Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPFFCPBR3YF6SEWE232ZZZ

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Duration:
13.8s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the entrance to the Fae Grove, her breath coming in slow, measured exhales as she tried to quell the unease that had been gnawing at her since she had crossed the threshold. The ancient oak standing stones rose from the forest floor like silent sentinels, their darkened bark absorbing the moonlight. The dense canopy above created a tunnel into darkness, its leafy branches whispering secrets with the nocturnal breeze. She pulled her leather jacket closer and stared down at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a whispered reminder of her childhood – a safer, simpler time. The Heartstone Pendant hung around her neck, its faint inner glow barely perceptible through the fabric of her shirt. Rory's fingers brushed against the deep crimson gemstone, seeking comfort in its slight warmth. She had been told to come here, to Richmond Park’s hidden clearing, by an anonymous letter delivered to her flat's door. The note’s elegant calligraphy simply stated: "Find the Heartstone's pulse." Rory stepped forward, the dry leaves crunching beneath her boots, an alarmingly loud sound in the near-total silence. Her bright blue eyes scanned the path ahead as shadowed tendrils of foliage seemed to close in behind her. Silas at the bar had insisted the place existed in a pocket between the human world and the Fae realm. Stories of its peculiar time behavior fluttered through her mind like moths trapped in a jar – an hour inside could translate to minutes or days outside. Slowly, she walked deeper into the Grove, the air becoming thicker, each breath carrying the scent of earth and old growth. She passed a cluster of wildflowers that defiantly bloomed year-round. They shone like pinpricks of color amidst the muted shades of the surrounding underbrush. Silence enveloped her, but it wasn't the calming silence of a peaceful night; it was heavy, expectant, as if the entire forest held its breath. A low thrum vibrated against her chest. She glanced at the pendant, the glow becoming slightly more pronounced. Her heart rate quickened, and with it, the feeling of wrongness crept in like icy fingers against the nape of her neck. Rory raised a hand to rub the chill away, shaking off the remnants of the London fog that seemed to cling to her skin. A twig snapped to her right, followed by a quick rustle of leaves. She whipped her head towards the sound, the silver chain of the pendant swinging with her sudden movement. Nothing. Just the shadowed form of a gnarled tree, its twisted limbs reaching towards the sky in a grotesque ballet. Rory clenched her jaw, fighting back the tendrils of fear. She had faced her demons before – Evan's memory flashed in her mind – but this felt different, otherworldly. She took another calculated step forward, her senses on high alert. The Grove seemed to breathe with her, an eerie symphony of rustling leaves and the occasional hoot of an owl. Just as she steeled herself to continue, a faint whispering drifted through the trees, a susurrus of voices speaking a language she couldn't recognize. The sound raked along her spine, prickling her skin with cold dread. Rory stopped, her pulse hammering in her ears. Straining to identify the source of the unsettling whispers, she scanned the underbrush, the pendant's glow casting a faint light on her surroundings. Shadows moved at the edge of her vision, darting between the trees like restless phantoms. Her mouth grew dry as she stifled the urge to call out, knowing instinctively that breaking the silence could invite trouble. The Heartstone grew warmer, a heartbeat within the gem echoing her own. She tightened her grip around it, trying to draw strength from its mysterious warmth. The path twisted ahead of her, revealing a faint glimmer of light that beckoned her onward. Against her better judgment, she moved towards it, each step measured and deliberate. A howl broke the silence, high-pitched and filled with an anguish that made her stop dead in her tracks. Sweat beaded on her forehead as she looked around, the sound echoing in the Grove's stillness. The pendant pulsed rapidly now, and Rory knew she was close. But to what? She rounded the twisted path, reaching a small clearing illuminated by an ethereal glow. At its center lay a stone altar, smooth and worn by untold ages. The air around it shimmered, distorting reality like a heat haze. Rory’s pulse quickened as she drew nearer, the pendant’s heat becoming almost unbearable. She placed a hand on the cool stone and the sense of wrongness intensified. It was as if the ground beneath her feet was no longer solid. A dark shadow flitted at the corner of her vision, and she turned – but nothing was there. The whispered voices grew louder, circling her like a dark chant. She could feel the weight of unseen eyes watching her every move. The pendant tugged at her neck, an unseen force pulling it towards the altar. She reached up with trembling fingers and unclasped the chain, hesitating for a moment before placing it on the stone. The second the Heartstone touched the altar, the whispers ceased, and the Grove fell into an unnatural silence. The air grew still, the tension thick and suffocating. A cold sweat broke out across her skin as she backed away, the hair on her arms standing on end. Suddenly, the Heartstone flared to life, its crimson glow intensifying until it was blinding. Rory shielded her eyes, taking a step back as the ground beneath her feet trembled. With a sound that was both a sigh and a cry, the air around her rippled, and a figure began to materialize before her. Her breath hitched as the form took shape – a tall, willowy figure draped in flowing robes of midnight blue. Its piercing eyes, aglow with an otherworldly light, locked onto hers. It was not human, not wholly. Something ancient and powerful radiated from it, a presence that made her heart race with a mixture of dread and awe. The being spoke, its voice a whisper that resonated deep within her bones. "You have brought the Heartstone, Aurora Carter. You seek the portal, but it is not without its price." Rory’s voice quavered as she forced herself to speak. "What do you want from me?" The figure's lips curled into a smile that held no warmth. "Only a choice. Step through the portal, and you may find what you seek, but your return is not guaranteed. Or leave now, and you will remain safe, though ignorant." Rory glanced around the Grove, the shadows pressing in, the quiet unnerving. The thought of returning to her life, unchanged and forever wondering, gnawed at her. She squared her shoulders, swallowed her fear, and met the figure’s gaze. "Show me the portal." The smile deepened, and the figure raised a hand, gesturing toward a point in the air. The Heartstone lit up once more, its glow revealing a swirling vortex that seemed to defy the very fabric of reality. Rory felt the pull, a magnetic force drawing her towards it. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for whatever lay beyond. And with one final glance back at the silent Grove, she stepped into the unknown. The world twisted and warped around her, and the last thing she heard was the whisper of the figure's voice, echoing through the void. "Welcome to the other side." Then, darkness enveloped her, and everything changed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
68.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"fluttered"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count2
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"magnetic"
count1
10
word"steeled"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count3
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"symphony"
2"sentinels"
3"resonated"
4"shimmered"
5"trembled"
6"fluttered"
7"otherworldly"
8"calculated"
9"magnetic"
10"steeled"
11"weight"
12"amidst"
13"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
80.2288% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean52.17
std22.47
cv0.431
sampleLengths
0102
164
284
370
464
580
667
767
855
946
103
1151
1245
1357
1447
1553
1658
1731
1815
1941
2042
2159
2244
237
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"been told"
1"being spoke"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.024513947590870666
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01014370245139476
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean15.46
std6.34
cv0.41
sampleLengths
036
119
218
329
419
514
621
710
818
919
1020
1127
1221
1310
1414
1525
167
1711
1822
1924
2013
2118
221
2319
2410
2519
2611
2720
2824
2912
308
3123
3215
3321
3412
3514
3616
3713
3819
3916
4011
413
4214
4313
4411
4513
4614
4713
4818
4911
58.8477% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38271604938271603
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners31
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
88.2986%