Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
792
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.017676767676767676
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.005050505050505051
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
81
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
81
mean
14.33
std
7
cv
0.488
sampleLengths
0
20
1
24
2
25
3
26
4
16
5
22
6
4
7
19
8
31
9
26
10
16
11
14
12
12
13
13
14
23
15
17
16
27
17
21
18
7
19
22
20
19
21
4
22
18
23
12
24
18
25
8
26
16
27
16
28
19
29
6
30
8
31
7
32
19
33
5
34
13
35
9
36
6
37
15
38
5
39
22
40
10
41
6
42
12
43
7
44
20
45
19
46
17
47
21
48
6
49
22
69.5473%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.43209876543209874
totalSentences
81
uniqueOpeners
35
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
22
fancyCount
17
fancyTags
0
"Eva replied, her voice a mixture of surprise and something else—something unspoken that hung between them like a fragile thread (reply, voice hang like)"
1
"she said, forcing a smile that felt more like a mask than a genuine expression (say, force more like)"
2
"Eva replied, her gaze flickering to Silas, who was now watching the exchange with a knowing look (reply, flicker be watch)"
3
"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the pang of envy that twisted in her gut (say, twist)"
4
"Aurora replied, her heart racing as she felt the familiar tension of their past creeping back in (reply, race feel creep back)"
5
"Aurora shot back, the words escaping before she could rein them in (shoot back, escape rein)"
6
"Eva replied, her voice steady, but Aurora could see the flicker of vulnerability beneath her composed exterior (reply, see)"
7
"Aurora said, her fingers brushing against her wrist, the crescent mark a reminder of her past (say, brush mark)"
8
"Eva said, her voice softening (say, soften)"
9
"Aurora said, the sincerity breaking through the tension (say, break)"
10
"laughed (laugh)"
11
"Eva admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
12
"Aurora said, her heart aching with the weight of unspoken regrets (say, ache)"
13
"Eva suggested, her eyes meeting Aurora’s with a flicker of hope (suggest, be)"
14
"Aurora mused, the words hanging in the air (muse, hang)"
15
"she said, her heart swelling with a mix of hope and trepidation (say, swell)"
16
"Eva replied, her smile brightening the shadows of the bar (reply, brighten)"