Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE3CE2ZN110H1SAKHR8PJ

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Duration:
14.3s
Cost:
$0.000903
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
She recognized his silhouette through the peephole of the frosted glass door, even before he knocked. Heart pounding, Aurora Carter hesitated, studying him. He looked much the same in his charcoal tailored suit, slicked-back platinum hair, and quarterstaff cane. Two years hadn't changed Lucien Moreau, her former consort and whisper of trouble. Her eyes drifted shut as his knuckles rapped against the wood, a staccato double-knock that echoed in the thin hallway beyond her flat. His could only mean one thing: their estranged bond's ties were pulling taut once more. To ignore his summons now would end poorly for them both. Steeling nerves, Aurora unlatched the locks and opened the door. Mr. Moreau stood a breath apart, heterochromatic eyes sweeping across her face in contemplation. It was only a heartbeat's pause before she pivoted on her heel and strode back inside, confident he would follow. She heard him close the door behind them, all bolts sliding home with practiced clicks. "What are you doing in London, Luc?" Aurora asked curtly over her shoulder, already sympatico to the tension. Her stance remained guarded, arms folded against her chest. The last time they'd met - a charged night that started with drinks in a dimly lit Parisian corner of Belushi's and folded into a mess of sheets and sweat at his flat in the 6th arrondissement - had made it clear boundaries were a good thing. Healthier, even. "I'm afraid, mon coeur, that you're needed on a job." His voice, a rich baritone with a French lilt, rumbled through her bones like an echo of his name on her lips. "The Ophidian's Coven wants you for a retrieval." Aurora frowned, morphing her surprise into a scowl. The supernatural criminal empire wanted her, specifically? It made no sense. Granted, her offer of ingress Authentication for the benefit of her circle didn't mean handing her over to those power-hungry fools. She had blinkered well enough over two years ago when she drew this connection with Lucien, setting herself apart from the Ovollo Coven's politics and machinations. Her coven in London remained too vulnerable for her to risk stomaching that game again. Eyes narrowing, Aurora put space between herself and this... this man before her. "Vraiment? Well, remind your boss that I'm not his damn hound to be called on a leash, underling infamies." "Leila." Lucien's eyes flashed amber, haloing the obsidian of his pupils. He stepped into her space, crowding her back against the hallway wall. The heat of his tall frame brushed against the curves of her body, his lilac cologne swimming in her senses. "This isn't a request." "Fuck you," Aurora spat, chin lifting defiantly. But it came weak as a protest, lost to the arresting heat of his gaze tacked between them. Her elemental shield was materializing at full power to guard against demonic compulsion. But she fought to resist the temptation to set them ablaze, reducing the wall or himself to ash and smoke. It would be so satisfying... Lucien smirked dangerously, a dimple notched in his left cheek, as if he could read this deadly play out in the fiery glint flaring across her iris. "I was hoping it wouldn't come to this, but I will hold you to your oath." Aurora ground her teeth, annoyance spiking through the embers crackling under her skin. Did he really think he would walk through this door, good cop bad cop her, telling her they owed him a job and she'd just comply? She jerked her chin towards the door. "If that's all, get the hell out, Luc. You have no right to call in that damned Oath." Lucien's hand shot out and cinched her wrist, and he wrenched her into him. "Such refreshing enthusiasm, chérie." His grip bit into her bones, nails digging into the lining of her skin hard enough to draw betraying blood. "But we'll renegotiate the terms inside." In one swift grapple, he spun her around to face the door, pushing her through the threshold before she could even squeak out a rebuke. In a heartbeat, the locks slid home behind them with a thudding finality. Pulse hammering in her ears, Aurora backed away, putting distance between them. Fuck him and his arrogant elegance. Her eyes flitted towards the entryway, searching for her great-grandfather's old Apache rifle stuffed in the gun-case by the door. She matched his stride for move, backing into the shower - the only space in this one bedroom flat that had a direct window to the alley. "Calm yourself, sweet," he murmured, cornering her. A dangerous smirk played on his full mouth as he advanced. "You know I can smell when you're afraid." His tongue slid along his bottom lip as if savouring the taste already. "Or should I say, aroused?" Aurora hooked her palm around the flimsy shower curtain rod and ripped it from its anchors, just as he lunged forward. She swung the metal bar at his face with a grunt. It connected beneath his eye, the resounding crack as her knuckles made contact against his cheekbone like a clap of thunder. Lucien reeled back, gloved hands flying to the injury. The fabric parted crimson. Good, she thought, grimly satisfied. The pompous prick deserved that for his arrogance. And she welcomed the surge of adrenaline pumping through her veins as the beast admits defeat. Without waiting to witness the damage, Aurora darted past him, grabbing her gun at the front door. Her body was tense, muscles wired with a fight-or-flight instinct. Knowing Luc, he would eventually catch up with her again, no matter how far she ran. Best not waste waking hours doing the same escape and evasion dance as last time. Lucien straightened, dabbing at his lip with a swipe of his pocket square. "Zut alors, Leila..." He looked up at her through threads of the blood, a twisted up quirk to his mouth. About to say more, he spat a glob of saliva and red into her antique tatami mats. "You'll pay for that, ma maigri." Aurora leveled the gun at his chest, safety off, finger caressing the trigger. She kept her aim steady through the red sight, exhaling a calming breath through her nose. "Don't think so, Demiurge. This time, I can't be bought."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora asked curtly [curtly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
95.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"grapple"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"pumping"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"whisper"
2"echoed"
3"tension"
4"charged"
5"lilt"
6"echo"
7"glint"
8"grapple"
9"pulse"
10"pumping"
11"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1045
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"About to say more, he spat a glob of saliva and red into her antique tatami mats."
89.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount915
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Carter1
Lucien7
Moreau2
Parisian1
Belushi1
French1
Authentication1
Ovollo1
Coven1
London1
Apache1
Luc1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Belushi"
5"Coven"
6"Luc"
places
0"Ovollo"
1"London"
globalScore0.899
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if savouring the taste already"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1045
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"stomaching that game"
46.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean52.25
std16.4
cv0.314
sampleLengths
052
149
259
376
440
581
632
747
863
943
1064
1169
1213
1365
1444
1566
1629
1758
1856
1939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs155
matches
0"were pulling"
1"was materializing"
64.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences73
ratio0.027
matches
0"The last time they'd met - a charged night that started with drinks in a dimly lit Parisian corner of Belushi's and folded into a mess of sheets and sweat at his flat in the 6th arrondissement - had made it clear boundaries were a good thing."
1"She matched his stride for move, backing into the shower - the only space in this one bedroom flat that had a direct window to the alley."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.030467899891186073
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.015233949945593036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean14.32
std7.94
cv0.555
sampleLengths
016
17
216
313
423
515
611
710
81
913
1020
1115
1218
139
1447
152
1632
178
188
197
204
2121
2226
2315
249
254
2619
2711
2812
2920
304
317
3218
3313
3420
355
3627
3716
3813
3926
407
4118
4214
4324
4431
4513
4612
476
4820
4927
93.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5616438356164384
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences63
matches
0"She recognized his silhouette through"
1"He looked much the same"
2"Her eyes drifted shut as"
3"His could only mean one"
4"It was only a heartbeat's"
5"She heard him close the"
6"Her stance remained guarded, arms"
7"His voice, a rich baritone"
8"It made no sense."
9"She had blinkered well enough"
10"Her coven in London remained"
11"He stepped into her space,"
12"Her elemental shield was materializing"
13"It would be so satisfying..."
14"She jerked her chin towards"
15"His grip bit into her"
16"Her eyes flitted towards the"
17"She matched his stride for"
18"he murmured, cornering her"
19"His tongue slid along his"
ratio0.397
86.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences63
matches
0"She recognized his silhouette through"
1"Heart pounding, Aurora Carter hesitated,"
2"He looked much the same"
3"Her eyes drifted shut as"
4"His could only mean one"
5"Moreau stood a breath apart,"
6"It was only a heartbeat's"
7"She heard him close the"
8"Aurora asked curtly over her"
9"Her stance remained guarded, arms"
10"The last time they'd met"
11"His voice, a rich baritone"
12"Aurora frowned, morphing her surprise"
13"The supernatural criminal empire wanted"
14"It made no sense."
15"She had blinkered well enough"
16"Her coven in London remained"
17"Eyes narrowing, Aurora put space"
18"this man before her."
19"Lucien's eyes flashed amber, haloing"
ratio0.746
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"To ignore his summons now"
ratio0.016
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her eyes drifted shut as his knuckles rapped against the wood, a staccato double-knock that echoed in the thin hallway beyond her flat."
1"The last time they'd met - a charged night that started with drinks in a dimly lit Parisian corner of Belushi's and folded into a mess of sheets and sweat at hi…"
2"Lucien smirked dangerously, a dimple notched in his left cheek, as if he could read this deadly play out in the fiery glint flaring across her iris."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora spat (spit)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.235
85.3313%