Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFD2PDVTQQ4GTMQB80XR1

Run Details

Duration:
40.9s
Cost:
$0.017403
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest brooded over its corner of Soho, the green neon sign flickering like a solemn beacon above the narrow entrance. Inside, the air simmered with the warm, familiar hum of whispered conversations and clinking glasses, punctuated by the occasional laugh that rose like steam above the low ceilings. The light was low, the sort that made every corner intimate. Old maps and grainy black-and-white photographs clung to the walls, bearing witness to the nights that unfurled within. Aurora Carter slipped inside, shaking off the drizzle from her black trench coat. She was a familiar shape here, moving with the confident familiarity of one who belonged. Her eyes, bright and discerning, scanned the room, taking in the shadowy figures nestled in their alcoves, the worn leather and polished wood breathing an air of understated camaraderie. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his frame tall and solid even as age painted wisdom into his auburn hair, streaking it with silver. His hands moved deftly, the silver signet ring glinting as he poured drinks with the precision of a man who had measured out lives in secrets and shadows. The coat of his past still hung stitched to his bones beneath the layers of his bar-owner persona. “Rory!” His voice wrapped around her like a well-worn coat, fitting perfectly against her skin as he acknowledged her presence with a nod. “Silas,” she replied with a smile, her eyes flicking to the signet ring—a constant reminder of past lives and unspoken stories. Sliding onto one of the stools, she rested her elbows on the bar, savoring the comfortable hospitality that swaddled the room. Her day at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress restaurant had been long, weighed down with the trivialities that had somehow become her world. “Same as usual?” He queried, lifting a bottle of ale from beneath the counter. “Sure,” she agreed, even as her gaze wandered over the bar’s familiar grooves and nicks, each a memory carefully etched into the world around her. Their easy silence was an old friend, seamless in its familiarity. But the night was unpredictable, as it often was in the Nest, pulling at the strings of fate with the deft hand of a master puppeteer. The door swung open, its creak swallowed by the hum of life that flowed unrestricted through the room. Rory stilled, the motion subtle as a heartbeat, but present nonetheless. Even in this home away from the chaos of her past, the unexpected sometimes took a more literal form than she preferred. Her gaze moved past the damp newcomers, landing eventually on the figure who stood, momentarily disarmed, just inside the door. Ed—not Evan, she corrected silently—stepped further into the room, closing the door on the mist outside. Time had layered itself on him; where once there had been boyish certainty, there was now a more measured composure. Same unruly hair, she noted, but a different way of holding a pint, different tilt to the shoulders. He caught her eye, and the years fell away, blooming into existence the myriad unfurling of youthful dreams and the whispered promises of springtime days. “Rory,” he said, his voice a chord struck softly between them, vibrating with surprise and something that tugged achingly at the corners of regret. “Ed,” she replied, wrapping the word in cautious warmth. “Small world,” he remarked, taking the seat beside her like an anchor dropped into uncertain waters. His smile was a pale imitation of the one from years gone past, a glint in an old photograph brought reluctantly into focus. “Smaller than we think, sometimes,” she agreed, her fingers skimming the rim of her glass, the cool glass grounding her amidst the swirling currents of memory. Silas shifted down the bar, a watchful sentinel whose presence anchored the present moment in place. “I almost didn’t come in,” Ed confessed, his fingers tracing invisible patterns across the polished surface of the bar. “But then, it’s always the hidden paths that lead us to the things we didn’t know we were looking for, isn’t it?” “Or to the things we meant to leave behind,” Rory countered, though her tone wasn’t bitter, only laced with a nuanced understanding that spoke of past choices and current realities. They sat in the gentle silence that followed confessions, a silence shaped by the contours of old friendship and the layerings of time that had settled like dust on their paths away from each other. As the night stretched on, they sipped their drinks, exchanging stories like travelers unfurling maps over a fire-lit table. “So what brings you back to London?” Rory asked eventually, curiosity cutting through the mist of their shared past. “Work mostly,” Ed said with a shrug, his eyes lifting beyond her and finding purchase among the clustered bottles glinting behind the bar. “Opportunities that seemed worth pursuing.” He didn’t elaborate, and Rory didn’t push. They were both adept at speaking in half-truths, skilled at navigating around the voids that lay between them. “You?” he asked, the question gently tossed into the gulf between their lives. “Needed a change,” she said simply. Her words glossed over the turmoil that had driven her south, a tale entangled with an ex-best-friend's concerned urgings and the jagged shards of a life disrupted. “I’m glad you did,” he replied, the sincerity in his voice bridging the distance wrought by years of absence. He paused, looking at her with an openness that was both endearing and wounding. “I always wondered where you went.” The statement hung in the air, a delicate thread that shimmered with the tender ache of things left unsaid. Rory met his gaze, offering a small, rueful smile. “Here, it seems,” she replied, gesturing lightly to the space around them that had become her sanctuary. “It's not quite the fairytale escape I imagined back then, but it...fits.” “And you're happy?” The question was simple, but it carried the weight of every shared moment, every diverging path, every intention and regret that had brought them to this convergence of the present. “I’m...” she started, then paused, rearranging the truth until it was a more palatable whole. “I’m getting there,” she admitted, the honesty threading her words with hope. “Good,” Ed said softly, a small, relieved smile playing on his lips. The kind of smile that, for all its gentleness, contained the echoes of unrepaired fractures. The bar’s low hum wrapped around them once more, a cocoon of whispered connections and the quiet chiming of lives intersecting by chance or design. Rory and Ed lingered in their corner of familiarity, weaving a tentative tapestry from threads once abandoned, threads now picked up anew. As evening dissolved into a promise of night, they did not resurrect wounds nor delve into past injuries borne out of youthful recklessness. They merely existed, two acquaintances rekindling an old understanding, nestled in a bar designed for secrets and revelations. As the hour grew late, they parted with the simple camaraderie of those who acknowledge the course of their disparate yet intertwined journeys. Rory knew that the Nest would continue to be a refuge, one woven from Silas’ stories and her burgeoning resilience. Through the door and into the night, she carried the lightness of new bridges built upon the alluvium of memory.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she agreed, even as her gaze wandered over the bar’s familiar grooves and nicks, each a memory carefully etched into the world around her [carefully]"
1"he said, his voice a chord struck softly between them, vibrating with surprise and something that tugged achingly at the corners of regret [softly achingly]"
2"Rory countered, though her tone wasn’t bitter, only laced with a nuanced understanding that spoke of past choices and current realities [only]"
3"she said simply [simply]"
4"she replied, gesturing lightly to the space around them that had become her sanctuary [lightly]"
5"Ed said softly, a small, relieved smile playing on his lips [softly]"
42.6230% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"lightly"
3"perfectly"
4"reluctantly"
5"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"sentinel"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"delve"
count1
11
word"echoes"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"beacon"
2"sanctuary"
3"sentinel"
4"shimmered"
5"glint"
6"glinting"
7"unspoken"
8"weight"
9"amidst"
10"delve"
11"echoes"
12"etched"
13"navigating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"knew that the"
91.2417% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.33
std18.93
cv0.469
sampleLengths
079
157
270
323
464
514
625
755
853
979
1024
119
1239
1342
1441
1530
1654
1719
1828
1925
2013
2133
2239
2357
2433
2527
2627
2747
2841
2963
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03398926654740608
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01520572450805009
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
77.8112% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean18.91
std6.51
cv0.345
sampleLengths
022
128
211
318
413
515
629
724
828
918
1023
1121
1221
1322
1414
1525
1611
1726
1818
1911
2022
2120
2216
2320
2418
2525
2624
279
2816
2923
3026
3116
3219
3322
3430
3535
3619
3719
3823
395
407
4118
4213
436
4427
4519
4614
476
4819
499
85.4167% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.53125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount16
fancyTags
0"she replied with a smile, her eyes flicking to the signet ring—a constant reminder of past lives and unspoken stories (reply flick ring—live)"
1"queried (query)"
2"she agreed, even as her gaze wandered over the bar’s familiar grooves and nicks, each a memory carefully etched into the world around her (agree, wander carefully etch)"
3"he said, his voice a chord struck softly between them, vibrating with surprise and something that tugged achingly at the corners of regret (say, strike softly vibrate tug achingly)"
4"she replied, wrapping the word in cautious warmth (reply, wrap)"
5"he remarked, taking the seat beside her like an anchor dropped into uncertain waters (remark, take like drop)"
6"she agreed, her fingers skimming the rim of her glass, the cool glass grounding her amidst the swirling currents of memory (agree, skim ground)"
7"Ed confessed, his fingers tracing invisible patterns across the polished surface of the bar (confess, trace)"
8"Rory countered, though her tone wasn’t bitter, only laced with a nuanced understanding that spoke of past choices and current realities (counter, does be not lace speak)"
9"Ed said with a shrug, his eyes lifting beyond her and finding purchase among the clustered bottles glinting behind the bar (say find cluster glint)"
10"she said simply (say simply)"
11"he replied, the sincerity in his voice bridging the distance wrought by years of absence (reply, bridge wrought)"
12"she replied, gesturing lightly to the space around them that had become her sanctuary (reply, gesture lightly become)"
13"started (start)"
14"she admitted, the honesty threading her words with hope (admit, thread)"
15"Ed said softly, a small, relieved smile playing on his lips (say softly, relieve play)"
77.6067%