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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF54GKXDH8PXRSH83XQVR
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Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.002735
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Aurora Carter, known to few outside her inner circle as Rory, dodged the swing of the front door as a chorus of laughter and clinking glasses enveloped her. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest had beckoned like an old friend, promising a fleeting escape from the drizzle-soaked London evening. She slipped into the dimly lit bar, the hum of conversation and the soft strains of a forgotten jazz standard wrapping around her like a damp shroud. Rory's gaze, illuminated by the brief flash of her bright blue eyes adjusting to the indoor light, swept the room. The bar, a
testament
to Silas' eclectic tastes, was a
tapestry
of old maps, black-and-white photographs, and the occasional patron who seemed woven from the same vintage fabric. Her eyes finally came to rest on a figure at the end of the bar, partially obscured by the curve of the polished mahogany. Time, in its insidious way, had sharpened the jawline of the man who now caught her stare, deepening the contours of his face. Yet, it was his eyes, a
profound
, melancholic brown, that unraveled her composure. "Evan," she whispered, the sound lost in the ambient noise. Evan, her ex, the man from whom she'd fled Cardiff with only the scars, literal and figurative, to remind her of their tumultuous past, turned. Their gazes met, and for a moment, the lapse of years thinned, becoming almost
palpable
. Rory felt the
weight
of
unspoken
regret settle upon her, as
tangible
as the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood far removed from the tumult that followed. She made her way towards him, her steps light on the worn wooden floor, a practiced nonchalance belied by the flutter in her chest. As she approached, Evan slid off his stool, his movements economical, hinting at a physicality he hadn't possessed in their shared past. The differences in him
were jarring
, a
stark
reflection of the changes time had wrought upon them both. "Aurora," he said, his voice deeper, the edges smoother, polished by years she had no knowledge of. The use of her full name, a choice he knew she reserved for formalities and those she kept at arm's length, introduced a formality to their encounter, a buffer against the intensity of their shared history. Rory halted in front of him, a
calculated
distance maintained. "Evan. It's been a while." Her tone, even to her own ears, sounded airy, a poor disguise for the turmoil brewing beneath. He nodded, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Years. You look... well. Different." His gaze roamed over her, lingering on the straight, shoulder-length black hair that framed her face, a feature unchanged since their parting. "London agrees with me, I suppose," Rory replied, a wry smile twisting her lips. The city, with all its unforgiving beauty, had indeed remade her, but the essence of her remained, a immutable core she protected zealously. The silence that followed, heavy with unasked questions and
unspoken
recriminations,
was broken
by Silas, ever the observant host, who appeared with a quiet proficiency, bearing a tray with two glasses of whiskey. "On the house, for old times' sake," he said, his hazel eyes, warm with a deep understanding, meeting Rory's before flicking to Evan. Silas' presence, a gentle reminder of the life she had built, provided a comforting anchor in the midst of this unexpected confrontation. As Silas departed, Evan gestured to the vacant stools. "Shall we?" Rory nodded, sliding onto the stool, the cool wood a welcome respite against her warming skin. Evan followed, the space between them now defined by the physical barriers of their drinks and the emotional chasm of their past. "So, what brings you to London?" Rory asked, the question a tentative foray into the uncharted territory of their reunion. She raised her glass, the amber liquid glowing
softly
in the bar's dim light, a small, fiery heart that
seemed to
pulse with the
unspoken
emotions between them. Evan mirrored her action, though his drink remained untouched. "Work. A fresh start, of sorts. I've been based here for a few years now." The outlining of his new life, sparse as the details
were, painted
a picture of a man reconstructed, one who had perhaps found
solace
in the anonymity the city offered. Rory sipped her whiskey, the burn a fleeting distraction from the ache within. "And have you... found what you were looking for?" Their eyes met once more, the depth of emotion within Evan's gaze, for an instant, laid bare. It was a look that spoke of journeys undertaken alone, of lessons learned in darkness, and of scars, not all of which were visible. "Yes," he said finally, his voice
barely above a whisper
. " Pieces of it, at least." The admission
hung in the air
, a fragile,
unspoken
understanding that, perhaps, neither of them had found the complete
solace
they sought, but in the fragments of their new lives, there existed a semblance of peace. As the evening wore on, conversation flowing more freely, Rory
began to
discern the contours of the man Evan had become. The edges, once so jagged, had smoothed, not from a lack of depth, but from a hard-won wisdom, gleaned from the trials of his
solitary
journey. It
was nearing
midnight when Evan glanced at his
watch
, the action sparking a realization of the late hour. "I should go," he said, though his body betrayed his reluctance, lingering on the stool as if anchored by the
unspoken
between them. Rory nodded, a sense of loss, unexpected and keen, piercing her. "Yes, it's late." Outside, the drizzle had ceased, leaving in its wake a crisp, clean scent, a world refreshed. As Evan turned to leave, Rory reached out, her hand brushing against his arm, a fleeting touch that spoke of more than mere friendship. "Take care, Evan," she said, her voice soft, a whispered wish for a man who, despite everything, had once been a significant part of her life. Evan paused, his back still turned, before nodding and stepping into the night, leaving Rory alone with the
echoes
of their past and the uncertain contours of their separate futures. Standing there, bathed in the soft green glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, Rory felt the
weight
of time, its relentless push forward, but also, in the depths of her, a spark of peace. For in the unexpected encounter with a ghost from her past, she had found a strangely comforting affirmation: that even as people changed, grew, and sometimes, inevitably, parted ways, the essence of the connections they shared remained, a
testament
to the indelible marks left upon the soul.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper [finally, barely]"
1
"she said, her voice soft, a whispered wish for a man who, despite everything, had once been a significant part of her life [once]"
82.2380%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1126
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1126
totalAiIsms
19
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"tangible"
count
1
2
word
"tapestry"
count
1
3
word
"testament"
count
2
4
word
"calculated"
count
1
5
word
"unspoken"
count
5
6
word
"profound"
count
1
7
word
"stark"
count
1
8
word
"solitary"
count
1
9
word
"solace"
count
2
10
word
"weight"
count
2
11
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"tangible"
2
"tapestry"
3
"testament"
4
"calculated"
5
"unspoken"
6
"profound"
7
"stark"
8
"solitary"
9
"solace"
10
"weight"
11
"echoes"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
49
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
49
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
86.6116%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
44.84
std
20.32
cv
0.453
sampleLengths
0
82
1
72
2
46
3
73
4
64
5
53
6
32
7
38
8
37
9
78
10
11
11
38
12
48
13
54
14
22
15
41
16
16
17
36
18
47
19
42
20
14
21
40
22
26
23
30
24
81
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
49
matches
0
"was broken"
1
"were, painted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
153
matches
0
"were jarring"
1
"was nearing"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1054
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.027514231499051234
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.010436432637571158
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
53
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
53
mean
21.15
std
9.55
cv
0.451
sampleLengths
0
28
1
27
2
27
3
20
4
28
5
24
6
23
7
13
8
10
9
25
10
15
11
33
12
24
13
22
14
18
15
17
16
36
17
10
18
22
19
11
20
27
21
14
22
23
23
33
24
23
25
22
26
9
27
2
28
16
29
22
30
20
31
28
32
9
33
45
34
13
35
9
36
17
37
24
38
10
39
6
40
36
41
21
42
26
43
19
44
23
45
11
46
3
47
16
48
24
49
26
81.1321%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5094339622641509
totalSentences
53
uniqueOpeners
27
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, the sound lost in the ambient noise (whisper)"
1
"he said, his voice deeper, the edges smoother, polished by years she had no knowledge of (say, polish have)"
2
"Rory replied, a wry smile twisting her lips (reply, twist)"
3
"he said, his hazel eyes, warm with a deep understanding, meeting Rory's before flicking to Evan (say, warm meet be flick)"
4
"he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper (say finally)"
5
"he said, though his body betrayed his reluctance, lingering on the stool as if anchored by the unspoken between them (say, betray linger anchor)"
6
"she said, her voice soft, a whispered wish for a man who, despite everything, had once been a significant part of her life (say, whisper once be)"
81.9989%