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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFAR34P7Z74R6V1Q9V3E5
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Model:
Llama 3.1 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.000771
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rory's eyes scanned the dimly lit bar, the smell of old wood and worn leather enveloping her like a familiar blanket. She had just finished a long delivery shift at the Golden Empress, and the prospect of a quiet pint at the Raven's Nest was just what she needed to unwind. Silas, the owner,
was polishing
a mug with a white cloth, his eyes crinkling at the corners as he caught her gaze. He nodded in greeting, but Rory's attention was already drifting toward the figure sitting at the end of the bar, facing away from her. As she took a seat a few stools down, the stranger's head swiveled, and their eyes met in the mirror behind the bar. For an instant, Rory's mind struggled to reconcile the face staring back at her with the one she remembered. It was Eva, her childhood friend, her confidante, the person who had once known her better than anyone. But the bright, mischievous spark that had once defined Eva
was gone
, replaced by a haunted, world-weary look that made Rory's chest ache. Eva's eyes, once a deep, rich brown, now seemed dull and lifeless, like two stones worn smooth by the constant buffeting of the sea. Her hair, once a wild tangle of curly brown locks, was now a neat, mousy bob, framing a face that was both familiar and yet,
utterly
foreign. Rory felt
a pang of sadness
, mixed with a dash of guilt, as she
realized that she
had no idea what had
happened to
her friend in the years since they'd lost touch. The barman, a gruff but kind man named Jack, set a pint of Guinness in front of Rory, and she took a sip, her eyes never leaving Eva's reflection. For what felt like an eternity, the two women simply stared at each other, the only sound the soft hum of conversation from the other patrons and the occasional clink of glasses. Finally, Eva turned, her eyes locking onto Rory's, and a hesitant smile spread across her face. Rory's heart swelled with emotion as she slid off her stool and walked toward her friend, the two women embracing in a tight, awkward hug. As they pulled back, Eva's eyes welled up with tears, and Rory felt her own eyes pricking at the corners. They stood there, frozen in time, as the sounds of the bar receded into the background. "Rory," Eva whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of Rory's heart. "It's been so long." Rory nodded, her throat constricting as she struggled to find the right words. "Eva, I...I had no idea you were back in London." Eva's smile faltered, and she looked away, her eyes drifting toward the floor. "I know. I'm sorry. I should have reached out." The silence that followed was
oppressive
, heavy with the
weight
of
unspoken
regret and unresolved tension. Rory felt like she
was staring
into the face of a stranger, someone who wore Eva's skin but had lost the spark that had once defined her. As they stood there, Silas intervened, his voice low and smooth as he slid a glass of red wine down the bar to Eva. "On the house, ladies. Why don't you take a booth in the back, catch up?" Rory nodded, grateful for the escape, and the two women slid into a quiet booth, the sounds of the bar muffled by the wooden partitions. For a long moment, they simply sat, the only sound the quiet hum of the bar's music system. Finally, Eva spoke up, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "Rory, I'm so sorry. I know I just vanished, and I never reached out. I was in a bad place, and I didn't know how to..." Rory's hand shot out, covering Eva's, her eyes welling up with tears. "You don't have to apologize, Eva. I'm just glad you're okay." Eva's eyes met hers, a deep sadness lingering in their depths. "I'm not okay, Rory. I'm...I'm a long way from okay." As the night wore on, Rory listened, entranced, as Eva spun a tale of loss and heartache, of regret and longing. The Eva she had once known would have laughed, would have joked, would have found the humor in even the darkest of situations. But this new Eva was different, haunted by demons that Rory couldn't even
begin to
understand. As the hours slipped away, the bar emptying out around them, Rory felt a deep sense of sorrow. She had lost touch with her friend, had let the years drift by without reaching out, without checking in. And now, it seemed, she had lost the Eva she once knew, the one who had been her partner in crime, her confidante, her sister. As they finally parted ways, Eva's eyes lingering on Rory's face, she felt a sense of
trepidation
. She had no idea how to reconcile the Eva she had once known with the stranger sitting across from her, but she knew she had to try. For their friendship, for the memories they had shared, and for the sake of the Eva who was still in there, somewhere, struggling to find her way back.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:22:42.355933+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:22:42 AM
model
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Eva whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of Rory's heart [barely]"
76.8519%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
864
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"utterly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
42.1296%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
864
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"pang"
count
1
1
word
"oppressive"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"trepidation"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"pang"
1
"oppressive"
2
"unspoken"
3
"trepidation"
4
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
37
matches
0
"a pang of sadness"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
37
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"happened to"
1
"begin to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
44
matches
0
"realized that she"
98.2417%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
18
mean
47.94
std
23.68
cv
0.494
sampleLengths
0
97
1
83
2
84
3
61
4
41
5
36
6
17
7
23
8
22
9
43
10
39
11
43
12
36
13
23
14
21
15
60
16
62
17
72
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
37
matches
0
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
128
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"was staring"
96.7609%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
778
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.043701799485861184
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.015424164524421594
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
44
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
79.2868%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
44
mean
19.61
std
6.83
cv
0.348
sampleLengths
0
21
1
30
2
22
3
24
4
23
5
19
6
18
7
23
8
24
9
27
10
33
11
29
12
32
13
16
14
25
15
20
16
16
17
13
18
4
19
13
20
10
21
13
22
9
23
16
24
27
25
24
26
15
27
25
28
18
29
10
30
26
31
12
32
11
33
11
34
10
35
21
36
23
37
16
38
18
39
19
40
25
41
17
42
27
43
28
59.8485%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.38636363636363635
totalSentences
44
uniqueOpeners
17
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Eva whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of Rory's heart (whisper)"
79.5953%