Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDHS1DR60BXBHAGGV0XTG

Run Details

Duration:
32.6s
Cost:
$0.000976
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through an archway of ancient oak, the air shimmering around her as the boundary between worlds rippled. A dense veil of mist clamped down, muffling the city sounds from beyond the threshold. Beneath her Docs, phantasma-soft moss cushioned each step, the pattern of leaves and roots playing hieroglyphics against the fog. "Wicked," she murmured, hand running along the textured bark of the massive tree. Even in the gloom, moss and fern sprang forth in vivid greens. Pasqueflowers carpeted the ground in stark white, a minor miracle this near winter in London. Alien birdsong swelled to fill the void left by the receding city. Icy fingers of dread crept up Rory's spine. This was some heavy-duty thorny-rose faerie shit. She shivered, enjoying the jolt of primal fear. After compass checks and whisperedEvaluations among the squad—Silas, Nyx, and Aurora—(Seeking Expanded team info) the trek deeper into Isolde's grove resumed. Musty scents rode in on the breeze—autumn leaves, scorched hearths. Rory scanned the misty dark for Isolde's hut, a place she had never seen for herself. The bag dangling off her shoulder held offerings for the Seer, items scrounged from Vaun's lab and Swiped via Occult shop. Thoughts tumbled and meshed as Rory navigated the lumpen mass of tree roots and diddled with the fine silver pendant around her neck. An idea started out hot, one for unlocking trapped-demon layer Mo & Fusion început (merge): Dash through under the Hel-channel necklace's 'intensive feeling of warmth' indicator to Murder-Hobo the Gates of Dymas. Powerful boots carried a sense of cold keenness, as if Laila wanted to turn the soft moss into bloody pulpthim. Rory took point towards Isolde's lair. The Fae-forged dagger, short-bladed but Leviathanly deadly—was tucked into her hip pocket for backup. Rory, despite small-burbling paranoia, tried to keep her pace collectively stable. Every thinning of green allowed whiter illumes to dance freely. Then a cottage came into murky view. Lilliputian but twee and very vant to the forest-looral olde-fae fantasy-feature standard. The door was quaintly latched with twining vines. Rory's pace altered some micro-speed adjustment between casual, slightly-inflammatoryish, slightly-amused-(as though Silas, moving quicker and more motivated to get this done, weaves deliberately in behind Nyx, staring行 intently at the cottage door ahead). Silas, moving with more determination, deliberately wove behind Nyx, who kept staring intensely rowward the cottage door. Rory slouched back on the mottled-wooden door, one boot planted against its surface as pressure to pull it open. (Boot Plants with Force to Door, Attempting to Unlock) She sighed auditioningly and regarding Only the proceedings..Chai Tea Confections. Mused towards Silas's anxious look. Raised a hand with an O-kay gesture aimed at Ax, who still haven't dropped scowling at him and Nyx. "I think it's unlocked." Rory set her shoulder and pushed, the door creaking open to reveal an interior that smelled of herbs, earth and—hauntingly, ??? Something that Rymes with Escajfate or Wurries. Torri Démographie Singht. Acciptance of Sound, Cloured Mystery. Well, damn damn. Multiple damns and damnits fireballs under currently bent helmet. This grot inside was straight to Wanted, Gone mental with luxurious plush red carpets , Plush scarlet ride on the floor. Maximalist floral patterns узskuilt all over the bolde walls, wild wallpapers, in a sort of head-swelling hypnosing hypnotic madness of Mural wrought-iron deals. Amidst flambling Desire's Redeemer and way-much larger than life's size . Aurora had a surreal moment where she felt the pendular swing of the scene turning sort of clownishly centre towards psychedelic extravagance, crossed with some off beat gore the horror teacher aesthetic. This was so too much wacky forest. And it all hurt in such a way that made her wince like rich man without a pied. (Maybe we should restate and be more evocative/scary ?) Through imprisoned feelings that were swinging like the pendulum arc-shaped lines within a veiny pattern, forest smells that were rich as decades of forest comet. A brain dripping in cheap tricks melted around Rory's morose mind as she took – killingly slow steps into the mucky fabri¨¨cated with god knows what the Cottage was Doused in the extreme. She… it almost sounded wrong to say “we entered the cottage“… Nigh passed as if suffused her brain foamŒ tempo… shivering thistles as if taken some K Some¥ tripculturalists eye-to-eye’d with…Rory only noticed with a few minutes later that she had begun to suspect the shadow of a doorway within the shadow of the door. Rory reached for her flickering dagger with trembling plushies… her blades still felt comfortably cold against Rorie's recently cheese. Okay Ball and saying to the cottage'srosity. If she highlighting enclosed suggestiveness,ckles Scopes might just accept making it all subdue into something you need to palling decency. But normaly get it out of nowhere? The idea came up as happens when I turn off my phone on an overcast day. Rory looked around the modelling freed silk shivers. Something felt wrong. Potential skeeved her, unease drilling down into to feel cartoony, very stylised and over the top gore horror movie. The shadows were doing theirs the old game of blame with themselves, and there were lots of them. Nyx bled the shadows, could arrange them into moppets. Horror Bleed. But now Horror bled horror enough for three. The whispers never stopped their goddamn never only felt always on. Somewhere far off, maybe as far as someone was saying, breath stabbing the air. In the theatrical room they were in, a brutish and messy scare lunch of light made colors bleed bleed vomit splatter red black, blues and pinks, bright greens were rioting with yellows. And silence blaring sound, playing harpsichord ar techniques off textures all wrong, some tang of cheese, of wrong, of odorless dozen cldefaults cinnamoned together made Rory's nose cringle like it the first time she smelled amrot. The atmosphere in the room was thick, stifled, almost sentient. Si pulsices of a —growling with rotting insanity. ShudderŒ cliffs were coughing under Rory's feet on gritted windows, pushing door mouths open in yawns. Never felt more Nauseated, chewed the shadows whole sniffed all the Whispers in the room,Root out every half-founded sound, chasing sighs down rusty radio ashes. Weird Blurth is rolling down her throat, chabling out fishcacoils as though missing the annual gang Bang Bang. Earth music was playing on one hand in her head, her jaw sitting still as a duffel bag of blow. Conts turn it up to turn it around, the blood fer burning behind her eyes. No organic rhythm bouncing through the desk like her chest heaving. Cut the shit! Do you want me to speak to'um?
created_at"2026-02-17T02:21:42.469533+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:21:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory set her shoulder and pushed, the door creaking open to reveal an interior that smelled of herbs, earth and—hauntingly, [hauntingly]"
37.6670% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"intensely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"intensely"
2"slightly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.5717% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"surreal"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"dance"
count1
4
word"amidst"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"surreal"
1"silk"
2"stark"
3"dance"
4"amidst"
5"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
52.8739% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean61.06
std20.46
cv0.335
sampleLengths
053
152
244
347
455
540
648
750
862
940
1067
1166
12113
1369
1459
15101
1642
1791
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was tucked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs174
matches
0"were swinging"
1"were doing"
2"was saying"
3"were rioting"
4"were coughing"
5"was playing"
89.8676% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy-duty thorny-rose"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.044722719141323794
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.01967799642218247
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean14.46
std8.46
cv0.585
sampleLengths
019
115
219
313
412
515
612
78
87
98
1021
1110
1216
1321
1423
1532
1620
176
1814
1911
2010
217
2212
238
2433
2517
2619
2719
285
2919
3025
317
323
335
343
359
3621
3723
3811
3932
407
4118
429
4325
4433
451
4610
479
4835
499
100.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7368421052631579
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners56
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured, hand running along the textured bark of the massive tree (murmur, hand running texture)"
1"started (start)"
2"Rory set her shoulder and pushed, the door creaking open to reveal an interior that smelled of herbs, earth and—hauntingly, (set push, creak reveal smell)"
79.3648%