Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE15NY9XBSQAPN0JVGXN8

Run Details

Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.001121
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Lucien froze at the sound of a deadbolt clicking open. His mind conjured a thousand possible outcomes flitting by in a heartbeat. The door creaked inward, and there she stood. Her hair a disheveled mess, clutching a book to her chest like a shield. Porcelain skin drawn in alarm day old wrinkles. Eyes a crackle of ginger and grit. Rory. She squinted into the dim corridor, not yet recognizing him. "What are you doing here?" Damn, but she could scowl. He should have been used to it. "Allow me to let myself in," he said, gesturing to the threshold. "Not bloody likely. It'll be over my dead—" Lucien straightened, pinning her with a stare that had men twice her size quailing. "May I remind you that I'm not some poxy civilian, pilot. I am not to be trifled with. And you will let me the devil in, or I'll take that sweet arse door off its hinges myself." Rory gaped, blinking rapidly. Then, inexplicably, her gaze dropped to his crotch. Her face flamed crimson. What the hell was that about? She hastily stepped back, dragging a hand down her face. The gesture knocked the book to the floor with a slap. "Come in then, you colossal prick." Lucien noted the telltale tremble of anger in her shoulders, but he strode past her as if she hadn't a care. The barest hint of lavender and old books greeted him, evoking memories he'd rather forget. "I knew you'd show up again someday," Rory muttered, locking the deadbolts. "Nothing you bloody say will change a damn thing, so—" Lucien whirled, catching her by the elbow before she could slip away. She gasped, book and manila folder in both hands. He leaned in close, inhaling the scent of her skin. Sweet hell, she smelled good. Like the crisp air before a thunderstorm. Rory wrenched free, taking an unstable step back. She clutched the folder protectively. The silence demanded an explanation. He offered her a wry smile. "I'd have come sooner, but I was under the impression we were detested by one another." "("I can barely tolerate you, you infuriating bastard.") Because we are. Look, whatever this visit is about, I don't have time for it." Lucien's gaze slid to the long-ignored folder in her grasp. The title on the cover read: `THESIS: DYNAMICS OF INTERSPECIES CO-EXISTENCE IN URBAN CENTRAL BANKS` His eyes widened. "Why do you look so smug, Lucifer? You act like you've never seen a thesis before..." Lucien managed to keep his expression neutral, but his stomach turned over. Christ, the woman was brilliant. For all the grief she gave him, she'd apparently been conducting ghost research on her own time. He ought to be bloody impressed. She gave him a hard look. "I made damn sure to stay away from that dusty old heap. For a lot of reasons." Rory squared her shoulders. "So, you gonna give me an explanation or what?" Abruptly, he felt ill. Seeing her again, this woman who had eclipsed him so thoroughly—he'd wanted that, hadn't he? That spark, that challenge. That intoxicating fire. Lucien pinched the bridge of his nose. "Fine. Let's get the drama out of the way—do you have a few pints in you?" Silence. He felt the weight of Rory's stare, heavy with unspoken words and resentment. Lucien rubbed the back of his neck. "Penny for your thoughts?" ("Rory, uncharacteristically vicious: His nerve. His absolute bloody nerve.") An eternity passed, measuring the ticking clock on the wall. He straightened his tie, swallowing as he studied her. "I will not dignify that with a response. You'd never let me hear the end of it." Rory folded her arms, cutting him with a glare. "I think it makes me a little bit crazy. Seeing you, I mean. You just show up like this, when I'm right in the middle of..." He swallowed. "Being brilliant?" Her shoulders slumped. "Needy, apparently." Lucien heaved a put-upon sigh that emerged as more of a grunt. "Can we help you pack?" She raised an eyebrow. "You want to help me pack?" He winced at the condescension, steeling against the instinctive pang of hurt. Damn it all, but he was still madly in love with her. "I'd rather be duct-taped to a cactus than help you pack a moving van. But I wouldn't send you off into the great unknown alone, would I?" Rory fidgeted with the folder, chewing on her lip. Her chin wobbled once, before she quickly wiped it away. ("Like you give a fig about what happens to me now, Mr. Shame. You made that quite clear when you ran the other way...") Bloody hell, he hated that. Hated that she was carrying all this pain and anger because of him. Hated that he couldn't lay hands on himself and relive that day forever. He'd give anything to carve out a different path, to tell Rory he'd been a coward, that he hadn't meant a word—no, that he'd meant every word, but out of fear. Fear and superstition and a misplaced sense of duty. Lucien took a faltering step forward. His skin prickled with longing. She stiffened, a princess drawing into her shell. "But you're still a person. A undesirable one, but a person nonetheless. So I guess that settles it. You'll come with me, and that's that." Rory released a shuddering breath, her bright eyes glistening with tears. "I don't know why I'm even entertaining this. You're nothing but trouble, you know. I'll probably be maimed in my sleep." Lucien smiled an instruction. "Probably." "Oh, God..." She shuddered and slammed the back of her head against the closet door. "This is like being stuck with a bad joke. How do I get out of this?" He bit his tongue at that. Made busy work piling up her clothes. Barely registered when she started crying. "Hey, now." His throat ached. "It'll be fine. We'll find this bird and everything will be splendid. I m-mean it." He swallowed thickly, dangerously close to tears himself. Jesus Christ. "I haven't forgotten what happened with S أف con. I'm sorry we stayed away for so long, it's just that... I didn't know if you'd even want to talk to m-" The phone trilled deafeningly. Rory smiled thinly. "Saved by the bell." Lucien frowned and glanced at the receiver, the blinking light on Rory's answering machine. Who could it be at this hour? Rory snatched up the handset before he could splash cold water on his face. "Hello?" She listened in silence, her face clouding over. Then, "Get here. Now." The line went dead, Rory sagging like a marionette with cut strings. Lucien rushed to her side. "What is it? What's going on?" With shaking hands, Rory dropped the handset. She stared at the phone like she couldn't believe what she'd heard. "That was DetectiveMagento." Her voice quavered. "I think we've found him, Mr. Shame." Lucien's gut lurched. "The Butcher? But how—Melissa, is she—" "She's dead. They found her body in an abandoned warehouse..." Rory gagged on a sob, clutching at him. "She's dead, Mr. Shame." No, no no. Melissa was...she was...he shook his head. Rory sagged against him. Her entire body quaked. "Wh-what do we do now?" Lucien pressed into the crook of her neck, burying his nose in her silky hair. His heart thundered. The Butcher is dead, came a hollow part of him. It's over. It's all finally OVER... But his arms moved of their own accord to encircle Rory's waist, hugging her to his wool coat. "We'll do what we always do," he murmured, breathing deep. "We'll finish the job." And with that, he sealed their fates forevermore.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:21:44.325285+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:21:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Then, [Then,]"
1"he murmured, breathing deep [deep]"
92.2300% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.3800% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"pang"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"pang"
2"glistening"
3"porcelain"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Hated that she"
1"Hated that he relive that day"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.44
std14.59
cv0.65
sampleLengths
022
138
215
324
48
551
616
76
827
936
1022
1121
1222
1313
1427
1523
1616
179
183
1916
2040
2136
2226
2323
241
2524
269
2719
2852
294
305
3117
3210
3351
3419
3524
3671
3711
3833
3932
405
4131
4219
4361
4411
4521
4615
4712
4823
4932
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"been used"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was carrying"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount824
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.038834951456310676
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.019417475728155338
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean9.54
std6.82
cv0.714
sampleLengths
010
112
28
314
48
57
61
710
85
95
107
1112
128
1314
1437
154
168
174
186
1910
2011
216
2221
2315
2412
2510
2612
279
2810
295
307
318
325
335
346
3516
3623
3710
386
399
403
4116
4212
435
4417
456
466
4721
489
494
65.6716% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4253731343283582
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners57
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he said, gesturing to the threshold (say, gesture)"
1"Rory muttered, locking the deadbolts (mutter, lock)"
2"Then, (then)"
3"he murmured, breathing deep (murmur, breathe deep)"
83.0166%