Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDGK3120CWBDA1HSFMVZZ

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, and the occasional burst of laughter. The green neon sign outside cast a ghostly glow through the bar's windows, painting the patrons in shades of emerald. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, slipped through the door, her straight black hair catching the light as she scanned the room. Her bright blue eyes settled on the familiar figure behind the bar, and she felt a pang of nostalgia mixed with apprehension. Silas Blackwood, the man who had once been a shadow in the world of espionage, now stood as the solid presence behind the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard gave him an air of distinguished wisdom, and the silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he polished a glass. Rory hesitated, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingling with the memory of past decisions. She approached the bar, her footsteps soft on the worn wooden floor. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers with a flicker of recognition. "Rory," he said, his voice carrying the weight of years and unspoken stories. "Silas," she replied, a smile tugging at her lips despite the knot in her stomach. "It's been a while." "Too long," he agreed, setting the glass down and leaning slightly on the bar, his left leg favoring the old injury that had changed the course of his life. "What brings you back to the Nest?" Rory shrugged, trying to appear casual. "Needed a drink. Thought I'd see if the old place was still standing." Silas chuckled, a sound like gravel rolling over stone. "The Nest is as sturdy as ever. And so am I, despite the limp." She nodded, her gaze drifting to the walls adorned with maps and black-and-white photographs. Each image seemed to whisper stories of places and people long gone, much like the man before her. "I heard you retired," she said, her voice soft, almost lost in the ambient noise. "Retired, yes. But not idle," Silas replied, his eyes twinkling with a secret amusement. "The bar keeps me busy, and the occasional visitor brings tales from the outside world." Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the grain of the wood. "I suppose you hear all sorts of things here." "More than you'd imagine," Silas said, his tone shifting to something more serious. "And you? How's life treating you?" She hesitated, the question opening a door to memories she wasn't sure she wanted to revisit. "It's... different," she admitted. "London's been good to me, mostly." Silas studied her, his gaze penetrating but not unkind. "You look different, Rory. More... grounded." Rory laughed, a short, sharp sound. "Grounded, maybe. Or just worn down." Silas nodded, understanding the weight behind her words. "Life has a way of doing that." They fell into a comfortable silence, the kind that only old friends could share. Rory watched as Silas served a couple at the end of the bar, his movements efficient and practiced. She remembered the stories he used to tell, the adventures and the dangers, the thrill of the chase. He had been larger than life, a figure of mystery and intrigue. Now, he was simply Silas, the bar owner, the mentor, the friend. "Do you miss it?" she asked suddenly, the question slipping out before she could stop it. Silas paused, his hand resting on the bar. "Sometimes," he admitted. "But the past is a place I visit only in memory. The present is where I live." Rory nodded, understanding the sentiment. She had her own ghosts, her own regrets. The past was a tapestry of choices and consequences, woven with threads of joy and sorrow. "I left Cardiff," she said, the confession hanging in the air between them. Silas raised an eyebrow, his interest piqued. "I heard. Eva mentioned it once." "Eva," Rory repeated, the name a reminder of the friend who had pulled her from the wreckage of her life. "She saved me, you know." Silas smiled, a gentle curve of his lips. "She's good at that." Rory sighed, the weight of her past pressing down on her shoulders. "I had to leave. Evan... he wasn't who I thought he was." Silas's expression darkened, a shadow passing over his features. "I never liked him." "Neither did I, in the end," Rory said, her voice tinged with regret. "But I was young and foolish." Silas nodded, his gaze softening. "We all make mistakes, Rory. It's what we do afterward that matters." She met his eyes, finding solace in his words. "I suppose you're right." Silas leaned closer, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "You know, there's a hidden room here. Behind the bookshelf." Rory's eyes widened, curiosity sparking. "A secret room?" Silas chuckled, the sound rich and warm. "For clandestine meetings. Or just a quiet place to think." Rory smiled, the idea appealing to her. "Maybe I'll take a look sometime." "You're always welcome," Silas said, his tone sincere. They fell into another silence, the kind that spoke of shared history and mutual understanding. Rory felt the tension ease, the knot in her stomach loosening as she settled into the familiarity of the Nest. The bar was a sanctuary, a place where the past could be acknowledged but not allowed to overshadow the present. "Thank you, Silas," she said, her voice steady. "For what?" he asked, his hazel eyes curious. "For being here. For listening." Silas nodded, his expression thoughtful. "It's what friends do." Rory smiled, the warmth of his words wrapping around her like a comforting embrace. She knew the road ahead was uncertain, filled with challenges and choices yet to be made. But here, in the dim light of the Raven's Nest, she found a moment of peace, a reminder that she was not alone. As she turned to leave, Silas called after her, his voice carrying a note of hope. "Don't be a stranger, Rory." She paused at the door, her hand resting on the frame. "I won't," she promised, her heart lighter than it had been in years. With a final glance at the man who had once been a spymaster and was now simply a friend, Rory stepped out into the night, the green glow of the neon sign casting her shadow long and thin against the pavement. The city stretched before her, vast and full of possibilities, and she walked into it with a renewed sense of purpose, the weight of time and regret left behind in the warmth of the Raven's Nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.8333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he agreed, setting the glass down and leaning slightly on the bar, his left leg favoring the old injury that had changed the course of his life [slightly]"
1"she said, her voice soft, almost lost in the ambient noise [almost]"
2"Silas said, his tone shifting to something more serious [more]"
81.8676% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"pang"
count1
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"solace"
count1
8
word"apprehension"
count1
9
word"weight"
count4
10
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"sanctuary"
2"pang"
3"tinged"
4"flicker"
5"clandestine"
6"unspoken"
7"solace"
8"apprehension"
9"weight"
10"footsteps"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a flicker of recognition"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean26.8
std20.31
cv0.758
sampleLengths
086
171
238
319
436
519
623
747
829
922
1019
1126
1215
1312
1415
1574
1616
1728
1842
1913
2025
2112
2224
2313
2419
2517
2613
2720
288
2917
3013
318
3255
338
348
355
369
3753
3821
3924
4077
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012895662368112544
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008206330597889801
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.08
std7.16
cv0.593
sampleLengths
020
120
224
322
424
530
617
712
813
913
1015
114
1229
137
146
1513
169
1714
1814
1918
2015
2114
2215
2313
249
2513
266
2716
284
296
309
316
326
336
348
357
3614
3718
3818
3912
4012
4116
428
433
4417
455
468
4716
4813
497
63.7363% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3956043956043956
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners36
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice carrying the weight of years and unspoken stories (say, carry)"
1"she replied, a smile tugging at her lips despite the knot in her stomach (reply, tug)"
2"he agreed, setting the glass down and leaning slightly on the bar, his left leg favoring the old injury that had changed the course of his life (agree, set lean slightly leave favor change)"
3"she said, her voice soft, almost lost in the ambient noise (say, lose)"
4"Silas replied, his eyes twinkling with a secret amusement (reply, twinkle)"
5"Silas said, his tone shifting to something more serious (say, shift)"
6"she admitted (admit)"
7"he admitted (admit)"
8"she said, the confession hanging in the air between them (say, hang)"
9"Rory repeated, the name a reminder of the friend who had pulled her from the wreckage of her life (repeat, pull)"
10"Rory said, her voice tinged with regret (say, tinged)"
11"she promised, her heart lighter than it had been in years (promise, be)"
81.0061%