| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "beacon" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "solitary" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "eyebrow" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "pang" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "measured" | | 19 | "echoes" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 7 | | maxInWindow | 6 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" | | 1 | "couldn't help but notice" | | 2 | "couldn't help but wonder" | | 3 | "the weight of unspoken words" | | 4 | "hung in the air" |
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| 43.30% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "was grateful" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "a flicker of warmth" | | 3 | "a pang of regret" | | 4 | "felt a shiver" |
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| 30.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1267 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1174 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Silas | 13 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for something, or someone" | | 1 | "quite articulate" | | 2 | "as if searching for something" | | 3 | "It was as if Silas had been living a different life, a life that had consumed him, body and soul, and left him drained, his vitality sapped by the trials and tribulations that had beset him" | | 4 | "looked like she had stepped out of a pulp" | | 5 | "as if seeking something, or someone" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1267 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.71% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "realized that the" | | 1 | "knew that the" |
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| 96.91% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 48.73 | | std | 23.84 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 108 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 63 | | 25 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1177 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.01784197111299915 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006796941376380629 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 22.23 | | std | 9.06 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 68.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.42105263157894735 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She had not been back" | | 1 | "She was grateful for the" | | 2 | "She ordered a whiskey from" | | 3 | "It was there, sipping her" | | 4 | "He was standing by the" | | 5 | "he said, his voice low" | | 6 | "His handshake was still confident," | | 7 | "she asked, breaking the silence" | | 8 | "He released her hand, running" | | 9 | "he said, his voice laced" | | 10 | "They walked to the fireplace," | | 11 | "he asked, his gaze drifting" | | 12 | "she said, the words tumbling" | | 13 | "It was as if Silas" | | 14 | "Their conversation meandered through topics" | | 15 | "She couldn't help but wonder" | | 16 | "She had let things slip," | | 17 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 18 | "He turned to her, his" | | 19 | "he said, his voice low," |
| | ratio | 0.392 | |
| 97.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim glow of the" | | 1 | "She had not been back" | | 2 | "Rory had just finished a" | | 3 | "She was grateful for the" | | 4 | "The interior of the bar" | | 5 | "Rory made her way to" | | 6 | "She ordered a whiskey from" | | 7 | "It was there, sipping her" | | 8 | "He was standing by the" | | 9 | "Time froze for Rory as" | | 10 | "The once-sleek auburn hair was" | | 11 | "The door creaked shut behind" | | 12 | "he said, his voice low" | | 13 | "Rory smiled, the edges of" | | 14 | "His handshake was still confident," | | 15 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 16 | "she asked, breaking the silence" | | 17 | "He released her hand, running" | | 18 | "he said, his voice laced" | | 19 | "They walked to the fireplace," |
| | ratio | 0.725 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as they stood there," |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, the air was thick with the smell of whiskey and smoke, a familiar scent that transported Rory back to her university days when she and Silas would gathe…" | | 1 | "But it was the weight on his shoulders, the weariness etched into his face, that caught her attention." | | 2 | "His handshake was still confident, but there was a fragility to it, a fragility that spoke to the wear and tear of time." | | 3 | "He released her hand, running a palm over his face, as if to massage away the fatigue etched into his features." | | 4 | "They walked to the fireplace, where he leaned against the mantelpiece, his eyes roving the room as if searching for something." | | 5 | "Rory took a sip of her drink, letting the whiskey warm her chest before answering." | | 6 | "As they talked, the easy banter that had always characterized their friendship flowed between them, but beneath the surface, Rory sensed a deeper tension, a wei…" | | 7 | "It was as if Silas had been living a different life, a life that had consumed him, body and soul, and left him drained, his vitality sapped by the trials and tr…" | | 8 | "As the evening wore on, the bar began to fill with the usual assortment of patrons: a group of rowdy tourists, a pair of would-be writers, and a woman who looke…" | | 9 | "Rory watched them all with a detached air, her mind drifting back to the Silas of old, the Silas who had been her friend, her confidant." | | 10 | "Now, as they stood there, poised on the cusp of conversation, Rory realized that the weight of years hung between them, a weight that threatened to topple them …" | | 11 | "He turned to her, his eyes narrowing, as if he sensed the unease building between them." | | 12 | "For a moment, Rory thought he would shrug them off, tell her it was water under the bridge, but instead, he looked at her, his eyes searching hers, as if seekin…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, the words tumbling out of her mouth like confessions" | | 1 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "Rory said, the words tumbling out of her mouth, unbidden" | | 3 | "he said, his voice low, his words measured" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |