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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFCB3JJJ4BM8EJPDJEXSE
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
33.9s
Cost:
$0.000685
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped out of the London bus and into the quiet of Richmond Park. The air here was different, cooler and
tinged
with the scent of earth and wildflowers. She clutched the small leather satchel that hung from her shoulder, her fingers brushing the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant that rested against her chest. It glowed faintly, a warm
beacon
in the gathering dusk. Rory’s heart was a drum in her chest as she made her way through the darkening trees. She had received the pendant a week ago, a gift from an anonymous benefactor, and it had been pulling her to this place ever since. The instructions had been simple: go to Richmond Park, find the Fae Grove, and wait. The stone would guide her. The path was well-worn, but the trees
seemed to
close in around her, their branches reaching out like bony fingers. The rustle of leaves and the distant hoot of an owl were the only sounds, yet Rory felt a presence, something watching her from the shadows. She quickened her pace, her eyes darting from side to side. She reached a clearing, and her breath caught in her throat. Ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, their bark weathered and twisted. The air here was thick, almost heavy with an
otherworldly
energy. Wildflowers b
loomed
year-round, their colors vivid against the fading light. Rory’s pendant pulsed more rapidly, the warmth spreading through her chest like a balm. She stepped forward, and the world shifted.
Time seemed to slow
, the air grew still, and the trees
seemed to
whisper her name. Rory paused, her eyes scanning the grove. Everything was beautiful, yet unsettling. The flowers were too bright, the silence too perfect. She felt a chill run down her spine. “Hello?” she called out, her voice
barely above a whisper
. “Is anyone here?” No response, only the rustling of leaves and the distant hum of insects. Rory’s heart rate quickened, and she took a deep breath, trying to calm herself. She had to focus. This was the place where the pendant had led her, where answers might lie. Rory moved deeper into the grove, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. The standing stones
seemed to
watch her, ancient
sentinels
guarding a secret. She reached out to touch one, and her fingers brushed against the rough bark. The stone was warm, pulsing with a life of its own. She withdrew her hand, feeling a strange
resonance
deep within her. “Rory,” a voice whispered, barely audible. She spun around, her heart pounding. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice trembling. Silence. The grove was empty, or so it seemed. But she could feel it, a presence just beyond her vision, something lurking in the shadows. She took another step forward, her satchel digging into her shoulder. The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, almost hot against her skin. “Rory,” the voice whispered again, closer this time. She turned, but saw nothing. The grove was a maze of shadows and light, and she felt a growing certainty that she was not alone. A twig snapped behind her, and she whirled around, her eyes wide. “Who’s there?” she repeated, her voice hoarse with fear. A rustle of leaves, a soft sigh, and then silence. Rory’s breath came in shallow gasps. She
tried to
steady herself, to think. She had come here for a reason, but the fear
was clouding
her mind. She needed to find the source of the whispers, the presence that
was lurking
just out of sight. She took a deep breath and moved deeper into the grove, her steps cautious. The air grew denser, the silence more
profound
. The wildflowers around her
seemed to
shimmer, their petals almost translucent. The standing stones
loomed
over her, casting long, distorted shadows. “Rory,” the voice whispered once more, this time from all directions. She spun around, her pulse racing. “Stop it!” she shouted, her voice shaking. “Show yourself!” A low, ghostly laugh
echoed
through the grove, and Rory’s blood turned to ice. The shadows
seemed to
twist and writhe, forming shapes that should not exist. She felt a hand on her shoulder, cold and clammy, and she gasped, jerking away. “Who are you?” she demanded, her voice a mere whisper. The presence was close now, a dark figure emerging from the shadows. It was tall, cloaked in black, its face obscured by a hood. Rory’s
heart pounded in her chest
, and she took a step back, her hand instinctively reaching for the Heartstone Pendant. “Rory,” the figure said, its voice a low, mournful whisper. “You were not meant to come here.” She swallowed hard, her mouth dry. “Why not? What is this place?” The figure stepped closer, and she could see the faint outline of a face, pale and ghostly. “This is a place between worlds, a portal to the Fae realm. You should not have come.” Rory’s mind raced. She had to understand, to find the answers she sought. “What do you want from me?” she asked, her voice trembling. The figure’s eyes glowed with a strange,
ethereal
light. “You carry a powerful artifact, a Heartstone. It has brought you here, but it also draws the attention of those who dwell in the shadows. You must leave, while you still can.” Rory’s grip on the pendant tightened. “I can’t just leave. I need to know what’s happening. Who gave me this pendant?” The figure hesitated, its form shifting and blurring. “That is a question you must answer for yourself. But know this, the Heartstone is a key, and it opens doors you are not yet ready to face. Leave now, before it is too late.” Rory’s mind whirled with questions, but she knew deep down that the figure was right. Something
was watching
her, something ancient and powerful. She took a deep breath, her resolve strengthening. “I will leave, but I will find the answers. I won’t stop until I understand.” The figure nodded, its form fading back into the shadows. “You are brave, Aurora Carter. But be careful. The path you walk is fraught with danger.” Rory turned and made her way back through the grove, her steps quick and purposeful. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her chest, a reminder of the journey ahead. As she reached the boundary of the grove, the standing stones
loomed
over her one last time, their ancient power still humming through the air. She emerged from the grove and the world shifted back, the night air of Richmond Park cool and familiar. Rory took a deep breath, her heart still racing. She had escaped, but the questions remained, burning in the back of her mind. She would find the answers, no matter what the cost. With a determined step, she turned and walked back towards the bus stop, the Heartstone Pendant a warm, steady presence against her chest. The night was far from over, and the journey ahead was only just beginning.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"a voice whispered, barely audible [barely]"
1
"the voice whispered again, closer this time [again]"
2
"the voice whispered once more, this time from all directions [once more]"
91.4603%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
14.6029%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1171
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"beacon"
count
1
2
word
"sentinels"
count
1
3
word
"tinged"
count
1
4
word
"resonance"
count
1
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
6
word
"loomed"
count
2
7
word
"profound"
count
1
8
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"beacon"
2
"sentinels"
3
"tinged"
4
"resonance"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"loomed"
7
"profound"
8
"echoed"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"time stood still"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"Time seemed to slow"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
86
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
6
narrationSentences
86
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
96
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
33
mean
35.42
std
19.06
cv
0.538
sampleLengths
0
72
1
62
2
57
3
62
4
52
5
13
6
45
7
61
8
6
9
13
10
46
11
8
12
37
13
9
14
55
15
43
16
11
17
15
18
42
19
10
20
44
21
17
22
12
23
34
24
24
25
41
26
21
27
43
28
46
29
26
30
53
31
52
32
37
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
86
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
168
matches
0
"was clouding"
1
"was lurking"
2
"was watching"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1003
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.03290129611166501
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.010967098703888335
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
12.18
std
6.1
cv
0.501
sampleLengths
0
21
1
15
2
26
3
10
4
17
5
25
6
15
7
5
8
20
9
26
10
11
11
11
12
16
13
11
14
10
15
14
16
7
17
16
18
7
19
5
20
9
21
8
22
10
23
3
24
13
25
14
26
4
27
14
28
13
29
12
30
14
31
11
32
11
33
6
34
6
35
7
36
1
37
8
38
16
39
11
40
10
41
8
42
5
43
20
44
12
45
9
46
10
47
6
48
7
49
14
38.5417%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.28125
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
27
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"a voice whispered, barely audible (whisper)"
1
"demanded (demand)"
2
"the voice whispered again, closer this time (whisper again)"
3
"the voice whispered once more, this time from all directions (whisper once more)"
4
"shouted (shout)"
5
"demanded (demand)"
78.9310%