Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPEKH8R7VT8ZKT999WK54Y

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moon hung low over Richmond Park, casting a silvery glow that danced across the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the clearing, her breath visible in the crisp night air. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly against her palm, a subtle warmth that seemed to seep into her skin. The silver chain dangled between her fingers, catching the moonlight like a spider’s web. Rory had come here for answers. The pendant, given to her by an unknown benefactor, had led her to this place, its warmth intensifying as she approached the grove. She had heard whispers of the Fae Grove, a hidden clearing that existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, where time moved differently. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. The thought unsettled her, but curiosity and a need for understanding drove her forward. The grove was eerily silent, save for the occasional rustle of leaves in the gentle breeze. Wildflowers bloomed in vibrant colors, defying the season, their petals glistening with dew. Rory took a cautious step forward, her boots crunching softly on the grass. The air felt thick, charged with an energy that made the hair on her arms stand on end. As she moved deeper into the grove, the wrongness began to creep in. It was subtle at first—a whisper of sound that didn’t belong, a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision. She paused, her heart thudding in her chest, and scanned the clearing. Nothing. Just the standing stones, the wildflowers, and the moonlit shadows stretching across the ground. Rory shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that clung to her like a second skin. She was alone. She had to be. But the feeling persisted, a growing certainty that she was not as solitary as she appeared. She tightened her grip on the pendant, its warmth a small comfort in the encroaching darkness. A soft rustling drew her attention to the left. She turned sharply, her eyes narrowing as she peered into the shadows. The trees stood silent and still, their branches swaying gently in the breeze. She took a deep breath, willing her racing heart to slow. It was just the wind, she told herself. Just the wind. But the rustling came again, closer this time, and Rory’s skin prickled with unease. She took a step back, her foot catching on a root, and stumbled. The pendant slipped from her grasp, swinging wildly on its chain before settling against her chest. She steadied herself, her eyes darting around the grove, searching for the source of the sound. A low, melodic hum began to fill the air, a haunting tune that seemed to emanate from the very stones themselves. It was beautiful and terrible all at once, a song that tugged at the edges of her mind, urging her to listen, to follow. Rory shook her head, trying to clear the fog that threatened to cloud her thoughts. She couldn’t lose herself here. Not now. The hum grew louder, more insistent, and Rory felt an inexplicable pull toward the center of the grove. Her feet moved of their own accord, carrying her forward despite the warning bells ringing in her mind. She reached the heart of the clearing, where the standing stones formed a perfect circle, and stopped. The air was different here, heavier, as if the very fabric of reality was stretched thin. Rory could feel it pressing down on her, a tangible weight that made it hard to breathe. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes wide with apprehension. The shadows seemed to shift and writhe, forming shapes that danced just beyond the reach of the moonlight. A sudden chill swept through the grove, and Rory shivered, wrapping her arms around herself. The pendant pulsed against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold that seeped into her bones. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to leave, to run, but her feet refused to obey. The hum reached a crescendo, a symphony of sound that filled the clearing, and Rory felt a presence behind her. She spun around, her heart leaping into her throat, but there was nothing there. Just the stones and the shadows, silent and watchful. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice barely more than a whisper. The grove swallowed the sound, leaving her words hanging in the air like a fragile thread. Silence answered her, a heavy, oppressive silence that pressed in from all sides. Rory’s pulse thundered in her ears, and she took another step back, her eyes darting from shadow to shadow. She could feel it now, the presence, a dark, malevolent force that seemed to seep from the very ground beneath her feet. The pendant flared with heat, a sudden, searing warmth that made her gasp. She clutched it tightly, the metal biting into her palm, and felt a surge of energy course through her. It was as if the pendant was alive, a living thing that pulsed with power and purpose. Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the warmth, the steady rhythm that matched the beat of her heart. She could feel the presence circling her, a predator stalking its prey, and she knew she had to act. She couldn’t let it take her, couldn’t let it drag her into the darkness. With a deep breath, she opened her eyes and took a step forward, her gaze fixed on the standing stones. The hum had faded to a low, thrumming pulse, a heartbeat that echoed her own. She could feel the energy building, a crescendo of power that crackled in the air around her. The presence loomed closer, a shadow that threatened to engulf her, and Rory knew she had to move. She took another step, then another, her feet finding purchase on the uneven ground. The pendant pulsed in time with her steps, guiding her, urging her onward. As she reached the edge of the grove, the presence surged forward, a wave of darkness that threatened to swallow her whole. Rory stumbled, her breath catching in her throat, but she didn’t stop. She couldn’t stop. Not now. With a final, desperate burst of speed, she broke free of the grove, the standing stones falling away behind her. The presence faltered, held at bay by the boundary, and Rory collapsed to her knees, gasping for breath. The pendant lay warm and heavy against her chest, its glow a faint, reassuring light in the darkness. She clutched it tightly, her fingers trembling, and felt a sense of calm wash over her. She had made it. She was safe. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
29.4533% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"softly"
3"tightly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"searing"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"solitary"
count1
10
word"apprehension"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"symphony"
2"searing"
3"flicker"
4"glistening"
5"oppressive"
6"loomed"
7"unsettled"
8"stark"
9"solitary"
10"apprehension"
11"weight"
12"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
50.1831% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean51.5
std16.77
cv0.326
sampleLengths
087
178
260
361
456
556
659
767
853
961
1054
1143
1227
1354
1449
1551
1652
1745
1839
1938
2041
212
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was stretched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1132
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02561837455830389
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0088339222614841
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.34
std6.07
cv0.423
sampleLengths
026
123
224
314
46
523
626
79
814
916
1013
1113
1218
1313
1421
1512
161
1714
1817
193
204
2116
2216
239
2412
2513
2611
278
283
2914
3013
3116
3216
3321
3424
3515
365
372
3818
3918
4017
4116
4217
4310
4418
4515
4619
4720
4820
4914
42.4051% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.22784810126582278
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners18
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
83.6495%