Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPF8F0KEGCYPAKM5TQVMBC

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26.0s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stench of ozone and something more unpleasant hit Detective Harlow Quinn's nostrils as she descended the rusty metal staircase. Fluorescent lights flickered above, casting eerie shadows on the damp stone walls. She tamped down a shiver — cold, or perhaps apprehension. The murder of a high-profile journalist was always gruesome, but a crime scene in an abandoned Tube station put a new spin on things. Her boots splashed in a puddle at the bottom of the stairs. Harlow muttered a curse. She'd worn her good suit today, the navy one she almost felt professional in. Not that it mattered — evidence be damned, the bloody mess that awaited her in the tunnel didn't care about fashion. Lugging her kit, she trudged forward until she reached the cordoned off zone. Several officers milled about, but a single blonde figure stood out in the crisp motion of a regular. DC "Evie" Kowalski — the newbie reporter who seemed bent on sabotaging her own career via irksome persistence. "Evening, Detective," Evie chirped, far too brightly for the situation. "Can you believe how they've hung up the lights? Looks like a Yule market instead of a murder scene." "Blimey," Harlow said, not unkindly. At 26, Evie could still find joy where others saw dread. "What've we got?" "Mavis Osano — a 62-year-old amateur photographer. Found in situ two hours ago by my contact — a salesman from Dalston." Evie consulted her notebook. "No visible wounds, but the coroner says likely asphyxiation based on the lividity pattern alone." Harlow frowned. Asphyxiation was unusual — unless it was tied to the occult. Wasn't it? She glanced around. Mist floated through puncture-like gaps in the ceiling grate. Strange hieroglyphs dotted the wall — they looked Carpathian to her untrained eye. Harlow shook off a chill. A flashbulb's pop snapped her out of it. Evie started, tucking a curl behind her round glasses. Was she nervous? It didn't quite fit her usual joie de vivre. "I'll just... take some pictures," Evie mumbled, sidling past. Harlow watched her for a beat. Why was Evie here? She didn't usually cover hush-hush crime scenes involvingAssure your sentence begins with a capital letter to prevent this from happening again.otherworldly elements. Someone must have pulled strings... The victim herself lay a few feet away, draped over a ingeniously flat rock. Her gray hair was disheveled, a curious bulge protruding from the collar of her coat. Harlow steps closer, examining the blocky outline. What's inside? Part of an exploratory instinct, part morbid curiosity. She's practiced detachment; all life is cheap to Sala. She can never let herself be haunted by the atrocities. Harlow zipped up her coat and pulled out her notebook. Probing with gloved hands, she slowly unbuttons the coat. Half an hour later, Evie was glued to her phone in a shadowy corner of the tunnel. Reading through emails in the dim light, the screen throwing her freckled face into flickering relief. `Eva,` `I'll be waiting for your report on the Mavis Osano murder by 1800 tomorrow.` `Include sensitive occult details and any evidence that points to an unknown supplier.` `Be circumspect and don't draw unwanted attention to yourself.` `We're close to ending this dangerous operation.` `M` Evie sighed, rubbing her temples. The night of full moons meant danger for the portals, it meant diversion. Her gaze was drawn to the bulge in the dead woman's cloak. Miraculous melange — bullet foul. Dire necessitas. What connections...
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount567
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount567
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"apprehension"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"apprehension"
2"chill"
3"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords575
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount463
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow8
Quinn1
Tube1
Kowalski1
Evie8
Carpathian1
Sala1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Evie"
places
0"Sala"
globalScore0.636
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed bent on sabotaging her own career via irksome persistence"
1"quite fit her usual joie de vivre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount575
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
98.11% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean38.33
std18.91
cv0.493
sampleLengths
066
151
249
329
419
540
645
729
89
937
1029
1155
1278
1330
149
76.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences48
matches
0"was tied"
1"was disheveled"
2"was glued"
3"was drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs76
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences57
ratio0.123
matches
0"She tamped down a shiver — cold, or perhaps apprehension."
1"Not that it mattered — evidence be damned, the bloody mess that awaited her in the tunnel didn't care about fashion."
2"DC \"Evie\" Kowalski — the newbie reporter who seemed bent on sabotaging her own career via irksome persistence."
3"Asphyxiation was unusual — unless it was tied to the occult."
4"Strange hieroglyphs dotted the wall — they looked Carpathian to her untrained eye."
5"She's practiced detachment; all life is cheap to Sala."
6"Miraculous melange — bullet foul."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount421
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.0332541567695962
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.014251781472684086
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean10.09
std6.07
cv0.602
sampleLengths
020
112
210
324
412
54
614
721
813
918
1018
1110
1219
135
1411
153
1625
1715
182
1911
202
213
229
2313
245
258
269
273
289
299
306
314
3222
335
3414
3515
367
372
388
399
4010
4110
429
4317
4416
451
4614
4713
489
497
98.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6666666666666666
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences43
matches
0"She tamped down a shiver"
1"Her boots splashed in a"
2"She'd worn her good suit"
3"She glanced around."
4"It didn't quite fit her"
5"She didn't usually cover hush-hush"
6"Her gray hair was disheveled,"
7"She's practiced detachment; all life"
8"She can never let herself"
9"Her gaze was drawn to"
ratio0.233
87.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences43
matches
0"The stench of ozone and"
1"She tamped down a shiver"
2"The murder of a high-profile"
3"Her boots splashed in a"
4"Harlow muttered a curse."
5"She'd worn her good suit"
6"Several officers milled about, but"
7"DC Kowalski — the newbie"
8"Evie chirped, far too brightly"
9"Harlow said, not unkindly"
10"Evie consulted her notebook"
11"Asphyxiation was unusual — unless"
12"She glanced around."
13"Mist floated through puncture-like gaps"
14"Harlow shook off a chill."
15"A flashbulb's pop snapped her"
16"Evie started, tucking a curl"
17"It didn't quite fit her"
18"Evie mumbled, sidling past"
19"Harlow watched her for a"
ratio0.744
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow said, not unkindly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Evie chirped (chirp)"
1"Evie mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.5
75.9933%