Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF46TP102GBQXGTKVZ5NA

Run Details

Duration:
27.8s
Cost:
$0.001036

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like distant chimes. Aurora Carter leaned against the bar, her bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit room, taking in the familiar chaos of Silas Blackwood’s establishment. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, whispered stories of a time long past, much like the memories that flickered in her mind. She absently traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of childhood mischief, as she waited for Silas to pour her a drink. “Rory!” Silas called, his voice a warm rumble that cut through the haze of the bar. He emerged from behind the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the soft glow of the green neon sign above the entrance. “What’ll it be tonight?” “Just a gin and tonic, Si,” she replied, her voice steady despite the flutter of nerves in her stomach. It had been a long day of deliveries, and the bar felt like a refuge, a place where she could shed the weight of her responsibilities, if only for a moment. As Silas poured her drink, she caught sight of a figure entering the bar, the door swinging open to reveal a gust of cool night air. The newcomer stepped inside, shaking off the chill, and for a heartbeat, time seemed to freeze. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as recognition washed over her like a wave. “Eva?” The name slipped from her lips before she could stop it. The woman turned, her features illuminated by the soft light of the bar. Eva, once a vibrant spirit with wild curls and an infectious laugh, now stood before her with a polished elegance that felt foreign. Her hair was sleek and straight, framing a face that had matured into something striking, yet distant. The years had sculpted her into a woman who commanded attention, but the warmth that once radiated from her was now tempered by an air of restraint. “Rory,” Eva replied, her voice a mixture of surprise and something else—something unspoken that hung between them like a fragile thread. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” Aurora felt the weight of the years pressing down on her, the distance that had grown between them palpable in the air. “It’s been a while,” she said, forcing a smile that felt more like a mask than a genuine expression. “How have you been?” “Busy,” Eva replied, her gaze flickering to Silas, who was now watching the exchange with a knowing look. “I’ve been working in marketing. Moved up the ladder pretty quickly, actually.” “Good for you,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the pang of envy that twisted in her gut. “I’m still delivering takeout for the Golden Empress.” “Still in London, then?” Eva asked, her tone casual, but Aurora could sense the underlying curiosity. “Yeah, I’m… I’m still here.” The words felt heavy, laden with the weight of her choices. She glanced at Silas, who was now polishing a glass, his attention divided but his presence a comforting anchor. “I live above the bar now.” “Above Silas’ place?” Eva’s eyebrows arched in surprise. “I didn’t know you two were close.” “Close enough,” Aurora replied, her heart racing as she felt the familiar tension of their past creeping back in. “He’s been a good friend.” “Good to hear.” Eva’s smile was polite, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “I always thought you’d end up somewhere more… prestigious.” Aurora’s chest tightened at the implication. “I didn’t exactly follow the plan, did I?” she said, her voice sharper than intended. “You know how it is.” “Do I?” Eva’s gaze hardened, and for a moment, the years melted away, leaving behind the raw edges of their shared history. “You always had a way of running from things, Rory.” “Running?” Aurora echoed, her pulse quickening. “I left Cardiff to escape an abusive relationship. I thought you’d understand.” Eva’s expression softened, but the distance remained. “I do understand. I just… I thought you’d find a way to make it work. You were always so smart.” “Smart enough to know when to leave,” Aurora shot back, the words escaping before she could rein them in. “And what about you? You left too, didn’t you? But you didn’t just run; you reinvented yourself.” “Maybe I had to,” Eva replied, her voice steady, but Aurora could see the flicker of vulnerability beneath her composed exterior. “We all have our battles, Rory.” “Yeah, but some battles leave scars,” Aurora said, her fingers brushing against her wrist, the crescent mark a reminder of her past. “I thought we were in this together.” “We were,” Eva said, her voice softening. “But we chose different paths. I thought you’d be proud of me.” “I am proud of you,” Aurora said, the sincerity breaking through the tension. “I just… I wish we could have shared it. I wish I could have shared my struggles with you.” Eva’s gaze dropped to her drink, the silence stretching between them like a chasm. “I didn’t know how to reach out. I thought you needed space.” “Space?” Aurora laughed, a bitter sound that echoed in the dim light. “I needed a friend. I needed you.” “I was trying to be strong for both of us,” Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. “But I see now that I was just running away from my own fears.” “Maybe we both were,” Aurora said, her heart aching with the weight of unspoken regrets. “We lost touch, and I didn’t know how to find you again.” “Maybe we can start over,” Eva suggested, her eyes meeting Aurora’s with a flicker of hope. “I’d like that.” “Start over?” Aurora echoed, the idea both thrilling and terrifying. “After all this time?” “Why not?” Eva smiled, a genuine warmth returning to her expression. “We’re still the same people, just… different versions.” “Different versions,” Aurora mused, the words hanging in the air. “I guess we’ve both changed.” “Maybe we can help each other find our way back,” Eva said, her voice steady. “I could use a friend who knows me, who remembers who I was.” Aurora felt a spark of something—possibility, perhaps. “I’d like that too,” she said, her heart swelling with a mix of hope and trepidation. “But it won’t be easy.” “Nothing worth having ever is,” Eva replied, her smile brightening the shadows of the bar. “Let’s take it one step at a time.” As they clinked their glasses together, the sound resonated like a promise, a fragile thread weaving their lives back together. The Raven’s Nest, with its dim light and whispered secrets, felt like a sanctuary, a place where they could begin to navigate the complexities of their past and the uncertainty of their future. In that moment, surrounded by the echoes of laughter and the warmth of old memories, Aurora realized that perhaps they could find their way back to each other after all.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said, forcing a smile that felt more like a mask than a genuine expression [more]"
1"Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
82.8620% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"pang"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"trepidation"
count1
8
word"weight"
count4
9
word"echoed"
count3
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"sanctuary"
2"pang"
3"resonated"
4"flickered"
5"flicker"
6"unspoken"
7"trepidation"
8"weight"
9"echoed"
10"echoes"
11"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of hope"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.25
std19.04
cv0.591
sampleLengths
095
142
250
356
412
580
628
745
830
926
1016
1141
1215
1324
1422
1526
1632
1718
1827
1936
2027
2129
2219
2332
2426
2519
2632
2727
2819
2914
3019
3115
3228
3328
3423
3583
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount792
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.017676767676767676
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005050505050505051
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.33
std7
cv0.488
sampleLengths
020
124
225
326
416
522
64
719
831
926
1016
1114
1212
1313
1423
1517
1627
1721
187
1922
2019
214
2218
2312
2418
258
2616
2716
2819
296
308
317
3219
335
3413
359
366
3715
385
3922
4010
416
4212
437
4420
4519
4617
4721
486
4922
69.5473% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43209876543209874
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners35
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"Eva replied, her voice a mixture of surprise and something else—something unspoken that hung between them like a fragile thread (reply, voice hang like)"
1"she said, forcing a smile that felt more like a mask than a genuine expression (say, force more like)"
2"Eva replied, her gaze flickering to Silas, who was now watching the exchange with a knowing look (reply, flicker be watch)"
3"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the pang of envy that twisted in her gut (say, twist)"
4"Aurora replied, her heart racing as she felt the familiar tension of their past creeping back in (reply, race feel creep back)"
5"Aurora shot back, the words escaping before she could rein them in (shoot back, escape rein)"
6"Eva replied, her voice steady, but Aurora could see the flicker of vulnerability beneath her composed exterior (reply, see)"
7"Aurora said, her fingers brushing against her wrist, the crescent mark a reminder of her past (say, brush mark)"
8"Eva said, her voice softening (say, soften)"
9"Aurora said, the sincerity breaking through the tension (say, break)"
10"laughed (laugh)"
11"Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
12"Aurora said, her heart aching with the weight of unspoken regrets (say, ache)"
13"Eva suggested, her eyes meeting Aurora’s with a flicker of hope (suggest, be)"
14"Aurora mused, the words hanging in the air (muse, hang)"
15"she said, her heart swelling with a mix of hope and trepidation (say, swell)"
16"Eva replied, her smile brightening the shadows of the bar (reply, brighten)"
85.0829%