| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 88.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 442 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 442 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "ephemeral" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "firmly" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 21 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 21 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 73.46% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "And the Fae文字Oracle was right." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 444 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.85% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 391 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Violet | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | PrinceBelphgé | 1 | | Sorcery | 1 | | Anchor | 1 | | Unaware | 1 | | Rickey | 1 | | Vega | 1 | | Ned | 1 | | Kansas | 1 | | Petitjohn | 1 | | Finmoe | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Violet" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "PrinceBelphgé" | | 6 | "Rickey" | | 7 | "Ned" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Sorcery" | | 2 | "Kansas" |
| | globalScore | 0.988 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed able to pick up on" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 444 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 23 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 26.12 | | std | 18.05 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 70 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 21 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 23 | | ratio | 0.174 | | matches | | 0 | "In its center, a pale-throated symbol - the same as the one seared into Rory's bones a year ago marked by PrinceBelphgé's acolytes." | | 1 | "A chill ran down her spine: The agentVolceran was a powerful, ancient demon both devious enough to have set them upon this conviction—the same fateful choice that had driven Nyx from Sorcery." | | 2 | "Una young, human sorcerers daughter ever one of poifffers and whom she resembled to many accolades, her uncle Ned - shadow of small Kansas." | | 3 | "And (a heart by Petitjohn ribbons corps - Finmoe many moving-related" |
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| 99.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 396 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.04040404040404041 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020202020202020204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 23 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 23 | | mean | 19.3 | | std | 10.43 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 |
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| 95.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.782608695652174 | | totalSentences | 23 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "Her unblinking lavender eyes searched" | | 1 | "She said softly yet firmly" |
| | ratio | 0.1 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae grove whisper: Once" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "The undergrowth was alive with" | | 3 | "The Violet whispered" | | 4 | "Isolde's silver hair drifted as" | | 5 | "Her unblinking lavender eyes searched" | | 6 | "A crystalline wafer drifted down" | | 7 | "fruition that time in short" | | 8 | "She said softly yet firmly" | | 9 | "A chill ran down her" | | 10 | "aurora paused# ruby# necklace pendant" | | 11 | "Nyx is tall: it was" | | 12 | "Una young, human sorcerers daughter" |
| | ratio | 0.65 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 13 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones were no longer than a memory, swallowed by the whorls and eddies of kaleidoscopic hangings that shimmered in the half-light filt…" | | 1 | "Isolde's silver hair drifted as if underwater troubled by the blatant introductions of an outsider familiar sight of a familiar -or mass." | | 2 | "For a moment, Aurora wondered if perhaps the path of fast-moving leaves and rippling shadows that had sought them." | | 3 | "fruition that time in short bursts, as if It's The air was abruptly clear as days of doubt and uncertainty melted away like morning frost under the summer sun." | | 4 | "A chill ran down her spine: The agentVolceran was a powerful, ancient demon both devious enough to have set them upon this conviction—the same fateful choice th…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The Violet whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |