Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPDW33NTT57CHSBD2DEC38

Run Details

Duration:
5.3s
Cost:
$0.000232

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Under the silvered gaze of a full moon, Rory pedaled her bicycle through Richmond Park, the tires crunching on gravel that seemed to absorb the night's quiet. She'd come here for solitude, to clear her mind of Yu-Fei's chatter and Silas' worried glances. But as she entered the Fae Grove, the air grew heavy, charged with an unseen presence that prickled her skin. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching for the sky. Beyond them, wildflowers bloomed in defiance of the season, their colors muted under the lunar light. Rory dismounted, her breath misting in the chill, and leaned her bicycle against a stone. She stepped into the grove, her boots sinking into the soft earth. Something felt off. The silence was too absolute, as if the night creatures held their breath. Even the wind seemed reluctant to disturb the leaves. Rory's hand went to the Heartstone pendant at her throat, a gift from an unknown benefactor. It hung there, a faint crimson glow against her skin, pulsing with warmth. She'd felt its heat before, near Hel portals, but here, it was different. Faint, yet insistent. A twig snapped. Rory froze, her heart pounding. She scanned the grove, but saw nothing. Just the shadows dancing with the moon's light. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her nerves. Probably just a fox, she told herself. Or a deer. She started walking again, deeper into the grove. The wildflowers rustled, their petals brushing against her jeans. She could've sworn she heard whispers, like children's laughter carried on the wind. But there was no wind. Only the stillness, and the whispers. Rory stopped, her eyes drawn to a patch of daisies. They swayed gently, as if beckoning her. She stepped closer, her gaze fixed on the flowers. They seemed to glow, their petals shimmering like moonlight on water. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the soft petals. They were warm. Suddenly, the whispers grew louder. Louder, and closer. Rory spun around, her heart in her throat. The grove was alive with movement. Shadows darted between the trees, their forms humanoid, yet twisted. Their eyes glowed like embers, fixed on her. Panic surged through her veins. She turned to run, but her feet felt rooted to the ground. She tried to scream, but her voice was trapped in her throat. The shadows moved faster, their forms solidifying. They were closing in, their eyes burning into her. Rory's hand closed around the Heartstone. It pulsed faster, its glow intensifying. She felt a surge of warmth, of power. The shadows hesitated, their forms wavering. Then, with a collective hiss, they retreated, melting into the darkness. Rory stumbled back, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She looked down at the Heartstone, its glow fading. She felt drained, her limbs heavy. But she was alive. She was alive, and she was alone. She turned to leave, her eyes scanning the grove. It was empty, the shadows still. She picked up her bicycle, her hands shaking. As she pedaled away, she couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. She looked back one last time, at the grove bathed in moonlight. And she saw them, the shadows, standing at the edge, their eyes burning into her. Rory pedaled faster, her heart pounding. She didn't look back again. She knew they were there, waiting. And she knew she wouldn't be alone in the Fae Grove again.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
65.1568% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount574
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.3136% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount574
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"wavering"
2"loomed"
3"dancing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
30.5531% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean47.75
std12.27
cv0.257
sampleLengths
063
158
270
343
441
550
640
745
837
935
1062
1129
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was trapped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs117
matches
0"were closing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount574
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.033101045296167246
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006968641114982578
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean9.1
std4.47
cv0.491
sampleLengths
027
116
220
315
416
515
612
73
813
99
1016
1113
1213
133
143
155
167
178
1810
197
203
218
229
2313
245
256
2610
277
289
2911
3010
313
325
333
348
356
3610
378
385
3912
4012
417
429
436
446
458
466
4711
489
499
57.1429% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38095238095238093
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners24
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
87.2451%