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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDRM62AZSGHZV8876ASM5
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
39.1s
Cost:
$0.002651
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The dim glow of the green neon sign above The Raven's Nest's entrance had long since ceased to beckon the thrill-seekers of Soho's nightlife, instead serving as a comforting
beacon
for the bar's regulars. Inside,
the air was heavy with
the familiar scent of worn leather and the muted hum of late-night conversations. Rory Carter polished a mug with a white apron-clad elbow, her bright blue eyes scanning the sparse crowd with a practiced air of detachment. It was a slow Tuesday, with only a handful of patrons nursing their drinks. As she expertly balanced a tray of freshly poured pints, the door swung open, admitting a chill that briefly stirred the stagnant air. A lone figure stepped across the threshold, pausing to scan the room with an
uncanny
stillness. Rory's gaze, drawn to the newcomer by habit, faltered for an instant before her
eyes widened
in unguarded surprise. The tray teetered, pints sloshing dangerously, as she hurried to set it down on the bar, her mind racing to reconcile the man standing in the doorway with the boy she once knew. "Aidan?" The name escaped her lips
barely above a whisper
, yet it carried across the room, prompting the figure to turn. Their eyes met, and for a heartbeat, the passage of time
seemed to
compress, squeezing the years into a singular, weighty moment. Aidan's appearance had always been striking, but the boy Rory once shared laughter, tears, and countless secrets with had transformed. His features, once sharp and angular, had softened, rounded by a subtle padding that spoke of comforts and hardships alike. The unruly mess of curly brown hair now lay trimmed, revealing a face that, while still handsome, wore the
etched
lines of trials and tribulations. But it was his eyes, once bright with an unquenchable spark, that now
seemed to
hold a deep,
unspoken
melancholy, a flame reduced to embers. As Aidan
navigated
the room, his strides unhurried, Rory felt Silas's watchful gaze upon her, a silent inquiry from the bar's owner, who stood polishing a glass with deliberate slowness, his hazel eyes darting between the pair. She offered him a faint, reassuring smile before turning back to Aidan, who now stood before her, an awkward half-smile on his lips. "Aurora Carter, all grown up," Aidan said, his voice, though deeper, still carried the warmth she remembered. "May I?" He gestured to the stool opposite her, a query that felt more like a test of their past's endurance. Rory nodded, the silence that followed his seating feeling like the first delicate droplets of a impending storm. Silas, sensing the tension, slid a whisky in front of Aidan without
being asked
, his retreat as silent as his approach. "How long has it been?" Aidan asked, cradling the glass in his palms, his eyes never leaving Rory's face. "Seven years?" The uncertainty in her voice surprised her; she had counted each passing year with the precision of a ticking clock. "Seven years, one month, and..." Aidan's smile broadened, illuminating the shadows in his eyes for a fleeting moment, "...twenty-three days, I believe. Though, I might be off by a day or two." The specificity was a spear to the heart, a
stark
reminder of how deeply intertwined their lives once were. Rory's laughter, though genuine, felt like a thinly veiled attempt to keep the rising emotions at bay. "You always were better with dates, Aidan." Their conversation unfolded with the cautious
dance
of two individuals attempting to reconcile past intimacy with present uncertainty. They spoke of nothing and everything: the bar, the weather, the city's relentless evolution. Yet, beneath the surface, unresolved questions and
unspoken
regrets swirled, the undertow of their interaction threatening to pull them under at any moment. As the night deepened, Silas discreetly at
tended to
his other patrons, his occasional glances towards Rory and Aidan a reminder that, despite the world's encroachment, some dynamics remained unchanged. The past continued to linger, a silent observer to their reunion. It wasn't until Aidan's inquiry about her life in London, his interest genuine and probing, that the veneer of their polite exchanges
began to
crack. Rory's narration of her days, delivered in clipped sentences, painted a picture of a life on autopilot: the part-time job at the Golden Empress, her flat above The Raven's Nest, the careful avoi
dance
of anything that might resemble the future. Aidan listened intently, his expression a mask of empathy, though his eyes betrayed a flutter of something more complex. As Rory concluded, the space between them
seemed to
contract, heavy with all that had
been left
unsaid. "Aurora," Aidan began, his use of her full name a deliberate choice, weighing each word, "I often thought about reaching out... about coming back." The admission hung between them, a challenge to the status quo of their estrangement. Rory's gaze dropped, focusing on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of falls and the inevitability of scars, both visible and hidden. "Why didn't you?" she asked, her voice
barely above a whisper
, the question encompassing more than just the years of silence between them. Aidan's shoulders rose and fell in a silent sigh, the shadows in the bar deepening around them as if to swallow the truth whole. "Fear, maybe. Of not being who you needed. Of being a reminder of everything we... of everything I couldn't protect you from." The
unspoken
name, Evan,
hung in the air
, a specter of their shared past. Rory's eyes snapped back to Aidan's, the pain and the longing for a different timeline evident in her gaze. "You were never meant to protect me, Aidan. Just be there. And you were, for the most part." Her smile,
tinged
with sadness, was a bridge of sorts, spanning the chasm between their past and present selves. "The rest... we were both just trying to find our way, weren't we?" In that moment, as the first hints of dawn seeped into the London sky, casting a pale glow through the bar's windows, Rory and Aidan found themselves at the threshold of a new understanding, one not of erasure, but of acceptance—the acceptance of who they had been, who they had become, and the
unspoken
, shared hope for a future where their paths might intersect once more, not as the people they used to be, but as they were now, scars and all.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Aidan said, his voice, though deeper, still carried the warmth she remembered [still]"
81.3084%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
2
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1070
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"beacon"
count
1
1
word
"tinged"
count
1
2
word
"uncanny"
count
1
3
word
"unspoken"
count
4
4
word
"stark"
count
1
5
word
"dance"
count
1
6
word
"etched"
count
1
7
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"beacon"
1
"tinged"
2
"uncanny"
3
"unspoken"
4
"stark"
5
"dance"
6
"etched"
7
"navigated"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
2
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"the air was heavy with"
2
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
43
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
43
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tended to"
2
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
46
matches
(empty)
88.0657%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
22
mean
48.32
std
22.14
cv
0.458
sampleLengths
0
91
1
91
2
43
3
90
4
60
5
38
6
39
7
19
8
22
9
32
10
43
11
55
12
40
13
65
14
37
15
24
16
40
17
23
18
46
19
33
20
50
21
82
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
43
matches
0
"being asked"
1
"been left"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
134
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
963
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.035306334371754934
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.014537902388369679
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
46
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
46
mean
23.11
std
11.1
cv
0.481
sampleLengths
0
34
1
19
2
24
3
14
4
23
5
16
6
19
7
33
8
21
9
22
10
20
11
20
12
25
13
25
14
37
15
23
16
17
17
21
18
18
19
21
20
19
21
22
22
32
23
19
24
17
25
7
26
18
27
14
28
23
29
29
30
11
31
25
32
40
33
19
34
18
35
24
36
14
37
26
38
23
39
24
40
22
41
14
42
19
43
37
44
13
45
82
77.5362%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.4782608695652174
totalSentences
46
uniqueOpeners
22
25.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"Aidan said, his voice, though deeper, still carried the warmth she remembered (say, carry remember)"
1
"Aidan's smile broadened, illuminating the shadows in his eyes for a fleeting moment (broaden, illuminate)"
2
"Aidan began, his use of her full name a deliberate choice, weighing each word (begin, weigh)"
82.3085%