| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "ever so slightly" | | 3 | "intensely" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tension" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "otherworldly" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "tangible" | | 17 | "scanning" | | 18 | "reverberated" | | 19 | "hulking" | | 20 | "raced" | | 21 | "echoed" | | 22 | "searing" | | 23 | "echoing" | | 24 | "oppressive" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1074 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1031 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a half-remembered nightmare" | | 1 | "seemed muted here—no rustling leaves, distant traffic, or hooting owls" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.931 | | wordCount | 1074 | | matches | | 0 | "not just from the chill but from the creeping sense of being watched" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 46.7 | | std | 17.42 | | cv | 0.373 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 81 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.36% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the ordinary sounds of the park seemed muted here—no rustling leaves, distant traffic, or hooting owls." | | 1 | "This wasn’t just fear; she knew she wasn't alone." | | 2 | "She had what she came for—a confrontation with the unknown, and the knowledge that sometimes, courage and a bit of irrationality are the key to survival." |
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| 82.59% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1037 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.05303760848601736 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01832208293153327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 13.59 | | std | 6.17 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 58.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4050632911392405 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the ordinary sounds of" | | 1 | "Only still, suffocating silence." | | 2 | "Then, in a final clarion" | | 3 | "Finally, she forced herself to" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 68.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "It had led her, pulse" | | 1 | "She hesitated at the fringe," | | 2 | "She’s always been more rational" | | 3 | "She turned her head quickly," | | 4 | "she muttered, her own voice" | | 5 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 6 | "She scanned the area, her" | | 7 | "She continued, feeling the weight" | | 8 | "It was Eva who had" | | 9 | "She found herself in a" | | 10 | "She felt a tangible pressure" | | 11 | "Her heart pounded in her" | | 12 | "It bathed the area in" | | 13 | "Her breath fogged the air" | | 14 | "She clenched her jaw, scanning" | | 15 | "she commanded, voice steadier than" | | 16 | "It was everywhere and nowhere" | | 17 | "she demanded, forcing herself to" | | 18 | "She scanned the stones, their" | | 19 | "She took a step back" |
| | ratio | 0.378 | |
| 27.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to her" | | 1 | "A sharp autumn night whispered" | | 2 | "The clearing shimmered with an" | | 3 | "The standing stones, seven oaks" | | 4 | "Rory had come here to" | | 5 | "It had led her, pulse" | | 6 | "She hesitated at the fringe," | | 7 | "She’s always been more rational" | | 8 | "The trees loomed, their silhouettes" | | 9 | "The soil crunched softly beneath" | | 10 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 11 | "She turned her head quickly," | | 12 | "she muttered, her own voice" | | 13 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 14 | "The pendant’s warmth guided her" | | 15 | "The inner crimson glow breaking" | | 16 | "A sudden crackle, like dry" | | 17 | "She scanned the area, her" | | 18 | "Branches swayed ever so slightly," | | 19 | "Silence dripped heavy and thick," |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She scanned the stones, their hulking forms now seeming almost menacing, as if they watched with unseen eyes." | | 1 | "The coldness of the grove seeped into her bones, numbing her fingers and filling her with a bone-deep terror." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her own voice jarring in the hushed atmosphere" | | 1 | "Rory whispered, as if her old friend would somehow answer her in this haunted place" | | 2 | "she commanded, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she cried (cry)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |