Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF2DDJ4HDFNGT4SMSMWWF

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Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.000659
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The darkness within the Fae Grove was almost palpable, a living entity that wrapped around Rory like a shroud. She stepped cautiously, her eyes straining to pierce the gloom. The ancient oak standing stones, once a reassuring presence, now loomed like sentinels, their branches etched against the faint moonlight like skeletal fingers. Rory's hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth against her chest. She had come to the Grove seeking solace, a respite from the turmoil that had been brewing in her life. The pendant, a gift from an unknown benefactor, seemed to hum with an otherworldly energy, drawing her to this place. Yet, as she walked deeper into the clearing, a growing sense of unease began to crawl under her skin. The air was heavy with the scent of wildflowers, their delicate blooms swaying in the breeze like ghostly whispers. Rory's footfalls echoed through the stillness, the only sound in a silence that felt oppressive. She slowed her pace, her senses on high alert. Something didn't feel right. A faint rustling in the underbrush caught her attention. Rory's heart quickened as she spun toward the noise, her eyes scanning the darkness. A rabbit, its eyes glowing like lanterns in the dark, darted across her path. She exhaled a shaky breath, chiding herself for the jumpiness. But the feeling of being watched persisted. As she continued through the Grove, the silence began to take on a life of its own. The trees seemed to loom closer, their branches tangling overhead like a canopy of skeletal fingers. Rory's skin prickled with gooseflesh. She could have sworn she heard the soft creak of a branch, the faint whisper of a voice on the wind. But whenever she turned to listen, there was nothing. A faint, flickering glow caught her attention. A wildflower, its petals shimmering like moonlight, seemed to be growing in the center of the clearing. Rory approached cautiously, her hand still clutching the pendant. As she drew closer, the flower's glow intensified, casting an ethereal light across the surrounding trees. Suddenly, the petals folded inward, plunging the clearing into darkness. Rory's breath caught in her throat. The silence was absolute, a vacuum that seemed to suck the air from her lungs. And then, a low, keening wail echoed through the Grove, sending shivers down her spine. The sound seemed to come from all directions at once, a mournful cry that spoke of ancient sorrow and loss. Rory's heart pounded in her chest as she spun around, trying to locate the source of the wail. But there was nothing to see. The trees stood motionless, their branches creaking softly in the breeze. The wail grew louder, more insistent, until it seemed to be coming from inside her own head. Rory's vision began to blur, the darkness closing in around her like a suffocating shroud. She stumbled, her foot catching on a hidden root. As she fell, the pendant's glow surged, casting an eerie light across the surrounding trees. For a moment, Rory saw something moving at the edge of her vision – a shadowy figure, its eyes glowing like lanterns in the dark. She tried to scream, but her voice was lost in the wail, which seemed to be building to a crescendo. And then, everything went black. When Rory came to, she was lying on the forest floor, the moon overhead casting an silver glow across the clearing. The wail had stopped, replaced by an oppressive silence. She sat up slowly, her head spinning, and looked around. The wildflowers still bloomed, their delicate petals swaying in the breeze. But something was different. The air felt heavier, the shadows deeper and more sinister. Rory knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she was not alone in the Grove. The pendant, still pulsing with warmth against her chest, seemed to be urging her to leave. She scrambled to her feet, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of movement. And then, she turned and ran, not stopping until she stumbled out of the Grove and into the bright, shining lights of the mortal world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
63.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount694
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount694
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"solace"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"silence"
count4
11
word"oppressive"
count2
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"sinister"
count1
17
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"gloom"
2"loomed"
3"sentinels"
4"etched"
5"warmth"
6"solace"
7"otherworldly"
8"sense of"
9"echoed"
10"silence"
11"oppressive"
12"quickened"
13"scanning"
14"whisper"
15"down her spine"
16"sinister"
17"chilled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was heavy with"
91.67% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences50
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"g with warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount12
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords695
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount695
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove6
Rory12
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.637
windowScore0.833
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"vacuum that seemed to suck the air from her lungs"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount695
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
50.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean53.46
std17.45
cv0.326
sampleLengths
052
178
247
354
468
549
646
755
856
945
105
1165
1275
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was lying"
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences50
ratio0.02
matches
0"For a moment, Rory saw something moving at the edge of her vision – a shadowy figure, its eyes glowing like lanterns in the dark."
99.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.040345821325648415
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01440922190201729
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean13.9
std5.63
cv0.405
sampleLengths
019
110
223
319
420
520
619
719
815
99
104
119
1214
1314
1410
157
1617
1716
185
1921
209
217
2217
239
2416
2510
266
2715
2815
2920
3018
316
3211
3317
3415
359
3615
3725
3820
395
4021
419
4210
4311
444
4510
4619
4716
4815
4925
46.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.24
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners12
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Suddenly, the petals folded inward,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences50
matches
0"She stepped cautiously, her eyes"
1"She had come to the"
2"She slowed her pace, her"
3"She exhaled a shaky breath,"
4"She could have sworn she"
5"She stumbled, her foot catching"
6"She tried to scream, but"
7"She sat up slowly, her"
8"She scrambled to her feet,"
ratio0.18
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences50
matches
0"The darkness within the Fae"
1"She stepped cautiously, her eyes"
2"The ancient oak standing stones,"
3"Rory's hand instinctively went to"
4"She had come to the"
5"The pendant, a gift from"
6"The air was heavy with"
7"Rory's footfalls echoed through the"
8"She slowed her pace, her"
9"Something didn't feel right."
10"A faint rustling in the"
11"Rory's heart quickened as she"
12"A rabbit, its eyes glowing"
13"She exhaled a shaky breath,"
14"The trees seemed to loom"
15"Rory's skin prickled with gooseflesh."
16"She could have sworn she"
17"A faint, flickering glow caught"
18"A wildflower, its petals shimmering"
19"Rory approached cautiously, her hand"
ratio0.72
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Yet, as she walked deeper"
ratio0.02
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory's footfalls echoed through the stillness, the only sound in a silence that felt oppressive."
1"A wildflower, its petals shimmering like moonlight, seemed to be growing in the center of the clearing."
2"The sound seemed to come from all directions at once, a mournful cry that spoke of ancient sorrow and loss."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7233%