Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEBKJG08CFY0CKN8ZEK90

Run Details

Duration:
33.5s
Cost:
$0.001240

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest pulsed softly with the hum of muted conversation, the click of glasses, and the distant clink of ice. Shadows pooled beneath the low-hanging lamps like dark water, and the walls loomed with old maps and black-and-white photographs that whispered stories from other times. The distinctive green neon sign outside glowed with an eerie vibrancy, casting an unnatural light on the cobbled streets of Soho, where the past and present collided in ways unseen. Aurora Carter leaned against the polished bar top, a pint of stout in front of her, fidgeting with the delicate crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She traced its outline absentmindedly, recalling the day it had been etched onto her skin—the laughter of children in Cardiff, the tumble from an old swing, and the sharp bite of realization that life was more dangerous than it seemed. At twenty-five, she should have felt invincible, yet the fermented embarrassment of failure clung to her like a shadow. Pre-law had not been her true calling, and she had felt the constraints of that heavy choice tugging at her spirit ever since. Silas Blackwood stepped behind the bar with ease, the polished wood reflecting the soft glow of the overhead fixtures. A slight limp accompanied the deliberate cadence of his movements, yet it offered an ironic grace to his wiry frame. He wore his years well, the grey-streaked auburn of his hair framing a face marked by shadowy wrinkles that whispered of laughter and hardship alike. Tonight, he seemed more sergeant than spymaster, an old warrior surveying the terrain of his battlefield—his bar—the Raven's Nest. “Rory,” Silas greeted warmly, his hazel eyes glinting with a knowing warmth. “Thought I’d seen the last of you after you scurried off to London.” Aurora managed a smile, though it barely touched the corners of her mouth. “You didn’t think I’d actually leave Cardiff forever, did you?” Her voice was steadier than she felt. “Besides, I'd never pass up a chance for one of your infamous stouts.” “Don’t let the regulars catch you calling anything here infamous,” he teased, pouring from the tap with measured skill. The foam cascaded perfectly, a testament to his years of experience. “They like their drinks as non-descript as their conversations.” “Wouldn’t want to disrupt the peace,” she quipped, taking the glass with a practiced ease. As her fingers brushed against the cool surface, she felt an unfamiliar pang of nostalgia—a time when she had trodden more confidently into her past. As she sipped, the familiar depth of the stout filled her senses, grounding her. She scanned the dimly lit room, letting herself breathe in the ambience—both comforting and charged with memories. It was then she spotted him, seated at a table in the corner: a man she had once known well, nearly unrecognizable now. “Silas,” she murmured, her gut tightening as she grasped the edge of the bar. “Who...who’s that?” Silas’s gaze followed hers. “That’s Theo Jensen. We went to school together back in the day.” Aurora nodded, though pain jolted through her as she recalled the boy with the wavy hair and the easy laugh. Theo had always been the life of the party, someone adapted seamlessly to the flow of life’s currents—not like her. “I’d heard he was in London.” “Been around. Not that he ever really left… it’s just a matter of which shade of him is showing up each time.” Silas raised an eyebrow. “You want to say hello?” The thought made Aurora’s stomach twist. From a distance, she’d observed the man hunched over a drink, an unlit cigarette dangling from his fingertips. After years apart, she felt like a ghost, though he’d been the one she had lost sight of. “Maybe later,” she deflected, but the words tasted of denial. Silas studied her, that familiar look of unyielding concern in his hazel eyes. “A lot can change,” he murmured softly. “Yeah,” she replied, forcing a smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes. “Especially now.” He tilted his head as if weighing her words. “The past doesn't quite melt away, you know. It clings. Like leather. Or old loves.” His gaze flicked meaningfully toward Theo as if inviting her to dive into the murky waters of nostalgia. “Yeah, I see that.” Aurora hesitated, acutely aware of the weight of Silas’s statement. In its unvoiced depths was the echo of regret—the decisions she had made, the choices that had shaped her destiny, the marshes of dreams left uncharted. “I’ve changed, too, you know.” “Of course you have.” Something about his tone held gravity, as if the words held a hidden depth. “We all have.” She absently touched her scar again, a reminder of her childhood, her innocence. “You know why I left. I couldn’t take the darkness anymore.” “I get that.” Silas poured himself a whisky, the amber liquid catching the soft light. “But there’s a difference between running away and walking forward.” She knew this. Somewhere over the years, she had learned to keep the emotional debris at arm's length, the sharp edges polished by time but never fully dulled. “And moving on?” she asked. “Same premise, I suppose. Sometimes we outgrow our past; other times, it outgrows us.” Aurora closed her eyes for a moment, allowing the acoustic shadows of the bar to wash over her. She hadn’t meant to come here; she hadn’t meant to run into Theo. Her pulse quickened as she stole a glance at him again, noticing the frown that deepened the lines around his mouth, the hollow in his cheeks. He had aged—perhaps even more than she had—but what haunted her now was not the changes she saw in him. It was the memories of laughter, shared secrets, and vulnerability now wrapped in layers of time. When Theo looked up, his gaze locked onto hers, a spark of disbelief igniting in the air. He slowly pushed back his chair, and for a moment, the universe seemed to come to a standstill. “Rory?” he ventured, his voice hoarse with surprise. Her heart raced as the years fell away, revealing a thread of their shared past. A flicker of recognition mixed with something heavier—a regret that felt too large to unravel. “Theo,” she managed, her voice barely above a whisper. It was the first time in years their eyes had connected, and the space between them stretched. He was no longer the boy she had known; he was a man shaped by seasons she could only imagine. His eyes had lost that carefree glimmer, replaced with a weathered gaze that seemed to carry the weight of unspoken tales. “What are you doing here?” he asked, stepping forward, the hesitation of old friends tangled with something new. “Just stopping by.” The bluster felt weak on her tongue, a flimsy shield against the potential vulnerability ahead. An uncomfortable silence stretched between them, a chasm worn from years of absence and choices made. Aurora found herself weighing her words carefully, as if each held the key to both their pasts. Part of her wanted to reach out, to bridge that gap with laughter and shared memories, but she hesitated, afraid of what acknowledging the cavernous distance might entail. Silas cleared his throat, stepping to the side, giving them room as if to allow a conversation that had been brewing for too long to unfold. “You both ought to catch up.” “Yes, well, life is complicated, isn’t it?” Aurora said, her voice too bright, too defensive. Theo nodded, concern creasing his brow. “It really is. I’ve missed…” He faltered, the sentiment hanging between them, heavy with implications. The ghosts tugged at her, memories raw and aching. Aurora yearned to speak of the years apart, the choices made, the paths forged, but could she bear to unfurl it all? “There’s much to say,” she finally said, her voice a tapestry of longing and fear. “Then let’s talk,” Theo said with a distant warmth as genuine as it was fragile—an invitation. With heart pounding, Aurora turned to Silas, who raised his glass, the weight of their lives resting in the silence between them. The bar thrummed with muted life around them, as Aurora stepped forward, toward the unexpected reunion with a boldness she hadn’t felt in years. They could only hope the time between had multiplied their histories instead of fracturing them completely. “Shall we?” she said, forcing the words out as she moved toward Theo. They stood together in the shifting darkness, grappling with the brittle outlines of who they had become—a world painted anew against the hues of their intertwined pasts.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
14.2857% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Silas greeted warmly, his hazel eyes glinting with a knowing warmth [warmly]"
1"he murmured softly [softly]"
2"she replied, forcing a smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes [quite]"
3"she managed, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
4"she finally said, her voice a tapestry of longing and fear [finally]"
30.9392% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"warmly"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
7
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"completely"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"warmly"
6"barely above a whisper"
7"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"pang"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"unravel"
count1
12
word"grappling"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"testament"
2"pang"
3"flicker"
4"flicked"
5"glinting"
6"loomed"
7"unspoken"
8"weight"
9"echo"
10"etched"
11"unravel"
12"grappling"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of recognition"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"see that.” Aurora"
1"get that.” Silas"
2"lost that carefree"
3"bridge that gap"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean37.61
std23.26
cv0.619
sampleLengths
076
1108
283
325
443
539
640
754
816
916
1046
1131
1242
1310
1420
1514
1642
1745
1821
1924
2025
2133
2214
2393
2435
258
2639
2758
2818
2918
3061
3132
3215
3321
3446
3516
3662
3740
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been etched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"delicate crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.038524590163934426
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01721311475409836
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean16.06
std7.36
cv0.458
sampleLengths
021
125
230
326
440
519
623
719
820
925
1019
1112
1213
1313
1417
1513
1619
1711
189
1915
2025
2114
2217
2323
2414
252
264
2712
2820
2920
306
3126
325
336
3418
3518
3610
3713
387
3912
402
419
4233
4314
4426
455
4618
473
4813
4911
88.7640% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5393258426966292
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners48
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Silas greeted warmly, his hazel eyes glinting with a knowing warmth (greet warmly, glint)"
1"he teased, pouring from the tap with measured skill (tease, pour)"
2"she quipped, taking the glass with a practiced ease (quip, take practice)"
3"she murmured, her gut tightening as she grasped the edge of the bar (murmur, tighten grasp)"
4"she deflected, but the words tasted of denial (deflect, taste)"
5"he murmured softly (murmur softly)"
6"she replied, forcing a smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes (reply, force does not quite reach)"
7"she managed, her voice barely above a whisper (manage)"
8"she finally said, her voice a tapestry of longing and fear (finally say, voice long fear)"
9"Theo said with a distant warmth as genuine as it was fragile—an invitation (say be)"
78.1170%