| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 59.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1229 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "completely" | | 5 | "cautiously" | | 6 | "slightly" | | 7 | "tightly" | | 8 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1229 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "down her spine" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "g with panic" | | 1 | "g with fear" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1216 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 35.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed duller tonight, their colors muted beneath the pale light of the moon" | | 1 | "seemed farther away than they should have" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift and writhe when she looked at them too long" | | 3 | "seemed impossibly deep the shadows thick and impenetrable" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.66% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 47.46 | | std | 23.34 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 35 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was ringed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 76.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "was tracking" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was squeezing" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 4.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t natural, the way the leaves shifted — too rhythmic, too deliberate, like the grove was tracking her movements." | | 1 | "The wind picked up, carrying with it the faint sound of laughter — high-pitched and airy, like chimes in the breeze." | | 2 | "She stopped a few feet away, her gaze fixed on the symbols carved into the altar — ancient, twisting patterns that seemed to shift and writhe when she looked at them too long." | | 3 | "A sound broke the silence, soft but unmistakable — the crunch of leaves behind her." | | 4 | "For a brief moment, she saw them — shapes moving in the shadows, tall and slender, their faces obscured by darkness." |
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| 84.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1216 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.05016447368421053 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02055921052631579 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 11.98 | | std | 5.64 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 38.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.24271844660194175 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 34.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the light faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 55.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She tugged her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 2 | "She slipped it back into" | | 3 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 4 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 5 | "It was warmer here, heavier," | | 6 | "She touched it absently, her" | | 7 | "She moved slowly, her footsteps" | | 8 | "It wasn’t natural, the way" | | 9 | "She stopped, glancing over her" | | 10 | "She shook her head, forcing" | | 11 | "She tried to focus on" | | 12 | "She froze, her heart thudding" | | 13 | "she called, her voice barely" | | 14 | "She exhaled sharply, forcing herself" | | 15 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 16 | "She knew it wasn’t." | | 17 | "She glanced back the way" | | 18 | "She was too far in" | | 19 | "She moved forward, the path" |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 6.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She tugged her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 3 | "Something about it had felt" | | 4 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 5 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the" | | 6 | "Rory glanced at her phone." | | 7 | "She slipped it back into" | | 8 | "she muttered under her breath" | | 9 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 10 | "It was warmer here, heavier," | | 11 | "The faint hum of insects" | | 12 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 13 | "She touched it absently, her" | | 14 | "The path through the grove" | | 15 | "She moved slowly, her footsteps" | | 16 | "The wind rustled the branches" | | 17 | "It wasn’t natural, the way" | | 18 | "She stopped, glancing over her" | | 19 | "The standing stones were still" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the ground year-round seemed duller tonight, their colors muted beneath the pale light of the moon." | | 1 | "It was warmer here, heavier, as if the grove itself was alive and breathing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice trembling slightly" | | 2 | "she shouted, her voice cracking with fear" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |