Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1085
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.035023041474654376
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.011059907834101382
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
16.46
std
8.49
cv
0.516
sampleLengths
0
27
1
13
2
18
3
18
4
28
5
18
6
22
7
14
8
25
9
15
10
16
11
10
12
19
13
11
14
19
15
23
16
25
17
7
18
12
19
8
20
18
21
17
22
1
23
15
24
29
25
19
26
5
27
14
28
30
29
36
30
20
31
6
32
26
33
6
34
4
35
22
36
5
37
22
38
23
39
5
40
6
41
10
42
15
43
9
44
12
45
20
46
14
47
26
48
22
49
18
78.7037%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.4722222222222222
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
34
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"Inside, (inside)"
1
"he murmured, speaking just above the clink of a glass against wood (murmur, speak just)"
2
"she replied, her own voice softened by familiarity (reply, soften)"
3
"he said, her old name rolling off his tongue like it hadn’t been years since they’d last met (say, roll does not be last met)"
4
"she replied, settling into the chair opposite him, as if coaxing her memories to match the shape of the man he had become (reply, settle coax match become)"
5
"Evan said, lifting his drink (say, lift)"
6
"Evan ventured, his voice lowering as if to hide the vulnerability the words exposed (venture, lower hide expose)"
7
"she said simply, letting the weight of the years they’d missed fill the gaps in her explanation (say simply, let missed fill)"