Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEEAYEWJRE1E4ZVF12JQG

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.000274
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knocker raped an urgency against the door, and for a moment Rory wondered if she had imagined it. But the sound came again, more insistent now. She was positioned in front of the door, just steps from the three deadbolts that would shut out the world, let her crawl into bed and forget that any of this darkness was real. She could ignore it. fingers likely would be faster than the security locks; Luc would pick them in seconds.thumb But perhaps there was still a sliver of the man in there, still some goodness in the half-demon who once gave her his coat in the rain when she was shivering and exposed. Perhaps. She unlatched the locks and pulled the door open. Stepping back, she took in the sight of him. Silver rain shone in his slick blonde hair, ran down the angles of his too-sharp face. Charcoal suit. Striped silk shirt. A twisting sense of credibility made Rory wonder if it were appropriate for a fixer to look like he'd stepped out of the pages of an upscale men's magazine. But then, it was that same groomed appearance that once gave him the illusion of being a better man than he was. </snip> "What are you doing here?" Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady. "I...I thought our business was finished?"</error> She tried to keep the uncertainty from her tone, but there it was, plain as day: the softness. The memory of Luc's hands,estion
created_at"2026-02-17T02:21:48.618369+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:21:48 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount247
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount247
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences17
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences17
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
26.82% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences18
gibberishSentences2
adjustedGibberishSentences2
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0.111
matches
0"</snip>"
1"\"I...I thought our business was finished?\"</error>"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords247
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount236
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Luc2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Luc"
places(empty)
globalScore0.864
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences11
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount247
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences18
matches
0"forget that any"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs4
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
061
152
292
342
84.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences17
matches
0"was positioned"
24.56% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs38
matches
0"was shivering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences18
ratio0.056
matches
0"fingers likely would be faster than the security locks; Luc would pick them in seconds.thumb But perhaps there was still a sliver of the man in there, still some goodness in the half-demon who once gave her his coat in the rain when she was shivering and exposed."
86.16% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount215
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.05581395348837209
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004651162790697674
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences18
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences18
mean13.72
std12.52
cv0.913
sampleLengths
019
18
234
34
448
51
69
79
816
92
103
1129
1222
131
1413
156
1618
175
94.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.7222222222222222
totalSentences18
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences14
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences14
matches
0"She was positioned in front"
1"She could ignore it."
2"She unlatched the locks and"
3"She tried to keep the"
ratio0.286
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount9
totalSentences14
matches
0"The knocker raped an urgency"
1"She was positioned in front"
2"She could ignore it."
3"fingers likely would be faster"
4"She unlatched the locks and"
5"A twisting sense of credibility"
6"Rory demanded, trying to keep"
7"She tried to keep the"
8"The memory of Luc's hands,estion"
ratio0.643
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences14
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She was positioned in front of the door, just steps from the three deadbolts that would shut out the world, let her crawl into bed and forget that any of this d…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
66.7794%