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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPE5PY54PGV149847GG5JA
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Model:
DeepSeek-V2 Chat
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.001872
Provider:
Novita
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the entrance to The Raven's Nest, casting an eerie glow on the damp pavement. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag as she pushed through the door, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and lemon polish wrapping around her like an old coat. She'd come straight from her last drop-off, her black hair still damp from the evening drizzle. The bar was quieter than usual for a Friday night. A few regulars hunched over their drinks, their faces illuminated by the amber glow of table lamps. Behind the counter, Silas polished a tumbler with
methodical
precision, his signet ring catching the light with each rotation. He nodded at her without looking up—their usual greeting. Rory slid onto a stool just as the door opened again behind her, bringing with it a gust of wet wind and the faintest hint of jasmine perfume. Something about the sound of those particular
footsteps
made the fine hairs on her neck stand up. "Gin and tonic, please, Silas," came a voice from over her shoulder—low, confident, and achingly familiar. Rory turned
slowly
. The woman standing there wore a tailored navy suit, her blonde hair cropped close to her skull in a sleek bob that screamed expensive salon. But the laugh lines around her eyes hadn't changed, nor the way she held her left wrist
slightly
bent, as if ready to take notes. "Evie?" The nickname slipped out before Rory could stop it. The woman's
perfectly
manicured fingers froze halfway to adjusting her cufflinks. Her gaze snapped to Rory's face, then dropped to the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—the one that matched Rory's own. A dozen microexpressions
flickered
across her features before settling into something
carefully
neutral. "Aurora Carter." Evie's voice had gone flat. "I heard you'd moved to London." Silas set Rory's usual whiskey in front of her with a quiet thud. "You two know each other?" "University," Rory said at the same time Evie said, "Childhood." An awkward beat passed. Evie's gaze
flicked
to Rory's scuffed boots, her faded jeans, the delivery bag still slung across her chest. Rory resisted the urge to straighten her posture, to explain herself. Instead, she took a slow sip of whiskey, letting the burn ground her. Silas cleared his throat. "Well then. Gin and tonic for the counselor." He pushed the drink toward Evie with a knowing look that made Rory's stomach twist. Counselor. Of course. Evie had always
been destined
for courtrooms and corner offices. Rory watched as her old friend—no, acquaintance now—took the stool beside her with perfect posture, her suit jacket falling into immaculate lines. The Evie she remembered wore paint-splattered overalls and laughed with her whole body. This woman sipped her drink like she was
being graded
on it. "You're a barrister now?" Rory asked, tracing the rim of her glass. "Corporate solicitor, actually." Evie's manicured nails tapped against her tumbler. "And you're... delivering takeaway?" The words weren't cruel, just matter-of-fact. That somehow made it worse. Rory felt the
weight
of every
unspoken
thing between them—the late-night study sessions, the whispered secrets, the way Evie had been the first to notice the bruises Rory
tried to
hide. "Pays the bills," Rory said
lightly
. She could feel Silas watching them from the end of the bar, his limp more pronounced as he moved to refill another patron's drink. Evie opened her mouth, closed it again. For the first time, Rory noticed the shadows under her eyes, the tension in her jaw that no amount of expensive skincare could erase. The silence stretched, filled with all the things they'd promised to be and the people they'd actually become. "You cut your hair," Rory said finally. Evie's hand flew to her nape self-consciously. "Six years ago." A laugh bubbled up in Rory's throat, unexpected and sharp. "Right. Of course." The corner of Evie's mouth twitched—almost a smile, but not quite. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a business card, crisp white with embossed lettering. Slid it across the bar toward Rory. "In case you ever need... I don't know. A reference or something." Rory stared at the card. Evelyn Sinclair, Esq. No trace of the girl who used to answer to Evie. She tucked it into her jacket pocket without looking at it. "Thanks." Evie nodded, downed the rest of her drink in one smooth motion, and stood. The movement was too quick, too practiced. Rory could almost see the cracks in her polished exterior—the way her breath hitched just
slightly
as she adjusted her jacket, the tremor in her fingers as she left a twenty-pound note on the bar. "Take care, Aurora," Evie said, and the sound of her full name in that voice sent an unexpected
pang
through Rory's chest. "You too, Evelyn." The door swung shut behind her with a quiet click. Rory exhaled
slowly
, watching the ice melt in her whiskey. Silas reappeared, his signet ring
glinting
as he wiped down the counter where Evie's glass had been. "Old friend?" he asked mildly. Rory swirled her drink, watching the amber liquid catch the light. "Something like that." Outside, a taxi pulled away from the curb, its taillights disappearing into the London night. Rory finished her whiskey in one long swallow, the taste of regret sharp on her tongue.
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2/17/2026, 2:22:05 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"came a voice from over her shoulder—low, confident, and achingly familiar [achingly]"
1
"Rory said lightly [lightly]"
2
"Rory said finally [finally]"
22.3947%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
902
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
4
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"lightly"
2
"perfectly"
3
"slightly"
4
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
11.3082%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
902
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"pang"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"flicked"
count
1
3
word
"glinting"
count
1
4
word
"methodical"
count
1
5
word
"unspoken"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"pang"
1
"flickered"
2
"flicked"
3
"glinting"
4
"methodical"
5
"unspoken"
6
"weight"
7
"footsteps"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
63
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
28.58
std
18.42
cv
0.645
sampleLengths
0
67
1
55
2
45
3
16
4
53
5
10
6
44
7
13
8
18
9
10
10
46
11
27
12
60
13
12
14
14
15
42
16
30
17
49
18
7
19
10
20
13
21
34
22
12
23
31
24
56
25
22
26
3
27
37
28
5
29
14
30
31
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"been destined"
1
"being graded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
130
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
825
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.04
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.01575757575757576
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
12.31
std
7.78
cv
0.632
sampleLengths
0
21
1
30
2
16
3
10
4
17
5
19
6
9
7
28
8
17
9
16
10
3
11
25
12
25
13
10
14
11
15
20
16
13
17
7
18
6
19
13
20
5
21
10
22
4
23
18
24
11
25
13
26
4
27
23
28
1
29
2
30
10
31
22
32
13
33
12
34
12
35
10
36
4
37
6
38
5
39
31
40
6
41
24
42
7
43
24
44
18
45
7
46
7
47
3
48
10
49
3
85.6481%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5138888888888888
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
37
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"came a voice from over her shoulder—low, confident, and achingly familiar (come)"
1
"Rory said at the same time Evie said (say say)"
2
"Rory said lightly (say lightly)"
3
"Rory said finally (say finally)"
4
"Evie said, and the sound of her full name in that voice sent an unexpected pang through Rory's chest (say, send)"
77.6089%