Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE15SA8P6TQVZFFAJGG5J

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.000096
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dim glow of the neon sign above the entrance to The Raven's Nest cast a warm orange light on the rain-soaked pavement, a beacon for those seeking refuge from the drizzly London evening. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of whiskey and smoke, a familiar scent that transported Rory back to her university days when she and Silas would gather here to share stories of their respective exploits. She had not been back in months, and the familiarity of the place was both comforting and disorienting. Rory had just finished a long delivery run, ferrying steaming hot dishes from Golden Empress to various restaurants across the city. She was grateful for the quiet, solitary work, a respite from the chaos that had erupted in her life the past few years. As she pushed open the door to the bar, a bell above it rang out, announcing her arrival to the handful of patrons. The interior of the bar was dimly lit, with shadows cast by the flickering candles on the tables. Rory made her way to the bar, taking a seat on the stool next to the door, where she could watch the comings and goings. She ordered a whiskey from the bartender, a friendly woman with a knowing smile, and settled in for a drink, running a hand through her straight, black hair as she took a seat. It was there, sipping her drink and gazing out at the rain, that she spotted him. He was standing by the fireplace, his back to the room, but as he turned, their eyes met across the space. Time froze for Rory as she took in the changes that had transformed Silas Blackwood, a man she had once known as a friend, a mentor, and a kindred spirit. The once-sleek auburn hair was now streaked with grey, and his beard, though neatly trimmed, seemed to have lost some of its luster. But it was the weight on his shoulders, the weariness etched into his face, that caught her attention. As she struggled to reconcile the Silas of old with the man standing before her, the door to the secret room creaked open, and a figure slipped out, barely making eye contact with Rory as they passed. The door creaked shut behind them, and Silas began to make his way towards her, a mixture of caution and curiosity etched on his face. "Rory," he said, his voice low and rough, as he came to stand beside her, his eyes scanning the room as if searching for something, or someone. "It's been a while." Rory smiled, the edges of her mouth twitching upwards, as she extended her hand, and Silas took it in a firm grasp. His handshake was still confident, but there was a fragility to it, a fragility that spoke to the wear and tear of time. As they stood there, hands clasped, the tension between them was palpable, a tangible thing that hung in the air like a challenge. Rory felt a shiver run down her spine, a mix of emotions she couldn't quite articulate. There was a part of her that had not changed, a part that still loved the old Silas, the one who had been her confidant, her mentor, her friend. "Silas, what happened?" she asked, breaking the silence that had grown between them. "You look...different." He released her hand, running a palm over his face, as if to massage away the fatigue etched into his features. "Time happens, Rory," he said, his voice laced with a hint of irony. "We all change, whether we like it or not." As he spoke, he gestured for her to follow him, and Rory slid off the stool, landing softly on her feet. They walked to the fireplace, where he leaned against the mantelpiece, his eyes roving the room as if searching for something. "What brings you here tonight?" he asked, his gaze drifting back to her, a flicker of warmth in his hazel eyes. Rory took a sip of her drink, letting the whiskey warm her chest before answering. "Just needed a place to drown my sorrows, I suppose," she said, the words tumbling out of her mouth like confessions. Silas raised an eyebrow, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Ah, I see. Well, you've certainly found the right place. We have a special talent for drowning sorrows here." As they talked, the easy banter that had always characterized their friendship flowed between them, but beneath the surface, Rory sensed a deeper tension, a weight that hung in the air like a pendulum, threatening to swing between them at any moment. It was as if Silas had been living a different life, a life that had consumed him, body and soul, and left him drained, his vitality sapped by the trials and tribulations that had beset him. And yet, despite the weariness etched into his features, his eyes still sparkled, still shone with a depth and intelligence that Rory remembered. Their conversation meandered through topics both trivial and weighty, avoiding the things that lay unspoken between them. Rory couldn't help but notice the changes in Silas, the lines etched into his face, the subtle limp that had appeared in his step. She couldn't help but wonder what had brought him to this place, what had driven him to retreat from the world as he once knew it. As the evening wore on, the bar began to fill with the usual assortment of patrons: a group of rowdy tourists, a pair of would-be writers, and a woman who looked like she had stepped out of a pulp fiction novel. Rory watched them all with a detached air, her mind drifting back to the Silas of old, the Silas who had been her friend, her confidant. In those quiet moments, she felt a pang of regret, a regret that had been festering within her for years. She had let things slip, let the passage of time drive a wedge between them. Now, as they stood there, poised on the cusp of conversation, Rory realized that the weight of years hung between them, a weight that threatened to topple them both into the void of unspoken regret. "Silas?" she said, her voice barely above a whisper. He turned to her, his eyes narrowing, as if he sensed the unease building between them. "I'm sorry," Rory said, the words tumbling out of her mouth, unbidden. "I'm so sorry I let things slip between us. I'm sorry I wasn't there for you." The words hung in the air like a challenge, a test of Silas's patience, his understanding. For a moment, Rory thought he would shrug them off, tell her it was water under the bridge, but instead, he looked at her, his eyes searching hers, as if seeking something, or someone. "Rory," he said, his voice low, his words measured. "We both made our choices. We both walked our paths. I'm just glad we're here now, talking." The air seemed to vibrate with the weight of unspoken words, the echoes of regret that hung between them like a ghost. Rory felt a shiver run down her spine as she met Silas's gaze, her heart heavy with the knowledge that they stood at the crossroads of their past and their future, the choices they had made hanging precariously in the balance. In that moment, Rory knew that the weight of time hung between them, a weight that threatened to consume them both, unless they found a way to bridge the chasm that had grown between them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
84.2520% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1270
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1270
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"tangible"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"pang"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count3
6
word"solitary"
count1
7
word"weight"
count7
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"etched"
count5
highlights
0"palpable"
1"tangible"
2"beacon"
3"pang"
4"flicker"
5"unspoken"
6"solitary"
7"weight"
8"echoes"
9"etched"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches7
maxInWindow6
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count2
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count3
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"couldn't help but notice"
2"couldn't help but wonder"
3"the weight of unspoken words"
4"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"was grateful"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"realized that the"
1"knew that the"
96.9108% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean48.73
std23.84
cv0.489
sampleLengths
089
167
276
3108
462
531
645
768
815
943
1042
1121
1236
1332
1442
1559
1667
1767
1870
199
2016
2128
2250
2326
2463
2535
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was standing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1177
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01784197111299915
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006796941376380629
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean22.23
std9.06
cv0.408
sampleLengths
034
137
218
321
423
523
618
725
833
916
1021
1130
1223
1318
1437
1525
1627
174
1822
1923
2023
2116
2229
2313
242
2521
2613
279
2821
2921
3021
3115
3221
3313
3419
3542
3636
3723
3817
3924
4026
4141
4226
4320
4415
4535
469
4716
4812
4916
68.4211% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners24
18.7500% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice low and rough, as he came to stand beside her, his eyes scanning the room as if searching for something, or someone (say, come stand scan search)"
1"he said, his voice laced with a hint of irony (say, lace)"
2"she said, the words tumbling out of her mouth like confessions (say, tumble)"
3"Rory said, the words tumbling out of her mouth, unbidden (say, tumble)"
4"he said, his voice low, his words measured (say, measure)"
80.4902%