| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 573 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 573 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 98.54% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "g with warmth" | | 1 | "a surge of warmth" |
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| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 573 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Probably just a fox, she told herself." |
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| 71.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 570 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.711 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "gravel that seemed to absorb the night's quiet" | | 1 | "seemed reluctant to disturb the leaves" | | 2 | "as if beckoning her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 573 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.55% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 47.75 | | std | 12.27 | | cv | 0.257 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 29 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 41 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 9.1 | | std | 4.47 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 57.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.38095238095238093 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind seemed reluctant" | | 1 | "Just the shadows dancing with" | | 2 | "Probably just a fox, she" | | 3 | "Only the stillness, and the" | | 4 | "Suddenly, the whispers grew louder." | | 5 | "Then, with a collective hiss," |
| | ratio | 0.095 | |
| 42.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here for solitude," | | 1 | "She stepped into the grove," | | 2 | "It hung there, a faint" | | 3 | "She'd felt its heat before," | | 4 | "She scanned the grove, but" | | 5 | "She took a deep breath," | | 6 | "She started walking again, deeper" | | 7 | "She could've sworn she heard" | | 8 | "They swayed gently, as if" | | 9 | "She stepped closer, her gaze" | | 10 | "They seemed to glow, their" | | 11 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 12 | "They were warm." | | 13 | "Their eyes glowed like embers," | | 14 | "She turned to run, but" | | 15 | "She tried to scream, but" | | 16 | "They were closing in, their" | | 17 | "It pulsed faster, its glow" | | 18 | "She felt a surge of" | | 19 | "She looked down at the" |
| | ratio | 0.444 | |
| 94.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here for solitude," | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "Rory dismounted, her breath misting" | | 3 | "She stepped into the grove," | | 4 | "Something felt off." | | 5 | "The silence was too absolute," | | 6 | "Rory's hand went to the" | | 7 | "It hung there, a faint" | | 8 | "She'd felt its heat before," | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "Rory froze, her heart pounding." | | 11 | "She scanned the grove, but" | | 12 | "She took a deep breath," | | 13 | "She started walking again, deeper" | | 14 | "The wildflowers rustled, their petals" | | 15 | "She could've sworn she heard" | | 16 | "Rory stopped, her eyes drawn" | | 17 | "They swayed gently, as if" | | 18 | "She stepped closer, her gaze" | | 19 | "They seemed to glow, their" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Under the silvered gaze of a full moon, Rory pedaled her bicycle through Richmond Park, the tires crunching on gravel that seemed to absorb the night's quiet." | | 1 | "And she saw them, the shadows, standing at the edge, their eyes burning into her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |