Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDPHDDMVE0MJRPTJRJV00

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.000713
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known as Rory to her friends, stepped off the bus and into the cool night air of Richmond. The streetlights cast long, spindly shadows across the path leading to Richmond Park, and the occasional car passing by seemed to hasten into the darkness, eager to leave the quiet emptiness behind. She pulled her jacket closer around her shoulders, the fabric of the Heartstone Pendant brushing against her collarbone. The gemstone pulsed faintly, a gentle reminder of her uncertain mission. Rory had always been drawn to the mysterious and the unknown, but tonight, the pull felt imperative. The pendant had been a gift from an unknown benefactor, and though she couldn't explain it, she trusted its guidance. She walked with purpose, her steps echoing softly on the paved path. The air grew colder as she approached the entrance to the park, the trees looming tall and whispering secrets in the wind. The boundary of the Fae Grove was marked by ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled trunks twisted into haunting shapes. Rory hesitated at the threshold, her eyes scanning the darkened grove. The Fae Grove was a place of myths and legends, a hidden clearing that existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Time moved differently here; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She took a deep breath, the scent of wildflowers mingling with the earthy aroma of the forest. Despite the hour, the wildflowers bloomed year-round, their colors vibrant even in the dim light. Rory's heart fluttered nervously as she pushed through the standing stones and into the grove. The first thing she noticed was the silence. It wasn't the absence of sound, but the quality of it—a hushed, almost reverent quiet that seemed to hold its breath. The trees swayed gently, and the rustling of leaves was the only noise breaking the stillness. Rory's eyes adjusted to the dim light, and she saw the faint glow of the Heartstone Pendant pulsing more insistently. She followed its warmth, her steps deliberate. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the sense of being watched intensified. Shadows seemed to shift at the edge of her vision, eddies of darkness that moved just beyond the reach of her sight. Rory tried to shake off the unease, reminding herself that she had come here for a reason. But the growing certainty that she was not alone gnawed at her resolve. She paused by a particularly gnarled oak, its bark rough and weathered. The air around her grew colder, and a shiver ran down her spine. She could have sworn she heard a soft, haunting melody, like the distant echo of a harp. But when she strained to listen, the sound vanished, leaving only the eerie silence. Rory continued on, her heart pounding in her chest. The Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter, and she clutched it tightly, drawing comfort from its warmth. The path twisted and turned, and the trees grew thicker, their branches reaching out like bony fingers. She stumbled over a root, nearly falling, and caught herself just in time. As she righted herself, a low, whispering voice seemed to brush against her ear. "Why have you come, child of the mortal realm?" Rory spun around, her heart thudding against her ribcage. But there was no one there, only the rustling of leaves and the faint whisper of the wind. She forced herself to breathe, reminding herself that she had faced worse. But the voice, though soft, had been unmistakably there. She pressed on, her steps quicker now, driven by a growing sense of urgency. The grove seemed to pulse with life, the trees and wildflowers alive with a hidden energy. The Heartstone Pendant led her to a small clearing, where a circle of stones was arranged in a perfect ring. In the center of the circle, a single stone, larger and more ornate than the others, rose from the ground. It pulsed with a deep, crimson light, matching the glow of the Heartstone. Rory approached the stone, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The air around the stone was thick with magic, and she felt the weight of ages pressing down on her. As she drew closer, the stone's light grew brighter, illuminating the clearing with an ethereal glow. Suddenly, the silence was shattered by a low, guttural growl. Rory froze, her eyes darting to the edge of the clearing. Shadows shifted, and for a moment, she saw the outline of a creature, its form indistinct but unmistakably menacing. The growl grew louder, a deep, rumbling sound that sent chills down her spine. She backed away, her hands trembling. "Who are you?" she whispered, her voice barely audible. The shadows shifted again, and this time, she saw a pair of glowing eyes, red and malevolent. The creature emerged from the darkness, a shapeless mass of shadows and darkness. It moved with an unnatural fluidity, its form constantly changing, never settling into a fixed shape. Rory's mind raced, searching for a way out. The Heartstone Pendant glowed brightly, and she clutched it tighter, feeling a surge of power course through her. She closed her eyes and focused, channeling all her fear and uncertainty into a single, powerful thought. "Show yourself," she said, her voice steady and firm. The creature paused, its growl growing softer. The shadows around it began to thin, and for a moment, she saw a glimpse of something familiar—a face, almost human, but twisted with age and sorrow. The creature's eyes locked onto hers, and she felt a wave of ancient, profound sorrow. "You are not of this place," the creature said, its voice a blend of whispers and growls. "Why do you seek the Heartstone?" Rory took a deep breath, her resolve strengthening. "I am here to find answers," she said. "The Heartstone called to me, and I came." The creature seemed to consider her words, its form shifting and swirling with each passing moment. Finally, it spoke again, its voice softer. "The Heartstone is a powerful artifact, bound to the realms of Dymas. It can lead you to places beyond your wildest dreams, but it can also lead you to places of great danger. You must be careful, child of the mortal realm." Rory nodded, her mind racing with the implications. "I will be careful," she said. "But I must know what lies beyond." The creature's eyes glinted, and for a moment, she saw a flash of something ancient and wise. "Then you must follow the path it shows you," it said. "But know this: the road ahead is fraught with peril. You will face challenges that will test your strength and your will." Rory felt a surge of determination. She was no stranger to danger, and she would not back down now. "I am ready," she said, her voice firm. The creature inclined its head, a gesture of respect. "Then go with the blessing of the grove," it said. "May the Fae guide your steps." With that, the creature dissolved into the shadows, leaving Rory alone in the clearing. The Heartstone Pendant glowed softly, its warmth a comforting presence. She took a deep breath, her mind clear and focused. She would find the answers she sought, no matter what lay ahead. Rory stepped forward, her footsteps light and determined, and the grove seemed to part before her, the path ahead illuminated by the soft, pulsing glow of the Heartstone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
51.6908% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"nervously"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"tightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.5878% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"fluttered"
2"looming"
3"profound"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
7"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
highlights
0"a shiver ran down her spine"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
82.7616% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean45.89
std20.18
cv0.44
sampleLengths
081
171
268
347
472
565
656
754
823
948
1083
1146
1254
1315
1446
1543
169
1749
1823
1924
2065
2121
2250
2327
2425
2546
2628
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"been drawn"
1"was marked"
2"was arranged"
3"was shattered"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1101
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02815622161671208
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01907356948228883
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean14.24
std6.18
cv0.434
sampleLengths
020
132
218
311
417
520
612
722
820
911
1024
1113
1217
1315
1415
158
1621
1716
1820
197
2013
2122
2217
2313
2412
2513
2617
2714
289
2915
3017
3113
3214
339
349
3518
3612
379
3814
3916
4020
4120
4213
4310
4420
4516
4610
4711
4819
4914
40.8046% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2413793103448276
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners21
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"whispered (whisper)"
88.8732%