| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 68.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "intensely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "amidst" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "surreal" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "potential" | | 13 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 85.30% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's pace altered some micro-speed adjustment between casual, slightly-inflammatoryish, slightly-amused-(as though Silas, moving quicker and more motivated to get this done, weav…" | | 1 | "Maximalist floral patterns узskuilt all over the bolde walls, wild wallpapers, in a sort of head-swelling hypnosing hypnotic madness of Mural wrought-iron deals." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1099 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 82 | | wordCount | 1078 | | uniqueNames | 56 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Docs | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Silas | 4 | | Nyx | 5 | | Aurora | 2 | | Seeking | 1 | | Expanded | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Seer | 1 | | Vaun | 1 | | Swiped | 1 | | Occult | 1 | | Mo | 1 | | Fusion | 1 | | Dash | 1 | | Hel-channel | 1 | | Powerful | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Leviathanly | 1 | | Plants | 1 | | Force | 1 | | Door | 1 | | Attempting | 1 | | Unlock | 1 | | Tea | 1 | | Confections | 1 | | Ax | 1 | | Rymes | 1 | | Escajfate | 1 | | Wurries | 1 | | Démographie | 1 | | Singht | 1 | | Sound | 1 | | Cloured | 1 | | Mystery | 1 | | Wanted | 1 | | Gone | 1 | | Plush | 1 | | Mural | 1 | | Desire | 1 | | Redeemer | 1 | | Through | 1 | | Cottage | 1 | | Doused | 1 | | Nigh | 1 | | Rorie | 1 | | Ball | 1 | | Scopes | 1 | | Bleed | 1 | | Horror | 2 | | Nauseated | 1 | | Whispers | 1 | | Blurth | 1 | | Bang | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Powerful" | | 5 | "Laila" | | 6 | "Door" | | 7 | "Sound" | | 8 | "Desire" | | 9 | "Through" | | 10 | "Nigh" | | 11 | "Rorie" | | 12 | "Scopes" | | 13 | "Bleed" | | 14 | "Horror" | | 15 | "Nauseated" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Vaun" | | 2 | "Unlock" | | 3 | "Ax" | | 4 | "Wanted" |
| | globalScore | 0.804 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though missing the annual gang Bang Bang" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1099 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 61.06 | | std | 20.46 | | cv | 0.335 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 113 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 101 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 91 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "were swinging" | | 1 | "were doing" | | 2 | "was saying" | | 3 | "were rioting" | | 4 | "were coughing" | | 5 | "was playing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "After compass checks and whisperedEvaluations among the squad—Silas, Nyx, and Aurora—(Seeking Expanded team info) the trek deeper into Isolde's grove resumed." | | 1 | "Musty scents rode in on the breeze—autumn leaves, scorched hearths." | | 2 | "The Fae-forged dagger, short-bladed but Leviathanly deadly—was tucked into her hip pocket for backup." | | 3 | "\"I think it's unlocked.\" Rory set her shoulder and pushed, the door creaking open to reveal an interior that smelled of herbs, earth and—hauntingly, ???" | | 4 | "A brain dripping in cheap tricks melted around Rory's morose mind as she took – killingly slow steps into the mucky fabri¨¨cated with god knows what the Cottage was Doused in the extreme." | | 5 | "Si pulsices of a —growling with rotting insanity." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 660 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy-duty thorny-rose" |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.02727272727272727 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007575757575757576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 8.46 | | cv | 0.585 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7368421052631579 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Then a cottage came into" | | 1 | "(Maybe we should restate and" | | 2 | "Somewhere far off, maybe as" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, hand running along" | | 1 | "She shivered, enjoying the jolt" | | 2 | "it almost sounded wrong to" | | 3 | "her blades still felt comfortably" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through an archway" | | 1 | "A dense veil of mist" | | 2 | "she murmured, hand running along" | | 3 | "Pasqueflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 4 | "Alien birdsong swelled to fill" | | 5 | "This was some heavy-duty thorny-rose" | | 6 | "She shivered, enjoying the jolt" | | 7 | "Rory scanned the misty dark" | | 8 | "The bag dangling off her" | | 9 | "Thoughts tumbled and meshed as" | | 10 | "An idea started out hot," | | 11 | "Rory took point towards Isolde's" | | 12 | "The Fae-forged dagger, short-bladed but" | | 13 | "Rory, despite small-burbling paranoia, tried" | | 14 | "Every thinning of green allowed" | | 15 | "Lilliputian but twee and very" | | 16 | "The door was quaintly latched" | | 17 | "Rory's pace altered some micro-speed" | | 18 | "Silas, moving with more determination," | | 19 | "Rory slouched back on the" |
| | ratio | 0.608 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the gloom, moss" | | 1 | "If she highlighting enclosed suggestiveness,ckles" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Powerful boots carried a sense of cold keenness, as if Laila wanted to turn the soft moss into bloody pulpthim." | | 1 | "Rory's pace altered some micro-speed adjustment between casual, slightly-inflammatoryish, slightly-amused-(as though Silas, moving quicker and more motivated to…" | | 2 | "Silas, moving with more determination, deliberately wove behind Nyx, who kept staring intensely rowward the cottage door." | | 3 | "Through imprisoned feelings that were swinging like the pendulum arc-shaped lines within a veiny pattern, forest smells that were rich as decades of forest come…" | | 4 | "shivering thistles as if taken some K Some¥ tripculturalists eye-to-eye’d with…Rory only noticed with a few minutes later that she had begun to suspect the shad…" | | 5 | "Weird Blurth is rolling down her throat, chabling out fishcacoils as though missing the annual gang Bang Bang." | | 6 | "No organic rhythm bouncing through the desk like her chest heaving." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |