Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEJ9VYVXAWRWVPTZ54B85

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9.5s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, where neon lights cast their multicolored glow on cobblestones slick with rain, the distinctive green sign of "The Raven's Nest" flickered like a beacon. The bar, nestled between a vintage record shop and a late-night kebab joint, was a relic of old London, its dim interior a sanctuary from the city's relentless pace. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, pushed open the heavy door, a bell jingling softly overhead. The warmth enveloped her, a stark contrast to the chill outside. She shook off her damp coat, revealing a simple black dress and boots that had seen better days. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair, still damp from the rain, framed her face, drawing attention to her bright blue eyes and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Rory had been living above the bar for months now, a sanctuary after fleeing her abusive ex and the life she'd left behind in Cardiff. She'd found solace in the rhythm of her days - deliveries by day, books and silence by night. But tonight, she craved company, something more than the usual nods and hellos from the regulars. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, was behind the counter, his auburn hair streaked with grey, neatly trimmed beard framing a face that bore the lines of a life well-lived. He moved with a slight limp, a remnant of his days as an MI6 field agent, pouring a pint of ale with the precision of a man who'd done it a thousand times before. His hazel eyes, sharp and observant, flicked up as Rory entered, a small smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "Evening, Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble. "Usual?" Rory nodded, sliding onto a stool at the counter. "Please, Silas." As Silas poured her pint, the door creaked open again, letting in a gust of cold air. A tall figure stepped in, shaking off an umbrella. The man was dressed in a tailored suit, his dark hair styled neatly, a far cry from the jeans and t-shirts he'd favored in their youth. He looked around the bar, his gaze landing on Rory. For a moment, he seemed frozen, then a smile spread across his face, transforming him into the boy she'd once known. "Rory," he said, striding over. "It's been ages." Aurora looked up, her eyes widening in surprise. "Evan," she breathed, the name slipping out before she could stop it. She quickly corrected herself, "I mean, Tom. It's been a while." Tom, or rather, Evan, as she'd known him in their shared past, slid onto the stool next to her. "Too long," he agreed, his eyes never leaving hers. "You look... different." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Different from the last time you saw me, you mean? Or different from the girl you knew in school?" Evan chuckled, running a hand through his hair. "Both, I suppose. You've always been beautiful, Rory. But now, there's something... more." Silas placed Rory's pint in front of her, giving Evan a pointed look. "What can I get you, Tom?" Evan ordered a whiskey, his gaze never leaving Rory. "So, what brings you to London, Rory? Last I heard, you were still in Cardiff." Rory took a sip of her beer, gathering her thoughts. "I moved here a few months ago. Needed a change of scenery." Evan nodded, but his eyes held a question. "And what do you do here? In London, I mean." Rory shrugged. "This and that. I work part-time at Golden Empress, deliver food. Nothing glamorous." Evan laughed, a sound that once would have made Rory's heart flutter. Now, it only served to remind her of the past. "You never were one for glamour, were you?" Rory smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "And you, Tom? What brings you to Silas' bar?" Evan leaned back, his whiskey in hand. "Business. I'm a lawyer now, you know. Partner at a firm in the city." Rory nodded, not surprised. Evan had always been ambitious, always had his sights set on something bigger. "That's... impressive." Evan waved a hand dismissively. "It's just a job. But enough about me. Tell me about you, Rory. What have you been up to? Who have you been?" Rory looked down at her scar, tracing the crescent shape absently. "I've been... figuring things out. Learning who I am, outside of what others expect me to be." Evan reached out, his fingers brushing against hers. "And who is that, Rory? Who are you?" Rory pulled her hand back, wrapping it around her pint glass. "Someone stronger than she was. Someone who knows her worth." Evan's smile faded, replaced by a look of regret. "I'm sorry, Rory. For everything." Rory looked at him, her eyes hard. "Are you, Tom? Or are you just sorry you got caught?" Evan flinched, looking down at his whiskey. "I deserved that. I know I hurt you, Rory. I know I wasn't the man you thought I was." Rory took a deep breath, her voice steady. "You were right, Tom. I didn't know you. Not really. But I know myself now. And I know that I deserve better." Evan looked up, his eyes filled with a mix of regret and longing. "You always did, Rory. Always." Silas, who had been quietly cleaning glasses, looked up at them. "You two look like you've got some catching up to do. Why don't you take it to the back? First round's on the house." Rory looked at Silas, then at Evan. She hesitated, then nodded. "Alright. But just for a little while." Evan smiled, standing up. "Lead the way." Rory slid off her stool, leading Evan towards the back of the bar. She pushed aside a bookshelf, revealing a hidden room. It was small, filled with worn furniture and the faint scent of old books and pipe tobacco. Evan looked around, his eyes widening in surprise. "What is this place?" Rory smiled, sitting down on a worn leather sofa. "Silas' secret. He uses it for... private conversations." Evan sat down next to her, his knee brushing against hers. "So, what do you want to talk about, Rory?" Rory looked at him, her expression serious. "I want to talk about us. About who we were, and who we are now. About the weight of time and the regret that comes with it." Evan nodded, his eyes never leaving hers. "Alright, Rory. Let's talk." And so, under the soft glow of an old lamp, surrounded by the echoes of secrets past, Aurora Carter and the man she once knew as Evan began to pick apart the threads of their shared history. They talked of laughter and tears, of love lost and found, of the weight of time and the unspoken regrets that haunted them both. And as the night wore on, the bar outside faded away, leaving only the two of them, bound by the past and the promise of a new beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She quickly corrected herself [quickly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.053
87.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1159
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1159
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"solace"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"beacon"
2"sanctuary"
3"warmth"
4"stark"
5"chill"
6"solace"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
9"eyebrow"
10"tracing"
11"weight"
12"echoes"
13"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
98.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences62
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"g in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount808
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
London1
Carter2
Rory21
Cardiff1
Blackwood1
Silas5
Aurora3
Tom1
Evan20
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Tom"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.2
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed frozen then a smile spread across his face, transforming him into the boy she'd once known"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1160
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29
std21.06
cv0.726
sampleLengths
058
175
259
384
410
511
683
78
831
931
1023
1121
1219
1324
1422
1518
1615
1730
1817
1921
2019
2128
2228
2316
2421
2514
2618
2726
2830
2918
3035
3118
327
3339
3412
3517
3620
3734
3811
3989
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was dressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences94
ratio0.011
matches
0"She'd found solace in the rhythm of her days - deliveries by day, books and silence by night."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount811
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03945745992601726
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011097410604192354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.34
std7.89
cv0.64
sampleLengths
029
129
217
311
418
529
625
718
816
929
1034
1121
129
131
149
152
1617
179
1826
1910
2021
215
223
238
2412
2511
2619
279
283
294
3019
318
3213
3313
346
359
3615
3710
3812
398
4010
412
4213
4312
4410
458
468
479
487
4914
63.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences61
matches
0"She shook off her damp"
1"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair,"
2"She'd found solace in the"
3"He moved with a slight"
4"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"He looked around the bar,"
7"he said, striding over"
8"she breathed, the name slipping"
9"She quickly corrected herself,"
10"he agreed, his eyes never"
11"She hesitated, then nodded."
12"She pushed aside a bookshelf,"
13"It was small, filled with"
14"They talked of laughter and"
ratio0.246
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"The bar, nestled between a"
1"Aurora Carter, known to most"
2"The warmth enveloped her, a"
3"She shook off her damp"
4"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair,"
5"Rory had been living above"
6"She'd found solace in the"
7"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,"
8"He moved with a slight"
9"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
10"he said, his voice a"
11"Rory nodded, sliding onto a"
12"A tall figure stepped in,"
13"The man was dressed in"
14"He looked around the bar,"
15"he said, striding over"
16"Aurora looked up, her eyes"
17"she breathed, the name slipping"
18"She quickly corrected herself,"
19"Tom, or rather, Evan, as"
ratio0.885
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Now, it only served to"
ratio0.016
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, was behind the counter, his auburn hair streaked with grey, neatly trimmed beard framing a face that bore the lines of a life …"
1"He moved with a slight limp, a remnant of his days as an MI6 field agent, pouring a pint of ale with the precision of a man who'd done it a thousand times befor…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble"
1"she breathed, the name slipping out before she could stop it"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"She quickly corrected herself (correct)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.158
81.3585%