillness. She paused, listening. The night was alive with the rustle of leaves, the distant call of an owl. But beneath it all, there was something else—a low hum, almost imperceptible, like the murmur of a distant crowd. Rory turned slowly, scanning the shadows that pooled between the trees. The Grove was empty, but the feeling of being watched was undeniable, a weight pressing against her skin. Rory shook her head, trying to dispel the sensation. She was here for a reason, she reminded herself. The pendant had led her to this place, and she needed to understand why. She took another step, then another, moving deeper into the clearing. The standing stones loomed around her, their surfaces etched with patterns that seemed to shift and change in the moonlight. As she walked, the hum grew louder, resolving into a melody that tugged at her memory. It was a song she had heard before, in dreams and half-remembered moments, a lullaby that spoke of distant places and forgotten promises. Rory’s heart quickened, a mix of fear and anticipation. She reached out, her fingers brushing the rough bark of one of the stones. The surface was warm, almost alive, and she pulled back with a start. The pendant pulsed in her hand, a steady thrum that matched the rhythm of her heart. Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the warmth, the glow that seemed to seep into her bones. She could feel the Grove around her, the ancient power that thrummed beneath the earth, the whisper of leaves in the wind. It was a place of magic, of secrets and shadows, and she was not alone. A rustle in the underbrush made her freeze, her eyes snapping open. The shadows shifted, and for a moment, she thought she saw a figure standing at the edge of the clearing, watching her with eyes that glinted in the darkness. But when she blinked, the figure was gone, leaving only the whisper of leaves in its wake. Rory’s pulse raced, a cold sweat breaking out along her spine. She took a step back, her gaze darting from shadow to shadow. The feeling of wrongness was growing, a creeping dread that coiled in her stomach. She was being hunted, she realized, the thought as clear and sharp as the night air. She turned, ready to flee, but the Grove seemed to shift around her, the path she had taken disappearing into the shadows. Panic flared, but she forced it down, drawing on the cool-headedness that had seen her through so many tight spots. She needed to think, to find a way out before whatever lurked in the darkness closed in. The pendant was warm against her skin, a steady pulse that seemed to guide her. Rory took a deep breath, centering herself, and began to move, her steps careful and deliberate. The melody was louder now, a siren song that pulled at her senses, but she resisted, focusing instead on the path ahead. The Grove was a maze of shadows and light, the trees closing in around her as she moved. The hum was all around her, a living thing that thrummed in her bones. Rory’s breath came in shallow gasps, her heart a drumbeat in her ears. She could feel the presence behind her, a shadow that moved with her, matching her step for step. She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and went down hard, the impact jarring her bones. The pendant slipped from her grasp, skittering across the ground. Rory scrambled after it, her fingers closing around the cool metal just as the shadows surged forward. She rolled onto her back, the pendant clutched to her chest, and stared up at the figure looming over her. It was tall, impossibly so, its form shifting and changing like smoke. Eyes like burning coals stared down at her, and Rory felt a chill that cut to her core. The figure reached out, a hand of shadow and light, and Rory flinched, expecting the worst. But the touch was gentle, a brush of warmth that sent a shiver down her spine. The pendant pulsed in response, a bright flare of light that drove the shadows back. Rory scrambled to her feet, her heart pounding. The figure watched her, its expression unreadable, and she felt a strange sense of recognition, as if she had seen it before, in dreams and half-remembered moments. The melody was a roar in her ears now, a song of power and promise. The figure gestured, a slow, deliberate motion, and Rory understood. The pendant was a key, a guide, and she was meant to follow. She took a step forward, then another, the shadows parting before her. The path was clear now, a ribbon of moonlight that led deeper into the Grove. Rory hesitated, glancing back at the figure. It nodded, a slow, solemn gesture, and she felt a surge of determination. She was not alone, she realized, not truly. The Grove was a place of magic, of secrets and shadows, and she was part of it now. With a deep breath, Rory stepped forward, the pendant a steady pulse against her skin. The shadows closed in behind her, the melody a whisper in the wind, and she walked into the night, the path unfolding before her like a promise.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
73.2382% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.6351% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"looming"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"anticipation"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"looming"
2"velvet"
3"unreadable"
4"anticipation"
5"weight"
6"echo"
7"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
14.4034% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean58.68
std11.76
cv0.2
sampleLengths
087
173
266
366
463
575
670
758
853
959
1053
1163
1244
1350
1447
1550
1650
1746
1842
95.2381% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"been left"
1"was gone"
2"being hunted"
3"was meant"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was growing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1121
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01873327386262266
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006244424620874219
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
68.2103% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean15.93
std5.11
cv0.321
sampleLengths
026
123
224
314
423
519
618
713
820
922
1014
1110
123
1315
1419
1511
1618
179
189
1914
2011
2120
2216
2323
249
2514
2613
2716
2817
2922
3015
3112
3229
3317
3411
3512
3614
3716
3822
3920
4017
4115
4216
4322
4418
4514
4613
4718
4817
4910
37.1429% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.15714285714285714
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners11
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
81.3844%