Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF54GKXDH8PXRSH83XQVR

Run Details

Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.002735
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to few outside her inner circle as Rory, dodged the swing of the front door as a chorus of laughter and clinking glasses enveloped her. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest had beckoned like an old friend, promising a fleeting escape from the drizzle-soaked London evening. She slipped into the dimly lit bar, the hum of conversation and the soft strains of a forgotten jazz standard wrapping around her like a damp shroud. Rory's gaze, illuminated by the brief flash of her bright blue eyes adjusting to the indoor light, swept the room. The bar, a testament to Silas' eclectic tastes, was a tapestry of old maps, black-and-white photographs, and the occasional patron who seemed woven from the same vintage fabric. Her eyes finally came to rest on a figure at the end of the bar, partially obscured by the curve of the polished mahogany. Time, in its insidious way, had sharpened the jawline of the man who now caught her stare, deepening the contours of his face. Yet, it was his eyes, a profound, melancholic brown, that unraveled her composure. "Evan," she whispered, the sound lost in the ambient noise. Evan, her ex, the man from whom she'd fled Cardiff with only the scars, literal and figurative, to remind her of their tumultuous past, turned. Their gazes met, and for a moment, the lapse of years thinned, becoming almost palpable. Rory felt the weight of unspoken regret settle upon her, as tangible as the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood far removed from the tumult that followed. She made her way towards him, her steps light on the worn wooden floor, a practiced nonchalance belied by the flutter in her chest. As she approached, Evan slid off his stool, his movements economical, hinting at a physicality he hadn't possessed in their shared past. The differences in him were jarring, a stark reflection of the changes time had wrought upon them both. "Aurora," he said, his voice deeper, the edges smoother, polished by years she had no knowledge of. The use of her full name, a choice he knew she reserved for formalities and those she kept at arm's length, introduced a formality to their encounter, a buffer against the intensity of their shared history. Rory halted in front of him, a calculated distance maintained. "Evan. It's been a while." Her tone, even to her own ears, sounded airy, a poor disguise for the turmoil brewing beneath. He nodded, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Years. You look... well. Different." His gaze roamed over her, lingering on the straight, shoulder-length black hair that framed her face, a feature unchanged since their parting. "London agrees with me, I suppose," Rory replied, a wry smile twisting her lips. The city, with all its unforgiving beauty, had indeed remade her, but the essence of her remained, a immutable core she protected zealously. The silence that followed, heavy with unasked questions and unspoken recriminations, was broken by Silas, ever the observant host, who appeared with a quiet proficiency, bearing a tray with two glasses of whiskey. "On the house, for old times' sake," he said, his hazel eyes, warm with a deep understanding, meeting Rory's before flicking to Evan. Silas' presence, a gentle reminder of the life she had built, provided a comforting anchor in the midst of this unexpected confrontation. As Silas departed, Evan gestured to the vacant stools. "Shall we?" Rory nodded, sliding onto the stool, the cool wood a welcome respite against her warming skin. Evan followed, the space between them now defined by the physical barriers of their drinks and the emotional chasm of their past. "So, what brings you to London?" Rory asked, the question a tentative foray into the uncharted territory of their reunion. She raised her glass, the amber liquid glowing softly in the bar's dim light, a small, fiery heart that seemed to pulse with the unspoken emotions between them. Evan mirrored her action, though his drink remained untouched. "Work. A fresh start, of sorts. I've been based here for a few years now." The outlining of his new life, sparse as the details were, painted a picture of a man reconstructed, one who had perhaps found solace in the anonymity the city offered. Rory sipped her whiskey, the burn a fleeting distraction from the ache within. "And have you... found what you were looking for?" Their eyes met once more, the depth of emotion within Evan's gaze, for an instant, laid bare. It was a look that spoke of journeys undertaken alone, of lessons learned in darkness, and of scars, not all of which were visible. "Yes," he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper. " Pieces of it, at least." The admission hung in the air, a fragile, unspoken understanding that, perhaps, neither of them had found the complete solace they sought, but in the fragments of their new lives, there existed a semblance of peace. As the evening wore on, conversation flowing more freely, Rory began to discern the contours of the man Evan had become. The edges, once so jagged, had smoothed, not from a lack of depth, but from a hard-won wisdom, gleaned from the trials of his solitary journey. It was nearing midnight when Evan glanced at his watch, the action sparking a realization of the late hour. "I should go," he said, though his body betrayed his reluctance, lingering on the stool as if anchored by the unspoken between them. Rory nodded, a sense of loss, unexpected and keen, piercing her. "Yes, it's late." Outside, the drizzle had ceased, leaving in its wake a crisp, clean scent, a world refreshed. As Evan turned to leave, Rory reached out, her hand brushing against his arm, a fleeting touch that spoke of more than mere friendship. "Take care, Evan," she said, her voice soft, a whispered wish for a man who, despite everything, had once been a significant part of her life. Evan paused, his back still turned, before nodding and stepping into the night, leaving Rory alone with the echoes of their past and the uncertain contours of their separate futures. Standing there, bathed in the soft green glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, Rory felt the weight of time, its relentless push forward, but also, in the depths of her, a spark of peace. For in the unexpected encounter with a ghost from her past, she had found a strangely comforting affirmation: that even as people changed, grew, and sometimes, inevitably, parted ways, the essence of the connections they shared remained, a testament to the indelible marks left upon the soul.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.733
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
91.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"fleeting"
count3
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"testament"
count2
3
word"tapestry"
count1
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count5
8
word"tangible"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count2
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"calculated"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"comforting"
count2
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"solace"
count2
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"solitary"
count1
20
word"sense of"
count1
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"fleeting"
1"standard"
2"testament"
3"tapestry"
4"profound"
5"palpable"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"tangible"
9"stark"
10"encounter"
11"intensity"
12"calculated"
13"silence"
14"reminder"
15"comforting"
16"pulse"
17"solace"
18"whisper"
19"solitary"
20"sense of"
21"echoes"
22"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences48
matches
0"a sense of loss"
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences48
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences53
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1003
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory14
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Evan11
Cardiff1
Silas2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.802
windowScore0.833
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"heart that seemed to pulse with the unspoken emotions between them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.892
wordCount1121
matches
0"not from a lack of depth, but from a hard-won wisdom, gleaned from the trials of his solit"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
86.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean44.84
std20.32
cv0.453
sampleLengths
082
172
246
373
464
553
632
738
837
978
1011
1138
1248
1354
1422
1541
1616
1736
1847
1942
2014
2140
2226
2330
2481
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"was broken"
1"were, painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"were jarring"
1"was nearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount168
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.023809523809523808
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005952380952380952
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean21.15
std9.55
cv0.451
sampleLengths
028
127
227
320
428
524
623
713
810
925
1015
1133
1224
1322
1418
1517
1636
1710
1822
1911
2027
2114
2223
2333
2423
2522
269
272
2816
2922
3020
3128
329
3345
3413
359
3617
3724
3810
396
4036
4121
4226
4319
4423
4511
463
4716
4824
4926
81.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5094339622641509
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
78.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences48
matches
0"She slipped into the dimly"
1"Her eyes finally came to"
2"she whispered, the sound lost"
3"Their gazes met, and for"
4"She made her way towards"
5"he said, his voice deeper,"
6"Her tone, even to her"
7"He nodded, a hint of"
8"His gaze roamed over her,"
9"he said, his hazel eyes,"
10"She raised her glass, the"
11"Their eyes met once more,"
12"It was a look that"
13"he said finally, his voice"
14"It was nearing midnight when"
15"he said, though his body"
16"she said, her voice soft,"
ratio0.354
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences48
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to few"
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"She slipped into the dimly"
3"Rory's gaze, illuminated by the"
4"The bar, a testament to"
5"Her eyes finally came to"
6"she whispered, the sound lost"
7"Evan, her ex, the man"
8"Their gazes met, and for"
9"Rory felt the weight of"
10"She made her way towards"
11"The differences in him were"
12"he said, his voice deeper,"
13"The use of her full"
14"Rory halted in front of"
15"Her tone, even to her"
16"He nodded, a hint of"
17"His gaze roamed over her,"
18"Rory replied, a wry smile"
19"The city, with all its"
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Yet, it was his eyes,"
ratio0.021
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory felt the weight of unspoken regret settle upon her, as tangible as the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood far remove…"
1"The silence that followed, heavy with unasked questions and unspoken recriminations, was broken by Silas, ever the observant host, who appeared with a quiet pro…"
2"She raised her glass, the amber liquid glowing softly in the bar's dim light, a small, fiery heart that seemed to pulse with the unspoken emotions between them."
3"It was a look that spoke of journeys undertaken alone, of lessons learned in darkness, and of scars, not all of which were visible."
4"As Evan turned to leave, Rory reached out, her hand brushing against his arm, a fleeting touch that spoke of more than mere friendship."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory replied, a wry smile twisting her lips"
1"he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper"
2"he said, though his body betrayed his reluctance, lingering on the stool as if anchored by the unspoken between them"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
81.2482%