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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPESM1P9YYV18YMFK761CJ
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Model:
DeepSeek-V2 Chat
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.001872
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door, the green neon glow from the sign outside casting an eerie halo around her black hair. She shook off the London drizzle, her bright blue eyes scanning the dim interior. The bar was quiet for a Thursday evening—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, the clink of ice against glass punctuating the low murmur of conversation. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, running her thumb absently over the crescent scar on her left wrist. The bartender—a new guy, young and eager—nodded at her. "The usual?" Rory shook her head. "Not tonight. Whiskey. Neat." The bartender raised an eyebrow but said nothing, reaching for the bottle of single malt Silas kept behind the counter for special occasions. As he poured, the door opened again, letting in a gust of damp air. Rory didn't look up until she heard the voice. "Rory?" Her fingers froze around the glass. That voice—deep, familiar, rougher around the edges than she remembered. She turned
slowly
, her pulse thudding in her throat. Evan stood there, his dark coat dripping onto the floorboards. He was taller than she remembered, broader, his once-boyish features hardened by time. His hair was shorter, cropped close to his skull, and there was a scar cutting through his left eyebrow that hadn't been there before. "Evan," she said, her voice steady despite the way her stomach twisted. He exhaled, a slow, measured breath, as if he'd been holding it for years. "I thought it was you." Silence stretched between them, thick with everything unsaid. The bartender cleared his throat and discreetly moved down the counter. Evan stepped closer, hesitating before taking the stool beside her. "Can I—?" Rory pushed the whiskey toward him. He caught it before it slid off the edge, his fingers brushing hers. A spark of memory—his hands, gentle once, then not. She pulled back. "You look good," he said, his gaze flickering over her face. She snorted. "Liar." The corner of his mouth twitched. "Still blunt as ever." "Still trying to charm your way out of things?" He winced, but didn’t deny it. Instead, he lifted the glass and took a sip. The whiskey caught the low light, amber and sharp. "I didn't know you were in London." "I didn't exactly send out announcements." Evan set the glass down
carefully
. "Fair enough." The silence returned, heavier this time. Rory studied him—the way his shoulders hunched
slightly
, the tension in his jaw. He was different. Not just older, but quieter. The fire that had once burned in him, the one that had drawn her in and then burned her,
was banked
. "Why are you here, Evan?" He hesitated. "Work." "Work," she repeated flatly. "Yeah. Security consulting." She almost laughed. "You? Security?" His fingers tightened around the glass. "People change, Rory." "Do they?" He met her gaze then, and for the first time, she saw it—the
weight
in his eyes, the regret. "Yeah," he said
softly
. "They do." She looked away,
suddenly
unable to hold his stare. The bar felt too small, the air too thick. She wanted to leave, to walk out and never look back. But she didn’t. "You left," she said finally. Evan exhaled. "I know." "No note. No call. Just gone." "I was an idiot." "That's not an apology." He ran a hand over his face. "I'm sorry, Rory. For all of it." She swallowed hard, the words lodging in her chest. She hadn’t realized how much she’d wanted to hear them until they were out in the open, raw and unpolished. The door to the back room opened, and Silas emerged, his limp more pronounced in the damp weather. He paused when he saw them, his sharp eyes flicking between Rory and Evan. "Everything all right?" he asked, his voice low. Rory nodded. "Yeah. Just catching up." Silas studied Evan for a long moment before giving a curt nod. "Don’t stay up too late. You’ve got deliveries in the morning." Evan watched Silas retreat, his brow
furrowed
. "You work here?" "Part-time." He frowned. "I thought you were going to law school." She shrugged. "Plans change." Evan opened his mouth, then closed it again. He looked down at his hands, at the scars and calluses there. "I heard about your dad. I’m sorry." Rory stiffened. "Don’t." "I just—" "Don’t," she repeated, sharper this time. He fell silent. The
weight
of the years between them pressed down, suffocating. Rory pushed her stool back, the legs scraping against the floor. "I should go." Evan didn’t
try to
stop her. He just nodded, his expression
unreadable
. "Take care of yourself, Rory." She paused at the door, the neon light painting her in green. "You too, Evan." And then she stepped out into the rain, leaving the past behind her once more.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:22:29.589366+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:22:29 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she repeated flatly [flatly]"
1
"he said softly [softly]"
2
"she said finally [finally]"
39.3204%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
824
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.4563%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
824
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"unreadable"
count
1
1
word
"furrowed"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"unreadable"
1
"furrowed"
2
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
71
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"try to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
106
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
54
mean
15.09
std
14.35
cv
0.95
sampleLengths
0
74
1
35
2
8
3
37
4
9
5
1
6
25
7
47
8
12
9
19
10
19
11
12
12
31
13
11
14
3
15
10
16
9
17
31
18
6
19
8
20
48
21
5
22
3
23
4
24
3
25
5
26
9
27
2
28
25
29
32
30
5
31
4
32
6
33
4
34
4
35
14
36
29
37
32
38
8
39
6
40
23
41
10
42
1
43
10
44
4
45
27
46
3
47
2
48
6
49
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"was banked"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
124
matches
(empty)
89.7637%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
677
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.051698670605613
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.013293943870014771
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
7.69
std
5.79
cv
0.753
sampleLengths
0
10
1
23
2
14
3
27
4
24
5
9
6
2
7
4
8
4
9
23
10
14
11
9
12
1
13
6
14
10
15
9
16
10
17
13
18
24
19
12
20
14
21
5
22
8
23
11
24
10
25
2
26
6
27
13
28
9
29
3
30
11
31
2
32
1
33
6
34
4
35
9
36
6
37
9
38
9
39
7
40
6
41
6
42
2
43
6
44
13
45
3
46
5
47
21
48
5
49
2
47.7987%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.32075471698113206
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
34
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice steady despite the way her stomach twisted (say, twist)"
1
"he said, his gaze flickering over her face (say, flicker)"
2
"she repeated flatly (repeat flatly)"
3
"he said softly (say softly)"
4
"she said finally (say finally)"
5
"she repeated, sharper this time (repeat)"
78.1376%