Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFAR34P7Z74R6V1Q9V3E5

Run Details

Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.000771
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's eyes scanned the dimly lit bar, the smell of old wood and worn leather enveloping her like a familiar blanket. She had just finished a long delivery shift at the Golden Empress, and the prospect of a quiet pint at the Raven's Nest was just what she needed to unwind. Silas, the owner, was polishing a mug with a white cloth, his eyes crinkling at the corners as he caught her gaze. He nodded in greeting, but Rory's attention was already drifting toward the figure sitting at the end of the bar, facing away from her. As she took a seat a few stools down, the stranger's head swiveled, and their eyes met in the mirror behind the bar. For an instant, Rory's mind struggled to reconcile the face staring back at her with the one she remembered. It was Eva, her childhood friend, her confidante, the person who had once known her better than anyone. But the bright, mischievous spark that had once defined Eva was gone, replaced by a haunted, world-weary look that made Rory's chest ache. Eva's eyes, once a deep, rich brown, now seemed dull and lifeless, like two stones worn smooth by the constant buffeting of the sea. Her hair, once a wild tangle of curly brown locks, was now a neat, mousy bob, framing a face that was both familiar and yet, utterly foreign. Rory felt a pang of sadness, mixed with a dash of guilt, as she realized that she had no idea what had happened to her friend in the years since they'd lost touch. The barman, a gruff but kind man named Jack, set a pint of Guinness in front of Rory, and she took a sip, her eyes never leaving Eva's reflection. For what felt like an eternity, the two women simply stared at each other, the only sound the soft hum of conversation from the other patrons and the occasional clink of glasses. Finally, Eva turned, her eyes locking onto Rory's, and a hesitant smile spread across her face. Rory's heart swelled with emotion as she slid off her stool and walked toward her friend, the two women embracing in a tight, awkward hug. As they pulled back, Eva's eyes welled up with tears, and Rory felt her own eyes pricking at the corners. They stood there, frozen in time, as the sounds of the bar receded into the background. "Rory," Eva whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of Rory's heart. "It's been so long." Rory nodded, her throat constricting as she struggled to find the right words. "Eva, I...I had no idea you were back in London." Eva's smile faltered, and she looked away, her eyes drifting toward the floor. "I know. I'm sorry. I should have reached out." The silence that followed was oppressive, heavy with the weight of unspoken regret and unresolved tension. Rory felt like she was staring into the face of a stranger, someone who wore Eva's skin but had lost the spark that had once defined her. As they stood there, Silas intervened, his voice low and smooth as he slid a glass of red wine down the bar to Eva. "On the house, ladies. Why don't you take a booth in the back, catch up?" Rory nodded, grateful for the escape, and the two women slid into a quiet booth, the sounds of the bar muffled by the wooden partitions. For a long moment, they simply sat, the only sound the quiet hum of the bar's music system. Finally, Eva spoke up, her voice barely above a whisper. "Rory, I'm so sorry. I know I just vanished, and I never reached out. I was in a bad place, and I didn't know how to..." Rory's hand shot out, covering Eva's, her eyes welling up with tears. "You don't have to apologize, Eva. I'm just glad you're okay." Eva's eyes met hers, a deep sadness lingering in their depths. "I'm not okay, Rory. I'm...I'm a long way from okay." As the night wore on, Rory listened, entranced, as Eva spun a tale of loss and heartache, of regret and longing. The Eva she had once known would have laughed, would have joked, would have found the humor in even the darkest of situations. But this new Eva was different, haunted by demons that Rory couldn't even begin to understand. As the hours slipped away, the bar emptying out around them, Rory felt a deep sense of sorrow. She had lost touch with her friend, had let the years drift by without reaching out, without checking in. And now, it seemed, she had lost the Eva she once knew, the one who had been her partner in crime, her confidante, her sister. As they finally parted ways, Eva's eyes lingering on Rory's face, she felt a sense of trepidation. She had no idea how to reconcile the Eva she had once known with the stranger sitting across from her, but she knew she had to try. For their friendship, for the memories they had shared, and for the sake of the Eva who was still in there, somewhere, struggling to find her way back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"pang"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"trepidation"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"pang"
3"pounding"
4"silence"
5"oppressive"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"tension"
9"whisper"
10"depths"
11"sense of"
12"trepidation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
79.95% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences37
matches
0"a pang of sadness"
1"a sense of trepidation"
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords863
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Eva spoke up, her voice barely above a whisper."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount777
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory18
Eva20
Jack1
Guinness1
Silas2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Jack"
3"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.213
windowScore0.167
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed dull and lifeless, like two stones worn smooth by the constant buffeting of the sea"
1"felt like an eternity, the two women si"
2"felt like she was staring into the face"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount863
matches(empty)
90.91% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"realized that she"
98.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean47.94
std23.68
cv0.494
sampleLengths
097
183
284
361
441
536
617
723
822
943
1039
1143
1236
1323
1421
1560
1662
1772
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"was gone"
43.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was already drifting"
2"was staring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences44
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.043701799485861184
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015424164524421594
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
79.29% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean19.61
std6.83
cv0.348
sampleLengths
021
130
222
324
423
519
618
723
824
927
1033
1129
1232
1316
1425
1520
1616
1713
184
1913
2010
2113
229
2316
2427
2524
2615
2725
2818
2910
3026
3112
3211
3311
3410
3521
3623
3716
3818
3919
4025
4117
4227
4328
59.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners17
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences37
matches
0"Finally, Eva turned, her eyes"
1"Finally, Eva spoke up, her"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences37
matches
0"She had just finished a"
1"He nodded in greeting, but"
2"It was Eva, her childhood"
3"Her hair, once a wild"
4"They stood there, frozen in"
5"She had lost touch with"
6"She had no idea how"
ratio0.189
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount22
totalSentences37
matches
0"Rory's eyes scanned the dimly"
1"She had just finished a"
2"Silas, the owner, was polishing"
3"He nodded in greeting, but"
4"It was Eva, her childhood"
5"Eva's eyes, once a deep,"
6"Her hair, once a wild"
7"Rory felt a pang of"
8"The barman, a gruff but"
9"Rory's heart swelled with emotion"
10"They stood there, frozen in"
11"Eva whispered, her voice barely"
12"Rory nodded, her throat constricting"
13"Eva's smile faltered, and she"
14"The silence that followed was"
15"Rory felt like she was"
16"Rory nodded, grateful for the"
17"Rory's hand shot out, covering"
18"Eva's eyes met hers, a"
19"The Eva she had once"
ratio0.595
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
3.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas, the owner, was polishing a mug with a white cloth, his eyes crinkling at the corners as he caught her gaze."
1"It was Eva, her childhood friend, her confidante, the person who had once known her better than anyone."
2"But the bright, mischievous spark that had once defined Eva was gone, replaced by a haunted, world-weary look that made Rory's chest ache."
3"Her hair, once a wild tangle of curly brown locks, was now a neat, mousy bob, framing a face that was both familiar and yet, utterly foreign."
4"The silence that followed was oppressive, heavy with the weight of unspoken regret and unresolved tension."
5"Rory's hand shot out, covering Eva's, her eyes welling up with tears."
6"For their friendship, for the memories they had shared, and for the sake of the Eva who was still in there, somewhere, struggling to find her way back."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of Rory's heart"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
71.9103%