| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His voice wrapped around [around]" | | 1 | "Rory asked eventually [eventually]" | | 2 | "she said simply [simply]" | | 3 | "she started then [then]" | | 4 | "Ed said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.875 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.238 | | effectiveRatio | 0.238 | |
| 71.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1213 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "reluctantly" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1213 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "beacon" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "comfortable" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "amidst" | | 13 | "sentinel" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "navigating" | | 16 | "disrupted" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "sanctuary" | | 19 | "carried the weight" | | 20 | "echoes" | | 21 | "tapestry" | | 22 | "delve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 97.22% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "g with surprise" | | 1 | "s with hope" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ed—not Evan, she corrected silently—stepped further into the room, closing the door on the mist outside." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 3 | | Soho | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Sliding | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Ed | 5 | | Through | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Cheung" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Rory" | | 8 | "Ed" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Through" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.826 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite the fairytale escape I imagined back then, but it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 91.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.33 | | std | 18.93 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 63 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "“Silas,” she replied with a smile, her eyes flicking to the signet ring—a constant reminder of past lives and unspoken stories." | | 1 | "Ed—not Evan, she corrected silently—stepped further into the room, closing the door on the mist outside." | | 2 | "Time had layered itself on him; where once there had been boyish certainty, there was now a more measured composure." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1092 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.0347985347985348 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015567765567765568 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 77.81% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 18.91 | | std | 6.51 | | cv | 0.345 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 85.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.53125 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 33.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She was a familiar shape" | | 1 | "Her eyes, bright and discerning," | | 2 | "His hands moved deftly, the" | | 3 | "His voice wrapped around her" | | 4 | "she replied with a smile," | | 5 | "Her day at Yu-Fei Cheung’s" | | 6 | "He queried, lifting a bottle" | | 7 | "she agreed, even as her" | | 8 | "Their easy silence was an" | | 9 | "Her gaze moved past the" | | 10 | "He caught her eye, and" | | 11 | "he said, his voice a" | | 12 | "she replied, wrapping the word" | | 13 | "he remarked, taking the seat" | | 14 | "His smile was a pale" | | 15 | "she agreed, her fingers skimming" | | 16 | "They sat in the gentle" | | 17 | "He didn’t elaborate, and Rory" | | 18 | "They were both adept at" | | 19 | "he asked, the question gently" |
| | ratio | 0.467 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest brooded over" | | 1 | "The light was low, the" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter slipped inside, shaking" | | 3 | "She was a familiar shape" | | 4 | "Her eyes, bright and discerning," | | 5 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 6 | "His hands moved deftly, the" | | 7 | "The coat of his past" | | 8 | "His voice wrapped around her" | | 9 | "she replied with a smile," | | 10 | "Her day at Yu-Fei Cheung’s" | | 11 | "He queried, lifting a bottle" | | 12 | "she agreed, even as her" | | 13 | "Their easy silence was an" | | 14 | "The door swung open, its" | | 15 | "Rory stilled, the motion subtle" | | 16 | "Her gaze moved past the" | | 17 | "Ed—not Evan, she corrected silently—stepped" | | 18 | "Time had layered itself on" | | 19 | "He caught her eye, and" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in this home away" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Old maps and grainy black-and-white photographs clung to the walls, bearing witness to the nights that unfurled within." | | 1 | "Sliding onto one of the stools, she rested her elbows on the bar, savoring the comfortable hospitality that swaddled the room." | | 2 | "Her day at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress restaurant had been long, weighed down with the trivialities that had somehow become her world." | | 3 | "Her gaze moved past the damp newcomers, landing eventually on the figure who stood, momentarily disarmed, just inside the door." | | 4 | "They sat in the gentle silence that followed confessions, a silence shaped by the contours of old friendship and the layerings of time that had settled like dus…" | | 5 | "As the night stretched on, they sipped their drinks, exchanging stories like travelers unfurling maps over a fire-lit table." | | 6 | "Her words glossed over the turmoil that had driven her south, a tale entangled with an ex-best-friend's concerned urgings and the jagged shards of a life disrup…" | | 7 | "He paused, looking at her with an openness that was both endearing and wounding." | | 8 | "The statement hung in the air, a delicate thread that shimmered with the tender ache of things left unsaid." |
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| 29.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory countered, though her tone wasn’t bitter, only laced with a nuanced understanding that spoke of past choices and current realities" | | 1 | "Rory asked eventually, curiosity cutting through the mist of their shared past" | | 2 | "he asked, the question gently tossed into the gulf between their lives" | | 3 | "she admitted, the honesty threading her words with hope" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He queried (query)" | | 1 | "she agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "she agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "Ed confessed (confess)" | | 4 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 5 | "Rory knew (know)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |